A Guide to Good Business Communication Visit our How To website at www.howto.co.uk At www.howto.co.uk you can engage in conversation with our authors – all of whom have ‘been there and done that’ in their specialist fields You can get access to special offers and additional content but most importantly you will be able to engage with, and become a part of, a wide and growing community of people just like yourself At www.howto.co.uk you’ll be able to talk and share tips with people who have similar interests and are facing similar challenges in their life People who, just like you, have the desire to change their lives for the better – be it through moving to a new country, starting a new business, growing your own vegetables, or writing a novel At www.howto.co.uk you’ll find the support and encouragement you need to help make your aspirations a reality How To Books strives to present authentic, inspiring, practical information in their books Now, when you buy a title from How To Books, you get even more than words on a page A Guide to Good Business Communication 5th edition How to write and speak English well in every business situation Michael Bennie Published by How To Content, A division of How To Books Ltd, Spring Hill House, Spring Hill Road, Begbroke, Oxford OX5 1RX, United Kingdom Tel: (01865) 375794 Fax: (01865) 379162 info@howtobooks.co.uk www.howtobooks.co.uk How To Books greatly reduce the carbon footprint of their books by sourcing and printing in the UK All rights reserved No part of this work may be reproduced or stored in an information retrieval system (other than for the purposes of review) without the express permission of the Publisher given in writing The right of Michael Bennie to be identified as the author of this work has been asserted by him in accordance with the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988 © 2009 Michael Bennie Fifth edition 2009 First published in electronic form 2009 British Library Cataloguing in Publication Data A catalogue record for this book is available from the British Library ISBN 978 84803 322 Produced for How to Books by Deer Park Productions, Tavistock Typeset by Pantek Arts Ltd, Maidstone, Kent NOTE: The material contained in this book is set out in good faith for general guidance and no liability can be accepted for loss or expense incurred as a result of relying in particular circumstances on statements made in this book The laws and regulations are complex and liable to change, and readers should check the current position with the relevant authorities before making personal arrangements Contents Introduction Communicating in business The Functions of Business Communication Written and Spoken Communication in Business Business and Other Styles of Communication Planning what you are going to say Your Reasons for Writing or Speaking Getting the Right Reaction Assembling and Ordering Your Information and Arguments Laying out documents Letters Memos and E-mails Reports Incorporating Tables and Charts Constructing sentences and paragraphs What Is a Sentence? Building Sentences into Paragraphs How Sentences and Paragraphs Affect the Way You Speak Good business style Using the Right Tone Choosing the Right Words Speaking Clearly Techniques for different occasions Making Requests Answering Requests Writing Sales Letters Conducting Meetings Making Complaints Answering Complaints Clarifying Complex Problems Writing Reports Making Presentations Common grammatical mistakes Nouns and Pronouns Verbs Adjectives and Adverbs Prepositions Conjunctions Phrases and Clauses vii 1 8 13 19 29 29 36 38 44 54 54 60 69 72 72 78 81 84 84 86 89 93 98 101 105 108 110 114 115 117 119 121 122 124 v A Guide To Good Business Communication Punctuation 126 Full Stops Commas Semicolons Colons Brackets Dashes Apostrophes Quotation Marks Exclamation Marks Question Marks Hyphens 127 127 129 131 131 132 133 133 134 134 135 Spelling and vocabulary Commonly Misspelt Words Commonly Confused Words vi 136 136 139 Answers to Exercises 143 Further reading 157 Glossary 159 Index 161 Introduction Communication is the key to success in any business Whether you are trying to sell a product, answer a query or complaint or convince your colleagues to adopt a certain course of action, good communication often means the difference between success and failure At best, imprecise language, clumsy sentences or long-winded ‘waffle’, whether in speech or writing, will give a poor impression of you or your business; at worst, what you are trying to say will be misunderstood or ignored In contrast, clear, precise English will be enjoyable to read or listen to, and is likely to evoke the response you want This book is written for everyone who wants to develop the skill of good communication in the workplace – from business students to managers, voluntary workers to government officials Moreover, because of the globalisation of trade and the use of the Internet, the position of English as the international language of business is stronger than ever I hope, therefore, that those who not have English as their first language but need to use it for business communication will also find this a useful guide The aim is to give you a good grounding in writing and speaking style, which you can then apply to any situation It shows what is good and bad style, what you should avoid and why What it does not is provide a set of model documents for particular situations You should think about what you want to say, not just copy someone else’s models So although you will find a great many examples of documents throughout the book, they are just that – examples to illustrate particular points and techniques, not models to be copied The book is arranged in such a way as to be easy to use, whether you are following it from start to finish or dipping into it It starts with a general discussion of business communication and then goes on to planning, layout, construction and style There are chapters on grammar, punctuation and spelling, but I have put them towards the end This is not because they are unimportant – far from it – but so that you can refer to them if you need to without them getting in the way of the discussion of style and construction They contain the minimum of theory; the emphasis is on practical application, and on mistakes to avoid Throughout the book there are exercises in which you can put the techniques discussed into practice Answers are provided at the back In many cases (for example, when an exercise involves writing a letter or memo) there will be several possible options, depending on your own personal style, and the samples shown are just suggestions In other instances, especially when it comes to grammar or spelling, there will clearly be only one answer, and in these cases that is made clear As you improve your communication skills, you will find it very satisfying to be able to express yourself clearly and succinctly, and to get your precise meaning across to your audience Not only will you have the satisfaction of a job well done, but you will know that there is a greater chance that people will react in the way you want them to All the characters and organisations in the examples and exercises are purely fictional, and any resemblance to real individuals or organisations is purely coincidental vii This page intentionally left blank CHAPTER Communicating in business Communication The definition of communication is: The process by which information is exchanged It can take place in a number of ways: ● ● ● ● ● through the written word through the spoken word through pictures and diagrams through facial expressions, behaviour and posture through non-verbal sounds In business the most common forms of communication are spoken and written, although visual forms can play a part, as we shall see in Chapter The Functions of Business Communication We communicate in business for a number of different reasons, and the methods we use will depend on the reasons, the circumstances, and perhaps the people with whom we are communicating These are some of the reasons why we may need to communicate with others in a business setting: ● to pass on information ● to persuade people to buy a product or use a service ● to discuss an issue ● to recommend a course of action ● to make or answer a request ● to make or answer a complaint ● to keep a record of something that has happened or been agreed ● to explain or clarify a situation ● to give an instruction Clearly, to cover such a variety of situations, you will need to be able to use a range of different methods and styles Your style and tone are unlikely to be the same if you are making a request, for example, as if you are making a complaint You are also more likely to speak to someone than to write to them if you want to discuss an issue, whereas a record of something that has happened would need to be in writing A Guide to Good Business Communication Have you looked at all sides of the issue before coming to your conclusion? ● Have you thought of any counter-arguments (such as the reasons for the department or organisation not having adopted your suggested changes already)? ● Have you refuted those arguments with reference to the information provided in the main body of the report? ● Exercise 24 The Board was asked to consider the proposal carefully It was given conditional approval only after a lengthy discussion On Wednesday, Keith Hamilton had a meeting with Simon Kitson Keith said that the following week he would be in Paris, where the company has its European office, so he could discuss the contract then We have had a good response to our advertisement for a sales manager, and Emma Johnson would like to discuss the applications with you and me on Tuesday I not mind you asking for time off, but it would be nice to see you occasionally working late as well You appear to be getting rather behind with your work, which is affecting the efficiency of the whole department You say that you have not seen the delivery note and the invoice Your accountant and I have had a long discussion about this, and I think you will find that he has copies The Committee has decided that every member, together with his or her partner, has the right to use the facilities of the centre Having considered all the estimates, I believe we should accept either Axis’s or Mainland Distribution’s None of the other firms was able to match their prices or delivery times Please can you see to it that every secretary and clerk, including the directors’ PAs, is made aware of the new house style We must ensure that we create not only a good image but also a consistent one We can offer a choice of three conference rooms, any of which would suit your requirements We will serve lunch at 12.30 p.m as requested 10 I am afraid that I differ with you over the best way forward for the development Looking at the two plans, I think the layout of the second is much more flexible Exercise 25 Because punctuation is to a certain extent a matter of personal taste, there are different ways of punctuating any passage However, these are the suggested answers 154 The Managing Director, who is abroad at present, has asked me to reply to your letter concerning the contract for the new equipment Although we agree with the terms in general, there are a few points we would like explained Answers to Exercises Our new catalogue (enclosed) contains details of all our latest lines In particular you may be interested in the following: the Newline desk; the updated, ergonomically designed Comfort swivel chair; and the Locksafe filing system As a regular purchaser you could also save money with our valued customers’ discount We have five different models – each with its own special features – and they all come in a choice of finishes So whatever your needs you will find one to suit you The expansion of our business is a long-term project and we need an efficient, sympathetic management consultant to help us A recent report said, ‘Any small business hoping to expand will find its chances of success greatly improved by the employment of a consultant to advise it.’ We would, I think, be foolish to embark on this exercise without outside help We are very concerned about your payment record; your payments are invariably two months late At the moment we are awaiting payment of invoices 14325, 16754 and 23156, all of which are well overdue Exercise 26 Here is the list again with the incorrect words identified and corrected ● accumulate ● (X) acquire ● (X) across ● (X) appreciate ● (X) chaotic ● (X) commemorate ● commission ● concede ● (X) conceivable ● conscientious ● (X) deferred ● definite ● eighth ● (X) embarrass ● (X) exaggerate ● fascinate ● (X) feasible ● imminent ● (X) instalment ● (X) issuing ● liaison ● (X) manoeuvre 155 A Guide to Good Business Communication 156 ● occasion ● (X) parallel ● (X) questionnaire ● schedule ● (X) seize ● successful ● (X) supersede ● (X) tariff ● thorough ● (X) unmistakable ● (X) writing ● written Further reading Your first priority should be a good dictionary The best are published by Oxford University Press, Collins, Chambers and Longman They come in a variety of sizes, from pocket editions to large two-volume tomes Choose one that suits your needs and budget Other books you might like to refer to are: Improve Your Punctuation and Grammar, Marion Field (How To Books, 2009) Improve Your Written English, Marion Field (How To Books, 2009) A good general guide to writing New Oxford Dictionary for Writers and Editors (Oxford University Press, 2005) An invaluable guide, based on OUP’s house style, which shows you how to spell unusual or difficult words, when to hyphenate words and a great deal more Pocket Fowler’s Modern English Usage, Edited by Robert Allen (Oxford University Press, 2004) The ‘bible’ of English usage Roget’s Thesaurus of English Words and Phrases, Edited by George Davidson (Penguin, 2004) The classic guide to synonyms and antonyms – ideal for those occasions when you cannot think of the precise word you need Spell Well, Marion Field (How To Books, 2005) Troublesome Words, Bill Bryson (Penguin, 2002) A very good guide to words that give problems 157 This page intentionally left blank Glossary Adjective A word that qualifies a noun, e.g little, brown, round Adverb A word that qualifies a verb, adjective, preposition or other adverb, e.g well, clearly, very AIDA A formula for remembering the order in which an advertisement or sales letter should be written Stands for Attention, Interest, Desire, Action Ampersand The symbol & An abbreviation for ‘and’ Appendix A section of a report or book that usually gives full details of matters not discussed in detail in the main part Bar chart A method of presenting figures visually Particularly useful for comparing two or more sets of figures at a particular time bcc Typed only on copies of a document to indicate that a copy is being sent to the person named – a ‘blind copy’ Used instead of ‘cc’ when you not want the document’s addressee to know that you are sending a copy to a third party cc Typed on a document to indicate that a copy is being sent to the person named Charting A method of writing an outline for a document, involving making a chart of ideas you want to express Circumlocution A phrase or clause that uses more words than are necessary to express an idea Clause A group of words within a sentence that has a subject and a predicate Cliché An expression that has been used so often that it has become hackneyed Colloquialism An expression that is common in speech but is not acceptable in written English Complex sentence A sentence that contains a main clause and one or more subordinate clauses Complimentary close The ending of a letter Usually ‘Yours sincerely’ or ‘Yours faithfully’ in business correspondence Compound sentence A sentence that contains two or more clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction Compound complex sentence A sentence that contains two or more main clauses and one or more subordinate clauses Conjunction A word that links two words, phrases or clauses, e.g and, but, however Co-ordinating conjunction A conjunction that joins two clauses of equal weight Deduction A method of reasoning from one premise to another to reach a conclusion Edit To check a piece of writing for spelling, grammatical and stylistic errors Emotional buying trigger An appeal to an emotion or instinct in selling or advertising Enc Typed at the bottom of a letter to indicate that something is enclosed Four Ps A formula for remembering how to write a sales letter Stands for Promise, Picture, Proof, Push Freewriting A method of writing an outline for a document, involving writing freely as ideas occur to you Fyi For your information Typed on copies of correspondence sent to third parties to indicate that no action is expected from them Graph A method of presenting figures visually Particularly useful to show a trend over time 159 A Guide to Good Business Communication Hanging participle A participle that introduces an adjectival phrase with no noun to qualify Indexing A method of standardising the presentation of figures so that different fields can be compared Usually involves giving the figures for Year a value of 100, and relating subsequent years’ figures to that Induction A method of reaching a conclusion from one’s own experience or observation rather than by reasoning from one premise to another Inside address The name and address of the person to whom you are writing, which appear at the top of a letter Jargon Language that is specific to a particular group or profession Listing A method of writing an outline for a document, involving listing the points you want to make Minutes A formal record of discussions and decisions at a meeting Noun A word that is used to name a person, place or thing, e.g letter, Harriet Cornish, London Object The person or thing that has the action of the verb done to it Must be a noun or a pronoun Parentheses Another word for round brackets Phrase A group of words within a sentence that does not have a subject and a predicate Pie chart A method of showing figures visually Particularly useful for showing the segmentation of a total figure pp Typed or written by a signature, when the signatory is signing a letter on behalf of someone else Predicate The part of a sentence that describes what the subject did or was Must contain a verb Preposition A word that describes the relationship of one person or thing to another, e.g by, from, for Pronoun A word used instead of a noun, e.g she, him, your Salutation The opening of a letter Usually begins ‘Dear ’ Sentence A group of words complete in itself Must contain a subject and a predicate Simple sentence A sentence containing only one clause Subject The person or thing a sentence is about Must be either a noun or a pronoun Subordinate clause A clause that is dependent on the rest of the sentence for its meaning or relevance Subordinating conjunction A conjunction that joins a subordinate clause to the rest of the sentence Tautology Saying the same thing twice in different words Topic sentence A sentence that indicates the topic of a paragraph Unique selling proposition Something that makes a product or service unique Vague qualifier An imprecise adjective or adverb that adds nothing to the reader’s understanding Verb A word that describes what is done by or what happens to the subject of a sentence, e.g agree, have written, will decide 160 Index action endings, 34 adjectives, 119–20 adverbs, 119, 120–1, 137 adverbs, double, 120 ‘affect’ and ‘effect’, use of, 140 agendas, 94–5 AIDA, 92 ‘alternative’, use of, 116 ambiguity, 73–4 ‘among’, use of, 122 ‘anti-‘ and ‘ante-‘, use of, 139 apostrophes, 133 articles, 119 ‘as’ and ‘like’, use of, 123 audience, 13–15 bar charts, 50–1 brevity, 6, 74–5 brackets, round, 131–2 brackets, square, 132 business communication, function of, business communication, rules of, capital letters, 115 charting, 22 circumlocution, 74 clarity, 5, 73–4, 80–2 clauses, 55, 118, 122, 123, 124–5, 128, 129 clauses, adjectival, 123 clauses, adverbial, 123 clauses, positioning, 58–9 clauses, subordinate, 122, 123 clichés, 80, 82 colloquialisms, colons, 131 commas, 127–9 communication, oral, 2, 3–5 communication, personal, 6–7 communication, written, 2–5 comparative, 119, 120 complaints, answering, 101–5 complaints, apologies, 101–2 complaints, explanations, 102–3 complaints, making, 23–4, 98–9 complaints, remedies, 104–5 complex problems, 105–7 complimentary close, 35 conjunctions, 55, 122–4 conjunctions, double, 122 conjunctions, co-ordinating, 122, 123 conjunctions, subordinating, 122, 123 courtesy sentence, 35 dashes, 132–3 deduction, 20–1 ‘dependent’ and ‘dependant’, use of, 138 drafting, 25–7 DVDs, in presentations, 110 ‘each’, use of, 118 editing, 27–8 ‘either’, use of, 119 e-mails, 37 emotion, 18, 77, 98 emotional buying triggers, 92 emphasis, 60, 130, 131–2 euphemisms, 6, 73, 81 ‘every’, use of, 118 exclamation marks, 134 ‘fewer’ and ‘less’, use of, 120 flipcharts, in presentations, 111 flow charts, 52–3 for-‘ and ‘fore-‘, use of, 139–40 four Ps, 92 freewriting, 22–3 full stops, 127 grammar, importance of, 114 graphs, 47–50 hanging participles, 58, 59, 125 ‘hardly’ and ‘scarcely’, use of, 121 headings, 33, 40, 65 hyphens, 135 induction, 21–2 ‘infer’ and ‘imply’, use of, 140 infinitive, 117–18 information, assembling, 19–22, 108 information, checking, 18–19 information, providing, 74 interactive whiteboards, in presentations, 111 161 A Guide to Good Business Communication jargon, 14, 78–9, 82 language, formal and informal, 5, 15–17 language, simple and complex, 17 letters, ending, 34–5 letters, layout, 29–36 letters, styles of address, 31–2 listing, 22 lists, 127–8, 130, 131 literary style, logic, 23–5, 40, 112 market, identifying, 90–1 meetings, arranging, 93–5 meetings, chairing, 95–6 meetings, efficient, 93 meetings, speaking at, 96 memos, 36–7 minutes, 96–7 ‘none’, use of, 117 nouns, 54, 115–16 nouns, abstract, 80–2, 115 nouns, collective, 115–16 nouns, common, 115 nouns, compound, 115–16 nouns, proper, 115 object, 115 ‘only’, use of, 120 outcome, 11–13 outlines, 22–3 padding, 73, 75 paragraphs, cross-referencing, 41 paragraphs, in speech, 70–1 paragraphs, length, 63–4 paragraphs, linking, 66–9 paragraphs, topics in, 60–3 parenthesis, 128, 131–2 phrases, 118, 122, 124–5, 129 phrases, adjectival, 123–4 phrases, adverbial, 123 pie charts, 51–2 planning, importance of, 8, 20 positive, emphasising, 77–8 predicate, 54–5 prefixes, 136 prepositions, 121–2, 123 prepositions, ending sentences, 121 presentations, 110–13 162 presentations, preparing, 111–12 presentations, activities in, 113 presentations, variety in, 113 product benefits, identifying, 91 product samples, in presentations, 111 pronouns, 54, 115, 116–17 pronouns, ambiguous use, 117 pronouns, demonstrative, 116 pronouns, indefinite, 116 pronouns, interrogative, 116 pronouns, objective, 117 pronouns, personal, 116 pronouns, possessive, 116 pronouns, reflexive, 116 pronouns, relative, 54, 55, 116, 117 pronouns, subjective, 117 punctuation, importance of, 126–7 punctuation, purposes, 127 purpose, 9–11, 12, 76–7 question marks, 134–5 quotation marks, 133–4 quotations, 129, 131, 133 reaction, 13–19 reasons for writing or speaking, 8–13 reports, acknowledgements, 42–3 reports, appendices, 43 reports, balance in, 108 reports, conclusion, 41–2, 109 reports, introduction, 39–40 reports, main findings, 41 reports, opinions in, 109–10 reports, preliminary pages, 38–9 reports, recommendations, 41–2 reports, summary, 39 reports, title page, 38–9 requests, agreeing to, 86–7 requests, making, 84–6 requests, refusing, 88–9 rudeness, 13, 18, 77, 98 sales letters, 89–92 salutation, 32–3 semicolons, 55, 129–30 sentences, awkward, 58–60 sentences, complex, 55 sentences, compound, 55 sentences, compound complex, 56 sentences, definition, 54–5 sentences, in speech, 69–70 Index sentences, keeping in parallel, 58, 59–60, 120, 122 sentences, length, 57–8 sentences, loose, 56 sentences, number of ideas in, 55, 58–9, 123 sentences, periodic, 56 sentences, simple, 55 signalling, 66–7, 128 sincerity, 72–3 slang, 6, 75, 78 slides, in presentations, 110–11, 112–13 spellings, American, 136–7 style, blocked, 30–1 style, displayed, 30 subject, 54–5, 115, 118, 125 superlative, 119, 120 tables, 44–6 tautology, 79–80, 82 titles, 32 tone, 72–8, 81–2, 113 topic sentences, 64–5 unique selling propositions, 91 unnecessary words and phrases, vagueness, 4, 73, 74–5, 81–2 verbs, 54, 115, 117–18, 123 videos, in presentations, 110 words, choosing, 72, 78–80, 82 words, commonly confused, 140–1 163 Quick Solutions to Common Errors in English An A-Z guide to spelling, punctuation and grammar Angela Burt ‘You will never doubt your written English again.’ – Evening Standard ‘A straightforward and accessible handbook for anyone who ever has a query about correct English – and that’s all of us.’ – 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What she wants to achieve is to get to the... going to say, you should also keep in mind what you want to achieve Look at the e-mail below sent by a company’s Accountant to the Purchase Ledger Clerk 11 A Guide to Good Business Communication Your Purpose and What You Want to Achieve Here are some examples to illustrate the difference between the purpose of your communication and what you want to achieve ● The purpose of a sales letter is to tell... you are going to say Whatever the form of your communication, it is important to plan what you are going to say in advance Of course, when you are speaking your plan cannot be too detailed, as you do not know how the conversation is going to develop – you should certainly not try to plan everything you are going to say You have probably come across telesales staff who have been told exactly what to say... practices is to inform the decision-makers of the options available What you want to achieve is acceptance of the most efficient option To: Brian Carter From: Sandra Jones Subject: Payment of invoices The Purchasing Manager has complained to me that he is unable to maintain reasonable stocks of many items because we are constantly being put on stop by one supplier or another This in turn is having an... 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