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Essay 11: The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who watched T.V and listened to the radio in The U.K in the period from October to December 1992 It is clear that people preferred listening to the radio to watching T.V at the beginning of the period.However, the figure for T.V viewers increased dramatically from to p.m Initally, there was a quick rise in the number of radio listeners to a peak of 28% at a.m.Subsequently, it saw a gradual decrease to nearly 15% who listened to the radio fell steadily until the the end of the period,although there were minor fluctuations Meanwhile, at a.m , the percentage of T.V viewers began increasing to 6% at p.m before dropping slightly at around 11 a.m.Subsequently,it grew significantly and peaked at just under 50% at around p.m.Afterward, the number of people who watched T.V decreased sharply to just over 2% at 3a.m and stayed at the same level Essay 12: The pie charts illustrate how yearly expenditure changed and will change in an U.K school in three different years: 1981 and 1991,2017 It is evident that teaching staff’s wages accounted for the highest percentage of total annual spending,whereas the smallest figure belonged to insurance during the given period Money spent on teacher’s salaries comprised 40% and 50% respectively of the total expenditure in 1981 and 1991,while it is predicted that the figure for that will have decreased by 2017.Only 28% of total yearly expenditure was spent on woker’s salaries compared to 22% and 15% in 1991 and 2017.Spending on resources such as books rose by 5% from 1981 to 1991.However,interestingly,it is projected to fall significantly to nearly a tenth The proportion of money spent on insurance in 2017 will experience a moderate increase to nearly a tenth.In addition,there was a noticable rise in the percentage of speding on furniture and equipment to 5%.In contrast, this figure is estimated to stand at 23% in 2017 Essay 13: There is no doubt that these days single youngsters tend to live independently and leave their families until they get married for educational purposes or working in other places.This tendency leads to some differences.This essay will compare both trends On the one hand,living with family benefits young individuals for some reasons.Firstly,young adults often depend on their parents’ financial conditions.As they sometimes have to pay for the cost of living such as tutition fees,food and phone bills,their parents often take responsibilities for these expenes, therefore young people can easily enjoy their lives without worrying about money.Secondly,it is usually better for parents to take care of their children and educate them valuable experiences in life.This contributes to the development of the young individuals in the future.For example,in order to choose a suitable career, parents often give them a lot of useful advice , so they might succeed in life,if they follow their parents’ guidance On the other hand,there are some advantages for youngsters to reside away from families.The first positive point is that they might be more independent, because the fact that many essential decisions have to be made individually.A high school leaver,for instance,has to decide whether he will start a degree at an university or go straight to find a job.Another benefit is that young adults can gain a lot of experiences, if they choose not to live with their families.For example,during this time a number of jobs is usually taken up by young workers,therefore they can work temporily.Consequently,they are able to accumulate a lot of useful knowledge and skills In conclusion,while staying at their home is advantageous to some extent,I agure that it is better to live indepently,because of numerous undeniable positive aspects Essay 14: Currently, it is true that the ways artists create and share their products have changed a lot since the introduction of many up-to-date kinds of technology in numerous fields such as music and cinema.This trend contributes to many advantages for artists,however it still has several drawbacks that will be throughly disscussed in this essay To begin with,using technology to produce and spread their artwork is advantageous to some extent.Firstly,with the help of several cutting-edge programs on computer,these days people can easily utilize them to create many kinds of art.For example,photographers often need to treat their photos by using tools like photoshop , therefore they can be more splendid and suitable to exhibit or sell.Secondly,technology also assists artists in publishing their products.I-tunes,for instance,is an application developed by Apple computer company,where music producers or singers can sell their artwork to audiences.As a result,they might be more creative and motivated to produce more However,there are some disadvantages of this trend.The first shortcoming is that artists usually face a risk of leakage , which has wasted a huge amounts of money in recent years,as a number of groups of people tend to publish illegally those products such as many blockbusters.Furthermore, a majortity of artists increasingly depend too much on technology, so it likely affects the sense of sastifaction of audiences.For example, a lot of thrilling sound effects are often added in songs to attract listeners.However, the more they put in their artwork , the less nutural those products are To conclude,despite the fact that the advancement of technology has a great impact on producing and publishing art products,i believe that it is better for artists to less utilize technology in art Essay 15: Recently,citizens in numerous major cities tend to use their own vehicles,so this trend contributes to several issues.Although there are some serious challenges related to car ownership in the cities,governments and individuals can take steps to combat these potential problems There are a number of obstacles that can be anticipated.Firstly,as people usually have their own vehicles like cars and motorbikes in big cities,traffic congestion often occurs especially during rush hours.As a result,it might not enable city dwellers to be on time for work or study.Additionally,people in the cities also likely suffer from stress because of cogested traffic.Secondly,it sometimes causes some environmental problems.Since the massive ownership of vehicles in many major cities,trucks,cars and motorbikes can be easily seen on the roads,therefore an enormous amount of emissions from them is usually released directly into the atmostphere.Consequently,it often results in air,noise pollution,which seriously affect people’s lives However,cities dwellers and city councils can adopt some measures to mitigate these complications.The first solution would be for city inhabitants to use public transport such as buses,trains and subways instead of travelling by personal vehicles,which allows them to safeguard the environment and also decrease traffic jams in some major cities.The next remedy could be taken to deal with the problems is that local authorities should restrict the number of vehicles of their citizens by imposing high taxes on vehicle ownership.For those reasons,the level of environmental pollution could be minimised In conclusion,despite several negative consequences associated with owning personal vehicles in some major cities in the world,they could be solved by adopting some appropriate measures Essay 16: It is true that a number of cities are now developing.Consequently,urbanisation contributes to a lack of land.As this situation leads to numerous issues,governments and societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems There are several problems related to the shortage of land.Firstly,since cities are ideal places to reside,people from other areas such as rural areas tend to migate to urban areas to work or study,therefore they need a place to live.As a result, a huge amount of land is often adopted to construct apartments and residental areas to support these inhabitants.Secondly,economic development is also a primary challenge.Since cities usually have copetitive market, a growing number of well-known companies often run their businesses in those areas.For example,KFC and Starbuck are both famous firms wich can be easily seen in many cities.For that reason,they often demand for land to build offices,shops and even skysrapers,which leads to land shortages However,many appropriate solutions can be taken to combat these challenges.The first measure is that governments ought to restrict the use of land by imposing high taxes on trading land,so they can use effectively and efficiently a limited amount of land to erect more public places like schools,parks and hospitals.Another possible measure that can be adopted is that big companies also should locate their firms in different places such as suburbs and the contryside,so there is more land which can be utilized to upgrade infrastructure and housing for city dwellers to reside.As a consequence,land could be available for other purposes In conclusion,despite the fact that a shortage of land contributes to many problems,they likely can be solved by adopting several solutions Essay 17: The maps illustrate the growth that has occurred in a coastal zone called Brightsea between 1950 and today and a description of a planned development In 1950,a jetty was situated to the north of the coastal zone.However,it was demolished in the planned development.Similarly,the lighthouse was also planned to destroy.Meanwhile,a new restaurant and apartments were constructed and replaced the fishermen’s cottages.A hotel extension was erected to make way for the lighthouse keeper’s house.To the south of the zone,there was a contrustion of a sailing club.Additionally,a new telecommunication appeared in the ferry wharf However,today Brightsea underwent a lot of changes.The café was erected instead of a restaurant and apartments.While the hotel extension has become smaller,the sailing club has disappeared.A shop was constructed to make way for a car park and a supermarket.Meanwhile,the ferry wharf was relocated to the northwest of Brightsea Overall,there was a lot of differences in Birghtsea in 1950 and its look today.Most of the places there have been destroyed or replaced Essay 18: The pie chart illustrates the percentage of products and services sold online for retail sectors in New Zealand in the period between 2003 and 2013 It is clear that travel accounted for the highest proportion of online shopping sales,while the lowest firgure was for clothes.However,interestingly,there was a dramatic increase in the percentage of music and music sales In 2003,travel comprised of 36% of the total percentage of online sales.It experienced a quick fall to 29% in 2013.Similarly,the proportion of books had risen to just over a fifth by 2013.Meanwhile,film or music accounted for 33% of the total percentage of online sales after climbing from 21% On the other hand,the firgure for clothes saw an significant drop from approximately a quarter to 16% over a decade Essay 19: Recently,it is true that a number of nations in the world have confronted many extreme weather conditions like flooding.This essay will disscuss several causes of these environmental phenomena and their negative impacts on people’s lives There are numerous factors that lead to extrem weather conditions.Firstly,these days people tend to burn more fossil fuels for industrial activities and cooking.For this reason,an enormous amount of carbon dioxide and other poisonous chemicals is often released directly into the atmosphere.As a result,it contributes to air pollution which is the primary cause of climate change.Secondly,a huge nmber of forests are chopped down annually to serve people’s demand such as contructing buildings and manufacturing furniture.For example,some tropical forests are being cut down in Vietnam illegally.The resulting deforestation leads to soil erosion and floods in some regions The causes described above bring mankind several worrying negative consequences.The main result is that people might face extreme weather more often than before.For example,due to a rise in sea levels in The Mekong Delta,this place usually suffers from severe floods every year,which has a great impact on agriculture and inhabitants there.In addtion,some places in the world also experience persistent extreme weather,which affects many parts of people’s lives.For instance,America and Russia recently faced frezzing cold,which cost thousands of people and lasted for more than a month.Furthermore,in some states,governments usually spend a part of national budget to support their citizens after natural disasters.Taking Japan as an example.In 2011 Japanese government spent a lot a money on helping Japanese citizens after this country had confronted an unpredictable earthquake and tsunamis,so they caused massive financial and human loss In conclusion,extreme weather conditions have seriously afftected human beings due to some undeniable factors that they create Essay 20: The maps illustrate the developments that occurred in a town called Lakeside between two different years:2000 and 2009 At first glance it is clear that the industrial complex was expanded significantly in the south east corner,while most of the buildings in the town were relocated to the other side of the river In 2000,the derelict warehouses and the old house were demolished to make way for a new car park and offices.Meanwhile,the residental area still existed in the northwest corner,but the one in the south of the town disappeared in 2009.A shopping centre was constructed to replace the residental area to the west of the town.Additionally, the arts centre was destroyed and replaced by a multi-screen cinema,which is between the shopping centre and the residental area By 2009,a new university had been constructed to the north east of the town,whilst more schools were erected near the university.Interestingly,the lake in the north corner had become smaller and turned into a pond *Notes: by 2009 sử dụng past perfect  ... quarter to 16% over a decade Essay 19: Recently,it is true that a number of nations in the world have confronted many extreme weather conditions like flooding.This essay will disscuss several... advantages for artists,however it still has several drawbacks that will be throughly disscussed in this essay To begin with,using technology to produce and spread their artwork is advantageous to some... publishing art products,i believe that it is better for artists to less utilize technology in art Essay 15: Recently,citizens in numerous major cities tend to use their own vehicles,so this trend