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, than , ^ men! / -'IT fdv Ji/ 0.5 :>mit> iSa-nis -n : Cac em hoc sinh Tu hieu ung tich cue ciia Cuoc thi Ra d§ va viet van theo huong m a cung su chao don nhiet tinh ciia ban doc voi cuon Tuyen tap dS bai va bai van theo huong mo, tap mot, tap chi Van hoc va Tuoi tre tilp tuc tuyen chon va xuat ban cu6n Tuyen tap di bai va bai van theo huong mo, tap hai Cu6n sach tap hop nhung d^ bai va bai lam van tieu bieu du thi Cuoc thi Ra dk va vilt van theo huong mo Cuoc thi bat dau tu nam 2011 den va dugc dong dao cac thay c6 giao, cac ban hoc sinh soi noi tham gia Chinh vi th§, noi dung sach c6 tin cay, nong hoi hoi tha cua thuc tien day - hoc Ngii van va c6 kha nang ung dung cao cxing nhu dem d§n nhung bi quyet hay de cac em de dang lam bai hon cac ki thi va kiem tra danh gia Vi noi quyen sach c6 kha nang ung dung cao va mang d i n nhung bi quyet cho cac em? Bai truac het su dung cu6n sach nay, cac em se dugc co xat voi nhigu dang d l ma, voi rat nhi^u tinh hu6ng dat ra, tu nhung tinh huong cua doi song xa hoi den nhung tinh huong cua van hoc Nhung van d l cua doi s6ng dugc dua de cac em ban luan deu rat gan gui va thiet thuc Chuyen Igi hai cua internet va mang xa hoi; chuyen moi nguai can song het minh, cong hien het mrnh cho cuoc song hom the' nao; chuyen v l mot nguoi ban t6t; chuyen the nao la nguoi hanh phuc; chuyen we nhung pham chat can c6 cua nguoi hoc sinh; chuyen mot dang nha Va rat nhieu chuyen khac lien quan true tiep den cuoc song cua hom Nhijng tinh huong van hoc dugc neu cuon sach cung rat moi la, c6 kha nang khoi ggi tri tuong tugng va kha nang sang tao cua nguoi lam bai Chang han, da nghi den mot chi t i l t truyen Chu ngiiai tu tu la Huan Cao da cho vien quan nguc chu gi cai T dem dang nha ay? Nhan vat thliy tha lai nhvrng bi an gi? Hay mot bai tho dac biet nao da lam thay doi quan niem song cua em? Hoac ne'u dugc binh chon, em se chon lam nhan vat "boa h a u " cua van hoc Viet Nam? Cac em se dugc co xat vol rat n h i l u tinh huong n h u the' Co the noi, nhimg ngudi de a day da c6 gang chat loc t u muon mat cuoc s6ng va van hoc nhung tinh hu6ng rat hay, rat hap d i n va giau y nghia nhan van de cho cac em c6 the thoa sue the hien quan diem, su sang tao cua minh Cung v d i di§u do, a m i tinh hudng m a n h u tren, cac em lai c6 mot huong d i n lam bai cua nguoi d§ bet sue cu the, giup cac em buy dong n h i l u nha't, trung n h i t v6n kien thuc xa hoi va van hoc da tich luy dugc de thuc hien bai v i l t cua m i n h mot each sang ro va t h u y l t phuc nhat Phan mot: t V D E BAI V A GQI Y L A M BAI nu A>n Con d i l u nira ciing khong kem phan hl^p d i n , la cuon sach se gioi thieu cho cac em nhiing bai van theo huong m o tieu b i l u cua cac ban a nhi^u tinh thanh, vung mi§n M i bai van la mot each d i l n dat, the hien mot v n hieu bi§t rieng, nhung c6 diem chung la cac ban d§u da the hien dugc k i nang lam bai van m o theo cac muc t u thao d i n rat thao va n h u i n nhuyen Day la nhiing v i d u dien hinh giup cac em c6 t u lieu "muc so t h i " de t u t u rut mot k i nang lam bai van m o cho rieng minh Chuc cac em dat diem that cao v d i n h i m g bai van m a va sau luon dat cugc s6ng voi kha nang t u sang tao, biet chu dong, linh boat truac moi tinh huong, biet the hien quan diem rieng cua m i n h mot each thuyet phuc nhat Do chinh la muc dich ma cuon sach huong tai r5 Nguyen Van Tung 'tis lie: ;.i DIEU QUAN TRONG NHAT TRONG CUOC ^ S6NG CUA BAN TIEN ICH VA HIEM HOA CUA M A N G XA HOI ^f 1^ LE THI N G O C ANH BUI C A N H BO GV THPTNguyin GV THCS Yen Lac - Yen Thuy - Hoa Binh ^ Thugng Hiin - TP Ho DEBAI Diiu quan nhdt cuoc song cua ban ^ DEBAI '' • P'\r^ Bill Gates timg canh bao: "Cuoc each mang eong nghe thong tin tien ki thuat diu lam thai gian cua chung ta nSu chung ta khong can - Ki^u bai: nghi luan xa hoi ma ChiMinh ^ ^ lit CO ich, nhung tat ca cacphuong GOIYLAMBAI ^ langphi trong" Hay trinh bay suy nghi cua anh/chi vi mot s6 tien ich va hiem noi dung: + Dieu ta cho la quan nha't thuoc vao nhi^u ye'u t6: hoan canh song, thoi dai, sue khoe, tarn \i, trinh do, lua tuoi Su lua chon di§u quan nha't the hien ro thai s6ng, each n h i n euoc doi, le song, l i tucmg song + Di§u ta xac dinh la quan nha't euoe song khong the la nhung di^u lap d i ich k i , khong phai la nhung ao tuong hao huygn p h i thue t§, nhung gi t i tien tarn thucmg an phan N o cin duge dat eae m6i quan he, su hai hoa chung (voi ban than, gia dinh, ban be, d6ng nghiep, eong ddng ) V i le "dieu quan nha't" phai mang tinh r&xan van (la hanh phue cho m o i nguoi, la su nghiep, la t r i tue, la su giau eo ve tam h6n, la su than tinh tai we tinh thSn, la su sung man v§ sue khoe ) + Dieu quan nha't euoe song eua ta, no eo gia t r i v6 eung thieng lieng lam ta hai long (bang long) vod euoe song boi la nhimg gi ta khao khat mong muon de eo duge Chinh no da " l a m nen" hanh phue hay bat hanh eua euoe doi ta, no ehi ph6i tae dgng len hanh trinh s6 phan eua ta * Liru y: Bai vie't tranh eong thue rdng, ckn vie't sang tao linh hoat, in tugng, ehan that iVH&TT sd 11/2012) hoa cua mang xa hoi (social network) ma giai tre dang sir dung rong rai hien Theo anh/chi, ch ung tanensudung mot each "khon ngoan" nhu mang xa hoi thSnao? G O I Y L A M BAI A Ve ki nang - Biet eaeh lam bai van nghi luan xa hoi ve mot hien tugng doi s6ng - B6 eue ehat ehe, d i l n dat l u u loat, khong mae loi ehinh ta, dung tu, n g u phap B Ve kien thue - Hoe sinh the hien duge ki§n thue ve khoa hge k i thuat, khoa hoe xa hoi, hieu hiit thue te doi song ' - Bai viet eo the dua nhung y kien rieng va trinh bay theo nhieu eaeh khae nhung l i le, ehung eu, he th6ng lap luan phai ehat ehe, maeh lae, noi dung lap luan phai lanh manh, tieh eue, chinh xac, tieu bieu, thuy^t phue Sau day la mgt s6 ggi y de hge sinh tham khao: ' • Giai thich - Mang xa hoi: Chua c6 dinh nghia chinh thuc Theo trang Wikipedia.org: "Mang xa hoi (hay mang xa hoi ao) la dich vu k^t ndi cac vien cung so thich tren Internet lai voi voi nhi§u muc dich khac khong phan biet thoi gian va khong gian" VD: Facebook, MySpace, Twitter, ^ - Khon ngoan: Khon xii su, bie't.tranh cho miiih nhung d i i u khong hay ' , ^• r''v''-'^ ••^;v,; Phan tich - chung minh a) Tien Ich: Vi mang xa hoi dung nhanh chong gioi tre? Vi mang xa hoi la: - Phuong thuc lien ke't, hop tac, chia se mang tinh tuong tac tich cue, sang tao - D i l n dan chia se y tuong, tri thuc, kinh nghiem chuyen mon va doi song - Dia chi giao luu k i t ban, tim nguoi - Noi van dong cong ddng tham gia hoat dong xa hoi, nhan dao - Phuong tien tu do, thoai mai the hien ban than (ca tinh, thi hie'u, sof thich, tu tuong, tinh cam, thai do, khat vong, giai toa tarn trang buc xiic, uc chi tam 11, ) - Phuong tien giai tri (nghe nhac, xem phim, choi game, doc sach ) - Phuong tien quang cao, tiep thi, kinh doanh - Npi dung thong tin, hinh thuc trinh bay da dang, phong phii, sinh dong, hap d i n - Phat trien ddng bo, tuong h6 voi cac phuong tien ki thuat cong nghe thong tin khac nhu: may tinh ban, may tinh bang, smartphone, b) Hiem hoa: Ne'u lam dung mang xa hoi thi tac hai the' nao? - Lang phi thoi gian, t6n t i l n bac, hai sue khoe - Xa rod th§ gioi thuc, thi§u hut ki nang song - TrSm cam, hoang tuong i - Nguy ca thong tin, tu lieu, tai khoan ca nhan bi danh cap, Icri dung, lua dao, xam hai - Anh huOTig xa'u den hoc tap, cong viec, doi so'ng gia dinh - Anh huong tu tuong, thai d i n den c6 16i song thuc dung, v6 cam - A n hoa bi cu6n hut vao cac hoat dong pham phap * Nguoi vi§t ch\O mot s6 d i n chung cu the, tieu bieu tu thuc te' doi song (ban than, gia dinh, xa hoi) Binh luan-marong , , ^'"^^^ ' a) Danh gia uu - khuylt ve mang xa hoi: ft ' < - Cong nghe thong tin, mang xa hoi la tuu kl thuat va van hoa cua nhan loai; no dugc phat minh va phat trien vi muc dich phuc vu va cai thien chat luong song ciia nguoi - Cong nghe thong tin, Internet, mang xa hoi - loi hay hai la chinh nguoi ling xu voi no b) Giai phap su dung "khon ngoan": - Xac dinh muc dich su dung tich cue, lanh manh - Tu giac dieu tiet thoi gian hop li, chii dong giCr gin sue khoe - Ket noi, chia se thong tin, y tuong lanh manh, tich cue - Co vii, dong vien moi nguoi phat huy tinh tuong tac, bi§n ciia mang xa hoi vao viec van dong cong ddng tham gia cac hoat dong xa hoi mang tinh nhan van - Canh bao moi nguoi canh giac voi ducmg link, trang web xau, tin tac (hacker) phat tan virus, - Nha nuoc can xay dimg co so phap II chat che, ckn c6 giai phap kl thuat hieu qua de ngan chan nhung website "den", mang xa hoi tieu cue, trai thu^n phong mi tuc, phan cam, (Lien he ban than) Bai hoc nhan thuc va hanh dong ' ' - Gioi tre, nhat la hoc sinh, sinh vien, c4n nhan thiic sang su6t, sau sac ve " l o i " va "hai" cua Internet, mang xa hoi i.n, i^mi iyi T„>( 11 GOIYLAMBAI NGON GIO VA CAY S l A Vi ki nang - Xac d i n h dung kieu bai nghi luan xa hoi, dang nghi luan ma H - Dam bao bo cue ba phSn PHAN THI K I M CHI GV THCS Lam Thao - Phu Thg - Luan diem sang ro, lap luan chat che, thuy§t phuc, dSn ehung cu the - Bigt van dung tong hop cac phuong phap lap luan: giai thich, DE B A I phan tich, ehung minh, binh luan - Co k i nang van dung cac y ^ u t6 t u su, mieu ta, bieu cam vao Biic thong diep ma em nhan dugc tir cau chuyen duoi day: bai van nghi luan Nggn gio va cay soi Mot nggn gio dQ dgi bang qua khu rung gia Nongaonghe tung tat ca cac sinh vat rung, cudn phangnhung thoi dam la, quat giy cac canh cay No muon mgi cay cSi ddu phai nga rap truac sue manh cua minh Riengmot hi khuatphuc caysdigia vin dunghien ngang, khong truac nggn gio hang Nhu hi thach thiic, nggn gio iSnglgn, dien cuSnglat tungkhu rung mot lin nua Caysdi vin bam chat dat, im lang chiu dung can gian du cua nggn gio va khong hi guc nga Nggn gio met moi, danh diu hang va hoi: - T6i biet sue manh cua 6ng c6 the be gay hit cac nhanh cay cua toi, cudn sach dam la cua toi va lam than toi lay dgng Nhung 6ng se khdng bao gia quat nga dugc toi Bod toi c6 nhung nhanh ri vuan dai, bam sau vao long dat Do chinh la sue manh sau tham nhat cua toi Cang ngay, ehung se phat trien cang manh me, giup toi vung cam an 6ng, nggn gio a! Chinh nhung dien cuong cua ong da giup toi ehung to dugc kha nang chiu dung va sue manh cua minh (Quang Kiet - theo Viva Consulting - Hatgidng tam hSn - Dung bao gia tir bo irac ma, NXB Tong hap TP H6 Chi Minh) ' Co the trinh bay bai viet ciia m i n h theo n h i ^ u each n h i m g can dam bao mot s6 y ca ban mang tinh d i n h huong sau: Hieu ngi dung, y nghia cua cau chuyen: - N g o n gio: H i n h anh tuong trung cho nhung kho khan, t h i i thach, nhung nghich canh cupc song - Cay s6i: H i n h anh tuong trung cho long dung cam, dam doi dhx, khong guc nga truac hoan canh vod n i ^ m t i n chi§n thang - Y nghia cua cau chuyen: Trong cuoe song, nguoi c4n eo kho khan, tra ngai cua cuoe song Cay sdi gia tu tSn tra lai: truac mgi sue manh cua ke thu Nhung toi cungphai B Ve kiin thuc long dung cam, t u tin, nghi luc va ban iTnh v u n g vang truac nhung - Cay soi kia! Lam nguoi c6 the dung vung nhu the? vanghan ],r!r!' Buc thong diep tu cau chuyen: Hoe sinh t u cam nhan t i m d i l u tac gia mu6n nhSn gui theo each hieu cua m i n h , m i l n la hop l i Sau day la mot s6 ggi y: - Trong cuoe song, luon t i ^ m an nhung kho khan, tra ngai, nhiing nghich canh kho luong va ehung eo the xay bat cu luc nao Ne'u khong c6 long dung cam, dam doi mat v o i kho khan, tra ngai thi kho hoae khong the vuot qua dugc - Long dung cam, nghi luc va ban linh vung vang se tie'p them sue manh, giup nguoi t u t i n truac kho khan, tra ngai, nhiing nghich canh cua cupc doi '« - Dung cam d6i mat v o i t h u thach, khong guc nga truac hoan canh la chia khoa cua cong f^ ii gfBvri * Lixu y: Trong qua trinh lap luan nen c6 n h i m g dSn chxzng v§ nhung tarn guong dung cam, khong guc nga truac hoan canh de each lap luan them thuygt phuc V D : nha tha N g u y i n D i n h Chieu; nhac SI nguoi Due Bethoven; nha Vat l i va l o a n hoc noi ti§ng cua Phap Paxean Bai hoc cho ban than: " !« , - Khong nen tuyet vong, b i quan, ehan nan, guc nga truac hoan canh rrr !,in;H A^'UT, - Binh tinh t i m giai phap ch\t de tung buae vugt qua kho khan, trangai j - N u o i duong niem t i n c h i l n t h i n g - Phe phan thai do, hanh dong buong xuoi, thieu y chl, nghi lue, niem tin (VH&TT sd 7+8+9/2012) ay Khi ngoi nha duac xay xong, ong chu thiu den tiSp nhan cong trinh va trao vao tay bac chiec chia Idioa nha Ong noi voi bac: "Diy la nha cua anh Toi biiu anh mon qua de cam an anh da lam viic cho cong ty biy liu nay" (Qua tang cua cuoc song - NXB Tre) GOI Y L A M B A I A Ve kl nang - Xac dinh day la dang de nghi luan xa hoi ma, nguoi viet bay to suy nghi cua ban than qua mot cau chuyen - Hoc sinh dugc t u lua chon cac kieu bai va thao tac lap luan, huy dong k i l n thuc sach va, thuc te', trai nghiem cua ban than de trinh bay - D u vi§t theo kieu van ban nao, bai van phai c6 b6 cue mach lac, can d6i, c6 luan diem ro rang, thuyet phuc B Vi kien thuc - Y nghia cau chuyen: O vao mot thoi diem quan trong XAY NHA cuoc doi minh, bac thg moc khong doc sue lue de thuc hien moi viee cho that t6t Cu6i cung, bac da phai s6ng can nha kem D chat luong chinh tay m i n h dtmg len Gia n h u bi§t truac, ban bac HUYNH THI LIEN CHI GV THPTchuyen Bin Tre - Bin Tre da hanh dong khac - T u cau chuyen, hoc sinh c6 the c6 nhung y k i l n rieng nhung huong vao cac y co ban sau : i-.i D E BAI : Suynghi Mot bac thamoc da Ion tuoi din xin ong chu thiu cho de ve vui huong nguoi tholanh + Cuoc doi chung ta giong n h u ngoi nha N§u chung ta xay cua anh (chi) nghia cua cau chuyen sau : nghihmi tuoi gia voi chau Ong chu to tiec thay nghi xin thoi viic Ong ta di nghi bac cd xay cho hang them mot ngoi nha nua roi nghi Bac tha ddngy cung hieu rang bac miin cuong nhan loi chukhong nhung thtre long nhan cong viic Bac ta goi dai mot nhom tha c6 tay nghi va mua nhimgloai vat tukem giup mudn kim chit luong de xay cho chdng can nha dijng no mot each cau tha, tien, doi pho, khong tao cai n i n v u n g chac thi chinh ta se la nguoi nhan hau qua + M i ta dong dinh, lat san, xay tuang mot each chac ehan, can than thi ta se c6 mot ngoi nha b§n viing, mot cuoc s6ng tot dep cho ban than + Cuoc s6ng cua chung ta hom la ket qua t u thai song va each tao dung cuoc song cua chung ta qua k h u Cuoc song cua ta mai c6 t6t dep hay khong la b i t dku t u hom G O I Y L A M BAI CAU CHUYEN CUA FAITH Cam nhan khai quit ve cuoc ddi cua Faith - Faith bi s6 phan giang cho nhiing don nghiet nga: sinh chi ^ PHAM THI NGOC DIEP CO hai chan, me khong mu6n nhan, bi chu vut bo GV THPT Ba Dinh - Nga Son - Thanh Hoa - Bang nghi luc phi thuang, su kien tri ben bi, Faith da vugt qua nghich canh de s6ng c6 y nghia, c6 ich: chiu huan luyen thoi gian dai tren van luat song, tuyet de c6 the di lai bang hai Doc van ban sau: chan; Faith mang den sue manh tinh than to Ian cho moi nguoi Faith - chti cho di bang hai chin Chu cho duac sinh dung vao dem Gang Bai hoc cudc sdng cd the nhan duac tu cau chuyen vd Faith sinh nam 2002 Khi sinh ra, no chi c6 hai chin va ididng the di lai binh thuang Me cua no khongmudn duac nhan Ngudi chu dau tien cungnghino khong the song sot nen da bono vao thungrac Co Jude Stringfellow da gap va dem no vSnuoi Co dat ten no la Faith (Niem tin) va quyit dinh day, hudn luyen chu cho nhd tu di lai duac Ban diu, c6 dat Faith len mot chiSc van luat song de no cam nhan su chuyen dong Sau do, cd dat balac tren mot cai thia va gia len cao, huang vi Faith deno dung daynhay len That ki dieu, sau thing Faith da hoc duac cich dung thing bang tren hai chin va - Tai uang c6 the d^n voi ta b^t cu luc nao, no la mot phSn tat yixx ciia cuoc s6ng - Khi cuoc song giang cho ta nhung don rat dau, vap phai nhung tai uang bien c6, ta thii nhin no a mot goc nhin khac: bien nghich canh ca hoi, bien kho khan the manh Muon vay can phai c6 thai song tich cue, lac quan, tu tin - C i n CO nghi luc kien cuang, dung cam, khong dhx hang s6 phan de vuot qua kho khan Khi do, ta se ma mang dugc t4m nhin, s6ng CO ich, CO gia tri di biSt nhay Sau mot thai gian huin luyen nua tuyet Faith Binh CO the di lai bang hai chin nhu ngudi - De giup nhung nguoi bat hanh vugt len so phan eo le can lam Hien tai Faith thich "di bo" Faith nhanh chong tra nen noi tieng va xuit hien tren nhieu bai bio cung nhu truyen hinh chi, da CO cudn sich Thim viSt vk chu cho mang ten "With a Little Faith" Faith duac mang dSn benh vien de an ui nhung berth nhan nang Trong trai giio huan thiSu nien, nhung dua tre ngSngio da cam dong rod nuac mat ddi dien vai Faith Faith cung tra bic si tim li cho nhung thuang binh bi khung hoang chiin tranh Faith khong ngung mang tiing cuai den cho moi ngudi (Theo kenhl4.vn) Bai hoc cudc song ma anh (chi) nhan duac tirciu chuyen cua Faith? luin long nhan ai, tinh yeu thuang, su se chia cua moi nguoi Tinh yeu thuang CO the lam nen phep mau ki dieu cho cuoc s6ng - Phe phan nhung nguoi hen nhat, d i dang bi khuSt phuc truac kho khan va thai dp tha a, v6 cam truac bat hanh cua nguoi khac (VH&TT sd 7+8+9/ 2012) "Van chu" - phong each but ki cua Hoang Phu Ngoc Tuang qua doan trich "Ai da dat ten cho ddng song"? a But ki cua Hoang Phu Ngoc Tuong giau chat tri tue, la su k i t hgp giiia tu da chieu v6i von van hoa sau rpng ' * VAN CHU gi PHAM THI N G O C DIEP "" GV THPT Ba Dinh - Nga Scm - Thanh Hoa • 1,1, tiuurl D E BAI: ;«tj} u3 ^iuii^n v (.«',) -'•.'1 'WH ,4 j^nosj Mi rink: rhirf'g^ ffJ 03 ^fo ,.,!§vuJ Jt"t>i3 ,;gnoi* frmi nsv Nha thaLe Dat quan niem: ^11 (Vy Mdi cong dan deu c6 mot dang van tay h.ib nstjj liiiG:{ -IIMD A \f.Q S Moi nha tho thu thiet c6 mot dang van chu Khong tron l§n (Van chit) Anh (chi) hay xac dinh "van chu" cua nha van Hoang Phu Ngoc Tuang qua doan trich but ki Ai da dat ten cho ddng song? (Nguvanll, tap 1) GOI Y L A M BAI Giai thich y tho cua Le Dat - Van tay: dau hieu de nhan dang, phan biet m6i cong dan, khong the nham l l n - Van chu: ngon ngu rieng cua m6i nha tho Hieu rpng ra, "van chu" la phong each nghe thuat rieng biet, doc dao, khong the trgn Ian, la nhung sang tao cua ca nhan mdi nha tho, nha van - Phong each nghe thuat la pham chat va cung la tieu chi de danh gia, nhan dien mot nghe si chan chinh, c6 tai nang thuc su ("thu thiet") hay chi la "tho tho", "tho van" "Van chu" ciing quan nhu van tay, la dau an dong vao "giay thong hanh" de nha van budc vao dia hat van chuong ,, , /, , , • - Phong each nghe thuat ciia nha van, nha tho the hien qua nhi§u yeu t6: nhan quan, tu tuong nghe thuat, de tai, chii d§, hinh tuong nghe thuat, ngon ngu, but phap the hien v.v 18 - Tac gia mieu ta song Huong vua cu the, vua toan dien, k i t hpp k i l n thuc phong phu nhilu linh vuc: ) + Song Huong nhin tu goc dia li + Song Huong nhin tu chilu sau lich su + Song Huong be day van hoa (am nhac, tho ca) + Song Huong doi thucrng * - Tac gia tim hieu ve song Huong that ki luong va sau sac (su dung d i n chiing la cac s6 lieu, cu lieu lich su); hieu tuong tan v l song Huong tung khuc doan uon lucm cua no (dSn chung) Qua nha van the hien mot phong each lam viec can trong, nghiem tuc b Nhung trang but ki cua Hoang Phu Ngoc Tuong tai hoa va tha'm dam cha't tho - The loai "but k i " : tu do, phong tung xi\u hop voi ca tinh sang tao da giup nha van boc 16 cai toi tai hoa cua minh - Cach nhin lang man, tinh tu va tri tuong tuong phong phu, bay bong v l su gap go giua song Huong va H u l : khong phai la su k i l n tao n g l u nhien cua tao hoa ma la hanh trinh tim k i l m c6 y thuc "nguoi tinh nhan" dich thuc ciia song Huong - Ngon ngii: trau chu6t, chon loc, giau sue goi, giau tinh nhac - Giong van: huong noi, boc lo cam xuc tu nhien, chan - Sii dung linh boat, dat hieu qua tham mi cao nhilu bien phap tu tu (so sanh, lien tuomg, nhan hoa ); k i t hop nhuSn nhuyen nhilu thao tac nhu k l , ta, bieu cam mot doan van * Ta't ca tao nen mot phong each ki mang ten Hoang Phii Ngoc Tuong vua uyen bac, tai hoa vua da d i l t mot tinh yeu que huong dat nuoc 19 MOT CHUYEN DI N G U a C Vfe QUA KHU |[ VU NGOC DUC GV THPT Trin Qudc Tuan - Kon Turn HUAN CAO CHO V I E N QUAN N G U C C H U GI? ~~" D E BAI Mot chuyin di ngugc ve qua khu dSgap ga cac nhan vat truyen dan gian Viet Nam GOI Y LAM BAI A m LE DUG D N G ' GV THPT chuyen Nguyen Thi Minh Khai - S6c Trang D E BAI Trong truyen ngan Chvt ngu&i tu tu (Nguyen Tuan), theo em, nhan vatHuin Cao cho vien quan nguc "chu"gi? Hay dua vao noi dung truyen de phan doan va binh Juan vS "chit" ay Vekinang Day la dang d§ ma cua van tu su, c6 ket hop cac y^u to mieu ta va bieu cam Bai lam c6 b6 cue hop li, biet each lua chon cac su viec, chi tiet tieu bieu de ke Hanh van sang, hap d i n khong mac 16i ve chinh ta, dung tu, dat cau B Ve kien thuc Hoc sinh c6 the trien khai noi dung theo nhi§u each nhung chn dam bao cac y sau: - Gioi thieu dugc tinh hu6ng ngugc v§ qua khii - Dien bi§n ciia chuy§n di: Di den dau? Gap nhan vat nao? Tro chuyen ve vSn de gi? Hanh dong sao? - Cam xuc cua ban than d6i voi nhan vat dugc gap - Riit dugc bai hoc y nghia cho ban than hoac cgng ddng iM GOI YLAMBAI A Ve ki nang '" - Day la dang mo nen hoc sinh c6 the tu lua chgn kieu bai, de lam ro vSn d§ neu - Biet su dung, van dung nhuan nhuyen cac thao tac lap luan (giai thich, phan tich, so sanh, bac bo ) de bai van hip d i n , sinh dgng, thuylt phuc B Vikien thuc - Can cu vao noi dung truyen, hgc sinh c6 the phan doan "chu" ma Huan Cao cho vien quan nguc - Giai thich, binh luan ve y nghia cua "chu" - Neu dugc thong diep ma Hu^n Cao mu6n gui gam qua "hon chii" ma minh viet tang vien quan nguc VD: HuSn Cao cho chu "Tam" la mu6n noi rang: s6ng doi chn mot chu "Tam"; phai c6 tarn long thuong yeu nguoi, thuong yeu, tran cai dep cua cugc song Con nguoi thieu cai "Tam" thi cugc song c6 bao d i l u ba't on * Luu y Bai vie't cin ha'p d i n , c6 tinh thuylt phuc; to c6 suy nghl sau sac v l v^n dh -.i,,'^ :\x'-it{:y Thai gian vd tan ma sac mau i iit- f ' Tu hinh anh bky ong doan tha tren, em hay viet mot bai van nghi luan neu suy nghi ve nhungphim chit dang quy cua nguoi bai ca cong Men cho xa hoi, dat nuac vjij i jil Tim ncd tham tham rung sau Bap bung hoa chudi, trangmau hoa ban Tim nai babien song tran Hang cay chan bao diu dang mua hoa Tim nai qukn dao khai xa Co loai hoa nanhula khong ten Bay ong rong ruoi tram mien Ru ri doi canh ndi liSn mua hoa Noi rung hoang vai bien xa Datncn dau cung tim ngotngao X r:f>a:rg'«,.,., T ,^ (M4U hoa c6 atraicao ' ''^^^ Thi bay ong cung mang vao mat tham) Chat vi ngot mui huang Lang thim thay nhung duong ong bay Trai qua mua nang vai day Men trai dat du lam say dat trai " ' ' Bky ong giu ho cho nguoi Nhung mua hoa da tan phai thing (Trich Hank trinh cua bky ong, Nguyen Due Mau) GOIYLAMBAI A Vikinang , , AW , H^, , - Kieu bai: nghi luan xa hoi ma - Bai viet can c6 bo cue du ba phan, luan diem sang ro, lap luan at che, thuyet phuc, din chiing cu the, loi van sang B Ve noi dung •'6J smb nhv jtinh than cua nguoi binh dan Viet N a m t u xa xua; dugc l u u KhSng d i n h Hay hoc bang trai tim la loi khuyen chi l i truy§n, phat huy suo't qua trinh hinh thanh, phat trien lieh su (VH&TTsd 5+6/2013) dan toe |, + Dugc ket tinh chii yeu a nhiing truyen thong, dao l i to't dep cua nhan dan; a nen van hoc dan gian; o nhung phong tue, tap quan dan gian, tieng me de, n§n van m i n h nong nghiep ^ - Viec tiep thu nhung gia t r i van hoa dan gian ciia cac nha tha SUTIEPTHU ' GIA TRI V A N HOA DAN GIAN ^ D6 tinh hoa cua nhn van hoa dan gian, gop p h i n lam nen tinh dan tgc va sue hap dan cho cac tac pham tha ca hien dai To H u u va JHnNguyln Khoa Dihm khong phai la nhung nha tha dau tien va iiha't su dung van hoa dan gian sang tao nghe thuat THI THANH THUY GV THPT chuyen Thai Binh - Thai Binh hien dai thue chat la su van dung c6 hieu qua tham m i eao nhung ,,cl ,,,1 ionr ;;•.;•.! ifei^x dh \ Su tiep thu nhung gia tri van hoa dan gian ciia TdHOu a bai a''Viet Bac" - The tha luc bat truyen thong; dai t u ho ung minh - ta , dai tu' DE BAI h i e m ehi ai; gigng dieu, am huong t r u tinh nggt ngao, tha thie't; Sir tie'p thu r\hihxg gia tri van hoa dan gian cua T6 Him va igon n g u mgc mac; mot so' hinh anh, ehi tie't lay t u ca dao; loi ke't Nguyen Khoa Diim bai tho Viet Bac va doan trich Dat Nuac (trich trudn^ ca Mat duang khat vgng) ci\x doi dap cua khue hat giao duyen - Cam ve ndi nha, truy§n thong thuy chung, an nghia cua guoi Viet Su tiSp thu nhunggia Diim a doan trich "Bit tri van hoa dan gian cua Nguyin Khoa GOCSAN KHOANG Nuac" - N h u n g chi tie't, hinh anh, nhan vat, t u ngu quen thuoc a cac vA TRai C U A EM the loai van hoc dan gian: c6 tich, than thoai, t r u y i n thuye't, ca dao H dan ca, tao he thong chat lieu quen ma la, giau y nghia doan trich Dit • D6 THI THANH THUY GV THPTchuyen Thai Binh - Thai Binh Nuac ' ~ - Goi lai nhung phong tuc, tap quan, sinh hoat ciia nguoi binh • dan xua {tuc an triu, vin toe ), nhac den su hinh thanh, phat trien BE B A I nen van m i n h nong nghiep, tieng me de de khac sau coi nguon A,::':H^ r;V>^ ,ni. : yp Goc san va khoang troi cua em ^^i., : ? • f^fi^^^ g j T t f f f : } l y f,; ^JK van hoa, van hi§n dan toe - Cam vh 16i song an nghia, t r u y i n thong cho'ng ngoai GOI xam oai cua dan toe Goc san va khoang troi la nhung hinh anh vua mang y nghia Nhan xet, danh gia ve viec su dung chit lieu van hoa dan eu the, ta thuc, vua mang y nghia khai quat, y nghia bieu tugng; gian cua hai nha tha duge nha tha T r i n Dang Khoa su dung lam nhan d l tap tha noi - Net tuong ddng: tieng Goc san va khoang troi Cam hiing ve dao l i thuy ehung an nghia, t r u y i n thong cho'ng 16c san gan v o i cai cu t h i , cai hang ngay; gan v o i nhung k i niem sang tac tren tuoi tha em d^m tren que huong Goc san la noi nguoi chap - Su khac biet: chung nhung buac d i dSu tien; noi khoi dau, dat nhn mong, lam + Viec sii dung eha't lieu van hoa dan gian (tha luc bat, hinh anh diem tua cho nhung buac d i sau cua nguoi ca dao ) cua T6 H u u chu yeu lam nen hinh thuc nghe thuat + Khoang troi chi khong gian rong Ion, bao la; khong gian cong dam da tinh dan toe cho bai tha Viet Bic d6ng, xa hoi, dat nuac Khoang troi gan v o i cai Ian lao, cao dep, + Nguyen Khoa D i e m su d u n g v n van hoe dan gian da dang, cai vinh hSng ; gan v o i n h i m g uac mo, hoai bao, muc dich, l i tuong phong p h i i v o i nhigu the loai: t r u y i n thuye't, eo tich ; goi qua cua nguoi cuoc song Khoang troi la nhiing d i ^ u tot dep trinh h i n h thanh, phat trien n § n van m i n h nong nghiep, tieng me v l y goi nguoi cupc s6ng; the hien su truong v l de, phong tuc tap quan sinh hoat ciia nguoi binh dan tao nen he nhan thuc, phong p h u ve tinh cam, suy nghi; hoan thien ve nhan thong chat lieu dam da ban sac dan toe doan trich Daf each nguoi Nuac Viec su dung gia t r i van hoa dan gian a Dat Nuac tha'm doan trich • + Goc san chi khong gian hep; khong gian gia dinh, rieng tu ngoai xam oai cua nguoi Viet la cam chii dao hai dSm m i y tha, l a i tha, va maeh phat trien cam xuc ea YLAMBAI I i js? ; + N § u coi cuoc doi m o i nguoi la mot hanh trinh thi goc san la vach xua't phat khoi dSu, khoi diem khoang troi la diem den, ke't thuc, k i t qua Hanh trinh tu goc san den khoang troi (tu gia dinh buoc ngoai xa hoi; tu nhiing dieu don gian, nhimg tinh cam binh CUOC PHIEU L U U di d i n nhirng d i l u Ion lao, nhiing tinh cam sau sac, cao dep ) vAo M O T CU6N thuc chat la qua trinh truong cua nguoi, qua trinh hinh thanh, phat trien, hoan thien nhan each Y thuc ro diku do, nguoi - nhat la nhiJng nguoi tre tuoi se xay dtmg cho minh mot 16i ^ J/ / SACH D6 T H I T H A N H T H U Y GV THPT Bach Dang - Thuy Nguyen - Hai Phdng s6ng dep: biet u6c mo, hi vong; bilt vuon toi; bie't tran nhimg d i l u tuomg chung nho nhat cuoc song cua minh Hoc sinh THCS c6 the trinh bay bai viet bSng van ban bieu D E BAI Tirang tuong va ke lai cuoc phieu luu vao mot cudn sach yeu thich cam, tu su ke ve nhiing ki niem (gSn vdi goc san), nhiing uoc ma (gan voi khoang troi) Bilt nang niu nhiing ki niem em d i m tuoi a'u tha, bilt mo v l nhiing dieu cao dep, nguoi se yeu cuoc s6ng, yeu gia dinh, yeu que huong hon; c6 dong luc vuon len cuoc s6ng Hoc sinh THPT nen trinh bay bai v i l t bang van ban nghi luan de vua noi v l nhiing ki niem, nhiing mo uoc vua di sau ban luan v l hanh trinh cuoc song tii goc san d i n khoang troi cua chinh minh, cua t h i he minh u l b ix»fb; (VH&TTso 1/2013) GOI Y CACH LAM , D I theo huong mo, khuyin khich su sang tao cua hoc sinh Hoc sinh c6 the trinh bay theo nhilu each khac song ckn dam bao mot so y co ban sau day: - Gioi thieu v l hoan canh d i l n cuoc phieu luu, cac nhan vat tham gia cau chuyen va mot vai net v l cu6n sach ,,,0 /./ - Ke lai cau chuyen theo mot trinh tu hop li, chu y ke mot vai su viec, chi t i l t dac sac cuoc phieu luu (c6 the la mot su viec, chi t i l t gay xuc dong hoac kho khan, thir thach hay mot su viec, chi t i l t hom hinh, hai huac.) de lam diem nhan cho bai vilt; sii dung linh hoat doc thoai va ddi thoai giiia cac nhan vat - Qua cuoc phieu luu phai nit duoc nhiing bai hoc sau sac v l dao li, pham chat lam nguoi hay ve dep tam h6n nguoi Co t h i la: + Bai hoc v l tinh ban, tinh yeu, tinh cam gia dinh, tinh yeu que huangdatnudc ,,,,,,, ^ v a n 107 f1 + Bai hoc v l y chi nghi luc, niem tin, su lac quan, long diing cam + Bai hoc v l tinh yeu thuang, bao dung, vi tha r - Cam xuc dong lai sau chuyin phieu luu hoac neu len van d l de nguoi doc cung suy nghi tim loi giai dap x;mAMm r y^'*.= a (VH&TT sd 4/2013) "MAU D A N TOC |[ D6 T H I T H A N H THUY GV THPT Bach Dang - Thuy Nguyen - Hai Phdng • W S , i' • ill I i ; i , ': V • M, ''Mau dan toe " • G O I Y LAM BAI ^ A Vk kinang - Day la d§ theo huong ma v i the' hoc sinh tu chon kieu van ban va phuong thuc bieu dat phu hop (c6 the la buc thu gui nguoi ban nuoc ngoai hoac du hoc sinh gui thu ve cho ban be a nude; ) - Van phong luu loat, sang, giau cam xuc - Khong mac 16i chinh ta, ngu phap, dung tu B Vi kie'n thiic: - Day la mot y tha ra't hay cua nha tho Hoang Cam bai tho Ben song Dudng "Tranh Dong H6 ga Ion net tuoi / Mau dan toe sang bung tren giay diep" "Mau dan toe" la dac tnmg, la ban sac hay chinh la h6n dan toe, la nhflng gi ki dieu, cao quy, thieng lieng ma eung binh di, g i n gui nhat de khang dinh ban chat cua dan toe luon vinh hSng, bSt bien, du cho dan toe c6 phai trai qua biet bao thang tram cua lich su, du cho dan toe eo phai d6i mat voi su buy diet Cau tho chxia chan niem tu hao, tu ton dan toe, nhung chua dvmg nhung triet l i nhan van, nhan sinh sau sac thi em nhan tha'y "mau dan toe" noi dau? Co the la: + Trong tieng Viet - " thu cua cai v6 eung lau doi va v6 eung quy bau cua dan toe" (H6 Chi Minh), la phuong tien lim gift tarn hdn dan toe + Trong trang phuc truy§n thong cua 54 dan toe anh em tren dai dat hinh chii S: ao dai, ao ma ba ma bay, ao ba ba + Trong nhiing dieu hat quan ho, hat xoan, hat dum, hat vi, hat a dao thilt tha ma dam tham, sau sac, trii tinh + Trong nhung 1§ hoi truyen th6ng the hien tam linh, tin nguang nguoi Viet, the hien dao li "uong nuac nha nguon": gio To Hung Vuang, hoi Giong, hoi d^n TrSn + Trong hinh song, the mii, nhung dia danh khong kho khan ma an chua h6n nguoi, nhung di tich lich su, danh lam thang canh: c6 Hu§, eo Quang Tri, vinh Ha Long + Trong cau ehuyen ve nhung nguoi anh kiet xuat hay nhung nguoi dan v6 danh nhung d i u chay minh dong mau Lac Hong + Trong nhung ang tha van b i t hii: Dai eao binh Ngo (Nguyen Trai), Nam qude son (tuong truyen cua Li Thuang Kiet), Truyen Kiiu (Nguyen Du), Tuyen ngon doe lap (H6 Chi Minh) - Hinh anh, bieu tucrng the hien "mau dan toe" ay da giup em nhu the nao viec boi dap tinh yeu To quoc, long tu hao, tu ton dan toe, nhan thuc eung nhu nhiJng hanh dong cu the de gop ph4n xay dung nuac nha "dang hoang hon, to dep hon", de "mau dan toe "mai tham tuoi, "sang bung" truac dong xoi nghiet nga cua cuoc s6ng hien dai -^u.-'tm' • tinh yeu To qu6e eung nigm tin bat diet vao sue s6ng truong tdn, manh liet cua dan toe - mot sue s6ng ma cang bi eha dap, giay xeo boi ban tay ke thu thi cang "sang bung", toa rang - N§u nha tha Hoang CSm nhan thSy "mau dan toe" tren giSy diep - noi luu giu nhimg buc tranh Dong Ho moc mac, binh di * Luu y Hoc sinh c6 the dua nhi§u hinh anh, bieu tuong (bao g6m ca nhirng gia tri vat cha't va tinh thin) the hien "mau dan toe" nhung can phai neu bat dugc gia tri tham mi, van hoa, truyen thong cua hinh anh, bieu tuong : •: G O I Y L A M C H U Y E N C O N LUA A BAI Vekinang - Ket hop k l nang doc - hieu van ban va Id nang nghi luan, van M H O A N G A N H ung k i ^ n thiic cuoc song va su trai nghiem cua chinh m i n h de bai T H U let them sau sac GV THPT Le Quy Don - Thai Binh 'l}\^^"J^ l^^iUy'i'i ^ ' l O ' i ! -r- ,,, ^ ^, , DII B A I uxl s' ^ ol ' ^' •^•'•'O/ ,V7,d Oi'l'S U\t Cii, i)h iJ'b ditiii it' Mot no c6 lua cua mot ngudi nong dan hi nga - Bai hoc rut t u cau chuyen: xuSng day gieng Con lua khoc 16c tham thuong ngudi chu tim each giai thoat cho no Cudi cung, nguM nong dan quyet dinh rang lua cung da gia rSi va cai giing can phai duac lap di, ong khong cin phai cmi lira nua nong dan keu hang xdm cua ong dSn giup mot tay Ho ckm xeng va bat dku xuc dat xuong gieng Ban dau, lua biSt chuyen gi dang xay va no lai bit dku khoc vi tuyet vong Nhung sau moi ngudi lai thay ngac nhien vi no bdng dung tra nen im lang Mqt luc sau ngudi nong dan nhin xuSng gieng va ong ta phai kinh ngac vi nhung gi xay truac mit Vai mdi xeng dat ma ngudi ta hit xuong giing, lira da lam mot viec that ki la: no rung ngudi de ru het cho dat bun roi xuSng ddngdat ;• va tiep tuc buac len tren , va vui ve thoat ngoai ! j^ w vi T ^ ^ , ^.^.vtv < ma khong the thoat dugc No da hai \kn khoc 16c v i tuyet vong Nhung chinh k h i tot cung tuyet vong no lai sang su6t t i m dugc mot ducmg nhat dung: dung len tai nod m i n h nga xudng , dung chinh nhung bun dat ma moi nguai hat xudng de dung len va v u i thoat ngoai Do la bai hoc vS each vuat qua kho khan va tiep uc buac len bi roi xudng cai gieng cua tuyet vong + Ngudi chu than thi§t nhat cua no da t i m each cuu no, nhung guoi nong dan khong d u kien nhan da bo cuoc de roi ong ta v6 "ung kinh ngac k h i thay lua r u bo bun dat de dung day va thoat a ngoai Do la lai khuyen cho nhung nguai gap kho khan: hay vuat ua kho khan chu dung di dang tu bo + Cung mot tinh hudng xay ra, nguai nong dan c6 each giai quyet b i quan, lua c6 each giai quyet lac quan va hieu qua Trong luc kho khan, eo rat nhi§u each giai quyet dugc lua chon, cin + Quyet dinh lap gieng khie'n lua nhin thay cai chet a ^ >• truac mat nhung cung dong thai la luc no da dua dugc mot each (Theowww.thanhnien.com) giai quy§t tuyet dieu R6 rang euge s6ng, cahoi va thach thuc Anh (chi) hay viet vi nhung bai hoc cuoc song duac gai tu cau chuyen tren + Trong cau chuyen, lua khong may b i roi xuong day gieng phai tinh tao, binh finh, lac quan de chon each tSi uu nhit Chi sau mot luc, moi ngudi dSu kinh ngac vi lua da len duac din mienggiSng kien thuc t h u y l t phuc Co the tham khao goi y sau: Chuyen lira nga xuong gieng Nguai B Nguai viet c6 the dien dat theo nhieu each nhung phai c6 sue toff od n.'>up Jt-yfl uOib ;^AJi>firj ;|aoVl i- Hay doc cau chuyen sau: - Dam bao cac yeu c4u chung: chinh ta, d i i n dat, trinh bay luon song hanh vai Bien thach thuc cahoi cua edng ' la bi quyet + N h u n g x e n g d£t m a n h u n g n g u o i h a n g x o m da hit xuong c h u m t h o n a y , c6 t e n g6c la Bao kinh canh gioi s6 43 N h u v a y , "bao g i e n g se k h i l n l u a d a u d o n , t u y e t v o n g h o n C h o n e n , k h i n g u o i k i n h " o d a y n g h i a la " g u o n g b a u " - n o i N g u y e n T r a i soi m i n h de khac gap k h o k h a n chavo hon t h a n h loc t a m h n v a t r i tue, c u n g la n o i N g u y i n T r a i d l l a i ta'm + C o n l u a da t u m i n h d u n g l e n v a t h o a t n g o a i T r o n g luc k h o g u o n g b a u cho m u o n the he sau dugc " c a n h g i o i " - d u g c " k h u y e n k h a n , t u y can tinh day nguoi ta vao tinh trangxau s u g i u p d o cua m o i n g u o i n h u n g k h o n g n e n p h u thuoc h o a n t o a n v a o s u c u u g i u p cua n g u o i khac m a phai dua chinh minh vao , ic« Vilsi i)"',vn'''t (I'l'il I ' 'i'"'- r a n " "Bao k i n h " t r o n g b a i t h o Canh he c h i n h la n h i m g gia t r i dac sac v ^ n o i d u n g , n g h e t h u a t v a t u tucmg cua tac p h a m m a N g u y § n T r a i d o n g g o p cho n i n t h o ca d a n toe b) Phan tich, chung ' Trai de lai c6 gia tri nhu minh duoc dac sac cua bai tho ma "bao kinh " sang mai muon Nguyin doi - Tren p h u o n g dien n o i d u n g , nghe thuat: ;4f ,'i ^/r.i ''V "BAO \ti ;i + L a n d a u t i e n n h u n g h i n h a n h cua t h i e n n h i e n va cuoc s6ng {U d a n da, g i a n d i d i vao t h o ca Ve dep buc t r a n h t h i e n n h i e n m i i a he KINH" v i n h i i n g c a m n h a n rat s i n h d o n g v a d a y sue song ( p h a n t i c h each p h o i m a u sac, each d u n g cac d o n g t u m a n h , each d u n g cac h i n h a n h QUA "CANH NGAY HE" ti§m t a n g s u v a n d o n g cua tao v a t , g i a u chat h o i hoa, chat nhae ) + L a n d a u t i e n m o t tap t h o b a n g e h u N o m x u a t h i e n t r e n t h i d a n LE T H I Q U Y N H T R A N G M GV THPT chuyen Quoc hoc Hue- TP d a n toe v o i the t h o m o i - that n g o n chen luc n g o n HuS * N g u y e n T r a i p h a v o t i n h q u y p h a m cua the l o a i ca v l n o i d u n g v a n g h e t h u a t t h o 6ng da de l a i tSm g u o n g b a u t r o n g sang D E tao n g h e t h u a t : s u t i m t o i , tiep b i e n the t h o n u a c n g o a i , d u a vao tac BAI "Bao kinh" p h S m d a u a n doc dao cua ca t i n h sang tao cua Nguyen Trai qua bai tho Canh - Tren phuomg dien t u tuong: he + Y thue xay d u n g m o t n§n v a n h i e n , n e n v a n hoe r i e n g cho d a n toe V i e t N a m G O I Y L A M B A I A Ve kinang + Tim r^^r, Bai v i e t p h a i la m o t v a n b a n n g h i l u a n v a n hoc c6 b cue r o r a n g , m a c h lac V a n p h o n g t r o i chay, k h o n g mac I i c h i n h ta, n g u phap, d u n g t u / B Vi kien thutc a Giai thich vin » rcn de can nghi luan: '^u7mf& T r o n g Qudc N g u y i n T r a i c6 c h u m t h a d a t ten la Bao kinh Guong bau ran minh Am thi tap, canh gioi, n g h i a la Canh he la m o t t r o n g n h i m g b a i thuoc l o n g l u o n h u o n g v§ n h a n d a n , d a t n u a c d u t r o n g b ^ t k i h o a n canh nao, ca k h i a an, ca luc ve gia cua Ue Trai H i n h t u o n g c h u the t r u t i n h h i e n l e n n h a n c u (rdi hong mat m a k h o n g n h a n t a m (each ngat n h i p / / thud truong) p h a v a s u can b a n g cua cau t h o , cho tha'y n h i i n g k h o a n g l a n g " b a t t h u a n g " cua t a m t r a n g giua s u n h a n t a n ; m o t uae m o n g chan t h a n h " D e c6 Ngu mot tiing " chm dan de cuoc s6ng t h a i b i r t h t r e n k h a p m o i p h u o n g troi ) * N g u y l n T r a i da de l a i tSm g u o n g b a u vg n h a n each, v§ t a m h n GOI Y L A M BAI C6 TICH VE NGON NEN m N G U Y E N THI THIEN ^ GV THPT Thach That - Thach That - Ha Ngi DEBAI , , : Co tich ve ngon nen Mot toi mat dien, ngon nen dugc dem dat agiua phdng Ngudi ta cham lua cho ngon nSn va nen lung lirUi chay sang Nen han hoan nhan rang ngon lua nhd nhoi ciia no da mang lai anh sang cho ca can phdng Moi ngudi diu tram trd: " O, nin sang qua, that may, neu khong chung ta se ching nhin thiy gi ma't" Nghe thay vay, nen vui sudng dung hit sue minh day lui bong toi xung quanh ThSnhung mot luc sau, nhOng ddng sap ndng da bat diu chay ra, Ian dai theo than nen Nin thay minh cang luc cang ngan lai Din chi cdn motnua, nin giatminh: " Chit that, ta cuchay mai thi thi ching bao lau se tan mat thdi Tai ta phai thiit thdi nhu vay?" Nghi rSi, nin nuong theo mot gid thoang de tat phut di Mot sai khdi mdng manh bay lin roi nen im lim Moi ngudi phdng nhdn nhao bao nhau: "Nin tat mat rdi, toi qua, lam bay gid?" Ngon nin mim cudi tuman va hanh dien vi tam quan cua minh Nhung bdng mot ngudi di nghi: "Nin di bigio thoi tat lam, de toi di tim cai den diu" Md mim bdng tdi it phut, ngudi ta tim duoc mot chiic den diu Den diu dugc thip len, cdn ngon nin dang chiy thi bi bo vao ngan keo tu Ngon nin budn thiu The la tunay no se bi nam ngin kio, khd CO dip chay sang nUa Nin chot hiiu rang, hanh phuc cvta no la dugc chay sang vi moi ngudi, du chi cd the chay vdi anh lua nhd va dia sau no se tan chay di Bdi vi no la ngon nin (Theo Nghi thuat song, Nguyin Quang Nhan) Cam nhin cua anh (chi) nghia cau chuyin trin A Vi kinang Hoc sinh biet each lam dang bai nghi luan xa hoi ma B Ve kien thuc Hoc sinh c6 the neu y kien rieng va trinh bay theo nhi§u each khac Mot s6 goi y ca ban: - Gidi thieu vin di cin nghi luin: Hay la chinh minh de s6ng c6 ich - Phin tich sobg ndi dung ciu chuyin: + Trong thi gioi quanh ta, m6i su vat, nguoi dku c6 nhiem vu, su menh rieng, tao nen su da dang, phong phu va tuoi dep cua cuoc song •.» hM> r;'>ti* "• + La mot ngon nen, nghia la can chay het minh dem lai anh sang, niem vui: Ban dau nen da lam dugc dieu do; nhung v& sau vi tu man ma nen "bi bd vao ngan kio tu" ^ - Cam nhan ve y nghia ciu chuyin: + Ngon nen cung nhu nguoi vay Dugc dem lai nilm vui cho tat ca moi nguoi la niem hanh phuc Ian + Cong hien, mang den Igi ich cho nguoi khac, ban than viec ay la mot su toa sang o + Vi su toa sang ki dieu iy, phai bilt hi sinh fii^ V '''•''^ + Tuoi tre cung muon the hien ban than va sau dat dugc thuang khong khiem ton, thich cao ngao, to minh cao gia + Khi CO nguoi khac lam dugc viec thay the', luc moi thay tile nuoi, an han thi da mugn Su kieu ngao luon lam giam gia tri cua ban than -Kit luin: + M6i nguoi c6 mot doi tay, mot doi mat, mot trai tim Hay de doi mat dugc nhin ro di§u hay le phai, doi tay dugc lao dgng miet mai va trai tim dugc cho di tinh yeu + Hay s6ng het minh, c6 trach nhiem voi moi nguoi, la gia tri cua cugc song Luu y Khuye'n khich nhung bai lam sang tao, c6 nhung li giai thuyet phuc + Y nghia ciia chi tiet viec khac hoa tinh each nhan vat, the hien chu de, t u tuong cua tac pham MOT CHI TIET NGHE THUAT D6C DAO • ^ ;;t ••,1 NGUYEN THANH TRUYIN - Danh gia, cam nhan cua nguoi v i l t ve sue s6ng ci\ chi tiet, nhan vat, tac pham; ve tai nang, phong each eiia tac gia, v l nghe thuat vie't truyen ngan GV THCS Hoang Xuan Han - Due Tho - Ha Tinh (VH&TTsd 4/2013) DEBAI Mot chi tiet nghe thuat doc dao va hap din mot truyen ngan hien dai em da duoc hoc NHO V A Q U E N " ' '"^^t>'-' ^'^^H^Q T ' G O I Y L A M B A I A Ve kl nang - D§ nghi luan ve tac pham truyen, yeu cku a cap chi t i l t Co If fl-^ NGUYEN THANH TRUYEN GV THCS Hoang Xuan Han - Dire Tho - Ha Tinh the ap dung cho hoc sinh cuoi cap THCS va cap THPT - Tinh chat " m o " the hien viec t u lua chon chi tiet thuoc tac pham khuon kho chuong trinh hoc Ch\a chon dugc chi t i l t that su CO gia t r i va ban bac mot each thuyet phuc B Ve kien thuc Hoc sinh c6 the trien khai theo each rieng (rat tran nhung each "doe dao va hap d i n " ) Duoi day la mot huong lam bai: - Trinh bay each hieu v l chi tiet nghe thuat: Chi t i l t nghe thuat la gi? The nao la chi tiet nghe thuat doe dao va hap dan? - Trinh bay suy nghi ve chi tiet nghe thuat minh lua chon: + Gioi thieu v i t r i cua chi tiet tac pham, dien bien , , ^,,,,,,5 Nh&vaquen Motngucd hoi nha hien triet: ^•v.;.v/,v , ) yi/.;; , , i; - Cai gi nen nho va cai gi nen quen? Nha hien triit dap: ; » ^ ' ' ' - Neu moi nguai lam diSu tSt cho anh thi anh nen nha Con neu lam dieu tot cho moi nguoi thi anh nen quen (Truyen ngu ngon lung danh the gioi, NXB Thanh nien) Trinh bay suy nghi cua em veynghia cau chuyen tren cau chuyen + Tinh chat doc dao va hap dan the hien a each ke, noi dung phan anh ,, , , , a.Vi chx hoc kinh nghiem cua nguoi khac? s6ng phat trien ckn c6 nhung nguoi d i tien phong, m o ducmg ,, , (Hoc sinh chon loc va dua dugc nhung d i n chung tieu bieu) [...]... tinh yeu lao dong Y nghia ciia loi day tha'm thia, sau sac , j i_ 5 Lay dan chung tu thuc te', trong sach va ] ,^^4 ^jf, ^, 6 Lien he ban than 11 • y \ (VH&TT sd 5+6/2 013 ) (La Phong-ten, Nguvan 7, tap 1) Trinh bay suy nghi cua em ve loi day con cua lao nong J, 1 G O I Y L A MBAI A Vikinang Day la dang de ma yeu cau hoc sinh trinh bay suy nghi cua minh ve loi trang tr6i d4y y nghia va thu v i cua lao... (VH&TTsd 7+8+9/20 12 ) MOT THOI QUEN TRONG CUOC 1^ S6NG N G U Y E N T H I PHUCTNG GV THPT Que V6 2 - Que V6 - Bac Ninh teAI H O C U N G x u ^ NGUYEN THI PHUONG GV THPT Que Vd 2 - Qui V6 - Bac Ninh D E BAI D E BAI Bai hoc ung xu rut ra qua mot cau Mot thoi quen trong cuoc song G O I Y L A M BAI chuyen > - De bai yeu cau nguoi viet viet ve bai hoc ling x u ma ban than G O I Y L A M BAI - Day la d§ ra theo huong... viet ^ M • r< j:^fv fffli^a : ? v i n/.; • T H E O D U O I D A M ME 1^ KHUAT THANH S A U MOI L A N N H A N BAI K I E M T R A SON GV huyen Phuc Tho - Ha Ngi g_HA THI VINH TAM GV THPTAnh DE B A I * Suy nghi cua em v§ cau noi sau: ' 'Theo duoi dam me, thanh cong se chay theo ban'' , G O I Y L A M B A I San 2 - Anh San - Nghe An r\f> D E BAI 1/ , Sau moi Ian nhan bai kiem tra GOI Y L A M BAI - Day la dang... each lam bai khac nhau hop cac thao tac: giai thich, chung minh, phan tich k h i lam bai tuy theo viec lua chon kieu van ban va phuong thuc bieu dat p h u - Ckn lam ro cac noi dung sau: 1 Dam me la gi ? Dam me la nhung thIch t h u , say me v o l mot linh vuc nao do 2 Tai sao theo duoi dam me thanh cong se chay theo ban? - K h i dam me con nguoi san sang vugt qua kho khan t h u thach, san sang h i sinh... cho con: tron ddi me (Theo N^u em la cau be trong truyen, k h i d i hoc kenhl4.vn) doc dugc to giay do, em se suy nghi n h u \hi nao? Hay tuong tugng va v i l t mot buc t h u gui me neu nhung suy nghi, tinh cam cua m i n h - Can lua chgn, kit hgp cac phuong thuc bieu dat mot each p h u hgp, C O the viet duoi h i n h thuc mot buc thu, trang nhat ki , „ - T u su cam nhan nhiing 16 1 tam tinh, dan d6 cua... thuc to chiic hoat dong khi con nguoi v i b i cuon theo Ian song hgi nhap qu6c te ma d l lang + Tham gia hoat dong ay, em da truong thanh hon v§ nhan thuc quen nhijng gia t r i truygn thong cua dan tgc) - Kit bai: Khang dinh bai hgc lam nguoi cua cau tuc ngu; nggi ca tri tue, t u tuong, trnh cam cua dan tgc dugc due k§t qua cau tuc ngu (VH&TTsdl2/20 12 ) va vh cac k i nang s6ng • 'f • - D§ x u l t huong... sang hi vong - : c „ , : , c \ - , , , 51 CHUNG TA N G H E O D E N M U C NAO? ^ GOI Y LAM BAI 1 Khai quit cai nhin cuoc sdng cua cau be Cau be c6 cai nhin phat hien tinh ti, sau chuyen d i thuc tl va phat hien do da gay su bat nga cho ta Cau da " n h i n " va "tha'y": "thay" nhung dieu rat nhi§u nguoi khac khong thay ke ca nhung nguoi tung trai Theo cau, nguoi dugc goi la " g i a u " (d^y d... tac pham (NgiJt van 9, tap 2) GOIYLAMBAI A Ve kl 1/ nang - Hoc sinh t u do lua chpn kieu bai N h u n g can tao lap dugc mot van ban hoan chinh, v o l van phong trong sang, giau sue t h u y l t phuc, b6 cue can d6i, hai hoa - Bai vi§t ckn the hien diu £n sang tao ca nhan, c6 n h i m g suy nghi cam thu rieng, doc dao 0| B Ve kien thuc M o t s6 goi y de hoc sinh tham khao: 1 Vi tricua doan truyen ke ve... ai? - Co the^ Chi Pheo se noi voi mot so doi tugng sau: + Chi Pheo noi v o i Thi N o v l cau chuyen cua tuang lai + Chi Pheo se noi v o i nguoi dan lang V u Dai loi xin 16 i, 16 i cau 29 mong dugc cam thong va tha t h i i ve nhung 16 i \km, toi ac hSn da - "Song tron ven" la s6ng c6 y nghia, vua c6ng hien vua tan huong thanh qua lao dong; vua s6ng cho m i n h vua lam dep cho dcri gay nen + Chi Pheo... mot uoc m o nao do cho xa hoi loai nguoi trong tuong lai vmfkto: (VH&TTs6 7+8+9/20 12 ) nguoi v i l t ngoai viec hieu bi§t vg nhan vat, tac p h i m con phai hieu b i l t ca ban v l van hoa dan toe cua cac nhan vat B V§ kien thirc N g u o i vi§t dugc hoan toan sang tao k h i the hien bai viet cua m i n h nhung c6 the theo mot so ggi y sau: - Tao dugc tinh hu6ng gap ga bat nga, thu v i giua hai nhan vat: