0121-542 6614DS/MR12 November 2019Mr Gordon WoodG Wood & Sons36 Castle StreetBristol BS1 2BQ▪ One to ten blank linesbelow the date andalwayson the left-hand side Trang 18 4 Inside addre
Trang 1ENGLISH FOR ECONOMICS
Nguyễn Thùy Trang, MSc
Deparment of Economics, Faculty of Economics and Management, TLU
Email: trangnt@tlu.edu.vn
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7a.m
Write your full name
Be on camera ( compulsory )
Trang 4COURSE INTRODUCTION
Textbooks
1 Ashley, A (2012) Oxford Handbook of Commercial
Correspondence
2 Nguyễn Trọng Đàn (2010) The Language of Business
Correspondence in English NXB Lao động - Xã hội
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Trang 6COURSE INTRODUCTION (cond)
Areas covered
1. Letter layout, content and style
2. Enquiries and Replies to enquiries
3. Offers
4. Orders
Complaints and Adjustments
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Mid-term test
◼ Time: 50 minutes
◼ Write a business letter with specific requirements
Trang 9COURSE INTRODUCTION (cond)
End-of-term test
◼ Time: 75 minutes
◼ Structure: 2 parts
◼ 20 Multiple Choice questions
◼ 4 Vietnamses – English translation sentences
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Trang 11ENGLISH FOR ECONOMICS
Unit 1: Letter Layout, Content and Style
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Trang 141 Sender’s address
Compuvision Ltd Warwick House
Warwick Street Forest Hill London SE23 1JF
Telephone +44 (0) 20 8566 1861 Facsimile +44 (0) 20 8566 1385 Email staff@comvis.co.uk
www.comvis.co.uk
Bredgade 51
DK 1260Copenhagen KDENMARK
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Bredgade 51
DK 1260 Copenhagen K DENMARK
Your ref 6 May 2019 Our ref DS/MR
▪ At least one blank line below the
sender’s address or letterhead
▪ Right-hand side or left-hand side of
the page
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
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Bredgade 51
DK 1260 Copenhagen K DENMARK
Your ref 6 May 2019 Our ref DS/MR
Date 11 May 2019
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
DS/MR
12 November 2019
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address
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
▪ One to ten blank lines
below the date and always
on the left-hand side
▪ Should be on separate
lines as it would appear on
the envelope
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(cond)
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
Surname known
▪ Write it as first line of the inside address
▪ Include:
• Courtesy title: Mr, Mrs, Miss, Ms, Dr, Prof
• The person’s full name (or with initials for
given names): Mr John Smith or Mr J.E
Smith
NOT: Mr Smith (without initials or first name)
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Trang 204 Inside address
(cond)
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
DS/MR
12 November 2019
The Sales Manager
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ
Name not known
▪ If you only know the person’s job
title, you can use that in the inside
address, e.g
The Sales Manager , or The Finance
Director
▪ Alternatively, you can address to a
particular department: The Accounts
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
DS/MR
12 November 2019
The Sales Manager
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ
ATTENTION: MS TERRY ROBERTS
or job title in the inside address.
in bold or CAPITALS, e.g.
Manager
ATTENTION: MS TERRY ROBERTS
address.
the page.
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
DS/MR
12 November 2019
The Sales Manager
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ
Dear Sir/ Madam
Addressing people you do not
know their names :
Dear Sir
Dear Madam
Dear Sir or Madam (or Dear Sir/
Madam)
Dear Sirs (to address a company,
not a specific person)
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
Dear Mr Wood
▪ but do not know them well, use title &
surname, do not include initials or first
names:
Dear Mr Smith / Dear Miss Tan
NOT Dear Mr J Smith or Dear Mr John
Smith
▪ and you know them well, use just first
name: Dear John / Dear Mary
Note: A comma after the salutation is optional
In American English, a colon is used instead
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614
Re: Order No.TD 5644
▪ Directly after the salutation and
separate from it by a blank line
▪ Can be on the left-hand side or in the
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letter
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
Mr Gordon Wood
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Mr Wood
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
We would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward to your confirmation.
▪ The actual message of your
letter
▪ Leave a line space between
paragraphs
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close
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
Mr Gordon Wood
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Mr Wood
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
Two most common closes:
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identification
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
Mr Gordon Wood
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Mr Wood
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
we would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward to your confirmation
Yours sincerely
DAVID JENKINS Chairman
▪ Type name and job title below
handwritten signature
▪ Can give either your initials or full name
◼ Add a title for a female in brackets
before or after her name
DAVID JENKINS D Jenkins
Chairman General Manager
Lesley Bolan (Mrs) (Ms) B Kaasen
Sales Manager Director
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identification (cond)
ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Sirs,
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
we would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward to your confirmation
▪ Write your job title or
department directly beneath
your name
▪ When signing a letter on behalf
of the sender, write “pp” or
“p.p.” or “for” in front of the
sender’s printed name,
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
Mr Gordon Wood
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Mr Wood
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms
of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
we would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward
to your confirmation
Yours sincerely DAVID JENKINS Chairman
Enc Bill of Lading (3 copies)
▪ A line space below the
sender’s identification
▪ Consisting of the word: “Enc.”
or “Encl.” followed by a list of
the enclosed items
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ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD
29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
12 November 2019
Mr Gordon Wood
G Wood & Sons
36 Castle Street Bristol BS1 2BQ Dear Mr Wood
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
we would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward to your confirmation
Yours sincerely DAVID JENKINS Chairman
▪ At least a blank line below the
sender’s identification or the
Enclosures
▪ Consisting of the word: “C.C.” or
“Copy” followed by the name/s
and designation/s of the copy
recipient/s
Trang 31ELECTRICAL SUPPLIES LTD 29-31 Broad Street Birmingham B1 2HE Tel 0121-542 6614 DS/MR
Re: Order No.TD 5644
Please find enclosed our order No.TD5644 for men’s and women’s sweaters in different sizes, colours and designs.
We have decided to accept the 15% trade discount you offered and terms of payment viz D/P, but would like these terms revised in the near future Would you please send the shipping documents and your sight draft to Northminister Bank, Deal Street, Birmingham B3 S1Q.
If you do not have any of the listed articles in stock, please do not send substitutes in their place.
We would appreciate delivery within the next six weeks, and look forward to your confirmation
Yours sincerely
DAVID JENKINS
Chairman
Enc Bill of Lading (3 copies)
Insurance certificate (1 copy)
C.C Ravi Gopal, General Manager
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over to a continuation page
Trang 34Practice 1
Find at least 3 differences in layout
among these following business letters
Trang 37Practice 2
Write a letter in blocked letter style with the following details
Trang 38Structuring the body
4 Point Plan
1 Opening or Introduction (state the reason)
2 Central section (details)
3 Conclusion (action or response)
4 Close
Trang 39Structuring the body (cond)
1 Opening/ Introduction
• acknowledge previous
correspondence
• refer to a meeting or contact
• provide an introduction to the
matter being discussed
E.g. Thank you for your letter of …
Further to our telephone
conversation today,…
I am interested in holiday No
J/M/3, the South Vietnam tour
2 Central section
• Give information to therecipient
• Request information
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3 Conclusion
• State the action expected from
the recipient
• State the action you will take as
a result of the details provided
E.g. Please let me have full details
of the costs involved
4 Close
◼ Usually, a simple one-line closing sentence
E.g. I look forward to meeting you soon
A prompt reply would be appreciated.Please let me know if you need any further information
◼ Incomplete sentences like these should not
be used:
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2 Be courteous and considerate
3 Include all relevant details
4 Use active, not passive voice, when possible
5 Be consistent
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Brief
Keep sentences short and use simple expressions.
prices
enough to advise us
being unable to fulfill your requirements.
requirements.
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Clear
▪ Plan before you start writing Make sure you say everything you want to say, and in a clear sequence.
▪ Use simple English.
▪ Avoid formality and familiarity.
▪ Do not use abbreviations that your reader may not understand.
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▪ Should not be so simple that it becomes rude.
▪ Avoid using short forms like “ I’ll ” or “ don’t ”
▪ Understand and respect the recipient’s point of view.
▪ If you feel some comments are unfair, be tactful and try not to cause offence.
▪ Reply promptly to all communications If you cannot, write a brief note and explain why.
Trang 462 Be courteous and considerate (cond)
Instead of
◼ We cannot do anything
about your problem.
◼ Your television’s guarantee
is up, so you will have to
pay for it to be fixed.
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Instead of
◼ My flight arrives at 3.30 on
Wednesday.
◼ Our Sales Manager will
contact you soon.
Trang 484 Use active, not passive voice
◼ Active voice: more personal, natural and focused: more interesting and clearer.
◼ Passive voice: creates a distance
Trang 494 Use active, not passive voice (cond)
Instead of
◼ Arrangements have been made
for a repeat order to be
despatched to you immediately.
◼ The cause of the complaint has
been investigated.
◼ Sales of the X101 have
exceeded all expectations.
Write
◼ I have arranged for a repeat order to be sent to you today.
◼ I have looked into this matter.
◼ X101 sales have gone sky high.
Trang 504 Use active, not passive voice (cond)
Passive voice, however, would be more appropriate in some occasions as follows.
▪ Giving extra emphasis to a
particularly important noun
◼ All the leading hotels in Singapore
recommend our service.
◼ Our restaurant has been
▪ Placing focus on theaction not the actor
▪ The noise was heard
all over the island.
▪ When you want to hidesomething or tact isimportant
▪ An unfortunate mistake was made.
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Write a letter in blocked letter style with the following details
◼ Ngày viết: ngày hôm nay
◼ Người gửi: Thang Long Garment Export Co., 264 Minh Khai Street, Hai Ba TrungDistrict, Ha Noi, Viet Nam
◼ Người nhận: J.C Gilbert Ltd, Columbia House, Aldwych, London WC2, UK
◼ Ký thư là ông Nguyễn Nam, chức vụ Giám đốc Kinh doanh
◼ Nội dung thư: Được biết về J.C Gilbert Ltd qua quảng cáo của họ trên tờ “TextileWorld”, và đề nghị họ gửi các mẫu thiết kế áo len nữ mới nhất
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Write a letter in blocked letter style with the following details
Trang 54English for Economics
Unit 2: Enquiries and Replies
Trang 56Defining terms
Enquiry : British English
Inquiry: American English
Request: an action of asking formally and politely for
something to be done
Enquiry: a request for information about somebody or
Trang 57Reasons to write an enquiry
1 to obtain information (prices, technical data…)
2 to receive printed matter (booklets, catalogues, price
lists, or reports)
3 to receive sample products , demonstrations…
4 to seek special favors (permission, advice, help,
discounts…)