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Ticket Id: 141874 Thursday, April 13, 2017 Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability To what extent you agree or disagree? It is argued that university should offer permissions to all individuals to study without any academic requirement While this practice has some benefits, I strongly believe that its drawbacks are more significant and so I agree with this position Admittedly, giving full access to tertiary education for everyone can certainly improve the economics of a country and its people’s life Since everyone can attain further education to acquire a Bachelor’s degree, there are more knowledgeable and qualified employees fulfilling important positions such as managers and doctors This could result in an increasing numbers of now jobs generating a great amount of money from taxes to the national budget Besides, the living standards of citizens is enhanced remarkably because they can earn more money now However, despite some arguments above, I believe that this practice can bring more harm than good and thus should not be allowed Firstly, it can result in an overload of universities and college When people not need to test their levels of academic ability, they can go to study in higher education without having any foundation knowledge of some academic subjects like math and physic This could result in a significant lack of facilities and lecturers Secondly, it is a waste of money to build more universities and colleges to meet the great demand of learners For instance, the state would have to spend a huge amount of money on investments of constructing more rooms and buying more teaching equipment when there are a massive number of citizens attending university In conclusion, it seems to me that allowing everyone to studying in tertiary education without examining their academic ability might bring more harm than good, and thus I not agree with this practice Evaluation Report Word count Comments 289 All the parts of the task have been covered The ideas are presented coherently Paragraphing of the essay is fine There are incidental errors in word choice, spelling, word formation and grammar but they not make the meaning much harder to understand at most places Overall, the essay can be improved further © IELTS-Blog.com - All Rights Reserved ● Web: http://www.ielts-blog.com Ticket Id: 141874 Thursday, April 13, 2017 Estimated Band Score Suggestions Helpful links 6.5 Revise grammar Learn more vocabulary and improve choice of words Always proofread the task response after finishing it Keep practicing to improve your performance Writing Correction Service - to order a correction click here IELTS preparation e-books - download a free trial here Sample essays, letters and reports - click here Learn vocabulary from this link http://www.scribd.com/doc/244244/Check-yourVocabulary-for-IELTS www.ielts-blog.com Note Please make sure to go over the detailed comments we marked for you in balloons on the right side of your task text If you can't see the balloons, please change your Word settings as follows: Click View -> Print Layout in the main menu Click View->Markup in the main menu © IELTS-Blog.com - All Rights Reserved ● Web: http://www.ielts-blog.com Ticket Id: 141874 Thursday, April 13, 2017 You should now see comments appearing in balloons on the right side: © IELTS-Blog.com - All Rights Reserved ● Web: http://www.ielts-blog.com ... to order a correction click here IELTS preparation e-books - download a free trial here Sample essays, letters and reports - click here Learn vocabulary from this link http://www.scribd.com/doc/244244/Check-yourVocabulary-for-IELTS