Suggested answer to task 2 essays cambridge IELTS 6

Cam Essay Topics Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of Test advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold To what extent you agree or disagree? Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more Test money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both views and give your opinion Some people believe that visitors to other countries should Test follow local customs and behaviour Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences Discuss both views and give your opinion Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things Test and avoiding change Others, however, think that change is always a good thing Discuss both views and give your opinion CAMBRIDGE IELTS - TEST Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold To what extent you agree or disagree? SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Opinion Essay (Agree or Disagree) Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the power of advertising INTRODUCTION - Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my point of view with one short and simple sentence (totally agree) - Paragraph 1: Advertising helps promote the sales of products by providing necessary information to potential customers through the means of media with huge coverage BODY - Paragraph 2: Sometimes influential advertising manipulates people into purchasing products that they not really need Using images of celebrities to advertise a product line CONCLUSION Restate my opinion with a clear and direct sentence (totally agree) Sample answer It is widely believed that advertising, not the real need of consumers, leads to the popularity of a product Personally, I strongly agree with such a statement Firstly, advertising promotes the sales of products by providing necessary information for potential customers through the means of media, particularly TV, with huge coverage As a matter of fact, when in possession of a TV or a computer connected to the Internet, everyone would see advertisements almost everywhere, which would help them to know more specifically about their desirable goods Compared to the past when the power of advertising would not be enough to spark attention, people now have closer access to modern commodities Without advertising, producers would not be able to reach out to their buyers owing to a struggle to introduce or popularize their new lines of product Secondly, I would say that under various circumstances, influential advertisements manipulate people into purchasing something they have no need for It is common that images of sport or entertainment celebrities would be selected for commercial purposes, inflicting huge impacts on buyers, especially their fans For example, if Ronaldo, who is an international famous football player, participated in a commercial advertisement on TV about a new product line of men’s perfume, an enormous number of his loyal fans would buy those goods This is because they want to be like their idols or simply it is a way to express their admiration and support In conclusion, I think advertising is factored in boosting the sales of a product in spite of the insignificance of social needs for it (264 words) Useful vocabulary: - Potential customers: Khách hàng tiềm - Huge coverage: Tầm phủ sóng rộng lớn - Have closer access to modern commodities: Có thể có tiếp cận gần với hàng hóa đại - Reach out to their buyers: Vươn tới khách hàng - New lines of product: Các dòng sản phẩm - Influential advertisements: Những quảng cáo có ảnh hưởng lớn - Sport or entertainment celebrities: Người tiếng lĩnh vực giải trí thể thao - Commercial purposes: Mục đích thương mại CAMBRIDGE IELTS – TEST Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both views and give your opinion SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Discussion + opinion essay (Discuss both views and give your opinion) Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the difference in salaries between sport celebrities and other professions INTRODUCTION - Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think this is unfair) - Paragraph 1: reasons why some people think sport celebrities’ high salaries are justifiable Consistent hardwork and harsh training BODY Participation in local or international competitions to gain honor for their country - Paragraph 2: reasons why others think it is unfair Other professions which are indispensable and much more essential for society such as scientists or doctors They are paid much less than sport celebrities despite their great contributions  Sometimes sport stars might set a bad example or cause severe damage to the image of their country All of those stars still receive huge payment and sponsorships, which is a sign of unfairness CONCLUSION Restate my favorable side Sample answer People have different views about the huge difference in salaries between sport stars and people of other professions In my opinion, I would argue that it is unfair for people working in other fields On the one hand, some people have several reasons for their support for sport stars’ current salaries Firstly, they believe that becoming a successful individual in the field of sports would require consistent hardwork and harsh training regulations If those celebrities did not have considerable determination, their chance of worldwide acknowledgement would be fragile Therefore, they truly deserve high salaries according to what they have to go through Secondly, they represent their countries to participate in international competitions, such as the World Cup, to gain honor for their nations, which justifies their enormous earnings On the other hand, I would side with those who think that it is unfair for other people Other professions such as scientists or doctors are indispensable and much more essential for social development and security However, science or medical experts are paid much less than sport celebrities regardless of their great contributions to techonological advancement and health care Furthermore, sometimes sport stars might set a bad example or cause severe damage to the image of their country All of those stars still receive huge payment and sponsorships in comparison with that of scientists and doctors, which is a sign of unfairness In conclusion, I agree with people who think paying sport professionals much higher than those who silently make contributions to society is unreasonable (252 words) Useful vocabulary: - Consistent hardwork and harsh training regulations: Sự chăm bền bỉ điều lệ luyện tập khắc nghiệt - Considerable determination: Sự kiên đáng kể - Worldwide acknowledgement: Sự công nhận toàn cầu - Gain honor for: Lấy danh dự cho - Social development and security: Phát triển an toàn xã hội - A sign of unfairness: Một dấu hiệu bất công CAMBRIDGE IELTS – TEST Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences Discuss both views and give your opinion SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Discussion + opinion essay (Discuss both views and give your opinion) Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the adherence to the new customs INTRODUCTION Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think the host country should welcome differences in culture) - Paragraph 1: reasons why some people think tourists should follow new customs BODY Integration into a new environment Avoiding conflicts Paragraph 2: reasons why others think cultural should be welcomed  Culture diverges significantly, countries and regions  A hindrance to tourism CONCLUSION Restate my favorable side depending on different Sample answer There are different opinions about whether visitors should comply with local traditions or their lifestyles should be accepted In my opinion, new patterns of belief and behavior should be welcomed in a new environment On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people think tourists should adhere to the new customs Firstly, such adherence would enable them to integrate more easily and quickly into the new environment Clearly if a person who comes from the US understood table manners or knew how to use chopsticks and , he would familiarize himself with Vietnamese traditions after a few days Secondly, following new customs in the host country would play a part in avoiding social conflicts and, sometimes, hostility A sense of isolation and loneliness could be the price for those who refuse to adapt to the new environment On the other hand, I would argue that it would be more suitable for a new way of thinking to be warmly accepted Culture diverges tremendously across different countries and regions,depending on their historial backgrounds Therefore, it is rather absurd to compel tourists to comply with the host country’s lifestyles In addition, such permission would be a powerful leverage to develop the tourism industy of the host country On being allowed to behave according to their cultural standards, visitors would feel respected and satisfied Also of great significance is their recommendation to their friends and relatives to travel to those places, leading to the growth of tourism In conclusion, I would agree with the people who support the idea of appreciating every cultural difference (266 words) Useful vocabulary: 11 - Comply with local traditions: Tuân theo phong tục địa phương - New patterns of belief and behavior: Lối suy nghĩ cư xử - Adhere to the new customs: Tuân theo phong tục - Integrate more easily and quickly into the new environment: Hòa nhập dễ dàng nhanh chóng vào mơi trường - Social conflicts and, sometimes, hostility: Đối lập xã hội hằn học - A sense of isolation and loneliness: Cảm giác cô lập cô đơn - Adapt to the new environment: Thích nghi với mơi trường - Compel tourists to comply with the host country’s lifestyles: Bắt buộc du khách phải tuân theo lối sống quốc gia mà họ đến thăm - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about whether or not people should make changes in life INTRODUCTION - Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think change is a good thing) - Paragraph 1: reasons why some people prefer spending time doing the same things They have passion for what they BODY A fear of uncertainty - Paragraph 2: reasons why others think change is always a good Thing Bringing new experiences Fortifying characteristics Restate my favorable side 13 CONCLUSION CAMBRIDGE IELTS – TEST Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others, however, think that change is always a good thing Discuss both views and give your opinion SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Discussion + opinion essay (Discuss both views and give your opinion) Structuring the essay Sample answer Many people show preference for repeating their daily routine while others always look for change as they believe change would bring more benefits In my opinion, I would agree with the latter point of view On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people only want to stick to their routine activities Firstly, simply they have passion for what they are doing everyday For example, street artists in Vietnam love creating colorful artworks in public without any wish for change despite little earnings Secondly, some people have merely adopted a fear of uncertainty that prevents them from adjusting their ways of life If they changed their current jobs, for example, there would be no guarantee that other jobs would bring the same level of satisfaction as the previous one That would explain why they embrace the repetition rather than change On the other hand, I would side with those who think change is better People would have the chance to undergo new exciting experiences For example, instead of staying at home to watch TV, some people could go on a mountain climbing or motorbike trip to enjoy the open air Furthermore, making changes in one’s life is believed to fortify his characteristics or talents When a person only focuses on what he is doing on a daily basis, he would never know his limits or his potential A song composer would never discover his aptitude for singing if he did not get on stage to sing his favorite vocals In conclusion, although legitimate reasons for a life without change are vaired, I believe adjustment to what one does repeatedly is a better choice (275 words) Useful vocabulary 14 - Repeating their daily routine: Lặp lại hoạt động thường ngày - Have passion for: Có đam mê cho - A fear of uncertainty: Sự sợ hãi điều không chắn - The same level of satisfaction: Cùng mức thỏa mãn - Embrace the repetition: Chấp nhận lặp lại - Fortify his characteristics or talents: Củng cố tính cách tài - His limits or his potential: Giới hạn tiềm ... insignificance of social needs for it ( 26 4 words) Useful vocabulary: - Potential customers: Khách hàng tiềm - Huge coverage: Tầm phủ sóng rộng lớn - Have closer access to modern commodities: Có thể có... be enough to spark attention, people now have closer access to modern commodities Without advertising, producers would not be able to reach out to their buyers owing to a struggle to introduce... Sự cơng nhận tồn cầu - Gain honor for: Lấy danh dự cho - Social development and security: Phát triển an to n xã hội - A sign of unfairness: Một dấu hiệu bất công CAMBRIDGE IELTS – TEST Some people