(Có sử dụng personal language để khẳng định quan điểm của mình là cái này 'nặng ký' hơn)
1- Câu topic sentence 2 nêu quan đi m và giới thiệu khái quát:
On the other hand, I argue that the advantages of this trend/development
would prove to be more important. 2- Nói v đi m 1:
First,....... It means that ...... 3- Nói v đi m 2:
Second,..... In particular, ...... 4- Nói v đi m 3:
Finally,....... For example,...
* NOTE:
Lưu ý độ dài paragraph 2 có thể dài hơn paragraph 1 do dạng bài này thể hiện sự thiên vị. Tuy nhiên không được làm ngược lại vì như vậy sẽ rất vơ lý.
C- Conclusion:
Viết 1 câu nói là vấn đ này có cả 2 mặt a vantage & isa vantage, nhưng theo quan đi m của tơi thì a vantage/ isa vantage quan trọng hơn
In conclusion, there are minus points to...... However, it seems to me that its
* NOTE:
Nhìn chung là nên th hiện quan đi m cá nhân ở 3 vị tr : 1) Introduction trong câu thesis statement,
2) Topic sentence của Body paragraph 2, 3) Conclusion
II- AN EXAMPLE ESSAY
English is becoming the most prominent language in the world.
Do the advantages of having only one language in the world outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that English is in an outstanding position in the world as it is used globally nowadays. This has caused people to think about whether it is beneficial to have an exclusive language worldwide. Having one language would introduce both pros and cons, but I think that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, it is clear that to communicate in one global language would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would reduce the language barrier by strengthening greater understanding between countries. In other words, the flow of information is no longer deterred, thereby promoting learning and mediating conflicts. Another reason is that it would help to develop a healthier world economy by enhancing trade facilitation. Last but not least, cultural and religious discrimination can be reduced to some extent if all people in the world communicate in the same language.
On the other hand, I argue that there are some obvious disadvantages that would make it better not to have a sole language in the world. First, globalisation in language terms will undermine cultural diversity. It means that the special features regarding ways of life and worldviews of each culture would all be lost if there were only one language. Second, having one global language will definitely turn this world into a monotonous place without any uniqueness of different areas. Consequently, people would not be interested in discovering the world. Finally, this will also be a disadvantageous point for individuals with high
linguistic intelligence since there are no other languages for them to challenge their brain.
In conclusion, there are plus points to speak one language globally. However, it seems to me that its advantages would be more important regarding the loss of cultural diversity, the lack of motivation to explore the world, and a minus point for language intelligence.
PART C - FORM 3: Positive Or Negative?
I- GENERAL OUTLINE (DÀN BÀI TỔNG QUÁT)
A- Introduction:
+ General statement: paraphrase lại đ ài
It is a fact that ....
+ Thesis statement: trả lời câu hỏi của đ ài - nêu rõ quan đi m cá nhân là đi u này “positive” hay “negative” hay là cả hai.
a/. Thiên về một phía positive development:
This development/ trend is positive thanks to the benefits which have been brought to human life.
b/. Thiên về một phía negative development:
This development/ trend is negative due to the drawbacks which have been
brought to human life.
c/. Cân bằng cả hai phía:
This development/ trend has introduced both positive and negative aspects because of the benefits and drawbacks which have been brought to human life.
B- Body: