Topic: some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult Others believe that it is getting easier Discuss both views and give your opinion (5/11/2016) It is believed that living in big cities=> metropolises is getting harder and harder However, others think that it is more comfortable In this essay, both views will be taken into consideration before my own opinion is stated On the one hand, many people assume that living in big cities=> city life is not uneasy To begin with, inhabitants's living environment is seriously affected when there are many factories emitting toxic gases This would lead to be harmful to everyone's health For example, it gradually makes them have respiratory diseases such as asthma In addition, too many people tend to migrate to big mega cities with the aim of searching for better life, which leads to workforce redundancy make a large number of workers redundant.As a result, the immigrants might face unemployment Last and foremost, the cost of living is increasing For instance, ultility costs, price of daily foods, the rental have not deceased => decreased yet On the other hand, some argue that living in big mega cities is more much easier Initially, they can have many opportunities to find jobs Because there a lot of multinational companies, factories in cities Moreover, in big cities, there are usually many transports like buses and subways For this reason, they can save on travelling expenses In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against at everyone’s opinion about living=> residing in big cities=> metropolitan areas Personally, I believe that the the idea that ‘living in the city is getting harder and harder' is more greater (218 words) CÁCH ĐỌC MÀU SỬA BÀI: GREEN : your idea which needs correcting RED : teacher’s comments BLUE : teacher’s correction BAND: 5.5 TA: 6.0 CC: 6.0 LR: 5.0 GRA: 6.0 COMMENT: Not enough words The body is not developed well REWRITE AND RESUBMIT PLS !