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1 IELTS CAMBRIDGE 7 Test 1 It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.. Discuss both views and give you

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IELTS CAMBRIDGE 7

Test 1

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However,

it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician

Discuss both views and give your opinion

Test 2

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of

an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Discuss both views and give your opinion

Test 3

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, satisfaction is an important element of individual well

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the workers?

Test 4

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regar

useful to an employer

What, in your university?

IELTS CAMBRIDGE 7

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However,

it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician

Discuss both views and give your opinion

me people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of

an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Discuss both views and give your opinion

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, satisfaction is an important element of individual well

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer

What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a

university?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However,

it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a

me people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of

an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being

expectation of job satisfaction for all

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to

dless of whether the course is

inion, should be the main function of a

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician

Discuss both views and give your opinion

Identifying the essay type:

INTRODUCTION

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BODY

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CAMBRIDGE IELTS 7 - TEST 1

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician

Discuss both views and give your opinion

SUGGESTED ANSWER

Identifying the essay type: Discussion + Opinion

Structuring the essay

Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about nature vs nurture Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which

side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think having guidance is better)

Paragraph 1: 2 reasons why some people think talents are

important

 Some particular skills could not be taught

 Talents are the root of greatness

Paragraph 2: 2 reasons why others think having guidance is

better

 Strong determination helps people excel in sports or music

 Everyone has hidden gifts

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to

pinion

Introduce the given topic about nature vs nurture

state my propensity for which

of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree

with people who think having guidance is better)

2 reasons why some people think talents are

Some particular skills could not be taught

2 reasons why others think having guidance is

Strong determination helps people excel in sports or music

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Whether innate talents or guidance and training p

a sport star has drawn much attention from many people In my opinion, mere talents would not fully determine one’s success but rather

On the one hand, there are several rea

Firstly, they believe that some particular skills could not be taught or trained

would take a considerable amount of time to be enhanced; and yet the odds for success are uncertain The instinct or logical mind of chess players, for example, are usually

exclusive Secondly, many people

however, inborn abilities

prodigies in the history of music such as Mozart that proves the validity of such a view

If he had been without the taste for music

the most outstanding composers of all time

On the other hand, I would argue that what dictates one’s failure or success is nurture

child with strong determination

a person could easily turn his talents into no use without teaching and direction Additionally,

it is believed that everyone possesses his own

discovered and sharpened before actual acknowledmen

once stated incompetent at swimming, succeeded in standind among the best swimmers in

Vietnam after non-stop guided training

In conclusion, I agree with those who think it is possible to teach any child to become excellent at sports or music

CONCLUSION

Sample answer

or guidance and training play a more important part in the success of

a sport star has drawn much attention from many people In my opinion, mere talents would

not fully determine one’s success but rather the nurture from teachers or trainers

On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people believe it is talents that matter Firstly, they believe that some particular skills could not be taught or trained

would take a considerable amount of time to be enhanced; and yet the odds for success are uncertain The instinct or logical mind of chess players, for example, are usually

Secondly, many people concede that hardwork does play a part in one’s success;

are the root of greatness There is convincing evidence of

in the history of music such as Mozart that proves the validity of such a view

the taste for music at an early age, he would not have become one of

the most outstanding composers of all time

On the other hand, I would argue that what dictates one’s failure or success is nurture

strong determination could be taught to excel in sports or

a person could easily turn his talents into no use without teaching and direction Additionally,

it is believed that everyone possesses his own hidden gifts which always need to be

before actual acknowledment For instance, Huynh Kinh Nguyen, once stated incompetent at swimming, succeeded in standind among the best swimmers in

stop guided training

In conclusion, I agree with those who think it is possible to teach any child to become

- Restate my favorable side

lay a more important part in the success of

a sport star has drawn much attention from many people In my opinion, mere talents would

the nurture from teachers or trainers

sons why some people believe it is talents that matter Firstly, they believe that some particular skills could not be taught or trained, or at least they would take a considerable amount of time to be enhanced; and yet the odds for success are

uncertain The instinct or logical mind of chess players, for example, are usually seen as

oes play a part in one’s success; There is convincing evidence of

in the history of music such as Mozart that proves the validity of such a viewpoint

at an early age, he would not have become one of

On the other hand, I would argue that what dictates one’s failure or success is nurture Any

excel in sports or music Even if gifted,

a person could easily turn his talents into no use without teaching and direction Additionally,

which always need to be

t For instance, Huynh Kinh Nguyen, once stated incompetent at swimming, succeeded in standind among the best swimmers in

In conclusion, I agree with those who think it is possible to teach any child to become

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Useful vocabulary:

- Innate talents: Tài năng b

- The nurture from teachers and trainers:

viên

- To be seen as exclusive:

- Inborn ability: Khả năng b

- Prodigy: Thần đồng

- The taste for music: Th

- Strong determination:

- Excel in sports or music:

- Hidden gifts: Tài năng

- Non-stop guided training:

Tài năng bẩm sinh

The nurture from teachers and trainers: Sự dưỡng dục của thầy cô và hu

To be seen as exclusive: Chỉ một số người có

năng bẩm sinh

Thị hiếu âm nhạc

Strong determination: Sự quyết tâm mạnh mẽ Excel in sports or music: Xuất chúng ở thể thao và âm nhạc

Tài năng ẩn

stop guided training: Không ngừng luyện tập có hướng dẫ

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for

committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Discuss both views and give your opinion

Identifying the essay type:

INTRODUCTION

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-

BODY

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CAMBRIDGE IELTS 7 - TEST 2

me people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for

committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Discuss both views and give your opinion

SUGGESTED ANSWER

Identifying the essay type: Discussion + Opinion

Structuring the essay

Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about

punishment

Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensit

side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think every aspect of a crime should be

considered)

Paragraph 1: 2 reasons why some people think

punishments is reasonable

 A society of justice and equity

 A deterrent against offenses

Paragraph 2: 2 reasons why others think think every aspect of a

crime should be considered

Author: Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Bandscore: 8+

me people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for

committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

pinion

Introduce the given topic about legitimate types of

state my propensity for which side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think every aspect of a crime should be

2 reasons why some people think having fixed

think every aspect of a

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People have different opinions about what factors should be taken into consideration before any convictions In my view, the judge should base their decisions on both the circumstances and motive for committing crimes

On the one hand, I understand why some people insist on fixed

kinds of law violation Firstly, they think it symbolizes

criminals of the same type are condemned equally Secondly,

who fail to comply with the law

Felons, for example, are dangerous members of society and need to be punished according

to their heinous actions And if they knew they could convince the judges and jury to

his sentence by one way or another

On the other hand, I would argue that the motive and circumstance of any illegalities should

be contemplated closely It reflects humanity existing in parallel with

conviction Certainly manslaughter i

premeditated murder In other words, the circumstance in which the crime is carried out has

to be on the list of consideration Additionally,

response to a case based on many perspectives

feed his family should be exempted from sentences

In conclusion, I would side with people who think not having fixed punishments is better, although treating lawbreakers equally might be l

CONCLUSION

Sample answer

nions about what factors should be taken into consideration before any convictions In my view, the judge should base their decisions on both the circumstances and motive for committing crimes

On the one hand, I understand why some people insist on fixed punishments for different

Firstly, they think it symbolizes a society of justice and equity

criminals of the same type are condemned equally Secondly, fixed punishments for those

fail to comply with the law could act as an effective deterrent against offense

Felons, for example, are dangerous members of society and need to be punished according

And if they knew they could convince the judges and jury to

by one way or another, fairness would not be guaranteed

On the other hand, I would argue that the motive and circumstance of any illegalities should

It reflects humanity existing in parallel with

manslaughter in self-defense could not possibly be compared with

In other words, the circumstance in which the crime is carried out has

to be on the list of consideration Additionally, the judge could decide the best objective

based on many perspectives For example, a man who steals money to

be exempted from sentences

In conclusion, I would side with people who think not having fixed punishments is better, although treating lawbreakers equally might be legitimate to some extent

 Humanity

 The judge could give the best response

- Restate my favorable side

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nions about what factors should be taken into consideration before any convictions In my view, the judge should base their decisions on both the circumstances

punishments for different

a society of justice and equity where

fixed punishments for those

ctive deterrent against offenses

Felons, for example, are dangerous members of society and need to be punished according

And if they knew they could convince the judges and jury to relieve

, fairness would not be guaranteed

On the other hand, I would argue that the motive and circumstance of any illegalities should

It reflects humanity existing in parallel with every decision of

could not possibly be compared with a

In other words, the circumstance in which the crime is carried out has

the judge could decide the best objective For example, a man who steals money to

In conclusion, I would side with people who think not having fixed punishments is better,

egitimate to some extent

(255 words)

The judge could give the best response

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