Khóa Luyện Thi THPT Quốc Gia 2016 – GV Phan Điệu Facebook: phandieu89 KỸ NĂNG VIẾT ĐOẠN VĂN – GV PHAN ĐIỆU VIDEO LỜI GIẢI CHI TIẾT có website MOON.VN [Truy cập tab Tiếng Anh – Khóa: Chữa đề thi THPTQG] KỸ NĂNG VIẾT ĐOẠN VĂN: Đề thi thường gồm dạng: 1, Narration: kể câu chuyện/sự việc 2, Description: miêu tả (người/ vật) 3, Personal opinion: trình bày mặt lợi- mặt hại/ nguyên nhân-kết quả/ đề xuất/ góp ý Một đoạn văn dài: ≈ 140 từ Viết 10 từ/dòng => 14 dòng(2552) Câu mở 14-20 từ+câu kết 14-20 từ =28-40 từ≈3-4 dòng Phần thân: 100 từ chia làm ý ý ≈ 50 từ dòng => 10 dòng bước: đọc đề ->gạch ý sx ý-> Viết Dạng 1: Narration: Describe a memorable journey Describe a memorable summer holiday Describe a memorable birthday of yours Describe one of your happy/sad memories Describe a time when you did a good thing => Tập trung trả lời câu hỏi: WHAT, WHERE, WHEN, HOW, WHY, WHO Dùng transitional devices: First, Next, Then, After that,etc Moon.vn – Học để khẳng định Hotline: 0432 99 98 98 Khóa Luyện Thi THPT Quốc Gia 2016 – GV Phan Điệu Facebook: phandieu89 Dạng 2: Description: Describe your best friend/ favourite teacher/ someone who has big influence on you Describe your favourite subject/ book/ film/ something you own Cách làm bài: Trả lời câu hỏi WHAT, WHERE, WHEN, HOW, WHY (VD: miêu tả bạn thân: WHAT – người làm với nhau, WHERE – gặp đâu, WHEN – gặp nào, HOW – người thân với nào, WHY – người lại hợp thế) Dạng 3: Personal opinion: What are the advantages and/or disadvantages of social networking/the Internet/ television/high technology? What can students to protect the environment? What are the benefits of learning English? => Cách làm bài: Dùng listing devices :First, Second, Last but not least,etc Dùng synonyms/ antonyms: advantages = benefits=postive aspects; disadvantages = drawbacks=negative effects BỐ CỤC CHUNG CỦA MÔT ĐOẠN VĂN: How to write a good topic sentence and a good concluding sentence? 1, Topic sentence: (main ideas) = Topic + Controlling ideas - Convenience foods are easy to prepare - The average Vietnamese teenagers consumes enormous quantities of snack 2, Concluding sentence + signals the end (by signal phrases) + leaves the important point for readers to remember (by paraphrasing the topic sentence or summarizes the main points) + sometimes give the final comment on the topic Moon.vn – Học để khẳng định Hotline: 0432 99 98 98 Khóa Luyện Thi THPT Quốc Gia 2016 – GV Phan Điệu Facebook: phandieu89 END OF PARAGRAPH SIGNALS: 1, Theo sau dấu ,: - Finally, / In brief, / In short, - In conclusion, /In summary, - Therefore, / As a result, / Thus, 2, Không có dấu , theo sau: - We can see that - It is clear that - The evidence suggests that - There can be no doubt that - These examples show that How to develop ideas in Body part: 1, Giving examples: - Noun and Verb signals: a Some words in English represent people’s names A good example/ illustration of this is the word lynch b This can be illustrated by the word boycott c Other words in this category include lynch and boycott - Sentence connectors: a Some words in English represent proper name For example/ For instance, the word quisling originated with Vidkun Quisling b The word quisling, for example/ for instance, originated with Vidkun Quisling - Phrase signals: a Words like/ such as lynch and quisling represent proper names b Such word as lynch and quisling prepresent proper names c Some words represent proper names Lynch is such a word Moon.vn – Học để khẳng định Hotline: 0432 99 98 98 Khóa Luyện Thi THPT Quốc Gia 2016 – GV Phan Điệu Facebook: phandieu89 2, Details: “Lanlords usually require a renter to sign a very complicated contract called lease It stipulates the length of time the person must stay in the apartment and amount of rent he or she must pay It can limit the number of people allowed to live in the apartment and restrict the renter from having pets A lease may prohibit the renter from subletting and include a provision by which the renter is charged a certain ammount of money if she or he breaks the contract.The agreement alse includes the responsibilities ” 3, Fact and statistics: The first manned flight to the moon began when APOLLO 11 blasted off from Cape Kenedy, Florida at 9:32 a.m on July 16, 1969, with Amstrong, Aldrin and Collins as astronauts Four days after the blast-off, Amstrong and Aldrin moved from the command module, Colombia, into the lunar module, Eagle, and the two modules seperated Collins continued to orbit the moon in the command module, while the other astronauts descended toward the moon At 4:18 p.m on July 20th, the Eagle landed on the moon, in the sea of Tranquility The two astronauts spent twenty one hours and thirty seven minutes on the moon They started back to the earth at 1:55 p.m on July 21 ANALYSE THE MODEL PARAGRAPH: Most bike accidents are due to equipment failure, weather conditions and bikers’ carelessness To begin with, many different pieces of bicycle equipment can become defective and cause bike accidents For example, if a bike does not have good brakes, it cannot be stopped effectively Similiarly, a weak light will make it more difficult for bikers to see at night Aside from defective equipment, a biker often has difficulty controlling bicycle when it is rainy or windy Under such conditions, water may impair the brakes or obstruct the biker’s view; too much wind will affect steering Nonetheless, bike accidens are mainly caused by bikers’ carelessness For instance, accidents can be produced by a biker who does not stop at a stop sign and a biker whose pant’s legs get caught in the bike chain In conclusion, the number of bike accidents could be greatly reduced if bikers checked ther equipment, rode in good weather and practiced bike safety (wordcount: 157) DẠNG 1: Narration (Văn tường thuật) Chú ý: 1, Viết theo trình tự thời gian 2, Thông tin rõ ràng xác tên gọi, địa điểm thời gian VD: “Ghana became a republic on July 1, 1960” không nói chung chung in 1960 thông tin sai in 1961 3, Quan điểm khách quan, không đưa quan điểm cá nhân vào tường thuật VD: report accident nuclear power plant, không nói: “The accident proves that all the nuclear power plant should be closed” Câu mở đầu: trả lời câu hỏi: 1,WHAT:Bạn tường thuât chuyện 2,WHO/WHAT (involved):Người/vật l.quan Moon.vn – Học để khẳng định Hotline: 0432 99 98 98 Khóa Luyện Thi THPT Quốc Gia 2016 – GV Phan Điệu Facebook: phandieu89 3,WHERE: Sự việc xảy đâu 4,WHEN: Sự việc xảy VD: - Three thousand runners participated in the annual Great Race, which was held in Pittsburgh on June - On October 16, 1934, Mao Tse-tung and his Red Army began their Long March near Fukein, China Phần thân bài: 1,Main point:Ý 2,Additional Points:Ý bổ sung VD1: 1,Main point: The festival began at 9:30 A.M on August with a speech by the director of the Artists’ Guild, Meredith Ainley 2,Additional Points:She welcame everyone to the ninth annual festival VD2: 1,Main point: There was entertainment on the stage for the next hour 2,Additional Points: First, the Polish Folk Organization presented some traditional dances After that, a group of children from Oakmont Elementary School gave a short play Phần kết bài: Hành động cuối kết việc ANALYSE THIS PARAGRAPH: The first manned flight to the moon began when APOLLO 11 blasted off from Cape Kenedy, Florida at 9:32 a.m on July 16, 1969, with Amstrong, Aldrin and Collins as astronauts Four days after the blast-off, Amstrong and Aldrin moved from the command module, Colombia, into the lunar module, Eagle, and the two modules seperated Collins continued to orbit the moon in the command module, while the other astronauts descended toward the moon At 4:18 p.m on July 20th, the Eagle landed on the moon, in the sea of Tranquility The two astronauts spent twenty one hours and thirty seven minutes on the moon They started back to the earth at 1:55 p.m on July 21 Moon.vn – Học để khẳng định Hotline: 0432 99 98 98