n TOEIC Writing YBM?Si-s; Copyright © 2010 YBM/Si-sa Published in Vietnam, 2011 This edition is published in Vietnam under a license Agreement between YBM?Si-sa, Korea and Nhan Tri Viet Co., Ltd Vietnam through imprima Korea Agency, Korea All rights reserved No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted, in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without the prior written permission of the copyright owner Chubien Hwang Su-yeon Chuyen ngfl phan chu giai Le Hliy Lam 53 NHA XUAT BAN TdNG HdP THANH PHO H6 CHI MINH NTV Cong ty TNHH Nhan Tri Viet TOEIC Writing Test, ding nliir TOEIC Speaking Test, la bm thi kho dat ditgc diem cao Be nang cao nang lye viet, khong nhong ban can phai cham chi trau ddi von td thdi gian dai ma moi ban can phai tap viet Bong thdi ban phai nam vGng cac diem ngd phap, dac biet la cac can true cau tieng Anh Bay la nhdng yeii to rat quan giup hinh mot cau van chuan, mot bai viet hay Be giup ban nam vflng cac van de can thiet, TOEIC Writing da cd gang trtnh bay each hoc theo tdng budc nham nang cao nang lyc viet tieng Anh cua ban Trinh cao cap: TOEIC Writing tren 160 diem, TOEIC L/R tren 910 diem Ghep cac manh puzzle -* Cau hoi thyc te -♦ Bai thi mo phong arti; Ghep cac manh puzzle Cau hoi thuc te Bai thi mo phong Part 2: „ Ghep cac manh puzzle DAY (17 Bai thi mo phong Cau hoi thtfc te DAY Bai thi mo phong Part 3: • Ghep cac manh puzzle Part 3: • Cau hoi thitc te DAY O'l Bai thi mo phong DA" final Test Trinli trung cap: TOEIC Writing til tren 110 dilm ~ dttdi 150 diem, TOEIC L/R tut tren 570 ~ dtldi 845 diem Puzzle theo ttoig Part (trong trUdng hop can hoc them: Ngff phap cd ban) ->■ Ghep cac manh puzzle ->• Cau hoi thyc te -* Bai thi mo phong DAY 111 DAY ().' Manh puzzle Manh puzzle Manh puzzle Manh puzzle Manh puzzle Manh puzzle Manh puzzle DAY UJ Part 2: LA 09 Part 2: • Cau hoi thpc te DA 10 Part 3: • Manh puzzle • Manh puzzle DAY II Part 3: ° Manh puzzle DAY lb Bai tm mo phong DAY 12 Part 3: • Manh puzzle DAY 13 Part 3: • Manh puzzle DAY I t DAY 11 Bai thi mo phong hay in Bai thi mo phong Part 2: • Manh puzzle Ghep cac manh puzzle Cau hoi thi/c te DAY - Manh puzzle • Manh puzzle DAY IIP, Manh puzzle DAY DAY I'i Part 3: Ghep cac manh puzzle I • Cau hoi thiic te DAY 19 Bai thi mo phong Final Test Trinh sd cap: TOEIC Writing dtldi 100 diem, TOEIC L/R dtldi 500 diem Ngfl phap cd ban (Basic) -► Puzzle then tfitng Part -> Ghep cac manh puzzle -> Cau hci thyc te Bai thi mn pheng www.nhantriviet.com cmtaobatiii NgttpMpcdban3: • Punctuation Marks Ngiiphapcffbaiil: • 02: Danh tit dem ditffc, daub tit khong dem ditffc, danh tit tap hffp NgOphapcflbanl: • 05: Cach dimg cua giffi tit Ngttphapcffbanl: • 09: Lien tit ' Ngflphapeffbanl: • 01:Noidongttfvs ngoai dong tit Part 1: • Manh puzzle Tit cho sin fe=-#r-"y - ;g-.| read / at Dac diem Mc anh: Nhiing sinh vien dang ngoi doc sach thif vien A total of five people are reading books sitting at a table in the library Giai thich:0 Dimg tin hien tai tiep diin (are reading) de mieu ta hanh dong dang doc sach ■ at a table tai ban, in the library the vien The two men and three women sitting at the table are reading books The readers sitting at the table are in the library Giai thich: Chuyen tit cho sin read doc reader ngnai doc sack Question of work /while Dac diem Mc anh: Mot vai cong nhan dang lam vice tren difefng va set dung may moe de nang thie't hi len cao mb® mm Two people wearing safety helmets are working in the sun while a huge concrete slab is being lifted into the air Giai thich: work co the sd dung nhif la mot danh tit hoac dong tit Ban nen quan sat ky bde anh rdi set dung tit cho sin d tit loai thich hop de tao cau Trong bile anh, ta co the thay nhitng cong nhan dang lam viec, tot nhat hay sd dung work d tit loai dong tit vdi nghia lam viec Tuy nhien, ban cung co the hien doi tit work worker cong nhan o Dimg hen tit chi thefi gian while de mieu ta hai boat dong dang diin cirng luc Dong tit d thi hien tai tiep dien the hi dong (is being lifted) ditpc dimg de mieu ta mang be tong dang ditpc nang len cao The person who is not wearing a hard hat and just standing with his hands behind his back doesn't seem to have to work while the others have to work hard Giai thich: Lien tit while ditpc sb dung de chi sp trai nghia giita hai y doesn't seem to have to work vdi have to work hard There seems to be only one person in the middle holding a long black shaft working hard while the other people are simply looking at him Giai thich: who is giita shirt va holding da ditpc gian htpc TOEIC Writing vwvw.nhantriviet.com Question of show/to Bac diem bde anh: NgiiM phu nii co le la khach hang dang dtia the cho nhan vien ban hang xem [ilMTrtBl! "iVjK'.v/tV'i A blonde woman on the left is showing her credit card to pay for the goods she is buying Giai thlcb: o to pay for the goods la cum dong tit nguyen the chi muc dich " pay for something todn tien cho cdi gi A lady dressed in black is showing her card to the woman on the right Giai thich: Tit to cum tit to the woman on the right ngudi phunft ophia ben phdi la gidi tit chi phifcfng httdng: dpliia, ve phia A person who must be a customer is showing her credit card to a person behind the counter Giai thich: Tit to cum tit to a person behind the counter ngicai ophia sau quay hang la gidi tit chi phitdng htfdng www.nhantriviet.com Answer Key Part 2: Respond to a Written Request Question of Directions: Read the e-mail below FROM: Kangaroo Travel Agency TO: Potential traveler SUBJECT: It's time to travel! 11 SENT: Novembers"1,10:05 A.M We Australia because we know Australia Now it's time to talk to the Australia specialist and book your Christmas and New Year's holidays Also, we're offering special deals to Sydney, Melbourne, and many more tourist attractions in Australia Call 24 hours a day, days a week Please visit our Web site www.kangaroo.co.au.We hope to hear from you soon! Directions: Respond to the e-mail as if you are a customer In your e-mail, ask TWO questions about the travel packages and make ONE request Giai tMeh Doanh nghiep - Khach hang: Cong ty du lich Kangaroo gufi e-mail cho khach hang tiem nang Quang cao chiicfng trinh du lich ft mfifc Ue - • Khach hang mudn di du lich Mission tong help:' (2) can hoi + (1) yen can Mission 1: Can hoi ve chu'Ong trinh du lich Mission 2: Can hoi ve cliifofng trinh du lich Mission 3: Yen can noi dung lien quan Kangaroo Travel Agency: ^ Thank you for your e-mail I currently need to book a New Year's holiday The reason why I am writing to you is that I have been dreaming of visiting Australia and seeing the great natural landscapes over there Also, I will have to attend my best friend's wedding at the end"of this year in Sydney Actually, I have a few questions about your special deals Is your tour program fixable enough to adjust the itinerary to one's travel schedule? Are all the travel expenses included in the total payment? As I mentioned above, I'd like to see the natural landscapes in Australia as well, so please send me a brochure to help.me learn more about sightseeing opportunities in Australia i'cmJMMMt I hope to hear from you soon Regards 68 TOEIC Writing www.nhantriviet.com Question of Directions: Read the e-mail below FROM: Sandra Smith JO: White Appliances SUBJECT: Unsatisfactory service SENT: March 17", 2:10 P.M White Appliances: I'm writing to complain about the unsatisfactory service I received at your store Two weeks ago, I purchased a newly launched model of washing machine But, I found when I unpacked it that it had been damaged on the right side of the door Also, when I was doing my laundry it automatically stopped and I couldn't get it to start again So, I tried to call the repair center over times, but I still haven't received any repair service I think this is not a good way to treat customers Please write back soon and let's discuss this matter Directions: Respond to the e-mail as if you are a worker at White Appliances In your e-mail, give at least ONE explanation and make TWO compensations Giai thlcli Khach hang - Doanh nghiep: Sandra Smith gffi e-mail cho cong ty White Appliances Phan nan ve may giat da mua va dich vu cua cong ty Nhan vien cua cong ty White Appliances Mission tdng hop: (1) giai thieh + (2) phifOng an bdi thifdng Co the chia yen can de nghi giai thich cung cap thong tin va yeu cau lien quan den bdi thodng gpiy j ; Mission 1: Giai thich nguyen nhan khong hai long Mission 2: Gpi y phifdng an bdi thiidng Mission 3: Gfli y phoong an bdi tho&ng mmGlM®M MA!]iMTtuS1 diiEg Dear Ms Smith, I've just received your e-mail of March 17'h concerning your problem You were right to let us know about the-unsatisfactory service you experienced Your annoyance is perfectly understandable .USEGni ilirtilii utTiTrkjuMEi However, we hope you will also try to see our point of view You phoned our service department on Friday, March 9.The clerk handling your complaint arranged for a repairman to come to your home However, upon arrival, the repairman found no one at home, and was not able to carry out the work until a new appointment had been made We apologize for failing to inform you in time luMtOT&.lMjfn&fiSnHiit I've been informed by my manager that you'll receive a voucher valued at r $35 toward your next purchase at our store 'IIES0WLiM-7/jjltjfiylg Also, we will not be charging you for the repairs to your washing machine Please let me know if I can be of any further assistance Sincerely, Adam Pauline Customer Service Department www.nhantriviet.com Answer Key Question of —■ mm aJs?X9^n ' I Ik; muv.iiiI.i WSmmXBmmM HH ucts Mil D§y la bai luan the loai tiinh bay quan diem ve nhilng itu diem va nhitdc diem cua viec quang cao tren tivi HSgiMB A lot of companies these days want to advertise their products on TV, but it may not always be the right choice Like many other types of advertisements, a TV advertisement has its own merits and demerits, especially taking into consideration the high cost involved in TV commercials Cau khai quit In my own opinion, there are many benefits to using TV as a method to promote products Caulu|nde IMrilT^ill Let's look at some of the downsides of using TV as an advertising medium The first thing that anyone can easily guess is, in many cases, the hefty fees that broadcasting companies charge.jCauchudeL ■ In order to advertise during prime time TV shows, companies have to pay an unreasonably high fee to secure a minute or less Is it really worth spending these, in many cases, astronomical sums of money for a brief appearance on TV? Then, what about targeting a broad population using TV commercials? Some people just can't watch TV only when a certain type of commercial is aired since a TV commercial is repeated at some predefined time and those people not have access to TV for whatever reason Qiaithichcuthe Now, what are the upsides of TV commercials? TV is probably the most preferred advertisement method Gauchude because of its effectiveness in creating a lasting impact on viewers and its endless ways of depicting products GiaithMivecauchiide With TV's distinctive features, advertisers can promote their products using both sound and sight As psychologists say, when people use more of their sensory organs to detect an object, they tend to remember more of it, forming a lasting impact Advertisers can take advantage of this fact to promote their products by using audio-visual devices One such devices is TV, of course In addition, TV advertising nowadays incorporates computer graphics technology and makes it possible to create absorbing motion pictures that we couldn't think of in the past For example, we can now see laughing, crying, and even talking animals on TV Giaithich cu the: MdMn As discussed above, mostly the high cost and the possibility of missing out on a chance to target a wide cross-section of the population are the drawbacks of TV advertising However, the chance to make a lasting impact using TV's ability to show both sight and sound offers a lotto advertisers T6m tat ciu cii'd! treng phinLthan bai Advertisers put more weight on these benefits and i agree with them CaukettMc ^, TOEIC Writing www.nhantriviet.com Giai thlch Md bai: • Cau khai quat: Cau A lot of companies these days want to advertise their products on TV co the paraphrasing Recent study shows that over 70% of advertisers want to advertise their products on TV Cau md dau ditcfc viet bang each trich din nguon thong tin tit cac nghien cub hoac khao sat se lam tang tinh thuyet phuc cho bai luan va thu hut ngifdi doe • Cau luau de; Cho Met quan diem cua ngdcfi viet la viec quang cao san pham thifefng mai tren tivi cd nMeu tfu diem hcta Cum tiJ In my own opinion co the thay the bang cum tif My view on this issue Than bai 1: Neu nhiicfc diem cua viec quang cao san pham tren tivi • Cau chu de: Chi phi quang cao qua cao (hefty fees) • Giai thich cu the: Bang each difa cau hoi: co nen quang cao san pham tren tivi hay khong phai bo chi phi qua cao de quang cao gicf cao diem ya quang cao tren tivi co dap ling diitfc yeu cau dinh hifdng den nMeu ddi tifefng hay khong bdi vi chdcfng trinh quang cao cM phat tren tivi vao thdi diem nha't dinh va khong phai ciing xem difctc Than bai 2: Neu itu diem cua viec quang cao san pham tren tivi • Cau chu de: La hinh thflc quang cao dupe nhieu ngifdi da chuong • Giai thich ve cau chu de: Trinh bay ly nMeu ngdcfi tM'ch xem quang cao tren tivi la vi cd tac dong lau dai vdi ngdbi xem va cd the mieu ta san pham mot each Meu qua • Giai thich cu the: Trich din 1M cua cac chuyen gia tarn ly de giai tMch tinh dac thu ma viec quang cao tren tivi cd dddc Nhcf sd hd trd cua tMet hi nghe nhin, cdng nghe hoa tren may tinh, san pham dddc quang cao trd nen Meu qua hefn, song dong hdn va cd tac dong lau dai den ngdcfi xem Ket Man: • Tom tat cau chu de phan than bai: Tom tat nhddc diem la cM pM quang cao san pham qua cao va khong the quang cao den nMeu ddi tddng llu diem la nhcf vao sd phat trien cua cdng nghe ky thuat, hinh anh cua san pham quang cao dep hdn va tac dong lau dai hdn vdi ngddi xem Cud'i cirng la phan nhan manh lai quan diem cua ngddi viet • Cau ket time: Khang dinh lai quan diem da trinh bay cau luan de www.nhantriviet.com Answer Key Answer Key Chubien Hwang Su-yeon Chuyen ngii phan chu giai Le Huy Lam CMu tracb nMem xuat ban Nguyln Thl Thanh Hxldng Horn Nam Congty NhanTriViet Hntu Loc NHA XUAT BAN TONG HCfP THANH PHO HO CHI MINH 62 Nguyin Thi Minh Khai - Quan @ 38225340 - 38296764 - 38247225 - 38296713 - 38223637 Fax: 38222726 E-mail: tongbop@nxbhcm.com.vn www.nxbhcm.com.vn Cong ty tnhh Nhan Tri Viet b Trln Binb Xu, P Nguyln Cu Trinb, Q 1, TP Hb Chi Minh S 38379344 Fax: 39200681 www.nhantriviet.com In 2.000 cubn kho 18,5x26cm tai Xi nghiep In MACHINCO - 21 Bui Thl Xuan - Quan - Thanh phb Hb Chi Minh Sbxuathan 114-11/CXB/466-10/THTPHCM Inxongvanoplmichieuthang 5-2011 ... cac van de can thiet, TOEIC Writing da cd gang trtnh bay each hoc theo tdng budc nham nang cao nang lyc viet tieng Anh cua ban Trinh cao cap: TOEIC Writing tren 160 diem, TOEIC L/R tren 910 diem... giai Le Hliy Lam 53 NHA XUAT BAN TdNG HdP THANH PHO H6 CHI MINH NTV Cong ty TNHH Nhan Tri Viet TOEIC Writing Test, ding nliir TOEIC Speaking Test, la bm thi kho dat ditgc diem cao Be nang cao... hoi thitc te DAY O'l Bai thi mo phong DA" final Test Trinli trung cap: TOEIC Writing til tren 110 dilm ~ dttdi 150 diem, TOEIC L/R tut tren 570 ~ dtldi 845 diem Puzzle