UNIT 1 WRITING TASK 1

IELTS WRITING TASK Nguyễn Đình Phúc 2-3 PARAGRAPHS GROUP INFORMATION BODY DIFFERENCE SIMILARITY - sentences - sentences The table below shows some background information on the staff working in a global hotel chain Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Expression  The percentage of staff with a language qualification Noun Phrase  The proportion of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language Relative Clause  The figure for employees who achieved a degree of linguistics Relative Clause + Synonym Expression  The percentage of staff speaking two or more languages Relative Clause Reduction  The proportion of employees who could speak at least two languages Relative Clause  The figure for employees who were multilingual Relative Clause + Synonym Expression  The percentage of employees with previous work experience Noun Phrase  The proportion of staff who had past work experience Relative Clause  The figure for staff having past work experience Relative Clause Reduction Expression FROM …… TO …… TO…… FROM …… TO…… BY…… An increase/decrease of …  From 5% in 1975 to 20% in 2010  To 20% in 2010  To 20% in 2010 from 5% in 1975  By 15% from 1975 to 2010 = An increase of 15% in 25 years PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification Cơ bản: The Proportion of + Noun + made up / accounted for + SỐ LIỆU + TIME The proportion of employees with language qualification accounted for 5% in 1975, 22% in 2000 and 20% in 2010 (19 words) Nâng cao: There +be + TREND + SL+ BEFORE +VING/NOUN +SL Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language, from 5% to 22% before decreasing slightly by % in 2010 (34 words) PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification Từ năm 1975 đến năm 2000, có tăng đáng kể tỷ lệ nhân viên có ngơn ngữ từ 5% lên 22% TRƯỚC KHI giảm nhẹ khoảng 2% vào năm 2010 Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language, from 5% to 22% BEFORE decreasing slightly by % in 2010 (34 words) PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees Cơ bản: The percentage of + Noun + BE + SỐ LIỆU + TIME The percentage of employees speaking two or more languages was 10% in 1975 (13 words) Nâng cao: Số liệu + BE + the percentage/proportion + of + Noun + Who/ Which/ That + (S) + V Only 10% were the percentage of employees in Shore Hotel who were able to speak at least two languages / were multilingual in 1975 (22 words) PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees Cơ bản: S+ V+ adv + SL + TIME, then + V + SL + TIME The percentage of employees speaking two or more languages went up slightly to 23%, then increased to 79% in 2010 Nâng cao: S+ V + adv + SỐ LIỆU + Time, Relative Clause, additional information In the next 15 years, this figure went up slightly to 23%, which was followed by a dramatic growth at 79% in 2010, an increase of 56% PARAGRAPH 2: Multilingual Employees Chỉ có 10% tỷ lệ phần trăm nhân viên khách sạn Shore nói hai ngơn ngữ năm 1975 Trong 15 năm tới, số tăng lên 23%, số theo sau bỏi tăng trưởng đáng kể mức 79% 2010, tăng 56% Only 10% were the percentage of Shore Hotel’s employees who were able to speak at least two languages in 1975 In the next 15 years, this figure went up slightly to 23%, which was followed by a dramatic growth at 79% in 2010, an increase of 56% (47 words) PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience Cấu trúc : S + accounted for + SL + TIME Cấu trúc : There was a fluctuation + TIME, hitting a low at + SL and reaching a peak at + SL Meanwhile, staff with past working experience accounted for 75% in 1975 Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the first 25 years, reaching a peak at 78% in 1985 and hitting a low at 50% in 2000 PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience Cấu trúc : S + showed/ witnessed/ experienced + Trend, BEFORE + Ving + SL Cấu trúc : There + be + (a/an) +adj+ increase(s)/ decrease(s) in something It then showed a significant decline with the proportion at 45% in 2005 before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010 There was a significant decrease in the proportion of past working experience at 45% in 2005 before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010 PARAGRAPH 3: Previous Work Experience Trong đó, nhân viên có kinh nghiệm làm việc chiếm 75% 1975 Sau đó, cho thấy suy giảm đáng kể với tỷ lệ 45% 2005 trước tăng nhẹ lên 67% 2010 Meanwhile, staff with past working experience accounted for 75% in 1975 It then showed a significant decline with the proportion at 45% in 2005 before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010 SAMPLE The table illustrates the percentage of employees working in three different categories in Shore Hotel between 1975 and 2010, over 35 years It is clear that the proportion of multilingual employees increased dramatically while Shore Hotel witnessed a slight decrease over 35 years It is also noticeable that degree of linguistics gained the smallest figure, compared to the other types   Between 1975 and 2000, there was a significant rise in the percentage of employees who held a qualification in a foreign language, from 5% to 22% before decreasing slightly by % in 2010 Only 10% were the percentage of Shore Hotel’s employees who were able to speak at least two languages in 1975 In the next 15 years, this figure went up slightly to 23%, which was followed by a dramatic growth at 79% in 2010, an increase of 56% Meanwhile, staff with past working experience accounted for 75% in 1975, It then showed a significant decline with the proportion at 45% before increasing minimally to 67% in 2010 (170 words) ... increase/decrease of …  From 5% in 19 75 to 20% in 2 010  To 20% in 2 010  To 20% in 2 010 from 5% in 19 75  By 15 % from 19 75 to 2 010 = An increase of 15 % in 25 years PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification... in 2 010 (34 words) PARAGRAPH 1: Language Qualification Từ năm 19 75 đến năm 2000, có tăng đáng kể tỷ lệ nhân viên có ngôn ngữ từ 5% lên 22% TRƯỚC KHI giảm nhẹ khoảng 2% vào năm 2 010 Between 19 75... language qualification accounted for 5% in 19 75, 22% in 2000 and 20% in 2 010 (19 words) Nâng cao: There +be + TREND + SL+ BEFORE +VING/NOUN +SL Between 19 75 and 2000, there was a significant rise