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Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing ‘Hãy coi tài liệu tập bạn In tài liệu để sử dụng Với câu, cố gắng viết viết lại thật nhiều lần, viết bút chì giống thi thật, viết đến câu thể rõ ý, sau đến việc hạn chế nhiều lỗi sai ngữ pháp, từ vựng, tả.’ Đây cách tốt để bạn áp dụng kiến thức ngữ pháp từ vựng mà bạn có, áp dụng kiến thức chia sẻ tài liệu “Hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing” Link download tài liệu https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2TIoHBJlsvnS1VvTmltM3RsOTdxYlRTY1pFS2xsdGtDam9N /view Chúc bạn sử dụng tài liệu hiệu quả, Đinh Thắng IELTS Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing BÀI TẬP 01 Some people believe that students should take a gap year after finishing school and work or travel during this period To what extent you agree or disagree with this? A – MỞ BÀI Many students are choosing to take a gap year after finishing school 2.I accept that there are good reasons for this, but I believe that they should go to university right after high school instead Viết lại câu theo cách bạn Gợi ý (nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) There is an increasing tendency amongst smb to smth (Mục 2.2 tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing) It would be better (for smb) to smth (Mục 1.3 tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing) Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý 1.There is an increasing tendency amongst many to opt for a gap year between high school and university studies 2.While there are several reasons for this, my belief is that it would be better to attend higher education immediately after high school B – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 01 3- Certainly, it is reasonable to study when they are older for some reasons 4- It is true that a gap year is a great time for students to become more aware of themselves 5Therefore, a part-time job at this time might be helpful later when a person needs to choose a course that is suitable for them 6- In addition, a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge during a gap year 7- My friend decided to go to many places in Vietnam before going to university 8-This helps him to learn more about the cultures, which is helpful for his career Viết lại câu theo cách bạn 3- 4- 5- 6- 7- 8- Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing Gợi ý (Nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) – when they are older  later in life (mục 2.1 tài liệu Hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing) - to be suitable for  to best suit their abilities and interests 6- a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge  the invaluable experiences and knowledge (that) one can gain from a gap year (Lối nói nhấn mạnh: đưa thơng tin quan trọng lên trước - mục 3.2.2 Children gain effective communication skills at school  The effective communication skills at school they gain 7&8 – Cả câu gộp lại thành câu cách sử dụng từ WHICH (Mục 1.13) his future career as a cultural expert Sử dụng hiệu từ AS - Mục 7.7.1 Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý 3- Obviously, the option to acquire an education later in life is reasonable in certain cases 4- It is indeed the case that a gap year might provide valuable time for one to discover their potential 5- A part-time job during this stage, therefore, might be helpful later when a person needs to decide on an academic pathway that best suits their abilities and interests 6- Apart from this, the invaluable experiences and knowledge one can gain from a gap year are other feasible reasons 7- A friend of mine decided to travel to different parts of Vietnam before entering university, thus helping him to develop the knowledge relevant to his future career as a cultural expert C – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 02 9- However, I believe the drawbacks of taking a gap year are greater than the benefits 10Firstly, students might want to leave school but then not want to go back 11- Many people get into the habit of spending money when they have a job; as a result, they find studying is less attractive than working 13- Secondly, some students tend to spend a gap year relaxing rather than learning something useful because they usually not know how to manage their time effectively 14- In fact, some of these people spend a lot of time doing healthy things such as video games instead of taking part in useful activities such as playing sport or attending social clubs Viết lại câu theo cách bạn 10 11 12 13 Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing Gợi ý (Nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) – when they are older  later in life (mục 2.1) - to be suitable for  to best suit their abilities and interests 6- a person can gain a lot of experiences and knowledge  the invaluable experiences and knowledge (that) one can gain from a gap year (Lối nói nhấn mạnh: đưa thơng tin quan trọng lên trước - mục 3.2.2 Children gain effective communication skills at school  The effective communication skills at school they gain 7&8 – Cả câu gộp lại thành câu cách sử dụng từ WHICH (Mục 1.13) his future career as a cultural expert Sử dụng hiệu từ AS - Mục 7.7.1 9- involved in – Mục 7.3 10 – the case – mục 7.7.4 This is the case ~ This is true 11- Thay cấu trúc câu gốc SVO; as a result, SVO Sử dụng từ FOR đứng đầu câu sử dụng từ LIFE – mục 7.8.2 12 – SVO, particularly when SVO Do not know how to manage time effectively  Đưa thành noun-phrase have little experience in time management 13- a lot of time  a good part of their time Phân biệt: spend time doing smth & spend time ON smth Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý 9- Despite these reasons, in my view, the drawbacks involved in taking a gap year surpass its benefits 10- Firstly, it can be easy to leave school, but this is not the case for going back 11- For the vast majority of people who have already got into the habit of spending money earned from their jobs throughout the gap year, university life could become less attractive than working life 12- Secondly, a year out might be spent as a year off, particularly when high school leavers have little experience in time management 13- As a matter of fact, some of these people tend to spend a good part of their time on unhealthy hobbies such as video games instead of useful activities such as taking part in sport or attending social clubs Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing BÀI TẬP 02 In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people consider it valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility To what extent you agree or disagree with this? Để sử dụng hiệu tài liệu này, bạn nên in tài liệu Hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2TIoHBJlsvnS1VvTmltM3RsOTdxYlRTY1pFS2xsdGtDam9N /view A – MỞ BÀI In many countries, the governments encourage children to jobs such as washing cars and doing the gardening Although this can help children to develop, I think children should not be encouraged to work Viết lại câu theo cách bạn Gợi ý (nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) Sử dụng câu bị động Cố gắng paraphrase cụm từ developing countries Thay Although SVO, SVO While SVO, SVO Đưa develop thành danh từ Sử dụng từ work danh từ - Mục 1.5 Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý 1.In many parts of the world children are encouraged to jobs such as washing cars or doing the gardening 2.While this can be helpful for their development in some ways, my opinion is that children should not be encouraged to find work B – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 01 3- Clearly, if children paid work, they could gain several benefits 4- Indeed, this might help them to learn more about how valuable money is –In fact, they might face challenges while working, which could help them understand that earning money is not easy and therefore helps them learn to use money effectively 6- Also, children might gain experience and knowledge, both of which are useful if they learn to link these to lessons at school and their careers in the future 7- For example, a boy who is ten years old living near my house chose to work for a local bookstore, and this job gave him the most basic skills that are necessary for him to become a book seller in the future This example shows that working is important for children Viết lại câu theo cách bạn 3- 4- 5- 6- 7- 8- Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing Gợi ý (Nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) – Sử dụng V-ing đầu câu – Mục 3.4 Hoặc: Sử dụng cụm associated with – Mục 7.3 4- Sử dụng từ appreciate 5- Sử dụng cách nói nhấn mạnh: Đưa challenges lên làm chủ ngữ Đưa understand thành danh từ understanding Sử dụng cụm both … and… 6- Sử dụng từ gained Mục 3.2.1 Đưa lessons at school their careers in the future thành cụm danh từ ngắn gọn 7- Sử dụng mục 2.1: thay từ đồng nghĩa với choose Sử dụng mục 7.7.1: sử dụng từ as để nói nghề nghiệp Sử dụng cấu trúc How mục 3.2.2 Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý Clearly, doing paid work could provide school-age children with several benefits OR There are several benefits associated with children doing paid work Indeed, this might help them to appreciate the value of money Coping with challenges at work can help them both gain a better understanding of how hard earning money is and develop early time management skills OR This is because the challenges they face at work may help them both understand that earning money has never been easy and begin to form good financial habits In addition, all the hands-on experience and knowledge gained from a job may be helpful if children learn to link these to school lessons and their future careers For example, a 10-year-old boy in my neighbourhood opted for a part-time job at a local bookstore, thus giving him the most basic skills needed to pursue his dream career as a book seller at a later stage of life Such an example shows how important early experience in the workplace is for schoolchildren c – BODY PARAGRAPH SỐ 02 However, I think if a child starts work, the drawbacks are greater than the benefits 10 In developing countries like Vietnam, many young children spend a lot of time working under bad conditions to help their families 11 While their peers can go to school, these children often lose the chance to so and could also not have good health and even get injuries 12 Another problem is that some children may think money is more important than other things in life such as family and health 13 Although earning money can help one to live comfortably in the future, children should not think that it is more important than their parents and siblings Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing Viết lại câu theo cách bạn 9- 10- 11- 12- 13- Gợi ý (Nếu bạn thấy cần thiết) Đưa children starts work thành cụm danh từ 10 Dùng từ formal like Dùng từ formal a lot of time 11 Dùng từ unlike Để diễn đạt sức khỏe, nhớ đến từ ‘suffer’ 12 Things từ không formal nên cần dùng từ khác thay Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý In my view, however, the drawbacks to children’s engagement in paid work are often greater than the benefits 10 In developing countries, such as Vietnam, many young children spend hours working in poor conditions in order to support their families 11 Unlike their peers, very often these children lose educational opportunities and could also suffer from health problems and even injuries Or They might struggle to allocate time for their school studies, and their health could suffer as a result 12 Another potential drawback is that some children may value money over other aspects of life such as family and health 13 Although earning money can contribute to a decent standard of living later in life, it should not be thought of as more important than our loved ones Hy vọng qua tập vừa rồi, số bạn có nhiều cách để phát triển câu rõ phần kiến thức mà trình bày tài liệu Hướng dẫn viết câu Mình vui người ủng hộ cách like/comment/share post Facebook cá nhân page/group khác, có thêm động lực để update tài liệu cho hay thiết thực Chúc người học tốt! .. .Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing ‘Hãy coi tài liệu tập bạn In tài liệu để sử dụng Với câu, cố gắng viết viết lại thật nhiều lần, viết bút chì giống thi thật, viết. .. instead of taking part in useful activities such as playing sport or attending social clubs Viết lại câu theo cách bạn 10 11 12 13 Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing... (for smb) to smth (Mục 1.3 tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS writing) Luyện tập Viết theo Tài liệu hướng dẫn viết câu IELTS Writing So sánh với câu trả lời gợi ý 1.There is an increasing tendency