NGÀY LUYỆN WRITING GROUP IELTS FIGHTER

IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ 30 NGÀY LUYỆN WRITING Group: IELTS Fighter – Hỗ trợ học tập DAY 29 2-Part Question Essay IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Dạng đề gặp đề thi IELTS Writing task khiến người viết đơi cảm thấy khó khăn để giải Đề vấn đề hai câu hỏi yêu cầu bạn phải trả lời Bởi vậy, bạn cần xếp thời gian hợp lí để trả lời hai câu hỏi hoàn chỉnh Các đề minh họa: - TipTip Bạn nên phân bổ dung lượng cho đoạn văn As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? - Happiness is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Phân tích đề mẫu There are many different types of music in the world today Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Có nhiều thể loại nhạc giới Vì cần âm nhạc? Nhạc truyền thống đất nước có quan trọng thể loại nhạc quốc tế nghe nơi khơng? Bước 1: Phân tích đề There are many different types of music in the world today Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? - Keyword: Music - Micro-keyword: many different types, traditional music, international music - Instruction word: Why, need, more important Bước 2: Lập dàn ý IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Ý kiến cá nhân  Music – vital part (Thành phần quan trọng)  Traditional music – more important (Nhạc truyền thống quan trọng hơn) Luận điểm Music plays a vital role in life (Âm nhạc đóng vai trị quan trọng sống) Minh họa  Means of learning language, form of enjoyment, connection (Phương thức học ngôn ngữ, giải trí kết nối)  Express emotions (Thể cảm xúc) Giải thích  Children – taught to sing => delight in music (Trẻ nhỏ dạy hát => có niềm vui âm nhạc)  Adults - see favourite songs as part of life stories (Người lớn – nghe nhạc phần câu chuyện sống) Luận điểm Traditional music should be valued over international music (Nhạc truyền thống nên coi trọng nhạc quốc tế) Minh họa  Traditional music – express culture, history, customs (Nhạc truyền thống – thể văn hóa, lịch sử lễ nghi) Giải thích  Connect people to the past (Kết nối người với khứ)  Maintain national identity (giữ gìn sắc dân tộc) Bước 3: Hoàn thiện phần Mở Như đề cập phần trước, mở dạng Problem and Solution Essay bao gồm bước:  Bước 1: Paraphase lại đề IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/  Bước 2: Đưa ý kiến cá nhân câu hỏi đề Đề bài: There are many different types of music in the world today Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Paraphrase đề bài: There are many different types of music in the world today Nowadays, various types of music can be chosen based on each intereset and personality Mở hoàn chỉnh Nowadays, various types of music can be chosen based on each intereset and personality Paraphrase Thesis statement Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music Bước 4: Hoàn thiện phần Thân Trong phần Thân bài, bạn nên sử dụng phương pháp P.I.E theo sát dàn lập để đảm bảo tính thống viết P – Point Music plays a vital role in life (Âm nhạc đóng vai trị quan trọng (Luận điểm 1) sống) I – Illustration (Minh họa)  Means of learning language, form of enjoyment, connection (Phương thức học ngơn ngữ, giải trí kết nối)  Express emotions (Thể cảm xúc) IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ E – Explanation  Children – taught to sing => delight in music (Trẻ nhỏ dạy hát (Giải thích) => có niềm vui âm nhạc)  Adults - see favourite songs as part of life stories (Người lớn – nghe nhạc phần câu chuyện sống) Luận điểm 1: Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives Minh họa Giải thích International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country Traditional styles, such as (example) , connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity It would be a real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared As children, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment Children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone cannot In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ P – Point (Luận điểm 1) Traditional music should be valued over international music (Nhạc truyền thống nên coi trọng nhạc quốc tế) I – Illustration (Minh họa)  Traditional music – express culture, history, customs (Nhạc truyền thống – thể văn hóa, lịch sử lễ nghi) E – Explanation (Giải thích)  Connect people to the past (Kết nối người với khứ) Maintain national identity (giữ gìn sắc dân tộc) P – Point (Luận điểm 1) Traditional music should be valued over international music (Nhạc truyền thống nên coi trọng nhạc quốc tế) I – Illustration (Minh họa)  Traditional music (Ca tru) – express culture, history, customs (Nhạc truyền thống – thể văn hóa, lịch sử lễ nghi) E – Explanation (Giải  Connect people to the past (Kết nối người với khứ) thích)  Maintain national identity (giữ gìn sắc dân tộc Luận điểm 2: Traditional music should be valued over the international music that has become so popular Minh họa Giải thích International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country Traditional styles, such as Ca Tru, connect IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ us to the past and form part of our cultural identity It would be a real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared Bước 5: Hoàn thiện phần Kết Trong phần kết bài, bạn cần ý paraphrase thesis statement nhắc đến phần Mở Kết hoàn chỉnh: In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music Bài viết hoàn chỉnh: Nowadays, various types of music can be chosen based on each intereset and personality Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives As children, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment Children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone cannot In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music that has become so popular International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country Traditional styles, such as Ca Tru, connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity It would be a real pity if pop music became so IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ predominant that these national styles disappeared In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music Các từ/cụm từ hữu ích:  accompany (v): đồng hành  catchy (a): bắt tai  means (n): công cụ  identity (n): sắc  enjoyment (n): thưởng thức  predominant (a): chiếm ưu  delight (v): làm vui thích  human existence: tồn loài người  arouse (v): khuấy động, đánh thức Bài luyện tập Ex 30: Luyện viết đề sau theo gợi ý: Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success However, some people believe that other factors are more important What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others? Phát triển kinh tế thường sử dụng để lo thành công quốc gia Tuy nhiên, mt số người tin yếu tố khác quan trọng Những yếu tố nên xem xét đánh giá mức độ phát triển quốc gia? Bạn có nghĩ yếu tố quan trọng yếu tố khác khơng? Bước 1: Phân tích đề IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success However, some people believe that other factors are more important What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others? - Keyword: - Micro-keyword: - Instruction word: Bước 2: Lập dàn Ý kiến cá nhân Several factors, Education – most important (Có nhiều yếu tố, Giáo dục – yếu tố quan trọng nhất) Luận điểm Important factors – education, health, individual human rights (Những yếu tố quan trọng – giáo dục, sức khỏe, quyền người) Minh họa Giải thích Luận điểm Education – Most important factor (Giáo dục – Yếu tố quan trọng nhất) Minh họa Giải thích IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Bước 3: Hoàn thiện phần Mở General statement Thesis statement Bước 4: Hoàn thiện phần Thân Dựa vào dàn lập, hoàn thành hai đoạn Thân theo phương pháp P.I.E Luận điểm 1: Standards of education, health and individual human rights should certainly be considered when measuring a country’s status IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Luận điểm 2: A country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development Bước 5: Hoàn thiện phần Kết Thesis statement IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Ex 31: Luyện viết đề sau: Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Bước 1: Phân tích đề Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? - Keyword: - Micro-keyword: - Instruction word: Bước 2: Lập dàn Luận điểm Minh họa Giải thích IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Luận điểm Minh họa Giải thích Bước 3: Hoàn thiện phần Mở General statement Thesis statement Bước 4: Hoàn thiện phần Thân Luận điểm 1: IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Luận điểm 2: Bước 5: Hoàn thiện phần Kết IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Thesis statement Bài mẫu tham khảo: Ex 30: The relative success of different countries is usually defined in economic terms There are several other factors, apart from the economy, that could be used to assess a country, and in my opinion education is the most important of all Standards of education, health and individual human rights should certainly be considered when measuring a country’s status A good education system is vital for the development of any nation, with schools, colleges and universities bearing the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard of living within a country, and this can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical services Finally, human rights and levels of equality could be taken into account For example, a country in which women not have the same opportunities as men might be considered less successful than a country with better genderequality In my view, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development This is because education has a considerable effect on the other two factors mentioned above It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other countries, and increased wealth IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ In conclusion, nations can be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but I would argue that the standard of a country's education system is the best measure of its success Ex 31: In today’s society, some parents are becoming increasingly permissive They not impose sufficient discipline on their children, and in some cases buy them too many things This essay will explore why this is not a good way to raise children and why it will have negative impacts upon them in future While it is understandable that parents want to give their children expensive toys and let them run freely in the streets, this is actually not really an appropriate method of parenting Having too many toys encourages children to be materialistic and does not offer them the same change to develop social skills like sharing Furthermore, when children have asked for the toys, it gives them a sense of entitlement and even power over their parents As for giving children too much freedom, there are obviously a great many dangers in this world from which they need to be kept safe Children also need rules and boundaries to encourage them to develop into mature and responsible adults If parents insist on this permissive style of parenting, their children will grow up with very different values from those of stricter parents Children who were never forced to study will end up with poorer grades in school, and those who were given everything they wanted as children will expect everything to come easily as adults In short, they will lead difficult and disappointing lives, in contrast with what their parents hoped In conclusion, although it is tempting to give children whatever they want, parents ought to set rules and boundaries, and to be careful with how they reward children If parents fail to impose a basic level of discipline, children may grow up with a poor attitude that will cause them and others to suffer IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Lộ trình kế hoạch 30 ngày luyện Writing thực group IELTS Fighter – Hỗ trợ học tập sau Link post theo tag: Chuỗi 30 ngày luyện Writing https://www.facebook.com/groups/616767661847687/post_tags?post_tag_id=138742677478176 8: Day 1: Tổng quan IELTS Writing Day 2: Cách viết Task - Chọn Từ vựng Day 3: Cách viết Task - Ngữ Pháp Day 4:Cách viết Task - Viết đoạn văn Day 5: Cách viết Task - Chiến thuật làm Day 6: Luyện tập qua video - Writing material Day 7: Phân tích mẫu Biểu đồ đường (Line graph) Day 8: Biểu đồ cột (Bar chart) Day 9: Bảng biểu (Table) Day 10: Biểu đồ tròn (Pie chart) Day 11: Quá trình (Process) Day 12: Quá trình (Process) Day 13: Bản đồ (Map) Day 14: Tổng kết Task - Lưu ý sai lầm Day 15: Tài liệu hay cho Writing Task Day 16: Tổng quan IELTS Writing task Đay 17: Chủ đề Writing Tasks Day 18: Phương pháp làm - Luyện tập viết lại câu Day 19: Chữa tập luyện tập viết lại câu Day 20: Phương pháp làm - hoàn thành câu Day 21: Phương pháp làm - Hoàn thành đoạn văn Day 22: Chữa tập hoàn thành câu - đoạn văn Day 23: Chiến lược làm Day 24: Lưu ý làm bài, Những lỗi sai cần tránh Day 25: Argumentative Essay IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts-fighter.com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/ Day 26: Discussion Essay Day 27: Advantage and Disadvantage Essay Day 28: Problem and Solution Essay Day 29: 2-Part Question Essay Day 30: Tổng hợp tài liệu Task .. .IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts- fighter. com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com /ielts. fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/... dàn ý IELTS Fighter - Trung Tâm Luyện Thi IELTS số Việt Nam Website: ielts- fighter. com | Hotline: 0903 411 666 Fanpage: www.facebook.com /ielts. fighter/ Group: www.facebook.com/groups/ieltsfighter.support/... lại đề IELTS Fighter - 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