Cách viết đoạn mở bài (introduction) IELTS writing task 1 IELTS fighter

TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com Cách viết đoạn mở Writing task Các bạn nên bắt đầu viết task (viết đoạn mở bài) cách nêu lại thông tin đưa phần đề Chỉ cần viết 1-2 câu để biểu đồ trình bày vấn đề mốc thời gian (nếu có) đủ Để làm điều (viết đoạn mở bài) paraphrase nội dung từ đề cách tốt mà bạn nên áp dụng Một ví dụ mở hay mà bạn áp dụng theo Question: The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010 Introduction: The bar charts show data about computer ownership, with a further classification by level of education, from 2002 to 2010 Nhưng lưu ý để viết đoạn mở 9.0 IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com Đa dạng hóa cụm từ giới thiệu ➢ the graph/chart/table/diagram ◦ gives information about/on ◦ provides information about/on ◦ shows ◦ illustrates ◦ represents ◦ depicts ◦ gives reason why (đưa lý biểu đồ đưa lý cho vấn đề đó) ◦ explains why ( dùng nêu biểu đồ có đưa giải thích) ◦ compares (chỉ có vài nội dung so sánh) Chú ý với từ “compare”, bạn nói: ➢ compares smth in terms of smth the charts compare two cities in terms of the number of employed people ➢ compares smth in year1 and year2 the graph compares the population in 2000 and 2013 Ví dụ ◦ “The pie charts provide information on the proportion of males and females working in agricultural sector.” OR “The pie charts show the proportion of males and females working in agricultural sector.” ◦ “The table compares five companies in terms of the number of employees.” OR “The table illustrates the number of employees in five IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com companies.” Paraphrasing
 Sử dụng từ “how”: ◦ shows the number of people = shows how many people ◦ depicts changes in spending on = depicts how much changed spending on Sử dụng từ đồng nghĩa: ◦ number of = quantity of (không dùng thay với an amount of) ◦ spending = expenditure ◦ rate = percentage ◦ ratio = proportion ◦ information = data ◦ change can be sometimes replaced by increase, decrease or variation ◦ share = portion ◦ place = site Diễn đạt khoảng thời gian ◦ from 1985 to 1995 = between 1985 and 1995 ◦ in 1985 = in the year 1985 ◦ in 1985 and 1995 = in 1985 and 1995 respectively = in the years 1985 and 1995 Ví dụ: IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com ◦ The table shows consumption rates from 2001 to 2004 ◦ The graph shows consumption rates in 2012 and 2015 respectively Thực hành cách paraphrase: Hãy theo dõi cách paraphrase câu hỏi đề để viết phần mở tốt Những phần thay đổi là: • Show chuyển thành compare • Percentages thêm vào • Different thêm vào • In 2007 and 2009 → In the years 2007 and 2009 Các bạn thấy, không cần phải sang tạo đoạn mở hoàn toàn Điều bạn cần làm đọc kĩ phần nội dung câu hỏi thay đổi thêm số thông tin chi tiết vào Luyện tập: Chọn đáp án đúng: A The table shows the amount of students who study abroad in 2001 and 2011 B The table shows the number of students who study abroad in 2001 and 2011 IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com A The graph illustrate China's annual growth rate of exports of goods B The graph illustrates China's annual growth rate of exports of goods A The line graph shows how many Finnish people went to the cinema between June and October 2014 B The line graph shows how much Finnish people went to the cinema between June and October 2014 A The pie charts compare the world population of 1900 with 2000 B The pie charts compare the world population in 1900 and 2000 A The bar chart gives information about average household expenditure in Japan B The bar chart shows information about average household expenditure in Japan Gợi ý: Câu 1: Amount or number? Note that students are countable Câu 2: Look at the verb that follows the word graph Hmm, the graph should be singular, so illustrates is the correct option Câu 3: You can say how much water or how much effort (these nouns are uncountable) But people are countable, so you should use how many in this case IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts-fighter.com Câu 4: You should use phrase in + year, not of + year or at + year Moreover, it seems like you compare population with year in the first sentence Câu 5: You can use either gives information about or shows, but not both at the same time IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc ... from 19 85 to 19 95 = between 19 85 and 19 95 ◦ in 19 85 = in the year 19 85 ◦ in 19 85 and 19 95 = in 19 85 and 19 95 respectively = in the years 19 85 and 19 95 Ví dụ: IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS. .. in 20 01 and 2 011 B The table shows the number of students who study abroad in 20 01 and 2 011 IELTS Fighter – The Leading IELTS Training Center in VN Ms Ngọc Cúc TRUNG TÂM LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter. .. LUYỆN THI IELTS Fighter website: ielts- fighter. com ◦ The table shows consumption rates from 20 01 to 2004 ◦ The graph shows consumption rates in 2 012 and 2 015 respectively Thực hành cách paraphrase: