IELTS writing task 1 bài viết mẫu hay IELTS fighter

Những cụm từ hay trong miêu tả biểu đồ hình tròn as a percentage of total participation  with a 67.5 participation rate  with 30 percent of students involved in this activity  With 1

Những cụm từ hay dùng trong miêu tả biểu đồ

 Những cụm động từ chỉ số phần trăm:

make up

represent

account for

 Pizza makes up 26% of the total survey.

 Hamburgers account for the largest

proportion of the pie chart

 French fries represent 55% of the total

 Food and cars made up the two biggest

items of expenditure in both years

 Food accounted for 44% of spending in

1966, but this dropped by two thirds to 14%

in 1996

Những cụm từ hay trong miêu tả biểu đồ hình tròn

 as a percentage of total participation

 with a 67.5 participation rate

 with 30 percent of students involved in this

activity

 With 15 percent students choosing this

activity

Individually, music is by far the

most popular activity, at 35 percent,

followed by drama, with a 21 percent

participation rate.

Overall, the most popular activities are spending time with friends and shopping which, at 25 percent and

20 percent respectively, make up

nearly half of the participation rate.

Of the population of 1,300 students at

Mary High School, the largest

percentage of students prefers team

sports as their option, whereas at Frank High School, this is reversed and 55

percent choose individual sports such as athletics rather than team sports At both schools, basketball attracts a significant percentage of students.

Bốn cấu trúc câu hay được dùng:

their offices.

who get online in their offices.

offices take up 15% of the total.

online in their offices is 15 percent.

Tám từ / cụm từ được dùng phổ biến:

take up / make up

account for

form / constitute / comprise

occupy / represent

Trong Task 1 bài thi IELTS Writing, thí sinh thường được yêu cầu so sánh hai biểu đồ tròn.

 Những từ và cụm từ đồng nghĩa hoặc trái nghĩa:

significant / insignificant

considerable / inconsiderable , major / minor

contribute, comprise, make up account for, occupy, represent, constitute

production, output

percentage, ratio, proportion

share

Các cách viết về tỉ lệ phần trăm:

26 percent – about one in four – just over a quarter

33 percent – one third – one in three

48 percent – almost a half – nearly a half – just under one half

75 percent – three out of four – three quarters

very big – the vast / overwhelming majority

very big (before numbers) – a

massive / hefty 93 percent

very small – a tiny minority

very small (before numbers) – a

mere / modest 10 percent

Miêu tả nhiều liên kết：

double/triple/quadruple

a two/three/four-fold increase

increase/decrease two/threefold two/three/four times this

amount/number/figure/quantity… two/three times as…as…

8 Cách miêu tả sự giống nhau ：

1 to be of the same with…

2 A corresponds to B

3 to be identical in the aspect of

4 A is similar to B

5 to resemble each other

6 to show great resemblance in…

7 A differs from B in several

aspects/A is different from B

in…/A can be distinguished from

Ví dụ A:

The pie charts compare the highest level of education achieved by

women in Someland across two

years, 1945 and 1995 It can be

clearly seen that women received a much higher level of education in

Someland in 1995 than they did in 1945.

In 1945 only 30 percent of women completed their secondary education and 1 per cent went on to a first degree No women had completed postgraduate studies This situation had changed radically by 1995 In

1995, 90 percent of women in Someland had completed secondary education and of those, half had graduated from an initial degree and

and 20 percent had gone on to postgraduate studies At the other

1995 all girls were completing lower

ended their schooling at this point.

percent had no schooling at all and

35 percent only completed the third grade.

In conclusion, we can see that

in the 50 years from 1945 to 1995 there have been huge positive

developments to the education

levels of women in Someland

Ví dụ B

The pie charts below illustrate the

number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarize the information by

selecting and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons

where relevant

The three pie charts illustrate how many articles from academic journals are read weekly by PhD students and junior lecturers

compared to other students at an Australian university.

For example, the overwhelming majority of those studying

doctorates read at least twelve

articles per week in comparison

with the average student The

figures were 80 percent and twelve percent respectively Furthermore,

only five percent of PhD level

students read between one and five articles, whereas the average for all students in this category is a hefty 67 percent Meanwhile, for junior

lecturers the pattern appears to be

slightly different Most read six or

more articles per week (99 percent), but out of this total 24 percent read

twelve or more, which is almost a third of the corresponding figure for PhD level students.

It is clear that those students who are researching for a PhD

read more articles than either

junior lecturers or other students.

Ví dụ C:

The pie charts show the market share of washing machines made by four companies over the period 1990

to 2000 and the results of a survey on whether customers would consider

buying the new Sanyo washing

machine over the same period.

During the first year of sales of the new Sanyo machine in 1990, its market share stood at two percent

as opposed to 60 percent for the

Panasonic product, 20 for the Haier washing machine and 18 for that of Samsung In 1995, however,

Panasonic lost ground to its three

other competitors While Samsung and

Haier both increased their market share by one percentage point

each in 1995, Sanyo captured

8% of the market, a rise of 300%.

In 2000, Sanyo’s market share had increased to 32% at the

expense of its three main

competitors with Panasonic,

Samsung and Haier falling to 39

percent, 17 percent and 12 percent respectively The bar chart shows

that the Sanyo machine exceeded its

popularity rating in each year, rising from 5 in 1990 to 40

percent in the year 2000.

It is clear from the data that sales of the Sanyo washing

machine were on the increase over the period.

 The line graph above illustrates that how the demand for electricity in England usually changes during typical days in winter and summer, while the use of electricity in an average English home is shown in the pie chart.

 The graph indicates that the amount of electricity used in winter is double that used in summer.

 It is generally obvious that in winter thedemand is in its maximum around 45,000 inthe late night and in its minimum around30,000 To be precise, the curve graduallyincreases to 40,000 units of electricity at 3 inthe morning, followed by a steady decline toits lowest point of 30,000 units at 8 a.m.After that, a gradual rise is seen again toreach a stationary level between 1 o’clock

 in the afternoon and 9 o’clock at night ofabout 40,000 again Then, there is a sharprise in the next hours to reach its maximum(about 45,000 units) around 11 p.m., beforecollapsing again to a lower level by the end

of the day

 …

 The pie chart shows that heating makes upover half of electricity, so the amount ofelectricity consumption in winter issignificantly higher than that in summer Theremaining electricity is split for otherpurposes, such as 17.5% for ovens, kettlesand washing machines and 15% for lighting,

TV and radio

Trong Task 1, thí sinh được yêu cầu miêu tả một biểu đồ đường có sự thay đổi liên tục.

Xu hướng (thì động từ—quá khứ đơn)

swelled to a swell in

climbed up to an upward trend in

fell to a fall in

hit a historic low

touch/rock/reach the bottom of

reached a lowest point of

adverbs and adjectives:

moderately slightly

marginally

The share price fell dramatically between 1995 and 1996.

The share price reached its

highest level between $6.6 and

$7.2 for/in three years.

There was a fluctuation in the

share price between 2001 and 2008.

Between March and April, sales

of laptops increased slightly from

contrast , during the next month,

its sales volume rose dramatically

This chart shows oil prices in two-yearly

intervals starting from 1995, and future

predictions to 2013 It is predicted that oil

prices will continue to rise to 2014

★ CPI: 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015,

2020 (future—slight fall)

★ Cell phone sales: Jan 2005, Jan 2006, Jan 2007, Jan 2008,

Jan 2009, Jan 2010 (future—

dramatic rise)

★ House prices: 2005,2007,

2009, 2011, 2013, 2015 (future— steady fall)

Miêu tả 2 đường biểu đồ:

The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in

Someland between the years 1960

and 2000 It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women is currently declining and

that fewer women have smoked

throughout the period.

In 1960, 600 men in every 1,000 was smoking This number

decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 250 in 2,000 In contrast,

the rate of smoking in women in

1960 was very low at only 80 in

every 1,000 By 1968 this increased to170, and increased again but more

steeply to 320 in 1977 The rate

of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by 2000.

In conclusion, we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the

female figures The rate of smoking

in women increased until 1977 but

then decreased for the rest of the

period.

Mô tả 3 đường biểu đồ:

The graph shows the numbers of tourists in hundreds of thousands

visiting Dubai between 1990 and

1994 There are several features in

total of 450,000 tourists in Dubai

This rose sharply to 625,000 in 1991,

an increase of more than 30%, and

rose slightly again to just under

700,000 in 1992 In the following two years, the number of visitors started

to pick up again and reached 1

million in 1994 This was more than double the figure for 1990.

The second trend is that there was a huge increase in the number

of tourists from Russia In 1990,

Russian tourists comprised only

20,000 or less than 5% of visitors

This number shot up to 50,000 in

1991 and doubled again to more

than 100,000 in 1992 Between 1992

and 1994, the number trebled, from 110,000 to 330,000 This meant that Russian tourists made up one-third,

or 33%, of Dubai’s 1 million visitors

in 1994 In comparison, the number

of tourists from other countries

increased only slightly, from 550,000

in 1991 to 580,000 in 1994.

In conclusion, although the

countries is increasing, Russian tourists are becoming more and more important for the tourist industry in Dubai.

In Task 1, you have to write a bar chart.

Sentence patterns:

(1) In contrast (to B)/In comparison (with B), A

is larger/smaller by…

In comparison with Japan, oil production in

Brazil is larger by a narrow margin

(2) A is just/well + number

+larger/smaller than B

A is approximately + number

+ larger/smaller than B

Oil production in China is

approximately 2 million barrels larger than in India.

(3) A is …times as large/great/

high as B

A uses/produces more/less/ fewer + n than B

The money spent on TV is

twice as much as on radio in 2008.

(4) A is considerably/marginally

greater/higher/smaller than B

A is almost as large/high as that in B

Production in Germany is

marginally higher than in

France.

(5) A is the second/third largest/

smallest + n (C)

Japan is the second smallest

oil producer in seven listed

countries.

(6) A has the greatest/widest/

most significant + n.

America has the greatest

production of oil in the world

(7) A uses/produces/consumes

the largest/highest/smallest/ lowest proportion/amount/

number of + n (U, C)

Japan produces the least

amount of oil, 1.2 million of

barrels per day.

The bar chart above demonstrates that how many residents in Japan made the overseas journey over the decade between 1985 and

1995, while the information given by the line graph is about the percentage of Japanese choosing Australia as their destination during the 10-year period

According to the first chart, it is clear that from 1985

to 1995 Japanese tourists traveling abroad dramatically increased to about 15 million, an all- time high more specially, though at first the number

of Japanese who went overseas stood at only 5 million in 1985, the next stage has experienced the dramatic climb until 1990 when the figure more than doubled to 11 million, followed by the comparably stable period between 1990 and 1993, before another upward trend in the final two years was recorded, to the top point (15 million) in 1995.

We can draw the conclusion from the two graphs that as the number of Japanese

tourists traveling abroad has grown, so has Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist

market

The table indicates that how much theresidents in five countries spent on variousitems in 2002

Food, drinks and tobacco were in the mostimportant position on consumer spending inall of the countries but the percentage hasvaried among them To be exact, the Turksand Irish were the biggest consumers onthese three products, costing 32.14% and28.91% of their expenses respectively, while

the ratio the Spanish spent on these items

was 18.80% and the Italians and the Swedes were the last two holders on the spending

scale, only just around 16%

As for the expenditure on clothing andfootwear, the figures fluctuated between 5%and 10% in these nations The greatestconsumer belonged to Italy, its percentagestanding at 9.0%, far exceeding the records ofthe other four nations, such as Turkey (6.63%),Spain (6.51%), Ireland (6.43%) and Sweden(5.40%).

According to the table, it is clear that the leastconsumer spending was on leisure/educationcompared with other expenditure Amongthese nations, it was Turkey and Spain thatconsumed the most and the least with 4.35%and 1.98% respectively, whereas Italy, Irelandand Sweden paid out below 4% to cover theirleisure and educational services.

Overall, we can find the conclusion that in

2002, products relating to foods consumed the most expenditure in these nations rather than clothing and leisure/education

The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period

between 1990 and 2002

According to the chart, during the period from

1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses inboth Tokyo (Japan) and London (UK),compared with that in 1989, decreasedsignificantly by about 7.5%, the biggest dropamong five cities, followed by New York(USA), which saw a fall of 5%, while a slightclimb in prices of real estate was recorded intwo cities: Madrid in Spain (1.5%) andFrankfurt in Germany (2%)

As far as the next period (1996-2002) wasconcerned, on the other hand, it is clear thathouse prices were at recession only in Tokyo,declining 5% In contrast, London had thelargest boom in this area over the 6-yearperiod from 1996 to 2002 as it increaseddramatically by as high as 11% Meanwhile,other cities underwent growth in varyingdegrees in property market, for example, NewYork rising 5%, Madrid 4% and Frankfurt 2%.