IELTS writing task 2 parenting courses ielts nguyenhuyen

BÀI MẪU IELTS WRITING TASK – PARENTING COURSES As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth To what extent you agree or disagree? MỞ BÀI câu – paraphrase lại đề thi cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa Vậy có mở hồn chỉnh: One of parents’ most important responsibilities is perhaps taking good care of their offspring It is believed that it should be compulsory for all mums and dads to take parenting courses so that they are better prepared for parenthood While I accept that such classes are beneficial, I not agree that they should be mandatory THÂN BÀI OUTLINE THÂN BÀI CHUẨN BỊ TỪ VỰNG THÂN BÀI HOÀN CHỈNH On the one hand, parents would benefit a great deal from parenting classes First, such courses provide mothers and fathers with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages Parents who decide to take parenting courses will have a better understanding of their children’s needs; hence, they can take the best care of them Second, mums and dads in parenting classes are equipped with basic medical training to deal with emergency situations more effectively For instance, first aid training teaches parents what to if their child has a high fever or a breathing issue Despite such benefits of taking part in parenting courses or workshops, I believe that they should not be compulsory This is because many parents, especially those who struggle financially, have to work overtime, in the evenings or even at weekends, just to make ends meet Forcing them to attend those classes would adversely affect their work and their lives Therefore, I think that parents should be free to decide whether or not they want to participate in those courses instead of being forced to so KẾT BÀI Huyền thường làm kết cách paraphrase mở bài: Vậy có kết sau: In conclusion, in spite of some benefits that parenting classes offer, I believe that they should be optional rather than compulsory SAMPLE ANSWER Bài mẫu review giám khảo xứ nên bạn yên tâm tải làm tài liệu tham khảo One of parents’ most important responsibilities is perhaps taking good care of their offspring It is believed that it should be compulsory for all mums and dads to take parenting courses so that they are better prepared for parenthood While I accept that such classes are beneficial, I not agree that they should be mandatory Một trách nhiệm quan trọng cha mẹ có lẽ chăm sóc tốt họ Người ta tin tất người mẹ người cha nên tham gia khóa học ni dạy để họ chuẩn bị tốt cho việc làm cha mẹ Mặc dù chấp nhận lớp có lợi, tơi khơng đồng ý chúng nên mang tính bắt buộc On the one hand, parents would benefit a great deal from parenting classes First, such courses provide mothers and fathers with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages Parents who decide to take parenting courses will have a better understanding of their children’s needs; hence, they can take the best care of them Second, mums and dads in parenting classes are equipped with basic medical training to deal with emergency situations more effectively For instance, first aid training teaches parents what to if their child has a high fever or a breathing issue Một mặt, phụ huynh hưởng lợi nhiều từ lớp ni dạy Đầu tiên, khóa học cung cấp cho bà mẹ ông bố kiến thức chuyên sâu cách nuôi dạy đứa trẻ giai đoạn phát triển khác Phụ huynh định tham gia khóa học ni dạy hiểu rõ nhu cầu họ; đó, họ chăm sóc tốt cho chúng Thứ hai, mẹ cha lớp nuôi dạy trang bị huấn luyện y tế để đối phó với tình khẩn cấp hiệu Ví dụ, đào tạo sơ cứu dạy cho cha mẹ phải làm bị sốt cao khó thở Despite such benefits of taking part in parenting courses or workshops, I believe that they should not be compulsory This is because many parents, especially those who struggle financially, have to work overtime, in the evenings or even at weekends, just to make ends meet Forcing them to attend those classes would adversely affect their work and their lives Therefore, I think that parents should be free to decide whether or not they want to participate in those courses instead of being forced to so Mặc dù có lợi ích tham gia khóa học hội thảo nuôi dạy cái, tin chúng khơng nên mang tính bắt buộc Điều nhiều phụ huynh, đặc biệt người khó khăn tài chính, phải làm thêm giờ, vào buổi tối chí vào cuối tuần, để kiếm đủ sống Buộc họ tham gia lớp học ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến công việc sống họ Do đó, tơi nghĩ phụ huynh nên tự định liệu họ có muốn tham gia vào khóa học hay khơng thay bị buộc phải làm In conclusion, in spite of some benefits that parenting classes offer, I believe that they should be optional rather than compulsory (written by Nguyen Huyen) Tóm lại, có số lợi ích mà lớp nuôi dạy mang lại, tin chúng nên mang tính tùy chọn thay bắt buộc  ... from parenting classes First, such courses provide mothers and fathers with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages Parents who decide to take parenting courses. .. from parenting classes First, such courses provide mothers and fathers with in-depth knowledge about how to raise a kid at different developmental stages Parents who decide to take parenting courses. .. participate in those courses instead of being forced to so KẾT BÀI Huyền thường làm kết cách paraphrase mở bài: Vậy có kết sau: In conclusion, in spite of some benefits that parenting classes offer,