process writing - Học tiếng Anh thật là dễ
Trung Tâm Anh Ngữ EFL KELVIN DANG, M.A Add: 102/1 Phan Văn Hớn, P Tân Thới Nhất, Q.12 Phone: 0901.79.58.39 - 090.432.56.57 PROCESS A 4-paragraph Report Introduction (paraphrasing topic question) The given(provided) diagram illustrates the production of (the process of producing/ making + Topic; how+ Topic+ is produced/ made; how to produce/ make) + Topic Overview (How many main stages? The beginning and final stage?) As can be seen from the diagram/ It is evident (apparent) that there are……… main steps/ stages in………………… (the + Topic +involves ………main steps/ stages) beginning with………………and finishing with………………… Notes: - Nếu có tranh process khác cần giới thiệu process có bước, viết câu, dùng từ nối meanwhile/ while/… Eg: There are five main steps in the process of producing milk, meanwhile only three stages are required to store it after that - Nếu natural process vòng tuần hồn, ta viết câu overview như: In general, the process includes a series of stages like a natural circle (1 vòng tròn tự nhiên)/ a life cycle of………… (một vịng đời vật đó), but involves……main steps which begins with…………and finishes with……… Body paragraph - what happens in each stage - Is there any relationship b/w stages - Is there any additional material - (if possible )discuss the relationship with the previous or subsequent stages Notes: - Use passive voice - Use connectors of sequence - Change the form (noun verb…) of the the cue words Sequences of process Bắt đầu process: + To begin with, + First of all, + In the first step, Các steps tiếp theo: + Following that, + The second stage is that… + In the next/ subsequent step, +…… followed by… + After that, Các steps diễn lúc: + At the same time, + Simultaneously, Kết thúc process: + Finally, + The last/ final process is that… Example Look at the picture and answer these questions How many stages are there? Where does the process start and where does it end? Is it a man-made process or natural process? Is it a cyclical (in a circle) or linear (one start point and one end point) process? Are there any materials that need to be added to the process? What is produced? What does each stage of the process do? What are the relationships between each stage? Example with detail explanations Example Introduction Overview Body Example The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cementmaking process, and show how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes Model Answer The given diagrams illustrate the production of cement, and how to use cement to make concrete It is clear that there are five main stages in the process of making cement; meanwhile, only two steps are required to produce concrete At the first stage of producing cement, limestone and clay are put through a machine called crusher and become power This power is then mixed and is brought into a rotating heater where it is heated in high temperature The process continues with grinding the material and then cement is produced At the final stage, cement is packaged into bags and is ready for the production of concrete Moving to the production of concrete, the first step is combining different materials – water, sand and small stones in the proportions of 10%, 25% and 50% respectively This mixture is next put into a concrete mixer in order to become final concrete which can be used for building purposes (157 words) Example The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee Model answer The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee We can see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every days Between and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times This molting first takes place days after the egg hatches, then days later, and again another days later After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final molting stage, and in the space of only days it reaches full maturity (169 words) Example The illustrations show how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words Model answer The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate There are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate To begin, the cocoa comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in the South American and African continents and the country of Indonesia Once the pods are ripe and red, they are harvested and the white cocoa beans are removed Following a period of fermentation, they are then laid out on a large tray so they can dry under the sun Next, they are placed into large sacks and delivered to the factory They are then roasted at a temperature of 350 degrees, after which the beans are crushed and separated from their outer shell In the final stage, this inner part that is left is pressed and the chocolate is produced (152 words) Questions The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below Answer ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Questions The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Answer ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ... it a man-made process or natural process? Is it a cyclical (in a circle) or linear (one start point and one end point) process? Are there any materials that need to be added to the process? What... Simultaneously, Kết thúc process: + Finally, + The last/ final process is that… Example Look at the picture and answer these questions How many stages are there? Where does the process start and where... with………………… Notes: - Nếu có tranh process khác cần giới thiệu process có bước, viết câu, dùng từ nối meanwhile/ while/… Eg: There are five main steps in the process of producing milk, meanwhile