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* Dang de nay la dang de thi thuong xuat hi^n trong ky thi DH - CD tu nai^ 2009 cho deh nay. Thuong nhiing dang de nay la dang de nghj luan ve mot ttf tuong dao ly. Van de dupe chp trong de thi bao gia cung c6 mot mat phai va m<?' mlt trai (To t - Xau). Vi v^y khi lam bai ta phai bam theo cau tnic sau:

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II. THAN BAI

1. Giai thich: giai thich 2 ve^ giai thich ea cau. 2. Ban luan 2. Ban luan

a. Trinh bay y nghia tac dyng aia mat tot (thuong la ve 1) b. Trinh bay tac hai aia mat xau (thuong ve 2)

3. Bai hpc nhan thuc va hanh dpng III. KET BAI

* V i d\i: de thi DH kho'i D nam 2012.

'^i ra:Viet bdi van ngan (khodng 600 tit) ban vey kien: "Nguang mo than tuang Id mot net d^p van hoa, nhung me muoi than tuang Id mot thdm hQa". (Dethi DH khoi D nam 2012)

H I/ 6 N G D A N I. MO BAI

Trong cupc song aia moi nguoi, ai ciing c6 cho minh mpt than tupng de udc mo va vuon toi. Than tupng ay eo the la mpt doanh nhan thanh dat, mpt ca nhac sT, hay chi la nguoi me, nguoi cha trong gia dinh. Nhung eo mpt bp phan lop tre bay gio lai me man nhCrng than tupng Kpop de roi quen an, quen ngii, quen ea hpc hanh. Vi vay c6 y kien cho rang "Nguong mp than tupng la mpt net dep van hoa, nhung me mupi than tupng la mpt tham hpa". Dieu do

diing ehang ?

II. THAN BAI i 1. Giai thich: i 1. Giai thich:

- Nguang mp than tugmg la su ton kinh, men phye nong nhi?t danh cho Bnhirng doi tupng dupe xem la hinh mau li tuang hoac c6 quyen nang dac bi?t,

• c 6 sue cuon hut manh me doi voi ea nhan hay cpng dong; me mupi than hrgmg

B a sy say me, ton siing mpt each mu quang, thieu tinh tao truac than tupng.

H - Ve npi dung, y kien nay de cap den tinh hai m^t aia vi?c say me than • u p n g : neu nguang mp diing muc la tich eye, thi nguang mp qua muc la tieu • u p n g : neu nguang mp diing muc la tich eye, thi nguang mp qua muc la tieu ^Kyc va CO the con gay ra hau qua khon luong.

V 2. Ban luan

m b. Nguang mp than tug^ng la mpt net d?p van hoa: Vi ngudng mp than • t u p n g the hien nhu cau van hoa cao aia con nguoi: nhu cau dupe song trong • t u p n g the hien nhu cau van hoa cao aia con nguoi: nhu cau dupe song trong • i h i i n g tinh cam cao ea, nong nhif t; nhu cau dupe huong toi, vuon tai nhung

tam cao, nhung dinh cao sang gia aia doi song. V i dy, nguong mp cac doanh nhan thanh dat minh c6 the hpc tap 6 hp due tinh can cu trong nghien cihi va lao dpng, hpc each lam giau, hpc each vupt qua kho khan t h u thach. Hpe 6 nguoi bo' ngudi m? due tinh nhan nai, due hi sinh tham lang v i gia dinh. N 6 i chung, nguong mp than tupng giiip ta song nhan ban hon. 6 n g Doan Nguyen Due, nguoi giau nhat V i ^ t Nam timg thi rat D H den 4 Ian, t i m g lam nhieu vi^c n | n g nhpc de kiem song. N h u n g nhd no luc vupt kho vuon len va tro thanh ty phii bac nhat cua Vi?t Nam. Nick Vujicie, khong tay, khong chan nhung vuon len tro thanh dien gia noi tieng tren the gioi...

- Nguong mp than tupng la mpt lirig xu van hoa, bieu hi^n a cac phuong di^n: thai dp tran trpng men phuc; hanh dpng ton vinh c6 v i i ; ngon n g u ca ngpi tan duang. K h i men mp than tupng, chiing ta thuong song trong nhung tinh cam luon huong toi nhiJng dieu cao d^p. Lam gi sai trai hoac hpc hanh sa

S l i t ngay lap tiic minh ciing cam thay c6 l o i . T u do t u minh phai biet sua chua

va khac phuc. Tinh cam ta danh cho than tupng la t h u tinh cam nguong mp chan thanh va kham phuc chu khong phai la t h u tinh cam on ao, x6 bo.

b. Me m u p i than tugng la mpt tham hpa : V i me mupi than tupng la trang thai m i l quang trong nhan thuc, thai qua trong tinh cam, khong con kha nang suy xet, phan bi$t diing sai, Ian Ipn ve gia tri; me mupi than tupng con dan den hanh dpng sai lam qua khich, gay ra nhijng hau qua t? hai cho htn than va xa hpi. Nam 2010 khi danh thii Braxin la Ronandinho sang Viet Nam, ban tre o Ha N p i da x6 vao, nam toe, keo ao than tupng lam cho than tupng phai nho an ninh can thi?p. Xem nhom Super Junio bieu dien 6 Sai Gon, nhieu Fan cuong da khoc 16c, nga't x i u . . . Do con la each an mac dj hpm, each d i dung, each de toe cua mpt bp phan gioi tre that chang gio'ng nguoi ehiit nao.

- Vi?c m i l quang chay theo than tupng hay khuyech truong than tupng qua muc deu la bieu hi^n cua sy me mupi than tupng, deu la nhiing thai dp va ung xir thieu lanh manh, t h | m chi thieu van hoa, c6 the gay ra nhihig hau qua khon luang.

3. Bai hpc nhan thuc va hanh d p n g :

- Can CO nhan thuc diing dan ve vi^c nguong mp than tupng va luong dupe nhihig hau qua ciia su me mupi de eo thai dp va each ung x u phii hpp, lam eho tam hon phong phii hon, nang tam van hoa cho ban than, tir do phan dau vuon toi nhiing tam cao cua doi song.

- Biet ehe ngu nhiiTig cam xiie say me thai qua truoc than tupng, khong chay theo than tupng mpt each m i l quang; phe phan mpi bieu hi^n me mupi than tupng trong cupc song hang ngay, truoc het la trong hpc duong.

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III. K E T BAI

M o i nguoi eo mpt than tupng de uoe m o va vuon toi. Can biet ton trpng than tupng bang each eo nhimg hanh dpng, suy nghi chin chan va cao d?p. Do moi thuc su la nguong mp. D i m g v i qua dam me va than tupng hoa ma bien minh thanh ke d i hpm, khac nguoi khong tot cho ban than va xa hpi. M o i nguoi chiing ta can y thiic hon ve dieu nay de cupc song luon van minh hi^n d^i ma khong danh mat d i nhiing gia tr} c6 truyen tot d?p. '

B A I L A M M A U

Than tupng n h u doa hoa Ipng lay, dieu quan trpng la thien ha biet each yeu hoa n h u the nao. Co nguoi don gian ngam hoa de t h u gian, thuong thuc, tran trpng hoa n h u mon qua ciia cupc song. Co ke chi biet doa hoa ay la nhat tren : doi. Yeu say me, ngam dam duo'i, de roi hp quen mat chinh minh va mpi nguoi

xung quanh. Vay phai chang: "Nguong mp than tupng la mpt net d^p van hoa, nhung me mupi than tupng la mpt tham hpa"?

k Gioi tre ngay nay thuong danh tinh cam rat dac b i f t eho cac than tupng

•P^ each gpi nhiing nguoi dupe xem la hinh mau ly tuong, c6 nang khieu, pham chat, thanh cong dac bi^t ve mpt hoac nhieu linh v\fc nao do, c6 sue hiit doi vol

k ca nhan va gioi truyen thong. Tuy nhien, tam phan chia hai kieu bieu Ip tinh cam ay thanh nguong mp va me mupi. Nguong mp la sy tran trpng, men phuc nong nhif t danh cho than tupng. Trong khi do, mpt bp phan gioi tre hi?n nay

I me dam, ton siing mpt each m i l quang, thieu tinh tap truoc than tupng.

V i the y kien da neu de cap den tac dung n h u mpt con dao hai luoi ciia vifc yeu men than tupng: neu nguong mp diing muc la tich cue, con nguong mp qua muc la tieu eye va gay ra nhiing hau qua xau.

Xet theo y kien ca nhan, toi ciing cho rang "nguong mp than tupng la mpt net d^p van hoa". Boi truoc het nguong mp than tupng the h i f n nhu cau van hoa cao ciia con nguoi, trong do c6 nhu cau dupe song trong nhijng tinh earn nong nhif t; nhu eau dupe ciing thuong thuc va chia se cac gia trj van hoa nhat dinh; nhu cau v u o n toi nhiing dinh cao sang gia ciia doi song. Chang han, yeu men cac than tupng am nhae, nguoi ta eiing nhau nghe nhiing ca khiie, xem nhung " M V " ciia cac ca sT, cac "diva" de t h u gian, lam giau cho doi song tinh than. Nguong mp Steve Jobs, chiing ta hpc dupe each sp'ng c6 ich, lam vi^c sang tao, sy kien tri, y chi nghj lye vupt len kho khan (ong timg b} bupe roi dioi "Apple" nhung sau do tro lai, ong da dem lai thanh cong to Ion voi chuoi s^n pham gay sot hifn nay: iMac, iPhone, iPod,..) ... Do ciing chinh la nhiing

)ham chat dang quy cho bat k i ai khi buoc vao doi.

V i the nguong mp than tupng eon tro thanh mpt ung xir van hoa. Do la thai ilp tran trpng, men phyc, c6 via nhung giii trj tinh than to't d?p, ca ngpi tan

dvrang n h u n g thanh cong va sy co'ng hie'n ciia con nguai. K h i vi^c nay dugc thuc hi^n m o t each tich cue, chiing thuong dem lai n h i i n g hieu qua tot d?p. Tvr do, nhving n g u o i thanh cong, song c6 ich dugc cac ca nhan va xa hpi ghi nhan, danh gia cao. Va than tugng ciing se tro thanh muc tieu phan dau ciia nhieu nguoi. B6i vay, n g u o n g m g than tugng chi nen d u n g 6 muc dp tinh cam diing dan, khong phai t h u tinh cam on ao, gay Ion tieng n h u each l a m cua nhieu bein tre ngay nay.

Thoi cha me chiing ta d i n g ham m g nhirng Thanh Lam, Phi N h u n g , Tuah Nggc,... n h u n g khong ai cuong nhi^t den khoc 16c, ngat xiu, ...truoc than tugng n h u hanh dgng cua cac ban tre khi nh6m Super Junio sang Vi?t N a m bieu dien. Nhieu ban khong biet bo me o m b^nh ra sao, n h u n g than tugng hat h o i so mui thi lo lang khong yen. Cac bac phu h u y n h d i lam ve m^t moi, con cai chua biet rot mgt coc nuoc, cung khong he hoi han mot cau n h u n g ngay nao d i n g deu deu dang len facebook, twitter,., nhijng cau nhac nha than tugng g i i i sue kh6e. T§ hai hon, nam 2010 k h i danh thii Ronandinho den Ha N g i , nguoi ham m g da x6 vao, nSm t6c, keo ao lam cho cau thii phai nho den luc lugng an ninh can thi^p. Do la n h i i n g bieu hi^n thai qua dan den tra thanh tham hga trong mgt bg phan gioi tre hi^n nay. Tir vi^c khong nhan thuc mgt each diing each va su me muoi m u quang, nhieu nguoi da c6 thai do va each u n g x u thieu van h6a, gay ra nhieu hau qua. Do la su yeu kem trong hoc tap v i danh qua nhieu thai gian cho than tugng, do la h i n h anh thieu thien cam doi voi than tugng va ban be quoc te,...

K h i hieu ro ve van de, chung ta can c6 quan diem, hanh dgng p h u hgp, the hien net d^p ciia van h6a xing x u trong mat m g i n g u o i . That tot d^p biet bao neu nho than t u g n g ma chiing ta dem den cho ban than tam hon phong phii hon, nhieu gia t r i cugc song h o n va biet phan dau hon tren d u o n g d o i .

A i Cling r o niem yeu men v o i than tugng, n h u n g dieu truac het la hay biet che n g u n h i i n g cam xiic, tranh hanh dgng thai qua, me m u g i . Cac ban tre ciing nen nhan thiic dugc m i n h can lam gi. N g u o n g m g khong phai la bat chuac y diic each an mac "nghe si", each d i dung, noi chuyf n, de toe etia than tugng. N g u o n g m g eang khong phai chen la'n, x6 day, lam ton thuong nguoi minh yeu men. Toi t i m g n h i n tha'y nhieu ban ham m g ho t r g than t u g n g trong viec d i chuyen d o n g ngh^t nguoi 6 eae cho l u u dien, san bay. Do la hanh dgng d?p va dang tran trgng.

Ve d?p b^o quang n h u n h i i n g doa hoa cua cac than t u g n g khien nhieu n g u o i phai nguae nhin. N g u o i khon ngoan biet thuong thiic, say me net d?p ciia hoa, nho than t u g n g ma v u a n len dem lai nhieu gia t r i cugc song cho ban than va m g i n g u o i . Ke m u quang chi biet chlm dam trong sac dep, tinh yeu ciia n h i i n g canh hoa kieu diem, den noi d i i n g truoc than t u g n g ma hanh dgng

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pigi nguoi?

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» * D e t h i D H k h o i C 2012

ra: Trinh bay suy nghi ve y kick: Ke co hqi thi non nong tao ra thanh tich, nguai chart chinh thi kien nhan lap nen thanh tuu.

H I / 6 N G D A N

I . M u B A I ; neu van de. Dan y kien vao. •

I I . T H A N B A I 1, G i a i t h i c h y k i e n 1, G i a i t h i c h y k i e n

- Ke CO hgi la n g u o i Igi d y n g thai eo de m u u cau Igi ich truoc mat, bat ke

vi?c lam d i i n g hay sai; n g u a i chan chinh la nguoi luon biet song diing v o i thye

chat va p h i i hgp v o i n h u n g gia t r i xa hgi; thanh rich la n h i i n g ket qua dugc danh gia tot; thanh t y u la n h i i n g thanh qua c6 y nghia Ion, dat dugc sau m g t

Iua trinh ben b i phan dau.

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