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Bài luận cá nhân của Adam D Olivant, nhận được học bổng tại University of Lincoln và Sheffield Hallam University chuyên ngành Computer Science

Most users see a computer at the front and use the graphical user interfaces The first time I used a computer, it intrigued me to know how these interfaces work, the theory behind computers and the methodology of how they work I am a keen to further my Computer Science knowledge Studying Computing, ICT and Maths at A-Level has increased my desire

to want to know more about this subject

Furthermore I believe that my two week work experience placement, based in IT support at ARM Holdings, gave me a great insight into how an international Computing business works and confirmed that I wanted to go into computing I am familiar with Python, which I have learnt to use for programming and have learnt about the theory behind Stored Program Concept, Fetch-Execute Cycle and also the Internet along with the legal aspects behind Computing

I have advanced my programing skills using PyQt to develop my own user interfaces and further programming techniques including Object and Event orientated programming With this knowledge I feel that my problem solving has developed culminating in my project, which I am currently in the process of completing I am enjoying the experience of the project, not only with the programming but the process of the project - from the analysis to the testing

I feel to study Computer Science you would need to be more scientific in your thinking as arguments need supporting evidence before they are proved

To be a successful student you need to be organised, able to communicate and capable

of independent research as an individual to expand your knowledge In using my Computing A-Level skills, I have gained a significant level of knowledge of how computers work; the theory behind them and also why we need Computer Scientists in the world of work It is important to be able to analyse problems and work out solutions, as well as to program the solutions and ensure that if there is a gap in the market you develop these ideas

Computer scientists' work ensures that current computing programs and processes are maintained and updated if appropriate I am always searching for programs or websites to help me with my studies and programs, such as using GitHub as a version control system for

my project I am currently Chair of the Student Committee at Long Road Sixth Form College;

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Since July 2013, I have worked part-time at both Cambridge University Hospitals as a Customer Service Administrator, which has strengthened me as an individual and I had the responsibility of helping others to ensure patient safety and confidentiality At Linton Village College I was awarded the Enterprise Honour for being the Manager of the Technical Team and a Student Leader of the Library, which involved organising the day to day running of the Library At the same time I was nominated for the Business Studies Linton Honour

The projects will enable me to draw on all my previous knowledge and experience to enhance at university and further it independently to create a substantial finished product for

an external client I am looking forward to the excitement and challenge that studying science will bring at a higher level

My future aspirations are to leave the university to enter into the world of work to pursue a career in Computer Science and ultimately, to start my own business in Computer Science

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Bài luận cá nhân của Aidan, nhận được học bổng tại King's College London và University of Exeter chuyên ngành Geography

Geography is the study of the world, and as geographers we hold the keys to the world’s problems Geography encompasses many things from natural disasters, eco-systems,

to globalisation and development, all of which are areas which fascinate me It is essential for deciphering and solving the issues that the world is faced with, and by furthering my geographical knowledge, it will enhance my ability to tackle the imminent problems such as overpopulation

My studies have inspired me to further my knowledge I am a member of the Royal Geographical Society and a regular attendee of their lectures Sir Crispin Tickell's talk on the human future and his Malthusian view fascinated me, as it couples my passion for food with Geography Due to this I have focused my Extended Project Qualification on agricultural sustainability My research has led me to look into agricultural processes, destruction of ecosystems, and questions related to pesticide usage Reading Rachel Carson's 'Silent Spring' highlighted the impacts of pesticides, because diseases such as cancer and Down syndrome are linked with their overuse As part of my wider research I enjoyed reading periodicals such

as The Geographical Review, The Economist, The Guardian and the Geographical An article from the Geographical investigating how sustainable agriculture is implemented in low income countries intrigued me A method used was vermicomposting, a procedure which allows farmers to create compost from waste This is cost efficient and sustainable, demonstrating alternatives to current farming techniques

I have been involved in a range of aspects in my fieldwork, from constructing the trip

to the establishment of the initial hypotheses These trips have enabled me to reinforce my geographical skills, particularly in relation to interpreting and analysing information and data

I was able to see the cross-curricular links my world cities unit had, consolidating my Economics and History knowledge, allowing me to understand how cities develop historically and their wider significance to the world economy

In addition to my studies, I have taken advantage of numerous opportunities to refine

my skills At my internships at KPMG, Fidelity Worldwide Investments, and Ernst and Young, I assisted in the completion of reports and proposals under strict deadlines, whilst also presenting at partner meetings Also, I have raised over £3,500 for various charities and

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completed my Bronze Duke of Edinburgh Award This has allowed me to apply both my navigation and map reading skills learnt in class to navigate the planned route for the expedition

Furthermore, I was selected to represent the UK in the International Space Design Competition at the Johnston Space Centre in Texas Competing with Argentine, American and British students, I was elected president of the international team During the competition

I was able to apply all the skills I had learnt in my extra-curricular activities We produced an in-depth proposal, detailing everything about our space settlement, from the logistics of building and transporting resources into space, to the costing of the whole structure; all in an attempt to win the contract in just forty-eight hours

Geography is constantly evolving and relevant This drives my passion for the subject;

I believe that the skills I have attained through my outgoing nature alongside my passion for the subject make me a valued addition to your institution I am sociable, ambitious and academically able, but most importantly dedicated

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Bài luận cá nhân của Ashton, nhận được học bổng của Đại học Queens University Belfast và London School of Economics, chuyên ngành Actuarial Science

Mathematics is not just a mere subject but a universal language Its plethora of Greek symbols interlaced with numbers makes it seem like a clandestine code, which has to be deciphered This aside, I believe the real magic of Mathematics lies not with its method of execution, but its definite solutions founded on irrefutable proofs, not ignoring the seemingly endless array of applications

Having studied Physics my awareness of these applications has increased substantially For instance, the laws laid down by Newtonian Mechanics are seen to govern the everyday world and are difficult not to witness In Computing, I have explored the logical arm of Mathematics put into practice: Finite State machines, Boolean equations and the programming languages themselves Even Chemistry like my other subjects echoes the hallmarks of Maths Through reading Du Sautoy’s “Finding Moonshine” I discovered that Chemistry, the study of molecular interaction, utilises Mathematics in the form of symmetry Overall, it never ceases to amaze me how Mathematics seems to be everywhere at once, even

in places you expect not to find it

After participating in a stock exchange competition, I was fascinated to learn mathematical models are used in forecasting something as volatile and stochastic as the stock market In fact, to find out more, I attended the PriceWaterhouseCooper Business Insight Day There, I was informed about the consultancy role Actuaries play in corporate firms using their ability of Mathematics as a tool to assess financial risks, and as a result, I started to consider seriously a career as an Actuary

The same employability skills that were constantly stressed by my school, I saw firsthand at my work shadowing placement in a company managed by Viridian Group Plc, where I observed the most important of these to be communication, especially the ability of a professional, such as an engineer, to convey difficult technical knowledge to non-specialist customers

Activities in school have helped me to work towards these professional skills and further enjoy Mathematics For example, being the Financial Director of a Young Enterprise company gave me a valuable insight into running a business and made me more confident in

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expressing my ideas with clarity After being selected by interview, I also had a large input as

a team member in the Engineering Education Scheme, where we were assigned a project in which we had to analyse and solve a real-life problem encountered by a firm Our agreed project involved the design of a Six-Way Underground Distribution Board (UDB) lifting device, and by carefully considering factors such as which handle length would give the required torque, which structure provided the most equal distribution of forces, we foresaw the eventual fabrication of a prototype

This was followed by our delivery of one formal and many informal presentations, which after each member received a Gold CREST (Creativity in Science and Technology) Award Conveniently, the scheme also tied in with my Duke of Edinburgh’s Gold Award which I am currently pursuing and hope to complete when I leave Methodist College The Award’s physical and mental hurdles have been demanding and require unyielding determination to strive for goals, a practice which I still hope to employ as a future Actuary

Having been a rower for three years and now currently pursuing a martial art, the importance of dedication is not a new concept for me Even though Maths can be extremely difficult and at times even impossible, I wish to give it my utmost dedication; it is an ever expanding subject in which my enjoyment will never cease to diminish

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Bài luận cá nhân của Askhat, nhận được học bổng Imperial College London chuyên ngành Nanotechnology and Nanomaterials Science

Nowadays, science and technology play a vital role in people's lives They have become a dominant factor in the development of society Therefore, many countries are striving to diversify their economies through the development and application of new and advanced technologies like the ones that operate on nanoscale

Nanotechnology and applied nanoscience allow people to create innovative nanostructured materials, devices and mechanisms which will make a contribution to the improvement of people's lives and development of the country's economics Thus, the choice

of nanoscience and nanotechnology as my speciality was inspired by both my interest in the natural phenomena as a physicist, and by the excellent prospects it offers in the labour market

My interest in science, particularly in physics and maths, developed when I was studying at school I enjoyed the challenge of solving different types of mathematical and physical problems which helped me develop analytical thinking skills and an understanding of physical processes that take place in nature Beyond my school interests I played music, and got involved with dancing and drawing I played the dombyra (a Kazakh national stringed instrument) in the school orchestra and sang in the school choir Through these activities I became acquainted with and learned the rules and principles of art

In 2003 I entered the physics department at Al Farabi Kazakh National University (majoring in radiophysics and electronics) There I received a good fundamental education in physics, electronics, material science, chemistry, higher mathematics, and the humanities I gained a deep understanding of these subjects and learnt how to apply this to real life situations I took part in students' scientific conferences, at which on three separate occasions

I got awards for the best research effort This activity helped me to improve my skills in report writing and oral presentation

Since 2005 I have been working at the Institute of Experimental and Theoretical Physics of Kazakh National University as a scientific researcher I have experimentally investigated the structural, dynamical and optical properties of the dusty particles immersed in plasma environment What makes this work important is its connection with nuclear fusion, microelectronics and nonterrestrial investigations As the result of my work at the Institute I

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have made several contributions to international conferences and papers in recognized journals like Journal of Physics D: Applied Physics, Journal of Physics A: Mathematical and Theoretical and Physics of Plasmas Working at the Institute has enriched my experience in experimental physics and taught me to work in a team

Although I completed undergraduate level study at the best local university, I do not feel that I am in the best position to make any final decisions about my career yet Thus, I have decided to proceed with study abroad to get a better understanding and knowledge of applied nanoscience

By studying at your university I hope to gain a broad education and professional skills

on my chosen course and to learn how to apply these in practice to improve the world around

me I feel confident that I will be able to cope with the academic requirements at the university and successfully conduct research work in the area of nanoscience and nanotechnology

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Bài luận cá nhân của Blackie Chan, nhận được thư mời học Đại học The Manchester Metropolitan University chuyên ngành Accounting and Finance

For me Accounting is something that I've been incredibly passionate about for the last few years From quite a young age I have always had a passion towards Mathematics and problem solving; which has led me on towards Accounting and Finance as these subjects interlink massively

I have had the pleasure of working in an Accounting Firm (work experience) in which

I was giving the chance to learn and development some of the key skills needed to succeed, I was able to help look after some of the minor accounts and to use the spreadsheets when needed

I have just finished my last exam in an Access course at my local college, where I studied Business Accounts, Psychology, Statistics and Law Each of these subjects in my opinion has given me the tools to succeed at university in Accounting and Finance Law has given me the knowledge of the legal system to determine what is expected of me when I get

my degree from university, and the implications of my actions within the organisation when looking and handling people’s accounts

Studying Statistics has developed my mind logically, the problem solving within the subject keeps your mind constantly active, even when equations have a higher degree of difficulty it pushes your boundaries and shows me that anything is capable Business Accounts has taught me more than I could ever have imagined, it has given me knowledge of the different aspects of accounts whether that’s Ratio Analysis or looking after T Accounts Studying Business Accounts at my local college has given me a significant advantage over others as I now have a lot more knowledge within in the chosen subject which will give me a boost when I start higher education

Sport is a major impact on my life at the moment as it fills me with an enjoyment not very many things can match Playing basketball, football, and chess have made me a more discipline human It has provided me with a unique balance with both my studies and my personal life, none more so than chess The concentration levels needed for chess and the ongoing repetition in the mind, re-playing the scenario over and over again has worked magnificently through my studies Not only does it help to develop the mind further but it

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University is another important milestone in my life one that I believe that I can pass with flying colours and to develop new skills added on to the ones I already have

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Bài luận cá nhân của Bob Fraser, nhận được học The University of York, University of Southampton chuyên ngành Chemistry

Chemistry is in my opinion the most important of the sciences today As a science of matter and its properties, Chemistry can be applied to almost any situation from forensics through medicine to environmental sustainability It is this practical side of Chemistry that has made me want to study it at university I am particularly interested in Organic Chemistry and I enjoy working out the outcomes of various reactions and naming the products with systematic nomenclature Another aspect of Chemistry that I am interested in is Quantum Chemistry which has a strong overlap with some of my favourite modules of Physics I am drawn to its often theoretical and experimental nature

My studies in Geography and World Development have stimulated an interest in Green Chemistry I feel that this is very important due to climate change and other environmental issues that affect us Research in making processes more sustainable and less harmful to the environment is crucial to contributing to the future of planet

I have gained the position of subject ambassador for Chemistry; which involves representing the Chemistry department during open evenings and helping out fellow classmates with their work Within the open days I have demonstrated experiments to future students and their parents, helping them to understand the content of the course and whether they should take Chemistry as an A level subject I have also been nominated by my school for the Oxford University chemist of the year award, due to my attitude and achievements During my ISAs I demonstrated a strong practical ability and achieved full marks for my practical skills This reflects my ability to work independently and my competence at handling lab apparatus I also volunteer to help out in a chemistry lesson once a week; this is

an excellent opportunity to help others and put my knowledge and expertise to practical use

I am reading "The Problems of Chemistry" by W Graham Richards and "The Consumers Good Chemical Guide" by John Emsley both of which have stimulated my interest in practical applications of Chemistry Another book "Chemistry: Facts, Patterns and Principles" by W.R Kneen adds to my general knowledge of Chemistry I have also joined the Royal Society of Chemistry

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I have excelled at all of my chosen subjects and have demonstrated a commitment and ability to work above the average level in each one For example during my GCSEs I was picked as one of the top ten geographers in my year to take an AS in World Development a year early While taking my A2 in World Development last year I researched and wrote a report on a local wind farm This project was a good opportunity to work on my own initiative and helped me develop important communication and analysis skills I also represented Kenya

in a Model UN General Assembly conference where I learned about other cultures and gained

an insight into world politics

My studies in Maths and Physics both provide me with subject matter, problem solving and calculating skills that support my primary interest in Chemistry

Outside school I have an enthusiasm for the sport of dog agility My dogs and I have won many competitions and we have competed at Crufts and other major events I also train and work with dogs for other people This is a considerable responsibility, but one that I enjoy

I also have experience caring for a disabled child which has made me more mature

In common with my friends, I enjoy music and travel I have played the drums in several bands and have backpacked through a number of countries, including Brazil, Peru and Thailand I hope to take advantage of the social opportunities at university as well as the academic ones

In summary, my skills and experiences make me well suited to study Chemistry at university I intend to tackle the course with the same determination and interest that I have shown to date and to make a significant contribution during my studies

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Bài luận cá nhân của Bosse, nhận được học bổng tại The University of Birmingham và University of Leeds chuyên ngành Natural Sciences

My perception of the sciences has changed over time as my understanding of them has developed Subjects that once appeared isolated and independent now merge into one coherent field, each interacting with another How the same laws can apply from the quark scale to galaxies astounds me and it is the on-going search for patterns to explain these links that I find particularly fascinating This notion has driven my pursuit of studying scientific and mathematical subjects at A Level Indeed the ability to discover the reasoning behind these concepts through the process of doubt and investigation is what truly motivates me to study Natural Science at university

Throughout my studies I have enjoyed reading; the manner in which this informs and broadens my understanding has been a key factor in my academic success Charles Seife's book 'Zero: The Biography of a Dangerous Idea' discusses in detail concepts like the creation, banishment and abuse of zero and its counterpart infinity I was strongly drawn to how the theories and conclusions made, could again be applied to other branches of science As a result of reading this text; I felt compelled to give a presentation based on its ideas to my fellow Scholars during a recent Symposium This helped develop my skills of mathematical analysis, especially in the fields of Complex Numbers and Projectiles My decision to study Natural Sciences is driven as much by an appreciation of scientific method, as by content I have recently read 'Elegant Solutions' by Philip Ball, and 'The Curious History of Relativity'

by Jean Eisenstaedt, both awarded to me for excellence in Chemistry and Physics These books have furthered my knowledge of the fundamental experiments that have allowed science to develop over time However of even greater curiosity to me were the new theories identified that have shaped experimentation in the last century, such as the destruction of the long-held belief that the noble gases cannot form compounds with other elements As with all scientific disciplines, the process of challenging hypotheses enables the field to learn and improve, and it is this problem based approach to learning that excites me further to pursue

my chosen degree course

My fascination with the sciences is not restricted to my own understanding; I enjoy sharing my knowledge and seeing other people reach the same epiphanies I have To this end,

I initiated a lunchtime help club for Mathematics and Science, for students aged 11 through to

18 I enjoy the challenge of conveying complex ideas to younger students, and find this

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process helps forge my own knowledge and opinions To further my applied knowledge of the sciences I have secured a week long work placement with Nu Instruments, a company specialising in scientific equipment Here I will gain first-hand experience of the technology required to further experimentation and am especially motivated by the prospect of working with a mass spectrometer

I have been entrusted with a number of positions of responsibility during Upper Sixth, demonstrating the work ethic and reliability I strive for I hold the positions of Prefect and Head of House, giving me responsibility to organise competitions and weekly assemblies for

a range of age groups I have also been appointed Captain of the Senior Mathematics Team Challenge, and furthermore I have been chosen as Captain of Clay Shooting for the last two years I have now been part of this team for 3 years, during which we have won the National Championships twice and individually I am within the top 20 in Great Britain

I truly aspire to be a student of Natural Science Whilst I have a strong interest in each individual subject, it is the connections between these disciplines that fascinate me most greatly I strongly believe that it is the people who can connect theories with practical solutions that establish themselves as the great scientists, and it is these people I seek to emulate

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Bài luận cá nhân của Boxer, nhận được học bổng Đại học The University of Salford; Thư mời học The University of Manchester, University of Leeds chuyên ngành Computing/Computer Science

My interest in computers and technology started when I was given a computer as a present, at the age of ten Because there was nobody to teach me how to use it, I had to teach myself, experimenting with different options

The fact that I wanted to learn more about computers was strengthened when I started

AS level computing What I like about computing is that it covers a broad range of topics- from computer structure to The Data Protection Act It covers the applications in society as well as core components that make up a typical computer I particularly enjoyed learning about internal components such as the CPU, and different types of hardware

Taking physics helped me to increase understanding of the electronic aspects of technology, and reinforced my knowledge of methods of communication, and the properties

of different waves used I enjoyed learning about the fundamental aspects of how data is transmitted - within the computer itself, and over a wider area such as networks Both physics and computing are my strongest subjects, and both involve using logic to solve problems, which I like doing

At the end of year 12, I was required to undertake a task during 'enrichment week' I chose to spend this week working at a computer business, ******** During this week, I had

to assemble computers for a business client, so gained knowledge on different components I also had to create and present a slideshow about Office 2007, to teach staff at a community centre For short periods I had to deal with customers, and perform common tasks, such as operating system upgrades The owner of ******** was a computer science graduate, and this meant I could question him on course content which is shared with computing The time I spent at ******** cemented my desire to study computing at a higher level

In school, I have helped raise money for charity by taking part in a sponsored walk During lunchtimes, I have helped supervise computer use in the library Throughout high school, I have taken part in the annual 'interform' football tournament which takes place every year

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In the future, I hope my interest in computers will enable me to become a systems analyst Embarking on such a degree would be very beneficial to me in terms of increasing

my knowledge and understanding I am very enthusiastic and confident when it comes to computer systems, and I feel that this will play a major part in helping me to fulfil my ambition

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Bài luận cá nhân của Calbay, nhận được thư mời học của Đại học York University, chuyên ngành History of Art

History of Art is the door to artistic, cultural, historical and personal enrichment With motivation and effort it can also lead to truly interesting career opportunities, most notably as far as I am concerned, fine art auctioneer It is one of the most appealing and diverse subjects you can work with as it expresses itself through various supports It allows you to gain access

to cultures throughout the world, their beliefs and history through a single still image, a sculpture or even a white canvas

Art is an uncompromised, satirical and beautiful gateway to the world and the history

of mankind Art is not only beautiful, choking, impressive or esthetical, Art is a testimony of historical patrimony, and this is one of the main reasons I want to study History of Art

My interest in the subject started in my school years during which I obtained outstanding grades in History, Art and Literature My passion for the subject flowed out into

my social life as I attended weekly cultural seminars organized by "Les Amis des Arts et de la Culture" in Monaco For personal reasons I decided not go to university after completing my Baccalaureat but this did not affect my interest in Art In my spare time I developed a great enthusiasm for photography My grand-father taught me how to develop pictures when I was

13 and I was at once attracted to the mixture of art and information as captured by the legendary Cartier Bresson Furthermore, being able to step away from the world and become more than a spectator was a welcome relief from a hard day's work

During my professional experience I was fortunate enough to be involved in the "Dali

a Monte-Carlo" exhibition organized in Monaco during the summer of 2005, by contributing

to the research and drafting of the Press Book This was a challenging and demanding task, which involved to compiling and summarizing the content of the exhibition/show I thoroughly enjoyed carrying out an in-depth study of the artist as revealed by the photographs exposed to the public, which were taken during the autumn he spent in Monaco Recently I have been fortunate enough to work as assistant to Walera Martynchik two nights a week, which I believe, will greatly expand my artistic horizons

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Outside of Art I very much enjoy music including blues, folk, rock and jazz During

my professional career I have had the good fortune to be involved in various radio and music magazine based projects, culminating in an interview with Frank Black over a cup of tea after the Pixies concert in Six-Fours-les-Bains I try to attend concerts as often as possible as I enjoy combination of the enthusiasm and spectacle with the music that create 'the show' I am also very much a travel enthusiast and recently traveled around South America On my travels

I learnt Spanish, giving me a firsthand insight into the various foreign cultures

All this considered, I would like to make Art a greater part of my life and turn my passion for the subject into a career I aim to work in an auction house, as a Fine Art specialist

As a mature student, I can truly benefit from the cultural background I acquired through my personal and professional activities and become a successful student

I realize I still have so much to learn and discover and I believe that an undergraduate course in History of Art presents me with the perfect opportunity to achieve my goals

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Bài luận cá nhân của Callum, nhận được học bổng của The University of Durham, University College London, The University of Warwick, Imperial College London, The University of Edinburgh; chuyên ngành Mathematics

The idea of proof has always held a real fascination for me The process of starting from a simple set of axioms and deriving almost any mathematical truth (putting Godel to one side) is what truly separates Mathematics from any other subject It is the closest we can ever get to absolute truth, and therein lies its sheer beauty and the reason it is the only subject for

me Of course, it's also a good deal of fun

I have tried to extend my Maths as much as possible beyond the classroom, and whenever I do so I uncover either some completely new and intriguing area of Mathematics or

a very neat trick I hadn't thought of in more familiar territory One example of this is my attendance at weekly lectures given by the department of Mathematics at Bristol University, covering topics from the Mathematics of juggling to quantum mechanics, although some of

my favourites have been those on the less exotic "inequalities", which taught me a lot about thinking about problems creatively

I also attended a summer school run by the National Academy of Gifted and Talented Youth at the University of Durham, where I spent two weeks being introduced to various approachable first year undergraduate topics such as proof by induction, Markov chains and using Maple This experience not only allowed me to discover areas of Mathematics I would not otherwise have encountered, but also gave me a small taste of university life, as there was

a large number of us living in one of the colleges

I am also involved in the UKMT mentoring scheme, whereby each month I am given a sheet of questions in areas not touched on at A level, such as geometry and number theory, giving me a good opportunity to explore new mathematical ideas myself, and gain a much deeper appreciation of the interconnections within Mathematics and the creation of proofs I

am a member of the school's Maths team and we are regularly successful in competing against teams from other schools in the area I also attend STEP sessions at local schools when available, as I find the questions much more interesting than the standard A level ones, and thinking about how to solve them has greatly improved my rigour in approaching problems

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Among the mathematical books I have read, I enjoyed "Godel, Escher, Bach", which gives a good grounding in axiomatic reasoning and formal systems, whilst at the same time pointing out their major flaw I also liked "To infinity and beyond" by Eli Maor, which deals with the concept of infinity, its implications and its paradoxes, both in Maths and elsewhere

I particularly enjoy the pure side of the A level syllabus, especially trigonometry and calculus, as they involve a certain degree of proof and introduce new concepts I believe my other academic subjects all complement Mathematics as they are about finding ways of describing reality, be it through language in French or through equations and models in Physics and Chemistry I find Critical Thinking especially relevant as it is about the construction of sound logical arguments, an art lying at the heart of Mathematics in proof I have acheived an A grade in all modules across all my subjects

In my spare time, I practise kickboxing, and have competed in various local competitions As a volunteer, I am involved in a year seven Maths mentoring scheme and help

at a homeless shelter I enjoy travelling, and will be going to Nicaragua for a month after my

A levels to help in a small village, explore the local jungles and volcanoes and practise my Spanish I lived in France from the ages of 9 to 12, and learnt to adapt to a new language and culture

I very much look forward to exploring the new ideas of University level Mathematics, and playing a full part in University life

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Bài luận cá nhân của Carrin, nhận được học bổng Đại học The University of Westminster chuyên ngành Environmental Biotechnology

How do we fight an environmental crisis? In a country like Pakistan, where concerns such as fighting terrorism, poverty, and corruption dominate the stage, it is unnerving to see how this question is often sidelined I did not always think like this, however

My inclination towards Science and natural adeptness at it became obvious when, in fifth grade, I was honoured with an Award for Excellence in General Science My prize comprised of two books: one on General Geography, and the other about Volcanoes Thereafter, I was drawn towards scientific films and books I started learning how thousands

of intricate processes work in harmony within and around the Earth to achieve equilibrium This fascination escalated over the years I also noticed how I had a greater aptitude for Biology than the other natural sciences; beyond doubt, there is no system as elaborately fashioned as the living organism

I was introduced to Environmental Sciences through coincidence My mind was set: I wanted to choose a field that had room for scientific research, and as I sifted through the innumerable pages of my chosen university's prospectus, I was exclusively inclined towards it The theme sounded intriguing, fresh, and unique; it did not restrict me to any single branch of science Then, as I researched the subject further, I began to see the vast width of its application to my surroundings My people drink out of rivers contaminated with toxic effluents, live among solid waste disposal sites labelled 'landfills' by leaders, breathe air so heavily laden with pollutants that it is difficult to see through I concluded without hesitation that this is the field I want to pursue

I chose this course because it combines my passion for environmental concerns with

my favourite limb of science, topped with the potential for research Reader's Digest, National Geographic, Biomass Digest and other scientific websites serve as a rewarding pass-time Today, Biotechnology is increasingly being used for the advantage of human beings Biofuels, for example, are being developed to replace non-renewable fossil fuels; plants and animals are being genetically bred to meet the growing population's demand for food; bioremediation is serving as the ultimate solution to land contamination by oil spills I believe that it does not end here There is a wealth of untapped potential in the application of Biotechnology to

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a team lead, I made a conscious effort to treat each member's opinion as equally valuable, and kept myself open to constructive criticism During this time, I lost my mother to Brain Hemorrhage However, I realized that opportunities like this do not present themselves often, and so trudged ahead The week preceding the competition was mostly spent rehearsing and guiding team fellows through the presentation lay-out, the title of which was 'Integrated Action Plan to reduce Vehicular Emissions' We wrapped it up with a Cost-Benefit Analysis

of the proposed strategy to prove its economic feasibility It was an immensely enjoyable way

of learning how to adjust to a completely different environment, to handle the pressures of a deadline, and to be a responsible and composed team leader I believe I will continue to contribute through similar extra-curricular involvement in the future

I also interned on-campus with a team for the quantification and formal reporting of Carbon Sinks The objective was to take remedial measures for combating the surplus pollution We spent entire evenings measuring the surface area of leaves and counting trees for approximation, simultaneously compiling our work in an Excel spreadsheet The job was tedious, but rewarding It gives me great satisfaction to know that I played some role, however small, towards making our University 'green'

I feel even strongly when I think about Pakistan as a whole I want to contribute towards a positive change in the country's environment Ideally, this would be via the next breakthrough in Environmental Science, but realistically, through a life of hard work dedicated to my country's development and maturation I believe that my varied interests and capabilities will find home in the UK, and I am sure this course will satiate my appetite for research-oriented learning I hope to return to Pakistan polished, and equipped with knowledge that will benefit its environment in a creative, economical and innovative way

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Bài luận cá nhân của Cortneigh, nhận được học bổng Đại học King's College London, University College London, The University of Edinburgh chuyên ngành Biotechnology

The possibilities of biotechnology first intrigued me when I watched Jurassic park I ran around my house asking if it was possible to bring back dinosaurs, and spent the rest of

my childhood imagining that it was My parents sparked my curiousity by taking me to places like the petrified forest national park in Arizona or skiing in the rocky mountains This is where my inherent passion for the sciences came about An amalgamation of experience and education made me the person I am today

After reading Stephen Hawking's 'The Theory of Everything', I was amazed by how vast our universe is We only understand a fraction of it Ever since, I have incorporated my studies with the world around me I'm interested by the development of new ways to solve modern problems People rejoice when they learn that coal production is declining However, sulphur released from coal produces a 'shield' in the atmosphere and is actually responsible for keeping temperatures somewhat stable; another factor scientists must consider My passion for biology has grown immense over the years It started when a friend and I were inspired to work out after watching Arnold Schwarzenegger films Being biology students, we immediately started researching methods for the fastest gains We studied various factors like: the effects of consuming creatine monohydrate and the different types of workouts Indirectly,

we covered part of our A-level syllabus in the ninth grade Fascination with the practicalities

of science had manifested the applications of it in our lives

Every year, my family visits rural villages in Uttar Pradesh Living in the villages allows me to appreciate the things I'm blessed with I've also learned that crude forms of biotechnology are ubiquitous In many houses cow dung is piled up in underground chambers Pipes from the chambers connect to gas cylinders and provide methane to light gas stoves My goal is to make modern biotechnology prominent in these villages

Succeeding in biotechnology requires knowledge drawn from an eclectic mix of subjects I'm currently finishing my A-levels with biology, chemistry, physics, mathematics, and art Art has helped me appreciate aesthetics and has taught me the importance of dedication I was one of the few students chosen to attend the UNIS-UN conference in New York The theme for the conference was 'The Web: Wiring our World' For the film competition, we composed a short film focusing on the defects of the internet, and won first

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place After returning, I started the school debate club with a friend Maintaining the club taught us cooperation and leadership skills Debating is particularly useful when my friends and I argue about the ethical issues surrounding modern biotechnology I can express my views lucidly, advocating my passion

One thing that makes me happy is giving In America, my friends and I ran a service that provided help to students in the neighbourhood, called 'Homework Helper' We would help out younger children with their homework, and in the process finish our own work In

my current school, I am part of the Interact club We take time every month to visit underprivileged children and teach them how to read and write Other hobbies of mine include drama and on-stage improvisation Acting in school plays has shown me the significance of body language in our everyday interactions Living in America and India has taught me the importance of culture in our society I express culture through my music when I play the guitar Meeting people around the world has emphasized the importance of perspective Everyone is unique, yet we all share a common goal of happiness

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Bài luận cá nhân của Dean, nhận được học bổng tại King's College London và The University of York chuyên ngành Philosophy

“The first and simplest emotion which we discover in the human mind is curiosity” I believe that when the mind is allowed to think outside the pre-defined constraints of society, the different directions in which it can travel are infinite

Philosophy for me is the basis on which our lives are based and after reading Aristotle‟s Ethics, it is fascinating to find that a lot of the beliefs I hold are so similar to those held by someone who lived over two thousand years ago My main inspiration for taking Philosophy is Socrates and his unapologetic moral compass Even when confronted with his own mortality, he refuses to take the easy option that would compromise what he believes in, for me Socrates incorporates everything I feel a good person should be I am most interested

in learning about Ancient Greek philosophy because I feel that in this day and age, the majority of people have lost sight of the basic principles of morals and ethics written by the likes of Plato and Aristotle all those years ago I also believe like Descartes that I must forget everything I think I know about life and start from the beginning and the next step for me is university

I have particularly enjoyed studying Dr Carol Dweck‟s theories of Intelligence I related to this study because I feel that it summed up my years at school almost perfectly For most of my childhood up until the end of my teenage years my view on intelligence was, as

Dr Dweck theorizes, the “Entity theory of intelligence” Threatened by failure I have shied away from academic study, because I felt that failure indicated a lack of intelligence and because of this view I never committed myself to my studies My views on this have radically changed over the last 7 years and I now believe that intelligence is interchangeable, that if curiosity is ignited in the right way, it can be enhanced with the only limitation being yourself

I am currently a student of Psychology and Politics which I am really enjoying It is exciting to be back in a learning environment and I feel that even though I have done a lot of reading at home, nothing compares to being able to debate a point and question reasoning face

to face I have always been an enthusiastic reader but my thirst for knowledge and understanding didn‟t really explode until I was 18 The advancement in available material through the internet has helped me in my quest to learn and understand anything and

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I believe that stimulating the body is just as important as stimulating the mind so next year I will be taking part in the Virgin London Marathon on behalf of the World Wide Fund for Nature I am also fairly well travelled and lived in Australia for 2 years, I also did charity work in Bolivia and have visited Peru, Thailand and Laos amongst others Leonardo Da Vinci was once asked what the key to his genius was; his reply was simple “Sapere Vedere” which translates as „Knowing how to see‟ For me understanding the mind and combining this with the basic principles of what it is to be aware, to be human, our interactions and what we think

to be right and wrong is so important

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Bài luận cá nhân của Demshy, nhận được học bổng của The University of Manchester, The University of Sheffield, University of Leeds, The University of Nottingham, The University of Liverpool; chuyên ngành Business & Management

From a very young age, I have been interested in the way businesses are run: how shops are laid out, how they sell themselves to the customer, asking myself why are video games so differently priced? My enthusiasm for Business Studies and Management grew from

a visit in my youth to my father's newspaper office at Canary Wharf I was intrigued by the amount of work and effort that was put into running a daily newspaper, wondering how it was possible to manage so many people and run a business that involved such careful delegation and use of time

Studying Business Studies at A level strengthened these early interests I am particularly interested in the human behaviour side of business, and have been keen to explore motivation What makes people tick? What drives them forward? The world in which we live

is increasingly dominated by businesses, so what could be more captivating than studying the most powerful collections of people on the planet? These dynamic organisations not only reflect but create the values of contemporary societies, shaping our beliefs and lifestyle choices Psychology at A level has taught me all about human interaction and how our minds work

On a larger scale, Economics A level has shown me the structural role Economics plays in our lives It explains how goods are priced, how markets ebb and flow, how the laws

of demand and supply determine so much of what we do, and condition the environment around us Economics also supplies knowledge of how business developments work and their impacts which are likely to succeed and those that will almost certainly fail All three of these

A levels have also made practical use of my mathematical skills gained at AS level and IGCSE, in which I achieved an A*

My voluntary work experience at Google headquarters in London really reinforced my desire to study Business It gave me a fascinating insight into how one of the most rapidly growing, successful global businesses operates The highlight was organising a YouTube press meeting, and I gained valuable skills in communication and interaction with others in a working environment I was particularly intrigued to know more about the connections between different teams I am currently working at ******** department store in ******, as

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a "mobile" sales assistant, moving around the departments and getting a wide range of views

on how the company gels together Again, it is interesting being on the inside, seeing and hearing how the company behaves and thinks

I am a competitive chess player I see chess as an exercise of infinite possibilities for the mind; one which develops mental abilities used throughout life: concentration, thinking ahead, problem solving, strategic planning and creativity I was primary school chess champion, going the whole season undefeated when I was 10 years old More recently, I was competent enough to receive a school service tie for my skills and I regularly play in the 1st team

Tennis is another major passion I have played since I was six and play for my school and for my club In tennis, mastery of the mind is the crucial factor to win; every time I play I encounter a wide range of psychological problems I was the School Captain when I was 15 years old, reached the final of the ******** open tournament and also play for ******* Club's tennis academy This improved my leadership abilities as I learnt how to organise the team, motivate players and improve spirit and team morale These skills would be highly transferable to a business environment

I am also a keen footballer, having played for various school teams at all ages, and was my school's social league top scorer last season with 21 goals in 12 games

I am looking forward to continuing these past times alongside my degree, and think

my natural business inquisition and drive for success, in any task I set myself, would make me ideally suited to studying Business or Management at university

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Bài luận cá nhân của sinh viên Florence, nhận được học bổng của Đại học University of Portsmouth, The University of Hull, The University of Liverpool cho chuyên ngành Law with Business

From an early age, Law has always been number one priority in my vision of the future Probably because of my father's profession (he is Head of the Regional Criminal Police), I have always been intrigued by Criminology and the idea of analyzing and solving tangled cases To be a Private Investigator was one of my dreams for a long time On the other hand, I am completely aware that the world of criminology is full of risks, sleepless nights and health hazards That is the reason why I see Business Law not only as a chance for prosperity, but also of a life devoid of fears and restlessness I am confident that the combination of business and legal studies would enable me to show the best of my intellectual capacity and prosper in a competitive commercial environment Having obtained a degree in Business Law, I will be able to enjoy a successful career in any of the following spheres: banking and finance, accountancy, local and central government, business and commerce, the police and prison services etc

In primary school, Mathematics, Literature and English were always my favourites Analytical thinking and problem-solving kept me active and entertained Later, at high school, Informatics was my core subject, while my undoubted favorites were Philosophy, Ethics and Law and Psychology Thus, along with my Mathematics classes (over 200 per year) and Informatics, my interest in reading Law at university grew significantly Last year, my Geography teacher announced that 25 high school students will have the opportunity to go to Strasbourg, visit the European Parliament and take part in the Euroscola project Being interested in the European institutions, I promised myself to be one of those who get to be there To achieve that, I had to take exams in English and European integration Not only did I take them, but I ranked 5th among the best 25 students (and 1st of all girls) Winning that competition gave me more than just a visit at the European Parliament: I improved my social and teamwork skills, presented in front of a big audience and enhanced my enthusiasm to work in the sphere of Law Now, I am hoping to win a competition which will allow me to visit the Science Parliament in Aachen in March 2010

Thanks to my participation in the international Comenius Project "From Sky To Tap" I enjoyed an unforgettable trip to Sicily and developed my communication skills significantly

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I choose the UK as my study destination because British universities are renowned for their well-balanced academic programmes which offer opportunities for professional development through teamwork and participation in research projects I will have the chance

to prove that I am capable of understanding and mastering complex information and learn to express myself and write with the proper confidence in English Working hard on my assignments and meeting deadlines will prepare me for the real world of Business A degree course at a British university will allow me to live for a few years in a country of rich cultural traditions and will also enhance my career opportunities in the future

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Bài luận cá nhân của Gabriel, nhận được học bổng của Đại học Cambridge University, London School of Economics, School of Oriental and African Studies, University of Bristol, The University of Sheffield, chuyên ngành International Relations

The Middle East has always been a political hot zone, at the center of international disputes which gain worldwide attention Since the beginning of the twentieth century, the region has acted as a battlefield for other nations, making stability in the area an impossible feat Growing up in the Middle East, I became accustomed to hearing political discussions at every social gathering I came to realize that as an Arab, and a Lebanese especially, politics was an inescapable part of my life

Since the assassination of Prime Minister Rafic Al-Hariri in 2005, Lebanon has been thrown into a miasma of pandemonium, venality, and civil unrest The ongoing international investigation has generated much controversy in Lebanon as it unveiled the warped political system and the corruption that seems to have infiltrated the highest ranks of government officials However, it became apparent that the incident was bigger than the Lebanese political arena It was orchestrated by greater world players and designed to have consequences on an international scale

Eager to know more about the event that shook the very foundations of my country, I became an avid participant in political discussions and followed the news daily The complexity of international relations became a fascination I was intrigued by the way nations interact with each other in today’s increasingly interdependent world I am looking forward to spending the next three years exploring this phenomenon in detail

My History A-Level course has been an excellent introduction into the multifaceted world of International Politics It has equipped me with valuable skills that are undoubtedly essential for a future diplomat I have learned to analyze sources thoroughly and synthesize information to form well-reasoned arguments I was required to participate in debates as part

of the course I was voted captain, therefore, it was my responsibility to delegate tasks and encourage co-operation among my teammates; a task that developed my leadership, teamwork, and organization skills

The debates, along with my involvement in the drama club, developed my public speaking and communication abilities, giving me the confidence that I will need to partake in

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The activity I feel has most prepared me for working in the field of politics, however,

is Student Council My position as Vice-President and this year as President has honed my diplomatic competency and taught me how to negotiate successfully The proceedings from our events went towards various charities Aside from academia, I have a great passion for piano I am currently at Level 5 Eager to impart my love for this beautiful and expressive art,

I gave piano lessons to two young girls As for athletics, I was part of the swimming team for three consecutive years and have recently developed an interest in soccer

I aspire to represent Lebanon in an international organization and take part in shaping its foreign policy On the risk of sounding presumptuous, I hope to be able to make a difference in the world Studying in the UK will surely put me on the right track towards achieving my dreams As a Lebanese-Canadian citizen, I hope that I can reciprocate the favor and contribute to the diverse and stimulating student body

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Bài luận cá nhân của Garikai, nhận được học bổng Đại học The University of Birmingham, Aston University, Cardiff University chuyên ngành Biomedical Science

To venture into the realm of science and medicine is to pursue a path of boundless discovery; I am in awe of how much humanity has been shaped by medical advances, paving the way for new cures and better anatomical understanding Civilisation itself relies solely upon such advances, thus the urge to contribute to an ever-changing profession has long since ignited my interest in a biomedical science course

Alongside the need to apply Biology based science to medical use, the opportunity to further study the complexity of the human body has provided the motivation to steer me towards a well regarded and compelling specialty such as this

To grasp a practical understanding of what biomedicine entails, I volunteered to assist

at the Wolverhampton Hospital for a week Under the guidance of a Geriatrician, I observed ward rounds and often engaged elderly patients in conversation, which only fuelled my desire

to partake in a role that strives to improve the healthcare of the wider community Most of my time was spent touring the haematology department were I was introduced to fascinating clinical concepts such as haemodialysis

Observing laboratory work was an ideal opportunity to gain a profound awareness of diagnosis and blood abnormalities like Sickle Cells Anaemia and Leukemia Alongside the biomedical experience I also took part in exciting medical procedures, a few of which involved using a stethoscope to detect heart murmurs and respiratory problems

Furthermore, I have also helped out at my local hospital and although this second work experience lacked the biomedical aspects I desired, working with paraplegic patients opened my eyes to the importance of medicine in general and reinforced my desire to aim for

a future in biomedical science

My dedication to the course and general love for science is reflected in my A' level subject choices, where innovative thinking and self motivated study skills are key Biology and Chemistry provide an analytic aspect of learning, while Maths and Physics help develop the logical problem solving skills which are heavily required in any healthcare profession

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I also enjoy absorbing a wide variety of medical related opinions and often yearn for new ways to nurture my interest in this area I am enthusiastic to develop my scientific knowledge; I find reading the works of Roger Watson help promote an already blossoming fascination with the human anatomy At school I assist in the organisation of welcome club sessions for Year 7 students Teaching Biology and Art to younger pupils has not only improved my interpersonal and leadership abilities, but helped me mature as a well rounded person who prides himself in inspiring others

Moreover, I have been involved in school affairs as Year 10 and 11 Representative, speaking on behalf of my form group during School Council meetings The determination I have displayed throughout my schooling career will prove vital at University were endurance

is most desired

Beyond the academic field I frequently partake in various sporting activities, Badminton and Tennis in particular I have successfully represented my school at a competitive level during local events and competitions As a member of the Gifted and Talented scheme for Art and Music I have always shown an undying interest and natural flair

in the arts, and so regularly take the time to explore this creativity on canvas I also take pleasure in playing guitar and though I am self-taught, I find it enjoyable and eminently productive

Ultimately, I consider myself to be a well rounded, sociable individual driven by the aspiration to help improve people's lives by contributing to the advancement of healthcare

My own scientific ideology is based on the notion that society will always depend upon medical innovations to remedy all illness and bodily complications Therefore, this is something I hugely anticipate and hope to achieve through a biomedical course at university

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Bài luận cá nhân của Haidar E Karrar, nhận được học bổng tại Lancaster University, The University of Birmingham, University of East Anglia chuyên ngành Maths & Computer Science

I believe that Mathematics is a key part of life Being ambitious and willing to face challenges, asking questions and exploring problems without quite knowing how the solution will emerge are the key to my interest in Mathematics My studies in Mathematics and Further Mathematics at A level have strengthened my interest in this subject and have shown

me a complete new world of Mathematics In particular, I have enjoyed studying networks and calculus It was exciting to find that Mathematical techniques could be used to solve real life problems such as differential equations that can be solved to design astonishing buildings

In addition to retaining a strong interest in Mathematics, my fascination for computers has also grown Creating a website as part of my I.C.T coursework allowed me to use programming language such as „HTML‟ to make an efficient website It was easy to use and quite interesting to find out that programming language is an algorithm designed for computers to carry tasks quickly My decision to apply for the joint course was confirmed after I attended two summer schools After attending a number of lectures I understood what computer science consists of and its importance in our fast developing world I found that there is a “sea of knowledge” to be discovered, and by studying a joint honours at degree level

in such closely related subjects, as Mathematics and Computer Science will give me a broad range of skills and expertise which I could use to solve multifaceted problems in the future

As part of my community placement in year 12, I provided Mathematics support for students with language difficulties As I am trilingual, it was easy for students to communicate with me and get the best support Similarly a work experience at a warehouse in year 11 gave me a great opportunity to work with people from different backgrounds Through these placements, I have improved my communication skills, confidence, teamwork and independent working skills Recently I have become a prefect and have joined the Young Enterprise Group I am looking forward to taking on the responsibilities involved In addition,

I have participated in the Duke of Edinburgh „Silver‟ awards, which was very challenging I worked as part of a team, which helped me to build up my interpersonal and time management skills I believe the skills I have gained will be extremely useful at university to help me succeed

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Alongside my studies I believe physical fitness is important in life, therefore in my leisure times I swim and run Additionally, the opportunity to play in a volleyball team has enabled me to work as part of a group Being a member of a team has required regular commitment to training and a high level of self motivation, and these skills are some of the skills that I can use at university to help me be on top of my work and to motivate friends and team members to do well

I am sure that having a Joint Honours Degree in Mathematics and Computer Science will give me transferable skills which I could use in a variety of careers I am currently investigating a number of areas that appeal to me, including software engineering and further postgraduate studies I am proud of my achievements and am open minded I intend to approach the future positively and have many aspirations as to what I am going to do at university I know that I will encounter new opportunities, make new friends and rise to the exciting challenge of university life!

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Bài luận cá nhân của Hajira, nhận được học bổng Đại học Imperial College London, King's College London, London School of Economics, University College London, Royal Holloway chuyên ngành Maths

Mathematical logic and concepts underlie functionality of practically every process from rocket science to the budget of a household It is this diversity of application that intrigues me and makes me want to study it in depth I feel it will give me logistic and reasoning abilities that are pivotal for virtually all areas of study, consequently giving a very strong base for a wide range of careers My interest in mathematics dates back to primary school - I have enjoyed the challenge ever since

Throughout my O'levels in Pakistan, I received merit certificates not only for math but for all other science subjects as well I have always marveled at the interrelation between these and math, and have always sought to explore their common underlying principles

An opportunity to do that was when I was among the 40 top candidates selected, from all over Pakistan, by Buraq Planetary Society to participate in a ten day ‘Space Camp’ Here I was not only exposed to wider prospects of knowledge, but was given an invaluable experience of interaction with like-minded people I also gained useful communication skills and a great confidence boost

Due to a clash in my timetable during O'Levels, I could not take Additional Mathematics at school Nevertheless, I decided to study the course on my own initiative I managed to grasp the syllabus’ concepts during year 11 and achieved 96% on the paper This was a great sense of achievement for me and encouragement to pursue my interest further

Having had no formal lessons, I developed an independent, self-reliant approach to maths which I believe is crucial for university level study Achieving the maximum number of

A grades ever in my school’s 25 year history, I was offered a full scholarship for A'Levels However, I was not able to avail it as I moved to the UK

I have always been active in extra curricular Due to my immense interest in singing I have always been in the school choir and participated in many competitions and festivals including one in which I performed a solo for an audience of 2000 I also appeared in a weekly musical program for three years on national television

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At school, I was elected the house Captain by the entire student body This required a high degree of leadership as well as organisational skills and involved an active role in the student council, which meant coordinating major social events and sport competitions where I was responsible for pulling together teams for my house This experience invariably taught

me to strike a sensible balance between academics and extra curricular activities

Last year I completed a work experience placement in an engineering firm, Enotrac, that mainly involved computer based investigation reports Although the work itself was not directly related to my field, it was useful in giving me an insight to a professional atmosphere

I'm looking forward to experiencing university life - it will not only give me the academic grounds to get into careers like actuarial science, research and commerce, but the social experience in itself is something to look forward to

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Bài luận cá nhân của Herrik, nhận được thư mời học của Đại học Manchester University, Liverpool University, Leeds University; Học bổng Đại học Leicester University, Durham University, Newcastle University chuyên ngành Medicine

From an early age I have been fascinated by the workings of life The human body is a remarkable machine with many diverse systems producing an organism that could never be artificially reproduced My love of science is just one of my reasons for choosing medicine I enjoy a challenge particularly towards a rewarding objective and although medicine is a tough career it can be enormously gratifying, highlighted by the doctors I have spoken to during my experience and on a personal level

To further my insight into the medical field I participated in a work shadowing week

at a GP surgery I gained a valuable understanding of the workings of the surgery, with opportunities to observe and speak to the doctors regarding a medical career

I arranged another placement week myself at a local hospital, which was a superb opportunity to observe medicine from another point of view I observed the ward rounds, an MRI scan, a skin biopsy and an endosocpy clinic all which I found interesting I spent the most time with the haematology team, responsible for patients with diseases such as Chronic Myelogenous Leukaemia (CML), haematology being one of my interests it was captivating that I could see the specialty from a more complex side than the AS biology course For example I was able to understand how the level of platelets affects blood clotting

Throughout the week I expanded my confidence and communication skills through speaking to patients and doctors Although I enjoyed the week it was at times extremely heart- rending, I was able to get close to many of the terminally ill patients helping and caring for them where I could, getting them tea or just talking and empathising with them to build their spirits I volunteered at a local home for the elderly which was very rewarding as I built my caring skills, helping residents by making them tea or playing cards with them At school I took part in a paired reading scheme for 6 months where I was able to help young children to read, speaking and listening to them to help their English All my experience has made me more determined to accomplish my ambition to be a doctor

My love of science and aspiration for a medical career is reflected in my A-Level choices where good time management, self motivated study skills and ability to cope with

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stress and pressure are essential Biology and chemistry have helped me further my interest and develop my analytical skills, maths helps my problem solving skills helping me to work logically and ICT gives me a valuable insight into the rapidly developing technological world where computers are crucial

I believe all the qualities I have developed through my courses are essential for any good doctor I have participated in the Duke of Edinburgh award scheme which enabled me to achieve a first aid certificate including cardiopulmonary resuscitation training I also enhanced my inter-personal, communication and team building abilities, valuable skills for any medical occupation, as I witnessed during my experience For 2 years I have volunteered

at a local vet hospital observing and helping out 2 hours per week communicating with the public in a different environment I enjoy reading, mainly factual books to expand my general knowledge

To relax, I enjoy sports including football, and cricket for which I was captain of the school team and my local team for the past 3 years improving my leadership skills I also recently rekindled my childhood passion for golf, another pastime I enjoy even if it is a little expensive!

I am a self motivated, determined individual and I look forward to the social and academic challenges of university I am aware of the demands of a medical career but my commitment and desire to become a doctor has only been strengthened through my experience and work in a voluntary capacity

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