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VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY - HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGES & INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POST-GRADUATES STUDIES *********** LÊ THỊ THÁI A STUDY ON TEACHER’S DIFFICULTIES IN TEACHING WRITING SKILL TO THE 11TH GRADE AT A SCHOOL IN BAC GIANG NGHIÊN CỨU NHỮNG KHÓ KHĂN CỦA GIÁO VIÊN TRONG VIỆC DẠY KĨ NĂNG VIẾT CHO HỌC SINH LỚP 11 TẠI MỘT TRƯỜNG THPT Ở BẮC GIANG M.A MINOR PROGRAMME THESIS Field: English Teaching Methodology Code: 60.14.10 Hanoi - 2013 VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY - HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGES & INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POST-GRADUATES STUDIES *********** LÊ THỊ THÁI A STUDY ON TEACHER’S DIFFICULTIES IN TEACHING WRITING SKILL TO THE 11TH GRADE AT A SCHOOL IN BAC GIANG NGHIÊN CỨU NHỮNG KHÓ KHĂN CỦA GIÁO VIÊN TRONG VIỆC DẠY KĨ NĂNG VIẾT CHO HỌC SINH LỚP 11 TẠI MỘT TRƯỜNG THPT Ở BẮC GIANG M.A MINOR PROGRAMME THESIS Field: English Teaching Methodology Code: 60.14.10 Supervisor: Dr HÀ CẨM TÂM Hanoi - 2013 DECLARATION I, Le Thi Thai, hereby declare that this minor thesis is the result of my own research and I have not been submitted anywhere for any award All sources of information in this study which is not my own work has been identified and acknowledged I also state that the thesis has not, wholly or in part, been submitted for any degree to any other universities or substitutions Le Thi Thai September, 2013 i ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS On the completion of this work, first of all, I would like to express my deep gratitude to all those who gave me the possibility and encouragement without which my research would be far from finished I would like to acknowledge with great gratitude the precious advice, enlightening guidance and especially invaluable critical feedback which I have received from my supervisor, Dr Hà Cẩm Tâm I would also like to send my sincere thanks to the principal, the teachers of English groups at Ly Thuong Kiet high school , who have helped me in providing the teaching materials, giving me chance to attend their lessons, willing to take part in the interviews and making constructive and insightful comments for this study My special thanks also go to Mrs Lê Thu Hà, the librarian at the Resource center, who introduced and lent me a numerous of interesting books and valuable materials for my thesis Last but not least, I would like to express my heart-felt thanks to my beloved people, my parents, my husband whose support and continual encouragement have been indispensable for the fulfillment of this challenging work Hanoi, September, 2013 Lê Thị Thái ii ABSTRACT In an attempt to investigate teachers’ problems in teaching writing skills to 11graders at a high school in Bac Giang, the study was aimed at finding out: (1) the problems the teachers might encounter in the teaching process of the skills; (2) factors causing their difficulties The study has been conducted in the form of a survey research, with the subjects were English teachers The classroom observation was the main instruments employed for the data collection These teachers were also invited to join interviews The research reveals that teachers’ time management and teaching methods should really be taken into consideration Besides, the data from the study confirm the fact that the students’ laziness and negative attitudes towards writing lessons all made it difficult for the teachers in teaching process In addition, large size classes with multi-level students are also made the situation worse For those reasons, the study finally recommends some implications to help improve the quality of teaching and learning writing iii TABLE OF CONTENT DECLARATION i ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS ii ABTRACT iii TABLE OF CONTENT iv PART ONE INTRODUCTION 1.1 Rationale 1.2 Aims of the study 1.3 Scope of the study 1.4 Methods of the study 1.5 Organization of the study PART TWO DEVELOPMENT CHAPTER LITERATURE REVIEW 1.1 An Overview on Writing 1.1.1 Roles of writing in teaching and learning foreign language 1.1.2 Approaches to teaching writing 1.1.2.1 The controlled to free approach 1.1.2.2 Free writing approach 1.1.2.3 The paragraph-pattern approach 1.1.2.4 The grammar syntax organization approach 1.1.2.5 The communicative approach 1.1.2.6 The process approach ………………………………………………… 1.1.3 Writing teaching procedures 1.1.3.1 Activities in teaching writing………………………………………… 1.1.3.2 Stages in teaching writing…………………………………………… 1.1.3.2.1 Pre- writing 10 Brainstorming 10 iv Planning 10 Debating 10 Interviewing 11 1.1.3.2.2 While- writing 11 1.1.3.2.3 Post- writing 11 1.1.4 Principles for teaching writing 11 1.1.5 Review of previous studies on teaching writing 14 CHAPTER THE STUDY 18 2.1 Research question 18 2.2 Research design 18 2.2.1 Participants 18 2.2.2 Data collection instruments 19 2.2.3 Data collection procedures 22 2.3 Data analysis and discussion 22 2.3.1 Classroom observation 22 2.3.2 Interviews 29 2.3.3 Teachers’ difficulties in teaching writing to the 11th grade students 34 PART C.CONCLUSION 37 Major findings 37 Implications 37 Suggestions for further study 39 REFERENCE 40 APPENDIX I APPENDIX1 I APPENDIX2 X v PART ONE: INTRODUCTION Rationale Writing has always been regarded as an important skill in the teaching and learning English as a Foreign Language (EFL) On the one hand, it stimulates thinking, compels students to concentrate and organize their ideas, and cultivates their ability to summarize, analyze, and criticize On the other hand, it reinforces learning in, thinking in, and reflecting on the English language However, writing is considered a difficult skill as students find composing in English not easy, many students complain that they lack ideas and cannot think of anything interesting or significant enough to write While most English teachers are often perplexed by these problems in their writing classes, they have to face many challenges and cannot find an efficient way to teach effectively English is a compulsory subject and it is one of six subjects in the national examination that students have to take to get General Certificate of Secondary Education (G.C.S.E) at secondary school Since the New English Textbook Tieng Anh 10, 11 and 12 were in use, besides teaching grammar and vocabulary, four skills such as reading, speaking, listening and writing have been focused Among these, writing seems to be a rather difficult and boring skill as students not find the lessons given by teachers interesting and attractive enough to take part in and therefore, students not work with high motivation, they are in class but their mind are absent Being an English teacher at a high school for over ten years, I have been deeply aware of challenges in dealing with the interest but demanding subject of English, especially with writing skill, it has urged me to seek for a suitable teaching writing method to help my students overcome the problem of lacking “inspiration” in learning writing and create something for them to write Besides, not many researchers have been studied the difficulties of teachers in teaching writing at high schools Hence, it is an urgent need for me to take a serious look at such issue and find a place for writing skills in teaching and learning among teachers and students For all the above-mentioned reasons, I would like to devote my time researching the topic in my thesis: “ A study on teacher’s difficulties in teaching writing skill to the 11 th grade at a school in Bac Giang” I hope that my work can help teachers of English have a better look on teaching writing skills and consult some recommendations in order to improve the quality of teaching and learning writing skills at my school and elsewhere Aims of the study This research is designed to have an insight into the English writing lessons for the 11th form students at a high school in Bac Giang province for continual improvement Within this purpose, the specific objectives of the study are:  To identify the teachers’ major difficulties in teaching writing skills  To examine the causes of their difficulties Scope of the study The study is mainly focus on the difficulties that teachers confronted in teaching writing skills to 11 grade students in the classroom setting at a high school The study of difficulties of other skills thus would be beyond of the scope The study involves the participants of teachers of English and 270 students in 11th forms The findings and suggested implications most appropriately applied to English teachers at a high school, the teachers will be able to find ways to improve their process of teaching English Methods of the study The study was designed to use a combination of a variety of methods to achieve its objectives Firstly, classroom observation with 270 students from classes was carried out to investigate the reality of the teachers’ difficulties confronting in their teaching writing skills In addition to classroom observation, informal interviews with the informants of English teachers were also employed The purpose of the survey is to collect data about the teachers’ difficulties in teaching writing to the 11th grade at a high school Besides, reviewing the related documents is also a method in order to establish the theoretical background for the study Organization of the study The study consists of three main parts: Part one includes the rationales, aims, scope, and methods of the study Part two includes chapters Chapter deals with the roles of writing in language programme, approaches to teaching writing, writing teaching procedures, principles for teaching writing and review of Previous Studies on Teaching Writing Chapter discusses the method of the study, the research questions, the research design, the data analysis and discussion Part three concludes the major findings of the thesis, offers some implications for better teaching writing skill and suggestions for further study are also pointed out PART THREE: CONCLUSIONS Major findings According to the results of the study, the major difficulties of teachers in teaching writing skill to the 11th grade students were found The results revealed the teaching writing at the high school under study was far from satisfaction, the teachers cope with numerous difficulties The challenge mainly comes from the time management, the teachers constantly faced with the shortage of time to carry out steps in a lesson and there were many reasons leading to this In the first place, big classes with multi-level students were of great difficulty for teachers to control students in class and design suitable lessons to all of them In the second place, students’ laziness and motivation in learning caused the teacher’s teaching writing more challenging as what they found in tests did not include writing skill In addition, teachers’ qualification and methods had a great influence on students’ motivation in learning Most of the teachers gave teacher-centered lessons, the teachers dominated most activities in class and they were still affected by traditional teaching methods, focusing too much on grammar, structure errors The data analysis of the observation also seemed to indicate that most of the teachers did not have fully understandings of writing process, they considered the drafts as the final ones and the teachers’ teaching methods mismatched the students’ preferences Moreover, teachers needed to vary the class activities in order to make the students interested in the lessons but the students often found teachers’ lessons boring because of poor activities to be carried out Implications What has been analyzed and found shows that the teachers not satisfy with their writing lessons which not meet the demand of teaching a foreign language In order to improve teachers’ writing teaching skill, within the scope of the study, the following implications are listed to be taken into account 37 Findings of the study seems to indicate that teachers need further refresh training, they should be provided with more training workshops and more professional support to exchange experiences and methods among the English staffs The training programs should make sure all teachers know what Process Approach is and how to use this approach in their lessons In addition, as it can be seen from the review of literature on the PWA that the biggest and the most common problem the teachers have to put up with is timeconsuming, thus, the key solution to iron out this problem is to use pair work, group work and apply modern technology in the lessons Therefore, teachers should be helped to learn how to use those machines Next, teachers should only focus on teaching, not take over other tasks such as head-teachers or group-leaders, and the teaching period should be reduced to 10 periods a week for each teacher and the class size should be small, from 20 to 30 students per class As for students, on the one hand, they should be taught some necessary skills to work in groups or in pairs such as actively contributing ideas, responsibility of doing tasks, solidarity, helping others, giving constructive criticism, etc in order to enhance group work and pair work activities for large size classes On the other hand, their efforts need to be viewed sympathetically, the teachers should hope to make writing more rewarding activity for students, not look so much at what the students have failed to achieve but rather than at what they have actually succeeded in doing For the next solution, the teachers should help students overcome the laziness in learning, give marks for good writings, create games or interesting activities to motivate students to get engaged in their lessons, if so teaching and learning writing skill is not too difficult for both teachers and students Last but not least, teachers must be always aware of being active, responsible, creative, willing to apply new modern technology in order to make the lessons more interesting, informative and realistic to their students More importantly, tests should also be included writing skill, which really makes motivation for the learners - the important factor helping the aims of the lesson can be achieved 38 Suggestions for further study What found in this study is just the surface of the deep river of English language teaching at a high school located in a mountainous area in Vietnam It is necessary to conduct a more in-depth research to gain better insights into the reality of teaching and learning English in the schools The following directions should be taken into consideration in the further study: Firstly, more studies on techniques for improving students’ motivation to the writing lessons should be carried out to get deeper insights into this issue Secondly, a further study focusing on designing English tests which include writing skill is necessary Moreover, within the scope of the study, there has no chance to deal with other factors affecting students’ motivation on learning writing skill Therefore, the study on factors affecting students’ motivation 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Secondary School in Hai Duong Phạm Thuý Trinh (2006), The Reality of Teaching and Learning Writing Skill at Tran Nguyen Han High School in Hai Phong and Recommendations 41 APPENDIX APPENDIX : OBSERVATION FORMS Observation Date: August 28th , 2013 Class attended : 11A2 Length of period : 45 minutes Topic : Unit : WRITE ABOUT A FRIEND Objectives of the lesson: by the end of the lesson, students are able to write a paragraph of about 100 words to describe one of their friends Procedures Teacher’s activities Students’ activities Time of the lesson Warmingup -Teacher gives questions -Students answer teacher’s for students to answer : questions Do you have a best 1.Yes, I friend or close friend? What does she/he to help you overcome problems? She usually … (student can not speak in English but in Vietnamese, teacher has I 5’ => Teacher leads students to translate student’s answer into the lesson “Writing into English about a friend” “She finds solution, finds the ways to solve problems She lends me some money, help me to overcome difficulties” -Students listen to teacher with high motivation Students get involved in the lesson Pre-writing *Brainstorming: stage -Students activities in groups -Teacher divides class into *Group 1: big groups and asks group lists all words relating to characteristics, round eye physical fat group lists all words relating to personalities, black hair Physical me characteristics delivers thin handouts to each group -Teacher calls students representing for each slim beautiful group to go to the board to write words relating with the support from their II tall 10’ partners *Group 2: -Teacher asks them to in minutes hospitable helpful -Teacher checks and give more by showing on the caring honest Personalities modest screen *Teacher elicits some sincere friendly structures -The class is noisy but motivated Eg: She/he is tall/short She/he has a -Students got S + have got/has got + a/an + N -Teacher show all on the screen *Teacher gives a model sentence to show what about their friend: “I like her/him because she/he is studious, eager to learn and always helps me very energetic and hard in groups S + be + adj like are about the task, they actively round face they pleasant out of difficulties” III -Teacher elicits, however, she answers all questions by herself *Teaching aids: Projector/handouts While- -Teacher writing beginning: stage gives the -Students write individually 15’ -Students work hard and are “I have a friend, his/her excited about the topic name is , she/he is years old, she/he has got an oval face…” -Some students ask for more words : flat nose/straight nose -Teacher asks students to write individually in 15 minutes -Teacher goes around to help students when they ask for words they not know *Teaching aids: projector is used to show words and structures Postwriting stage -Teacher first asks -Students are excited to swap 15’ students to exchange their their works to check for each writings to correct each other other in minutes -Teacher follows principles of -Teacher asks students to writing look at what mistakes they IV -Students are motivated to make and rewrite in because minutes writings are appreciated -Teacher uses presenter to students’ screen their (10 visual -All students are willing to write correct again their works writings on works are corrected) -All students pay attention to what teacher focuses on the screen -All writing have the same conclusion as teacher gives first, they can not produce their own sentences Not many writings are corrected, only 10 of 45 The class ends at 8:40a.m Observation Date: Friday, 6th September, 2013 Class attended : 11A6 Length of period : 45 minutes Topic : Unit – Writing a personal letter about a past experience Objectives of the lesson: by the end of the lesson, students are able to write a letter to describe their past experience V Procedures Teacher’s activities Students’ activities Time of the lesson Warmingup -Answer -Teacher gives some questions: 1.Have you ever experienced an teacher’s 3’ questions embarrassing situation? When was it? 1.Yes, I have Have you ever punished by your parents? Why? It happened last year => lead into the lesson 2.Yes, I have Because my teacher complained about my laziness Pre-writing -Teacher reads the task in the -Students listen to teacher 17’ stage textbook, explains to students and and write down all on says what students need to their notebooks mention when writing about a past experience -Students are not motivated, they write as => Listing words related they must so *Time: -The lesson is boring, -last week/month/year/summer - when I was years old VI nothing interest students when teacher lists all things by herself -When I was a grade student *Place: - at home/party/classroom/school/hotel *Things happened: write details what happened -Students receive the information passively *People involved: - friends/ parents/ brothers/ sisters… *The experience affected you: - make me ashamed - taught me how to behave well *Teacher gives useful structures: - The past tenses - Structures: Make somebody + V/adj Teach somebody + N/ to-V Change your attitude/behavior Teacher gives suggestions using -Students poster read the suggestions in minutes VII Dear _, My/embarrassing experience/ happen/ last week./ I / go /school/ late/ get/ bad marks/ be punished I/ set/ alarm clock/ a.m./ it/ not/ go off /I / get up/ one hour late./ I /get/ dress/ hurriedly/ because/ my house/10km/ school./ it / take/ 45 minutes/ go there./ Unfortunately, my bike/ broken/ way/ to school Finally, / I / arrive/ but minutes late./ Teacher / call/ me/ do/ homework/ but/ I / forget/ home and/ she/ give/me / mark 2./ Headteacher /punish/me/clean/classroom / one week./ this/ make/ parents/ sad and/ it / teach/ me/do/ everything/ more carefully Your truly, While- -Teacher asks students to write -Students writing individually in 15 minutes stage write 15’ individually -Teacher goes around to help if -Students not have motivation VIII to write because they find the necessary writing task difficult -Some good students work hard -The low level students share the ideas from the good ones Postwriting stage -Teacher calls three students to hand in their writings after 15 minutes but they say they haven’t finished yet -Teacher has to ask them to continue to write to the end of the 10’ -Students not finish the writing task in class -The writing lesson is boring -Students lesson *Teaching aids: no teaching aid not get involved, not actively They find the writing task difficult -Teacher’s method (ask students to write individually) here is not suitable, few students can complete writings The class ends at 10:30 a.m IX APPENDIX : QUESTIONS FOR INTERVIEW The questions are designed to find out what teacher’s difficulties are after giving a writing lesson and the reasons for those List of the questions Question 1: Do you think eliciting is a good technique to revise necessary words for the writing topic? And you conduct the techniques properly Question 2: Do you think you provided enough vocabulary and structures for students to write? Question 3: Do you know the reason why many students were not engaged in the lesson? Question 4: Do you think time was well-divided among stages in your lesson? Question 5: Do you find your students having difficulties in writing? And what are the causes? Question 6: Why wasn’t peer-correction used in your lesson? Question 7: Why didn’t you give chance for your students to rewrite their drafts which must be done in a writing lesson? Question 8: Are your students in the same or different level? How difficult is it when you teach multi-level students in a class ? Question : Why were there only pre-writing and while-writing stages in your lesson? Question 10: Do you think you achieved the aims of your lesson? Are you satisfied with your lesson? Why? / Why not? X ... WRITING SKILL TO THE 11TH GRADE AT A SCHOOL IN BAC GIANG NGHIÊN CỨU NHỮNG KHÓ KHĂN CỦA GIÁO VIÊN TRONG VIỆC DẠY KĨ NĂNG VIẾT CHO HỌC SINH LỚP 11 TẠI MỘT TRƯỜNG THPT Ở BẮC GIANG M.A MINOR PROGRAMME... Vietnamese Bộ giáo dục đào tạo (2006), Tài liệu bồi dưỡng giáo viên, thực chương trình, sách giáo khoa lớp 11 THPT, Nxb Giáo dục, Hà Nội Đỗ Tuấn Minh (2008), Tài liệu bồi dưỡng giáo viên THPT “ Đổi... (2008), Tài liệu bồi dưỡng giáo viên THPT “ Đổi phương pháp dạy học theo chương trình sách giáo khoa lớp 11 mới”, Đại học Ngoại ngữ, Đại học Quốc gia Hà Nội, Hà Nội English Brookes, A & Grundy,