Suggested answer to task 2 essays ( Cambridge IELTS 7 )

Suggested Answer to Task Essays - IELTS Cambridge Sơ lư tác giả lược Thầ Toàn ZIM (8.5 IELTS, 8.5 Writing) – Quản lý học thuật ầy Anh Ng ZIM, ứng viên tiêu biểu Quý I chương trình Ngữ u c Writers of the Future (WOTF) - thi viết truyện ngắn c vi truyện truy khoa học viễn tưởng uy tín Mỹ L.Ron Hubbard a M sáng lập từ thập niên 80 tổ chức hàng năm nhằm tìm l c nh kiếm nh m tài xuất chúng văn chương Suggested Answer IELTS Cambridge Bộ Cambridge IELTS - sách luyện đề IELTS tiếng r giới c i Việt Nam Hiểu tầm quan trọng đề m tr này, th Toàn ZIM trực tiếp biên soạ Suggested thầy ạn Answer IELTS Cambridge Do đề từ – không phù cu hợp v đề thi nên tác giá bắt đầu viết từ trở p với u vi Cuố sách gồm mẫu Band 8.0 thầ Toàn ZIM viết ốn ầy phong cách đơn giản hiệu cao giúp học viên dễ dàng gi h tiếp cận phương pháp làm IELTS Writing Với mẫu pc Writing có phân tích cách chi tiết: u nh Identifying the essay type Structuring the essay: Cung cấp dàn ý tổng quan cho p t IELTS Sample answer band 8.0+ Useful vocabulary: Từ vựng ghi điểm tương ứng với chủ đề m Suggested Answer IELTS Cambridge chắn tài liệu c ch hữu ích cho muốn tự học IELTS Writing u b c *Lưu ý: Bộ sách bao gồm từ Cam – 11 Lưu Mục lục Test 1……………………………………………………………………….… Test 2…………………………………………………………………….…… Test 3……………………………………………………………………… ….8 Test 4………………………………………………………………………… 11 IELTS CAMBRIDGE It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However, Test it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician Discuss both views and give your opinion Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for me each type of crime Others, however, argue that the circumstances of Test an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment punishment Discuss both views and give your opinion As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being well Test What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to Test knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is regardless useful to an employer What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a inion, university? http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CAMBRIDGE IELTS - TEST CAM Author: Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Bandscore: 8+ It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsperson or musician Discuss both views and give your opinion SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Discussion + Opinion pinion Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about nature vs nurture - Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree INTRODUCTION with people who think having guidance is better) - Paragraph 1: reasons why some people think talents are important  Some particular skills could not be taught BODY  Talents are the root of greatness - Paragraph 2: reasons why others think having guidance is better  Strong determination helps people excel in sports or music  Everyone has hidden gifts http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CONCLUSION - Restate my favorable side Sample answer Whether innate talents or guidance and training play a more important part in the success of play a sport star has drawn much attention from many people In my opinion, mere talents would not fully determine one’s success but rather the nurture from teachers or trainers trainers On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people believe it is talents that matter reasons Firstly, they believe that some particular skills could not be taught or trained, or at least they trained would take a considerable amount of time to be enhanced; and yet the odds for success are uncertain The instinct or logical mind of chess players, for example, are usually seen as exclusive Secondly, many people concede that hardwork does play a part in one’s success; oes however, inborn abilities are the root of greatness There is convincing evidence of prodigies in the history of music such as Mozart that proves the validity of such a viewpoint view If he had been without the taste for music at an early age, he would not have become one of the most outstanding composers of all time On the other hand, I would argue that what dictates one’s failure or success is nurture Any child with strong determination could be taught to excel in sports or music Even if gifted, a person could easily turn his talents into no use without teaching and direction Additionally, it is believed that everyone possesses his own hidden gifts which always need to be discovered and sharpened before actual acknowledment For instance, Huynh Kinh Nguyen, acknowledment once stated incompetent at swimming, succeeded in standind among the best swimmers in Vietnam after non-stop guided training stop training In conclusion, I agree with those who think it is possible to teach any child to become excellent at sports or music (296 words) http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY Useful vocabulary: - Innate talents: Tài b bẩm sinh - The nurture from teachers and trainers: Sự dưỡng dục thầy cô huấn luyện y hu viên - To be seen as exclusive: Chỉ số người có - Inborn ability: Khả bẩm sinh b - Prodigy: Thần đồng - The taste for music: Th hiếu âm nhạc Thị - Strong determination: Sự tâm mạnh mẽ - Excel in sports or music: Xuất chúng thể thao âm nhạc - Hidden gifts: Tài ẩn - Non-stop guided training: Không ngừng luyện tập có hướng dẫ stop ẫn http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CAMBRIDGE IELTS - TEST Author: Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Bandscore: 8+ Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others, me however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment punishment Discuss both views and give your opinion SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Discussion + Opinion pinion Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about legitimate types of punishment INTRODUCTION Sentence 2: Clearly and directly state my propensity for which propensit side of the argument with one short and simple sentence (agree with people who think every aspect of a crime should be considered) - Paragraph 1: reasons why some people think having fixed punishments is reasonable  A society of justice and equity BODY  A deterrent against offenses - Paragraph 2: reasons why others think think every aspect of a crime should be considered http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY  Humanity  The judge could give the best response CONCLUSION - Restate my favorable side Sample answer People have different opinions about what factors should be taken into consideration before nions any convictions In my view, the judge should base their decisions on both the circumstances and motive for committing crimes On the one hand, I understand why some people insist on fixed punishments for different kinds of law violation Firstly, they think it symbolizes a society of justice and equity where criminals of the same type are condemned equally Secondly, fixed punishments for those who fail to comply with the law could act as an effective deterrent against offenses ctive offense Felons, for example, are dangerous members of society and need to be punished according to their heinous actions And if they knew they could convince the judges and jury to relieve his sentence by one way or another, fairness would not be guaranteed another, On the other hand, I would argue that the motive and circumstance of any illegalities should be contemplated closely It reflects humanity existing in parallel with every decision of conviction Certainly manslaughter i self-defense could not possibly be compared with a in premeditated murder In other words, the circumstance in which the crime is carried out has to be on the list of consideration Additionally, the judge could decide the best objective response to a case based on many perspectives For example, a man who steals money to perspectives feed his family should be exempted from sentences sentences In conclusion, I would side with people who think not having fixed punishments is better, although treating lawbreakers equally might be legitimate to some extent legitimate (255 words) http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY Useful vocabulary: - Law violation: Phá lu : luật - A society of justice and equity: Một xã hội công lý công equity a b - Fail to comply with the law Không tuân theo luật pháp law: - To act as an effective deterrent against offenses: Coi rào c hiệu offenses t cản - Heinous actions: Nhữ hành động dã man ững - Relieve his sentence Giảm nhẹ án sentence: - Every decision of conviction Mọi định kết tội conviction: - Manslaughter in self self-defense: Giết người tự vệ - A premeditated murder Giết người có chủ đích murder: - To be exempted from sentences Miễn kết tội e sentences: http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CAMBRIDGE IELTS - TEST CAM Author: Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Bandscore: 8+ As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being being What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Direct-Question Structuring the essay - Sentence 2: Give a short and general answer to the questions - INTRODUCTION Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about job satisfaction Paragraph 1: Give examples of what contribute to job satisfaction  Stable salary + pension BODY  Passion - Paragraph 2: Give reasons why workers’ expectation for job satisfaction has become unrealistic  Not many jobs could ensure stable salaries and pension pensio  Workers have to jobs they not like http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CONCLUSION - Restate my answer to the two questions Sample answer Job satisfaction is the ultimate goal that a majority of people desire for because the large proportion of their adult life is dedicated to work Contributing factors to job satisfaction Contributing greatly differ, depending on individual points of view; however, workers’ anticipation for those elements has become unrealistic There are two principal factors that bring about a certain level of contentment to modern workers The first thing is that employees would be satisfied if they received a stable salary while working and pension at their retirement age This is totally understandable because age they want to ensure the well well-being of their family even when they are retired The second re thing is workers’ passion for their professions If they loved what they were doing, this professions would fuel their performances at their job with enthusiasm enthusiasm Unfortunately those said factors have gotten out of hand Regarding salaries and pension, there are only a few jobs that could secure the stability of a family’s finance Companies are finance cutting down the cost for paying salaries for their employees in order to allocate more of their budget to the production system In many cases, the advertised pay rate, for example, system ertised is incompatible with and usually higher than the real one Additionally, doing what one has no interest in would be inevitable in certain cases It might be because the money they could cases earn would be insufficient to feed his family or simply because he is not good enough to be working at his desirable profession This without doubt would upset idealistic individuals profession who always live up to their expectation for job satisfaction satisfaction In conclusion, earnings and passion which are listed to be the main contributors to job listed satisfaction are not realistic any more in the modern world (287 words) http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY Useful vocabulary: - A certain level of contentment: Mức độ thỏa mãn định - A stable salary: Lương ổn định - Pension at their retirement age: Lương hưu đến tuổi nghỉ hưu - Passion for their professions: Đam mê cho nghề nghiệp - Fuel their performances at their job with enthusiasm: Tiếp nhiên liệu cho thể p li công việc với hăng hái ự - Out of hand: Ngoài tầ với ầm - Allocate more of their budget to the production system: Phân b nhiều từ ngân bổ sách đến hệ thống sản xu n xuất - Desirable profession: Nghề nghiệp ao ước - Idealistic individuals: Những cá nhân lí tưởng hóa - Live up to their expectation for job satisfaction: Sống với mong ước hài lòng i nghề nghiệp 10 http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY CAMBRIDGE IELTS - TEST CAM Author: Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Bandscore: 8+ Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an regardless employer What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university? SUGGESTED ANSWER Identifying the essay type: Opinion Structuring the essay - Sentence 1: Introduce the given topic about the main function of universities INTRODUCTION - Sentence 2: Directly and clearly state my opinion: necessary skills and knowledge for future career BODY Paragraph 1: Explain why it is necessay for university to provide what would be needed in the working world - Paragraph 2: Explain why it is unreasonable to pay no attention to what employers might require of graduates 11 CONCLUSION - Restate my opinion http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY Sample answer People have different views about whether a university should supply students with courses of only academic knowledge or necessary skills that they might need in the future In my opinion, the main role of a university should be the foundation for careers after graduation Certainly the provision of knowledge and skills which would be of use in the future is vital for college graduates This is because employers always require their potential employees have enhanced skills such as language proficiency, English in particular, or communication English skills Experience and professional working attitude are also indispensable when applying for a vacancy Those, unfortunately, hardly fall into top priorities in many university cirruculum which still wastes resources on raw and rather impractical academic knowledge Therefore, students who are too involved in attending classes, economics for example, would find it even more challenging to compete with others who have sharp insights into the business world On the other hand, it is absurd to deny the relation between what would be learned in university and what would make an impression on future employers If universities did not employers provide access to activities which would help participants improve their skills for future work, wo the possibility of unemployment would be inevitable This would demotivate people from inevitable pursuing tertiary education since universities could not meet their real demands demands In conclusion, I am in strong disagreement that university should separate their functions f from the actual requirements of the working world and I believe giving access to necessary knowledge and skills to graduates is tremendously important (255 words) Useful vocabulary: 12 - To be the foundation for careers: Là tảng cho nghiệp - To be of use in the future: Có ích cho tương lai o - Potential employees: Nhân viên tiềm http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY - Experience and professional working attitude: Kinh nghiệm thái độ làm việc m đ chuyên nghiệp - To fall into top priorities: Là ưu tiên hàng đầu - Raw and rather impractical academic knowledge: Kiến thức sách thô có phân c v phi thực tế - The possibility of unemployment would be inevitable: Khả việc vi tránh khỏi - To pursue tertiary education: Tham gia giáo dục bậc đại học - To meet their real demands: Đáp ứng yêu cầu thực tế l 13 http://zim.vn ZIM ACADEMY