- Tii ngii e6 dpng ma hinh dnh lai eo siic gpi ta manh me, siie truyin cam ldn Trang nam nhi thai Tran mang 11 tudng lon lao, eao ea ; tdm vdc, tu the, hdnh
VIET BAI LAM VAN SO 3: VAN TV SU
(Bai lam d nha)
BAI TAP
1. De bai 1, trang 123, SGK. 2. De bai 2, trang 123, SGK. 3. De bai 3, trang 123, SGK. 4. De bai 4, trang 123, SGK.
5. Chie'c xe may ngudi eha mdi mua, chua co giay phep luu hanh, hi eau eon trai dang hpe THPT mang ra di. Nhiing su viec gi da xay ra ? Dung ng6i thii nhat (xung "t6i") hoae ng6i thii ba (tdc gia) ke lai eau chuyen dd.
GOfI Y LAM BAI
1. a) Chpn nhan d l : Cd the dat nhem d l cho eau chuyen la Ben bd Hodng Giang,
Mpt thieu phu khd dau hoae Tdi dd chitng kie'n,...
b) Du kien edt truyen va lap dan y : .
- Md bai: Cay lau - xung "tdi" - tu gidi thieu. - Than bai: Cd the ke mpt sd su viee sau :
+ "Dang nga nghieng, vui dua theo ngpn gid mat ben sdng, t6i bdng thay mdt
ngudi dan bd thdn thd tir trong Iang di ra, rdi ngdi xudng bd s6ng, sat ben canht6L..".
+ "Nhin khu6n mat, t6i nhan ra nang Vii Nuong - nguoi thudng ra s6ng ganh nude va giat giii trong nhiing ngay xa ehdng... Chpt toi nghe nang than thd...". + "Than thd mpt lue, nguoi thie'u phu ay diing len rdi lao xudng song. T6i giat minh hoang sp, ed vuon nhiing ngpn la, nhiing dpt hoa mai nd dinh nlu chan nang, nhung kh6ng dupe...".
- Ke't b a i : "Nhin nhiing cuon nude, bpt s6ng qudn quai, vat va, t6i diit timg canh la, timg khiie rl, danh ed vuon minh mupn ngpn gio eat tie'ng vi vu, than khdc... de gui trong khbng trung nhiing loi... thdng thiet".
c) Viet thanh van bdn : Dua vao nhiing gpi y tren, anh (ehi) hay dilu ehinh, bd sung rdi vie't thanh bai lam hoan ehinh.
2. Tuong tu each lam tren, cd the thue hien cae buoc sau :
a) Chpn nhan d l : Co the dat nhan de eho eau ehuyen la Nhiing que diem vd
cd be ngheo, Chung tdi dugc tod sdng hoae Lua diem sudi dm,...
b) Du kie'n cdt truyen va lap dan y :
- Md bai: Nhiing que diem - xung "tbi" - tu giai thieu.
- Than bai: Cau chuyen theo diln bie'n cua truyen ngdn Cd be bdn diem qua
ldi ke eua nhiing que diem.
- Ke't bai: Cae su viee xay ra eo the theo diln bien tucmg tu truyen ngdn Cd be
bdn diem. VI du : "Tbi gia day da chay het, chi eon la nhiing tan tro chum lai
ben biie tuong goe phd, nhin ro e6 be dang bay len eung ba. Hai ba chau nhu hai thien than cii bay cao, eao mai. Tren doi mbi thdm dd eiia e6 be nd mdt nu cuoi tuoi nhu mpt doa hdng. Tir doa mbi hdng dd ngan len mpt khue hat...". Hoac CO the ket thuc khae, ehdng ban : "Sau khi que diem cudi tdt, co mpt nguoi di qua da nang e6 be len, ii vao vat ao banh t6...".
e) Viet thanh van ban : Dua vao nhiing gpi y tren, anh (ehi) hay dilu ehinh, bd sung va sang tao them de sang tae eau ehuyen sao eho ed y nghia.
3. a) Chpn nhan d l : Co the dat nhan d l cho eau ehuyen la Tdm su cua mpt chu
gd chgi Ldi kecua chdng Oanh Liet hoac Mpt cupc ddi bi bd roi,...
b) Lap dan y : Co the xay dung edt truyen dao nguoc thoi gian.
. - Md bai: Co the diing nhiing cau trong d l bdi: "Ten tbi la Oanh Liet. Cai ten nay eau ehu dat eho tbi nho nhimg tran dau oanh liet cua t6i tren edc soi chpi trong lang. Vay ma gib day, cau ehu bd roi tbi de ehay theo nhung tro choi moi...".
- Than bai: Con gd chpi hdi tudng v l :
+ Nhiing ngay dupe eau ehu eham soc, men yeu nhu ngudi rupt thit.
+ Nhiing chien ebng oanh liet khi xung tran dem lai niim kieu hanh va tiln bae eho cau chu.
-I- Mpt tran dau that bai khien cau ehil... trdng tay va "tbi" hi bd roi.
- Ket bai : Trd lai thdi gian hien tai, ke mpt su viee vl eau chil, do mdi theo nhiing trd choi moi, nen eiing that bai trong hpe tap... hoae neu vai ldi than thd mang tinh triet li... i
c) Viet thanh van ban : Dua vao nhiing gpi y tren, anh (ehi) hay vie't thanh bai lam hodn ehinh.
T h a m khao hai van b a n sau :
Van ban 1
MOT HANH VI HAO HIEP
[...] Khi toi vao lop [...] thi thay Pec-bo-ni vdn chua de'n ; va ba hay bdn diia dang hanh ha cau Crdt-xi dang thuang, cai cau toe hoe, canh tay bi liet, co ba me ban rau qua ay. Chiing lay thuac danh cau ; nem vo hat de vao dau cau ; gpi cau la con quy que va nhai cai tay cua cau. Mpt minh a dau ghe ngdi-, Crdt-xi sg hai, nghe va nhin khi diia nay khi dua kia voi doi mat van lon, cau chiing de cho yen than. Nhung bgn chiing m6i liic mpt lam gia, de'n ndi cau bdt ddu run len va mat do bimg vi tiic gian. B6ng Phran-ti, cai thdng co bp mat tan nhdn ay, diing len mot cai ghe, lam bp nhu 6m moi tay mgt cai sot, no nhai me Crdt-xi khi ba den don
con a cdng truang. May hom nay, khong thay ba ta den, vi dang dm. Thay diin
man kich cam ay, hgc tro cuoi am len. Crdt-xi lien mat binh tinh, chop lay lg muc truac mat va diing het siic nem vao Phran-ti. Nhung Phran-ti tranh dugc va lg muc tning ngay vao giiia nguc thay Pec-bo-ni vira buac vao.
Tat ca hgc tro khiep sg, chay ve ch6, va im thin thit nhu vira co mgt phep la. Thay giao tai mat, buac len buc va hoi, gigng lac han d i : "Ai nem lg muc ?". KhQng mgt tieng tra loi.
"Ai ?" - thay Pec-bo-ni nhac lai gigng to ban. Ga-ro-ne dgng long thuang x6t Crdt-xi, lien diing day va noi qua quyet: "Thua thay, con a!".
Thay giao nhin Ga-ro-ne, roi nhin dam hgc sinh dang sung sdt, va noi gigng binh tinh : "Khong phai con".
Sau mgt phut thdy lai n o i : "Nguoi co ldi se khong bi phat, cii diing day". Crdt-xi diing day, vua noi vira khoe :
- Thua thay cac ban treu con, chui con, con mat binh tinh... con da nem... - Con ngdi xudng, - thdy giao b i o - va nhiing ai da khieu khich ban, thi