(LUẬN văn THẠC sĩ) a translation quality assessment of the vietnamese version of the book harry potter and the philosopher’s stone in the series harry potter using newmark’s model

VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY, HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGES AND INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POST-GRADUATE STUDIES  HOÀNG THỊ HẰNG NGA A TRANSLATION QUALITY ASSESSMENT OF THE VIETNAMESE VERSION OF THE BOOK “HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE” IN THE SERIES HARRY POTTER USING NEWMARK’S MODEL (Đánh giá chất lượng dịch tiếng Việt truyện “Harry Potter đá phù thủy” tiểu thuyết Harry Potter áp dụng mơ hình Newmark) M.A MINOR PROGRAMME THESIS Field: English Linguistics Code: 60.22.02.01 HANOI, 2014 TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY, HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGES AND INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POST-GRADUATE STUDIES  HOÀNG THỊ HẰNG NGA A TRANSLATION QUALITY ASSESSMENT OF THE VIETNAMESE VERSION OF THE BOOK “HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE” IN THE SERIES HARRY POTTER USING NEWMARK’S MODEL (Đánh giá chất lượng dịch tiếng Việt truyện “Harry Potter đá phù thủy” tiểu thuyết Harry Potter áp dụng mơ hình Newmark) M.A MINOR PROGRAMME THESIS Field: English Linguistics Code: 60.22.02.01 Supervisor: Assoc Prof Dr Lê Hùng Tiến HANOI, 2014 TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com DECLARATION OF AUTHORSHIP I hereby state that the thesis entitled “A translation quality assessment of the book Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone in the series Harry Potter using Newmark‟s model” and the work presented in it is entirely my own for the Degree of Master of Arts at University of Languages and International Studies, Vietnam National University, Hanoi, and this work has not been submitted for any degree at any other university or tertiary institution Hanoi, July 2014 Student Hoàng Thị Hằng Nga i TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS First and foremost I would like to express my sincerest gratitude to my supervisor, Assoc Prof Dr Le Hung Tien, for the continuous support of my study with his patience, motivation, enthusiasm, and immense knowledge I owe him a debt of gratitude that cannot be measured I also wish to acknowledge my debt to all the teachers of the Department of Post Graduate Studies at College of Foreign Languages, Vietnam National University for their useful lectures, assistance and enthusiasm during my course Last but not least, I am grateful to my parents and all my family, from whom I have received a lot of valuable support and encouragement On the whole, without all these help my thesis would not have possibly been completed (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model ii TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model ABSTRACT There is a fact that there have been more and more literary translations due to the process of globalization Therefore, it is necessary to control the quality of the translation so that the readers can enjoy the best of the foreign literary works This thesis is an attempt to assess the quality of a literary translation, specifically chapter seven “The sorting hat” excerpting from the novel “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone”, basing on the schema of Translation Quality Assessment proposed by Newmark By this way, the writer has found out that the translation has obtained a certain success However, it still reveals some mismatches between the source text and the target text especially in terms of semantics In addition, some other mistakes which may affect the conciseness of the translation are also pointed out From the basis of the findings, some implications are made along with suggestions for further studies (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model iii TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model LIST OF ABBREVIATIONS ST: Source Text TT: Target Text SL: Source Language TL: Target Language (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model iv TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model LIST OF TABLES Table 1: Omission and addition in the translation 18 Table 2: Comparing two versions in terms of the titles 19 Table 3: Comparing two versions in terms of paragraphing 21 Table 4: Comparing two versions in terms of relative clauses 23 Table 5: Comparing two versions in terms of passive and active forms 24 Table 6: Comparing two versions in terms of pronouns and proper names 25 Table 7: Comparing two versions in terms of idioms 27 Table 8: Comparing two versions in terms of word choice and expression 30 Table 9: Mistakes in the translation in terms of grammar and meaning 33 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model v TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TABLE OF CONTENTS DECLARATION OF AUTHORSHIP .i ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS .ii ABSTRACT .iii LIST OF ABBREVIATIONS iv LIST OF TABLES v TABLE OF CONTENTS vi PART A INTRODUCTION Rationale for the study Objective of the study .1 Research questions Scope of the study .2 Method of the study Organization of the study PART B DEVELOPMENT CHAPTER LITERATURE REVIEW 1.1 Translation Theory 1.1.1 Definition of Translation .4 1.1.2 Translation Methods 1.1.3 Translation Equivalence 1.2 Contrastive Analysis 1.3 Translation Quality Assessment 1.3.1 Definition .8 1.3.2 Translation Quality Assessment models 1.3.2.1 Response-based approach 1.3.2.2 Text-based approach .10 1.3.2.3 Julianne House‟s functional – pragmatic approach 12 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model vi TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 1.3.2.4 Newmark‟s comprehensive criticism approach .13 CHAPTER – APPLICATION OF NEWMARK’S MODEL FOR TRANSLATION QUALITY ASSESSMENT OF CHAPTER SEVEN OF “HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE” 2.1 Step 1: A brief analysis of the SL text stressing its intention and its functional aspects 16 2.2 Step 2: the translator‟s interpretation of the SL text‟s purpose, his translation method and the translation‟s likely readership 17 2.3 Step 3: A selective but representative detailed comparison of the translation with the original .19 2.4 Step 4: An evaluation of the translation .31 2.4.1 An evaluation of the translation in the translator‟s term .31 2.4.2 An evaluation of the translation in the critic‟s term 35 2.4.3 Assess the translation as a piece of writing, independently of its original 35 2.5 An assessment of the likely place of the translation in the target language culture or discipline 36 PART C CONCLUSION Concluding remarks 37 Limitations of the study and suggestions for further studies 38 REFERENCES .39 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model vii TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model PART A INTRODUCTION Rationale for the study “Translation is not merely an interlinguistic process It is more complex than replacing source language text with target language text and includes cultural and educational nuances that can shape the options and attitudes of recipients” (Dingwaney and Maier, 1995) Translation performs a crucial role in our understanding and lives as the globe seems smaller than ever before based on information sharing and communicative advances Thus, not only linguists or scholars but many people who work in different fields are concerned about translation Translation is not an easy work, it is even more challenging for translators with literary works Nowadays in Vietnam, there is a rapid growth of famous foreign literary works which have diversified the literature It can not be denied that there is a number of works that have received love and positive attitude from readers Besides, there still exist some works of bad quality which have received criticism from both publication and profession Thus, there is necessary to evaluate the translations, especially literary works There are criteria for translation quality assessment which have been addressed by different linguists such as Nida, J.House, Newmark… From the writer‟s point of view, among the suggested models, Newmark‟s model is a good one which can be used to assess translation quality The writer has taken the translation version of the book “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” by Ly Lan in the series Harry Potter by J.K Rowling to measure how good the translation is Objective of the study This study aims to make a comparison and analyze the ST and the TT according to Newmark‟s model to assess the quality of the Vietnamese (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model Besides, idioms in the TT are utilized thoroughly by the translator The achievements and weaknesses of using idioms in the TT will be discussed later in the next step Order 10 11 12 13 Original version Translation Page Text Page Text 129 This hat was patched 130 Cái nón te tua, vá chùm vá and frayed and đụp, dơ extremely dirty 130 It bowed to each of the 131 Cái nón nghiêng four tables chào bốn phương tám hướng 131 a house for people who 131 “nhà” chuyên dành cho feel a bit queasy người cảm thấy bồn chồn đến phát buồn nôn 132 Hermione almost ran to 133 Cô bé chạy bay lại the stool ghế 132 Ron groaned 133 Ron nghe tới nghiến trèo trẹo 132 Neville ran off still 133 Neville nhảy cẫng lên, wearing it quên giở nón 134 He was pale green by 136 Nó xanh lét tàu now chuối 134 Harry clapped loudly 136 Nó vỗ tay điên 134 The pumkin pasties 136 Cái bánh bí ngơ mà ăn seemed ages ago tàu lửa tiêu hóa từ đời 135 It was all delicious 137 Ngon tuyệt cú mèo 137 I was all Muggle for 139 Tôi dân Muggle ages trăm phần trăm 137 Gran was crying, she 139 Bà tơi mừng đến phát was so happy khóc 141 Peeves, show yourself 143 Peeves, xuất đầu lộ diện 26 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 14 141 Ickle firsties! What fun! 143 Lính tị te Vui Table 7: Comparing two versions in terms of idioms Beside idioms, the translator‟s choice of word is another section that needs to be compared between the ST and the TT The examples below demonstrate the translator‟s level of language when choosing the equivalents in the TT Order Original version Page Text 125 The Entrance Hall was so big you could have fitted the whole of the Dursleys' house in it 125 the ceiling was too high to make out 125 They crowded in, standing rather closer together than they would usually have done, peering about nervously 126 Her eyes lingered for a moment on Neville's cloak, which was fastened under his left ear, and on Ron's smudged nose 127 Harry's heart gave a horrible jolt 127 He kept his eyes fixed on the door 127 Professor McGonagall would come back and lead him to his doom Translation Page Text 126 Sảnh trước rộng lớn rinh nguyên nhà gia đình Dursley vào lọt 126 Trần lâu đài cao vòi vọi 126 Chúng đứng túm vào nhau, nghểnh cổ ngóng chờ cách hồi hộp lo âu 127 Ánh mắt bà chần chừ áo chồng cột ẩu tả Neville; chót mũi nhọ nhem Ron khiến giáo sư khơng hài lòng Tim Harry bắt đầu nhảy loạn xạ Giờ đây, mắt Harry dán chặt xuống sàn nhà Giáo sư McGonagall trở lại số tới tàn 127 128 128 27 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 128 128 10 127 11 127 12 128 13 128 14 128 15 129 16 129 17 131 18 131 Then something happened that made him jump about a foot in the air several people behind him screamed About twenty ghosts had just streamed through the back wall They seemed to be arguing A ghost wearing a ruff and tights had suddenly noticed the first years One by one, the ghosts floated away through the opposite wall At the top of the hall was another long table where the teachers were sitting He heard Hermione whisper, "It‟s bewitched to look like the sky outside.” Aunt Petunia wouldn’t have let it in the house 127 Bỗng nhiên có chuyện khiến Harry nhảy bắn lên không trung ba tấc 127 bọn trẻ xung quanh kêu thét lên Khoảng hai chục ma vừa trườn từ tường phía sau Hình chúng gây gổ Con ma mặt đồ bó sát nói nhận diện bọn trẻ Những ma vội lặng lẽ trôi vào tường đối diện, Ở đầu đại sảnh đường bàn dài khác dành cho giáo sư 128 128 128 129 129 129 130 A pink-faced girl with 132 blonde pigtails stumbled out of line, put on the hat, which fell right down over her eyes, and sat down several Ravenclaws 132 Harry nghe Hermione thầm: - Nhìn ngồi trời bị ám Dì Petunia mà thấy quẳng vơ sọt rác Một cố bé có đơi má hồng hồng đơi bím tóc vàng hoe bước khỏi hàng, đội nón vào ngồi xuống ghế nhiều thành viên nhà 28 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 19 131 20 131 21 131 22 133 23 133 24 25 26 27 133 133 134 134 28 135 29 135 stood up to shake hands with Terry as he joined them and the table on the far 132 left exploded with cheers Harry could see Ron's 132 twin brothers catcalling Perhaps it was Harry's imagination, after all he'd heard about Slytherin, The hat had barely touched his head when it screamed the Hall full of people craning to get a good look at him Not Slytherin Not Slytherin,eh? He grinned back He looked down at his empty gold plate Is he-a bit mad? 132 134 134 134 135 135 136 136 He had never seen so 136 many things he liked to eat on one table: roast beef, roast chicken, pork chops and lamb chops, sausages, bacon and steak, boiled potatoes, roast potatoes, fries, Yorkshire Ravenclaw đứng dậy bắt tay Terry; cậu bé đến nhập vào bàn họ Dãy bàn cuối bên trái bùng nổ tiếng reo hò vỗ tay Harry thấy hai người anh sinh đôi Ron huýt sáo mừng Có thể la Harry tưởng tượng, giả nghe nói Slytherin nhiều quá, Cái nón chưa kịp chạm vơ đầu tun bố liền sảnh đường đầy nhóc người hướng mắt nhìn phía Đừng vơ Slytherin! Khơng chịu Slytherin hả? Nó nhe cười lại Harry ngó đĩa vàng trống khơng Cụ cụ cụ ấy… có … mát khơng vậy? Nó chưa thấy nhiều đồ ăn ưa thích ại chất đầy bàn ghế đến thế: thịt cốt lết, đùi trừu, xúc xích, thịt ba bít tết, khoai tây luộc, khoai tây nướng, khoai tây chiên, bánh mì Yorkshire, đậu, cà – rốt, nước chấm, sốt cà 29 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 30 136 31 136 32 33 137 138 34 140 35 140 36 140 37 142 38 142 pudding, peas, carrots, gravy, ketchup, and, for some strange reason, peppermint humbugs sandy-haired Seamus Finnigan interrupted His whole head swung off his neck and fell onto his shoulder as if it was on a hinge Great-auntie Algie Hagrid was drinking deeply Let us sing the school song And the school bellowed Everybody finished the song at different times chua, và… quái dị, có bọ the 137 138 139 139 141 141 142 The portrait swung 143 forward Ron muttered to Harry 144 through the hangings Thằng bé tóc bím vàng Seamus Finnigan ngắt lời Cả đầu tuột khỏi cổ, ngoẹo xuống vai thể máng vơ móc Mợ Algie Lão Hagrid say sưa nốc rượu Chúng ta hát ca trường Và trường gào lên Bài hát chấm dứt, người dứt trước, người xong sau Bức chân dung tự lách qua bên Qua mùng, Ron thầm với Harry Table 8: Comparing two versions in terms of word choice and expression There is a fact that in many cases her choice of word makes a deep impression on the readers whereas in other cases the readers find it not easy to understand Furthermore, in many situations the words or phrases in the ST are totally not equivalent with the TT They will be analyzed in the Step 30 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 2.4 Step 4: an evaluation of the translation 2.4.1 An evaluation of the translation in the translator’s terms The writer is going to evaluate the translation basing on the analysis of the evidences compared above Both the success and the weaknesses of the translation will be presented • The success of the translation: In terms of syntactic, the translator is successful in transferring many English structures into Vietnamese naturally and flexibly There are a few things capable of charming the readers and making them absorbed in the book The translator‟s ability to make the sentences smooth and fluently is one of them It is not hard to find many examples in chapter seven that make a deep impression on the readers not for the messages in the sentences but the remarkably smooth sentences (see example 2,3 in table 3) Relative clauses are transferred flexibly in the form of independent sentences or under the form of a comment parenthesis or they omitted in TT without changing the meaning of the sentences and the messages of the author (example 2,6,7,8,9 in table 4) Another notable issue is that the passive form and active structures in the ST are transferred into the TT naturally (see table 5) Besides, the translation is also very successful in terms of semantics This is reflected by the translator‟s choice of words, expressions and the use of idioms With proper names and pronouns, the translator transfers them to the TT flexibly according to different cases (see more in table 6) The translator is also successful in using idioms in some cases which makes the text naturally and familiar to the Vietnamese readers (see example 3,4,7,9,10,11,12,13,14 in table 7) One case in point is example : “He was 31 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model pale green by now” (Nó xanh lét tàu chuối) The idiom “ xanh tàu chuối” was used to indicate the feeling in a horrible or bad situation In the case of Ron, he was very worried about being chosen in one of four houses which was reflected by his appearance The idiom which was used here is the most condensed way to emphasize the bad feeling of the character The similar usage of idioms is found in example 3- “a house for people who feel a bit queasy” (“nhà” chuyên dành cho người cảm thấy bồn chồn đến phát buồn nôn)- and example – “Hermione almost ran to the stool” (Cô bé chạy bay lại ghế) Perhaps the literal meaning of the ST and the TT are not exactly the same; however, the idioms still play a very important part in creating the stronger effect on the readers than a normal structure Furthermore, it makes the TT nearer the spoken style rather than written style in the ST In addition, it can not be denied that many English words and expressions are translated concisely and naturally (see example 1,3,7,13,19,26,28,33,36 in table 8) One example can be taken into account is number 3: “They crowded in, standing rather closer together than they would usually have done, peering about nervously.” According to Longman dictionary, “peer about” is “to look very carefully at something especially because you are having difficulty seeing it”; therefore its equivalence in Vietnamese can be “nhìn chằm chằm”, “nhìn chăm chú”, “soi” or “nhịm”, “ngó”…However, in the context, to emphasize the nervous and worrying feeling of the first-year students who were new to the surroundings, no expression is more suitable than “nghểnh cổ ngóng chờ” Similarly, in example 36 “Everybody finished the song at different times”, is transferred to Vietnamese very naturally (Bài hát chấm dứt, người dứt trước, người xong sau) thanks to the expression “người dứt trước, người xong sau” 32 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model In brief, it can not be denied that the translation on the whole has achieved some success However, there are inevitable mistakes in the TT when comparing with the ST which need to be improved in order to make the translation better • The weaknesses of the translation: With regard to syntactic, some sentences are not translated correctly; the message in the TT even has no relationship with the message in the ST Following are some examples: Order Original version Translation Page Text Page Text 126 I shall return when we 127 Ta trở lại are ready for you chuẩn bị xong 129 Maybe they had to try 130 Chắc họ phải bắt and get a rabbit out of it lôi từ nón thỏ 136 I would prefer you to 137 Ta yêu cầu cháu gọi ta call me Sir Nicholas de ngài Nicholas de Mimsy Mimsy 140 The other teachers‟ 141 Harry nhận thấy nụ smiles had become cười giáo sư khác rather fixed tắt lịm Table 9: Mistakes in the translation in terms of grammar and meaning In example and 2, it can be seen clearly that the meaning of the sentence in the ST is totally different with the one in the TT Furthermore, in example 3, the structure “would prefer you to ” is not used to give command whereas in the translated version, the translator uses “ta yêu cầu cháu” which indicates the command or order In example 4, the message in the ST is that the other teachers aren't feeling true school spirit while they sing the song, they look happy and carefree but they are not happy; however, they still 33 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model smile Hence, this message is totally not the same as the message in the TT – “nụ cười…chợt tắt lịm” Besides, the most serious problem with the translation is about vocabulary and expressions The first problem in the choice of words and expressions is that some idioms are not used correctly in particular contexts It can be denied that the translator has been successful in using idioms; however, in some context, it is not suitable (see example 1,2,5,6,8 in table 7) In example 1, the translator transfers “frayed” in the ST into “vá chùm vá đụp” in the TT which are not equivalent In example 2, the hat “bowed to each of the four tables” which means that the hat bowed to the students of four houses sitting in the four tables on the floor, not all the directions - “bốn phương tám hướng” - as mentioned in the translated version The second problem, which is the most notable problem, is that the denotative and connotative meanings of many words have been totally changed between the ST and the TT It can be seen in table (example 2,4,5,6,8,9,10,11,12,14,16,17,18,20,21,22,27,29,30,32,34,35,37,38) Many simple words in the TT and the ST are not equivalent such as the door – sàn nhà, behind – xung quanh, streamed – trườn, teachers – giáo sư, several – nhiều, catcalling – huýt sáo mừng, plate – đĩa, sandy-hair – tóc bím vàng, swung forward – tự lách qua, great auntie – mợ, peppermint humbugs – bọ the Many expressions in the TT not reflect correctly the meaning in the ST such as: a ruff and tights – đồ bó sát, the school song – ca trường, roast beef, roast chicken, pork chops and lamb chops - thịt cốt lết, đùi trừu, bacon – thịt ba 34 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model 2.4.2 An evaluation of the translation in the critic’s terms Through the analysis of the achievements and the weaknesses of the translation of chapter seven in the book “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” by Ly Lan, some comments can be drawn as followed First of all, in general, the translation of chapter seven “The sorting hat”, which contains 19 pages, has obtained a certain success The translation has followed the original version very closely in most cases Besides, the translator seems to have many experiences in translating literature works in the way idioms and many expressions are used naturally and the way sentences are paragraphed flexibly Moreover, Ly Lan has proven herself to have an abundance vocabulary which is the contribution to the success of the translation However, there are still some problems in the translation which need to be improved for a better version The translator should be careful when choosing vocabulary which needs to be familiar to all the readers Moreover, the translation should follow the origin more closely because some details of the original version is omitted or added with no reasons which somewhat affects the quality of the translation 2.4.3 Assess the translation as a piece of writing, independently of its original As an independent piece of writing, the Vietnamese version of “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” is a very exciting and interesting story “Harry Potter đá phù thủy” is a good book if it is considered a literature work for children Through the book, Ly Lan has proven herself not only an experienced translator but also a talented writer The language used in the book in general is simple and easy to be understood to most of the readers, especially young readers Most of the expressions are suitable, 35 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model concise and familiar to Vietnamese readers Moreover, the writing style in the book is very natural which sometimes makes the book seem to be a Vietnamese novel It is believed that for those reasons the Vietnamese version of “Harry Potter and the philosopher’s stone” is a successful literature work, independently of its original 2.5 Step An assessment of the likely place of the translation in the target language culture or discipline J K Rowling is best known as the author of the Harry Potter fantasy series The books have gained worldwide attention, won multiple awards, and sold millions of copies They have become the best-selling book series in history and have been the basis for a series of films which became the highest-grossing film series in history Rowling had overall approval on the scripts and maintained creative control by serving as a producer on the final installment Therefore, the Vietnamese version of the story has made great contribution to the variety of national literature In brief, in spite of some inevitable mistakes, it can be said that the Vietnamese version of “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” will be a great literature work for many Vietnamese generations 36 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model PART C CONCLUSION The study has demonstrated the writer‟s analysis attempt towards the quality of the Vietnamese translation version of Chapter – The sorting hat – in the book “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” by J.K Rowling Concluding remarks Basing on Newmark‟s model, the analysis of the both ST and TT has led the writer to some important findings Firstly, in terms of the first question, the Vietnamese translation of Chapter of the book “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” is of high quality In general, the translation follows closely the original version The translator has been successful in conveying the intention and the message of the author through the way she arranges structures and the diverse vocabulary in the story Moreover, the language in general is clear, easy to understand and of great interest to the readers However, the translation still has some shortcomings in terms of syntactics and semantics Furthermore, the omission and addition in the translation when comparing with the origin is another problem that the translator should be careful From the findings above, some implications for translation of English literature works into Vietnamese can be concluded Firstly, it can be said that Newmark‟s model has many strong points in terms of application It is the model that is easy to follow because of five clear steps and it helps the critic have a deep insight into the achievements and the weaknesses of the translation as well It especially works with literature works such as novels or short stories… 37 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model Secondly, Ly Lan has proved herself an experienced writer The way she uses mother tongue; structures in the TT are transferred into the ST naturally are things that other translators can learn from her Thirdly, the very first shortcoming of the translation is the addition and omission when comparing with the origin Therefore, one implication can be drawn that the translator should follow the original version very closely if he would like the readers to understand the work entirely Last but not least, in terms of semantics and syntactics, many simple words, expressions and structures in the origin and their equivalents in the translation version are totally not the same In fact, they even have no relationship in any sense The writer can not find the reason for this problem However, it can be said that every translator should be very careful in translating every words even they are so simple Limitations of the study & suggestions for further studies The scope of the study which has been put forward in Introduction results in some limitations for this minor thesis As it is impossible for the writer to compare and analyze the whole book due to the limitation of time and also to be suitable with the applied framework, only Chapter is chosen as data for the analysis in this study Therefore, the conclusion is only adaptable to this chapter, not the whole novel and the analysis can be somewhat restricted For further study, more studies should be conduct to analyze the whole Vietnamese version “Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s stone” to enjoy a broader and more comprehensive analysis of the whole translation 38 (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com 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(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model (LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model(LUAN.van.THAC.si).a.translation.quality.assessment.of.the.vietnamese.version.of.the.book.harry.potter.and.the.philosopher’s.stone.in.the.series.harry.potter.using.newmark’s.model