HANDOUT 2 THE INTRODUCTION OF LETTERS In the introductory paragraph, there are several things that you can do: Greet the addressee only in informal letter • Dear Jack, Hi.. Thank the
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GENERAL WRITING
WRITING
HANDOUT 2
TASK 1 INTRODUCTORY AND CLOSING PARAGRAPH
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In the introductory paragraph, there are several things that you can do:
Greet the addressee
(only in informal letter) • Dear Jack, Hi How are you?
• Dear Annie, Hello I hope everything is fine
Tell the addressee who
you are (if he/she does not
know you)
• Dear Sir,
I was a guest at your hotel from 23 to 25 May
• Dear Mr Parker,
I am a student at your college, enrolled in the cookery course
Thank the addressee (if
he/she has sent you a
letter or done something
else for you)
• Dear Mr Lopez, Thank you for your invitation to the reunion party on 15 January
• Dear Mr Hendrix, Thank you for your letter asking me about studying in Australia
• Dear Peter, Thanks for the invitation
• Dear Alan, Thanks for your letter It was nice to hear from you
Explain your reason for
writing (Keep it short) • I am writing to complain about the poor service at
your restaurant
• I’d like to inquire about course details
• I am writing to advise you of the loss of my credit card
• I must tell you about a new movie I saw last week
• Can you help me?
• I am very sorry I forgot to send you a birthday card
Formal phrases
Salutation
• Dear Mr Brown
• Dear Ms White
• Dear Sir
• Dear Sirs
• Dear Madam
• Dear Sir or Madam
• Gentlemen
Starting
• We are writing to inform you that
to confirm
to request
to enquire about
• I am contacting you for the following reason
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• Having seen your advertisement in , I would like to
• I would be interested in (obtaining/receiving)
• I received your address from and would like to
• I am writing to tell you about
Referring to previous contact
• Thank you for your letter of March 15
• Thank you for contacting us
• In reply to your request
• Thank you for your letter regarding
• With reference to our telephone conversation yesterday
• Further to our meeting last week
• It was a pleasure meeting you in London last month
• I enjoyed having lunch with you last week in Tokyo
• I would just like to confirm the main points we discussed on Tuesday
Making a request
• We would appreciate it if you would
• I would be grateful if you could
• Could you please send me
• Could you possibly tell us/let us have
• In addition, I would like to receive
• It would be helpful if you could send us
• I am interested in (obtaining/receiving )
• I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter
• Please let me know what action you propose to take
Offering help
• We would be happy to
• Would you like us to
• We are quite willing to
• Our company would be pleased to
Giving good news
• We are pleased to announce that
• I am delighted to inform you that
• You will be pleased to learn that
Giving bad news
• We regret to inform you that
• I'm afraid it would not be possible to
• Unfortunately we cannot/we are unable to
• After careful consideration we have decided (not) to
Complaining
• I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
• I am writing to complain about
• Please note that the goods we ordered on (date) have not yet arrived
• We regret to inform you that our order number … is now considerably overdue
• I would like to query the transport charges which seem unusually high
Apologising
• We are sorry for the delay in replying
• I regret any inconvenience caused
• I would like to apologize for (the delay/the inconvenience)
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• Thank you for your quotation of
• We are pleased to place an order with your company for
• We would like to cancel our order number
• Please confirm receipt of our order EXERCISES Exercise 1 Thank you for your letter/ inviting/ offering/ confirming I am very grateful to you for letting me know/ offering/ writing I am delighted to announce that I was delighted to hear that I was so sorry to hear that I am writing to enquire about … I am writing in response to your advertisement in (publication) After having seen your advertisement in …, I would like … Thank you for your letter regarding … Thank you for your letter about … I am sorry to inform you that I am writing to the post of … Many thanks for sending/ inviting/ enclosing I should be pleased to attend an interview … Thank you for your letter of (date) offering me the post of … I am delighted to accept the position of (job title) I look forward to starting work with you It was so kind of you to write (to me)/ invite (me)/ send (… to me) I am writing to tell you that I am writing to complain I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with I wish to inform you that I am writing to inform you that Put the phrases above into the appropriate categories: Formal Informal Application letter ………
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Exercise 2 Write the opening paragraph of a letter to: 1 A friend who has sent you a present for your birthday
2 A relative who has invited you to an important family celebration
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3 Someone who has advertised a room to let in his house
4 You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas You would like some information about their courses
5 Your parents are arriving to visit you next week but you are working at the time they arrive Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to meet your parents at the airport
THE CLOSING PARAGRAPH
The content of the closing paragraph depends on what you have written in the rest of your letter, but some possibilities are listed in the following table
Formal Informal
If your letter is making a
request:
Mention what the addressee
will do
• Thank you for your attention to this matter
• I look forward to your prompt response
• Thanks for your help
• Please write soon
If your letter is giving an
apology:
Make a final apology
• Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused
• Please accept my
• I hope I did not cause you too much trouble
• Sorry again!
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If your letter is making a
complaint:
Mention what the addressee
will do
• I expect to hear from you very soon
• Please give this matter your immediate attention
If your letter is giving
information:
• Say you hope you
have been helpful
• Offer more help
• I hope this information will help you
• Please fell free to contact
me for more information
• I hope all this helps
• If I can tell you anything else, please call me
If your letter is making
suggestions:
• Say you hope you
have been helpful
• Offer more help
• I trust these suggestions will be helpful
• Please let me know if I can help any further
• I hope these suggestions will help
• If there is anything else I can do, please call
you next week
• Looking forward to hearing from you
• Looking forward to receiving your comments
• I look forward to meeting you on the 15th
• I would appreciate a reply
at your earliest convenience
Key notes:
Ending a letter:
1) Yours faithfully,
If you do not know the name of the person, end the letter this way
2) Yours sincerely,
If you know the name of the person, end the letter this way
3) Sincerely yours,
4) Regards, (for people who you already know much)
5) Best wishes/ With best wishes/ Kindest regards,
6) All my love/ With love/ Lots of love/ Much love,
EXERCISES
Exercise 1:
Put the closing phrases below into the appropriate categories:
See you soon
Once again many thanks
Once again, I apologise for any inconvenience
I look forward to seeing you soon
Do give my kindest regards to…,
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I should be pleased to attend an interview
Please do not hesitate to contact me on the above number if you should require further
information
I look forward to hearing from you
I look forward to hearing your response
I hope you can settle this matter to my satisfaction
I would be most grateful if you would look into this matter as soon as possible
Please let me know as soon as possible what action you propose to take
Please contact me if you require further details
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Suggested answers for Exercise 2:
1 A friend who has sent you a present for your birthday
Dear Jenny,
I am writing to thank you very much for your lovely present I was very surprised when I received your present How beautiful watch it is! It was a present in my dream
Dear Lucy,
I am writing to thank you very much for the nice present you gave me for my birthday A new tennis racket just what I wanted and I know I am going to enjoy playing with it Maybe it will help to improve my game!
2 A relative who has invited you to an important family celebrations
Dear Aunty Lucy,
I have just received your invitation this morning How lucky for me to be invited to your birthday! I look forward to seeing you next Sunday
Dear Uncle Minh,
Thanks for the invitation to your anniversary You are very kind to invite me I look forward to seeing you and aunt next Saturday
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Dear Sir,
I saw your advertisement on the daily newspaper “Saigon news” yesterday Your house
is the one I am looking for It is so close to my university that I can walk to school I have called you during yesterday but you were not at home
4 You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas You would like some information about their courses
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to enquire about your school and the courses you offer I am considering the possibility of traveling to your country to take an English course, but before I do this, I would like some more detailed information
5 Your parents are arriving to visit you next week but you are working
at the time they arrive Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to meet your parents at the airport
Dear Annie,
Hello I hope everything is fine My parents are going to come here to spend this
Christmas with me Unfortunately, I have an important meeting in my office on the day they arrive I wonder if you are free next Saturday morning, could you meet my parents
at the airport and take them to my home?