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TEST WRITING TASK ● The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth century Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant The bar graph compares the input from three sectors into British economy in the twentieth century At the first glance, it is evident that the contributions made by agriculture and manufacturing sides were tremendous in the earlier half of the century; however, as the years progressed business and finance became the predominant pillar of the British economy In the year 1900, the most significant contribution of approximately 50% was made by agriculture department, this was succeeded by manufacturing sector which had an input of around 45% While, business and finance had a share of mere 3% After fifty years, the support to economy from agriculture segment grew to around 53%, whereas, that from manufacturing department fell to about 37% However, share by the business and finance mounted about two folds to 8% In the later part of the century, that is in the year 1975, the input from agriculture side dropped dramatically to 10% Same was the case with manufacturing which saw a decline of 4%, albeit not as significant as agriculture sector Nevertheless, business and finance was the only segment where improvement was noticed At the end of the 20th century, agriculture sector had an input of only about 3%, while, that from manufacturing it was approximately 15% The only area that continued to grow was business and finance which finally had a contribution of about 35% WRITING TASK You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach? As we move into the twenty-first century, technology is affecting many different areas of life and education is no exception Indeed, in some institutions traditional forms of education have been revolutionized by new technology to the extent that the lecture is no longer the main method of delivery While there are a variety of benefits to this new approach, there are also significant drawbacks Perhaps the greatest bonus of the introduction of technology is the flexibility it offers This is evident in two different ways Firstly, it is now no longer essential for students to be present in the lecture theatre for their courses This means that part-time courses for adults who are in employment and distance learning courses for people in other countries are now much more practical Another area of flexibility is of course that the lecturer and tutor are able to use Moodles, interactive whiteboards and other tools to deliver their courses in a more stimulating way to large numbers of students Not everything, however, about the introduction of this new technology into education is positive One major problem is that not all students are comfortable with using technology, even if they are part of the digital native generation This is a serious issue as they may suffer from their lack of technological skills Another related issue is that education is a human activity and it works best with as much human interaction as possible Impersonal technology cannot replace the human contact found in traditional face-to-face tutorials and seminars As we have seen, there are major benefits to the introduction of technology into education, not least because it enables modern forms of education such as distance learning courses This is balanced, however, by the fact that it can be too impersonal for some and disadvantages others for their lack of technological skills ... was business and finance which finally had a contribution of about 35% WRITING TASK You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: In the past lectures were the... variety of benefits to this new approach, there are also significant drawbacks Perhaps the greatest bonus of the introduction of technology is the flexibility it offers This is evident in two... their courses in a more stimulating way to large numbers of students Not everything, however, about the introduction of this new technology into education is positive One major problem is that not