SLIDE BÀI GIẢNG DẠNG DISCUSS OPINION

BY NGOC BACH DẠNG DISCUSS + OPINION • Discuss both views and give your opinion • Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? • Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion Hướng giải: Phân thân thành khổ tương ứng với câu hỏi đề Điểm khác biệt quan trọng so với dạng Discuss phải thể quan điểm thân vào BY NGOC BACH Difference between “balanced opinion” and “discuss both views and give your opinion” ??? Balanced opinion: both views are YOUR views -> you shouldn't talk about "some people" or "other people“ Discuss both views and give your opinion: you can talk about "some people's/other people's" views BY NGOC BACH DÀN BÀI CHUNG Mở + Câu thứ nhất: giới thiệu chủ đề đề cách ngắn gọn (bằng cách paraphrase lại câu đề bài) + Câu thứ hai: đề cập đến quan điểm đưa quan điểm bạn (ví dụ bạn theo quan điểm 2) Thân + Nêu ý hỗ trợ cho quan điểm + Nêu ý hỗ trợ cho quan điểm (thể rõ ràng bạn ủng hộ quan điểm này) Kết luận Tóm tắt quan điểm ý kiến của bạn BY NGOC BACH VÍ DỤ TOPIC Đề 06/12/2014: Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city QUESTION Discuss both views and give your opinion BY NGOC BACH DÀN BÀI Mở bài: + Viết lại câu đề cách paraphrase từ khóa + Trả lời câu hỏi đề Đề nêu câu hỏi thảo luận quan điểm: sống thành phồ nhiều nhà cao tầng thành phố với nhiều nhà thấp tầng hỏi quan điểm theo ý -> Mình theo ý sống thành phố với nhiều nhà cao tầng Thân 1: Nêu lý nên sống thành phố với nhà thấp tầng + people have to pay less for building services + living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur Thân 2: Nêu lợi ích việc sống thành phố với nhà cao tầng (mình theo quan điểm này) + A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage + A wide range of goods and services Kết luận: nhắc lại ý nêu câu thứ phần mở BY NGOC BACH MỞ BÀI CÂU CHỦ ĐỀ CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city CÂU VIẾT LẠI: Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city MỞ BÀI PHẦN CÂU HỎI CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: Discuss both views and give your opinion CÂU THỨ PHẦN MỞ BÀI : While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages MỞ BÀI Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city Discuss both views and give your opinion Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages Thân 1: Nêu lý nên sống thành phố với nhà thấp tầng + people have to pay less for building services + living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few financial and security reasons Firstly, people have to pay less for building services If residents settle in a private house, they may save a great deal of money since they will not have to pay for building services Secondly, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground and it will not take much time to leave BY NGOC BACH Thân 2: Nêu lợi ích việc sống thành phố với nhà cao tầng (mình theo quan điểm này) + A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage + A wide range of goods and services On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the amount of people who can live in high buildings As a result, the government would be able to use this land to build hospitals, schools or places for entertainment Furthermore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centers on lower floors BY NGOC BACH MỞ BÀI While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages KẾT LUẬN: In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few financial and security reasons Firstly, people have to pay less for building services If residents settle in a private house, they may save a great deal of money since they will not have to pay for building services Secondly, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground and it will not take much time to leave On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the amount of people who can live in high buildings As a result, the government would be able to use this land to build hospitals, schools or places for entertainment Furthermore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centers on lower floors In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice (300 words) Written by Ngoc Bach BY NGOC BACH IELTS EXAMINER COMMENTS + Task response: This was an interesting task question To be honest, I have not seen this topic before You answered the question fully I cannot improve on the technique which you used You stated your position clearly in the introduction and consistently throughout the essay The beginning of paragraph and your conclusion were the ideal places to re-state your opinion All the points which you mentioned were relevant and fully developed and I have to give a score of 8.5 for this section + Coherence and cohesion: Your paragraph structure was, as I have already mentioned, clear and logical.I then looked at your topic sentences These indicated expertly the central idea in each paragraph I therefore scored + Lexical resource: The language meets the criteria (natural and appropriate) The essay contained some good topic vocabulary: low-rise construction/skyscrapers and high-rise buildings/building services/thanks to shopping malls and service chains on lower floors + Grammatical range and accuracy: You certainly used a good range of grammar, including adverb clauses, relative clauses, conditional forms, comparatives and other useful constructions So, this section again achieves a maximum score TEMPLATE 1.Mở bài: + Paraphrase câu đề + While there are benefits to … , I would argue that….(nêu quan điểm bạn ủng hộ ý kiến này) 2.Thân 1: On the one hand… 3.Thân (khổ nêu ý kiến ủng hộ): On the other hand, I believe that Kết luận In conclusion, it seems to me that (Nhắc lại ý nêu câu thứ phần mở bài, ý paraphrase) BY NGOC BACH LƯU Ý + Xem file “Hướng dẫn ôn tập_DiscussOpinion” + Download file “Vocabulary_DiscussOpinion” BY NGOC BACH Hope you guys like my lesson ^^ - Ngoc Bach BY NGOC BACH ...DẠNG DISCUSS + OPINION • Discuss both views and give your opinion • Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? • Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion Hướng... quan trọng so với dạng Discuss phải thể quan điểm thân vào BY NGOC BACH Difference between “balanced opinion and discuss both views and give your opinion ??? Balanced opinion: both views are... mở bài, ý paraphrase) BY NGOC BACH LƯU Ý + Xem file “Hướng dẫn ôn tập_DiscussOpinion” + Download file “Vocabulary_DiscussOpinion” BY NGOC BACH Hope you guys like my lesson ^^ - Ngoc Bach BY NGOC