TUYỂN tập bài mẫu CHO đề THI IELTS WRITING THÁNG 7 BY NGOCBACH

TUYỂN TẬP BÀI MẪU CHO ĐỀ THI IELTS WRITING THÁNG 7/2019 BY NGOCBACH Đề thi 18/07/2019 The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to countries from 1990 to 2012 35 30 p e r c e n t a g e 25 Japan 20 US 15 China India 10 1990 1995 2000 2005 2010 2012 Report Plan:  Paraphrase paragraph: shows>compares; percentage>proportion; countries>Japan, the USA, China and India  Overview/summary paragraph (1) before 2005, highest % of exports to Japan (2) after 2005, the figures for China overtook those for Japan  Paragraph 3: report and compare figures for 1990 and 1995  Paragraph 4: report and compare figures and trends for 2000-2012 + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Report: The line graph compares the proportion of exports from Australia, to Japan, the USA, China and India between 1990 and 2012 Overall, it is clear that the largest percentage of exports went to Japan before 2005 However, the proportion of exports to China overtook those to Japan after 2005 In 1990, exports to Japan accounted for 27% of the total, more than double the figure for Australian exports to the USA By contrast, exports to China and India were low, at 2% and 1%, respectively While the proportion of exports to Japan fell to 19% and exports to the USA fell to 9% in 1995, the figure for exports to China and India rose slowly There was a gradual decrease in the proportion of exports to Japan, which stood at 18% in 2012 The US export market fluctuated, but the trend after 1995 was downward, finishing at 7% of total exports at the end of the period Although exports to India also fluctuated, these rose overall to 6% in 2012 The most significant change, however, was the growth in exports to China, overtaking those to Japan, and reaching a peak of 30% in 2012 194 words + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Task 2: It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and language skill than people who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree? Essay Plan:  Introduction: refer to the task question My opinion: fully agree  Paragraph 2: reading stimulates imagination more than watching TV Reading a book uses one’s own imagination – contrast TV with its ready-made images Example: Robinson Crusoe  Paragraph 3: reading develops language skills – extends vocabulary People learn new words and different ways to use familiar words Contrast TV – images pass on the screen and are instantly forgotten  Conclusion: fully agree that reading for pleasure develops imagination and language skills more than watching TV Essay: It is true that some people believe that reading for pleasure develops both imagination and language skills, in contrast to the passive activity of watching TV While a minority a viewers watch informative TV programmes, such as documentaries, I completely agree with the arguments in favour of the benefits of reading Firstly, in terms of the development of creativity, works of literary fiction stimulate the human imagination Reading bedtime stories to children, or reading some well-written work of literature, everyone can broaden their literary horizons Whereas TV presents audiences with ready-made images, reading stories forces readers to use their own imagination They might, for example, picture themselves shipwrecked on a deserted island, like Robinson Crusoe Because they have created that personal image for themselves, it is stronger and + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package more durable than an image which is not their own, but which is manufactured and ready to consume Secondly, from the perspective of language skills, specialists in linguistics argue that reading extends vocabulary, as well as developing critical thinking An important part of literary appreciation is to recognize not only new words, but also to notice the choice and use of words which are familiar There are no distracting images on screens, so when readers are engrossed in a book written by a literary genius, they can focus on the aesthetic qualities of the language In contrast, although it is possible to play back a TV recording, words and images are invariably heard and seen in an instant Then, they pass and are instantly forgotten, whereas it is easy to read over passages in a book In conclusion, I fully agree with those who argue that reading encourages imagination and develops vocabulary, which sitting in front of a TV will never 291 words Vocabulary from The Arts:  works of literary fiction Meaning: types of literature which describe imaginary people and events, not real ones Example: It takes enormous creativity to write works of literary fiction, and the greatest writers are rightly considered literary geniuses  a work of literature Meaning: a book, play or poem Example: Shakespeare’s plays are considered as one of the greatest works of literature in the English language  a literary genius Meaning: a person with outstanding ability in writing Example: Although not every child will become a literary genius, it is still important for students to practice creative writing at school  the aesthetic qualities of something Meaning: The qualities related to beauty and understanding the beauty of something + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Example: One advantage of studying the arts is that students learn to appreciate the aesthetic qualities of paintings, literature and music Vocabulary from Reading:  bedtime stories Meaning: stories told to children before they sleep Example: Parents should spend time with their children, for example by telling them bedtime stories every night  broaden one’s literary horizons Meaning: to widen the limit of your desires, knowledge, or interests by reading widely Example: Schools should broaden the literary horizons of pupils by encouraging them to read in class and at home  critical thinking Meaning: the process of analyzing information in an objective way, in order to make a judgment about it Example: Critical thinking skills enable students to evaluate information  literary appreciation Meaning: pleasure that you have when your recognize and enjoy the qualities of a good piece of writing Example: Children develop literary appreciation if they are encouraged by parents and teachers to love reading  to be engrossed in Meaning: to be completely focused on something Example: A good work-life balance is important, because if people are too engrossed in their work their family life may suffer  to read over Meaning: Meaning: to read something carefully from beginning to end to look for mistakes or check details Example: Attention to detail is so important in many jobs, so the practice of reading over one’s written work should be taught at school and university + Thông tin lớp offline 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are formed>the formation of sand dunes  Overview/summary paragraph: (1) report the number of stages (2) mention what happens in the first and last stages  Paragraph 3: report on diagrams and  Paragraph 4: report on diagram 3, mentioning the changes in the movement of the wind Report: The diagrams illustrate the formation of sand dunes from sand particles Overall, it is clear that the process consists of stages, beginning with the action of wind blowing the sand particles, and ending with the formation of the sand dunes on the wet areas of ground In the first diagram, sand is blown by the wind over dry and wet ground In the second diagram, sand particles continue to be carried by the wind, but now more sand particles collect over the wet ground, forming small separate piles Finally, the third diagram shows how particles of sand continue to gather over areas of wet ground, with the piles of sand increasing in size When the piles are big enough, they form sand dunes These sand dunes change the direction of the wind by forcing it up one side of the dune and down the other side The process is then repeated on the next area of wet ground, to form a series of sand dunes 166 words + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package TASK 2: International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Essay Plan:  Introduction: refer to the task question My opinion – the disadvantages outweigh the advantages  Paragraph 2: the advantages – many people can now enjoy visiting places where only a few people could afford to visit before  Paragraph 3: the disadvantages (1) environmental costs – air travel and pollution, tourist infrastructure and environmental damage (2) overcrowding as holiday destinations become more popular  Conclusion: the disadvantages outweigh the advantages – environmental damage and overcrowding Essay: It is true that it is now less expensive to travel to other countries than it was in the past New travel destinations appear in tourist brochures to attract visitors from abroad While there are advantages, I believe that these are outweighed by the disadvantages of these trends On the one hand, international travel has experienced phenomenal growth, and many people can now enjoy exploring places which in the past only the rich could visit After all, many people on limited incomes have a thirst for seeing far-off destinations, and this should not only be the privilege of wealthy people For example, many Asian countries now welcome foreign visitors who can book an affordable package holiday to experience the holiday of a lifetime More and more people are able to go sightseeing along the Great Wall of China, discover the temples of Angkor Wat in Cambodia or simply to get away from it all on a + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package beach in Malaysia So, now the many can enjoy experiences that in past only a few could afford On the other hand, there are two major disadvantages associated with these developments Firstly, the green movement argues convincingly that there are environmental costs of the growth in international travel It is necessary to fight climate change, but air travel pollutes the atmosphere, and the construction of new airports and tourist facilities such as hotels and roads inevitably results in habitat destruction Secondly, international travel destinations are increasingly crowded At the height of the tourist season, even remote beaches now swarm with tourists The beauty of such places is now destroyed in the interests of moneymaking In conclusion, I would argue that the drawbacks of environmental degradation and overcrowding outweigh the benefits of these trends 289 words Vocabulary from tourism:  to experience phenomenal growth Meaning: to experience an extremely successful or special development, especially in a surprising way Example: In recent decades there has been a substantial diversification in international tourism destinations, and many developing countries have experienced phenomenal growth in tourist arrivals and receipts  to have a thirst for something Meaning: to have a strong desire for something Example: He has been all over the world, but he still has a thirst for seeing new places and enjoying new experiences  to book Meaning: to reserve something, such as a hotel room or a ticket Example: I’d like to book a table for two at 8pm this evening, please  a package holiday Meaning: a holiday that is organized by a company at a fixed price, including the cost of a hotel, travel etc Example: Package holidays to Spain started to become popular in the UK in the 1960s + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 10  the holiday of a lifetime Meaning: a special holiday that you are unlikely to repeat Example: He is planning the holiday of a lifetime to see pandas in China  to go sightseeing Meaning: to look around the places that tourists like to visit Example: If you go sightseeing in Paris, be sure to see the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre and the Palace of Versailles  to get away from it all Meaning: to have a holiday in a very quiet place where you can relax Example: Tourists have always traveled to natural areas of beauty to avoid the noisy crowds and to get away from it all  the height of the tourist season Meaning: the time of year when the greatest number of people visit a place and when the prices are at their highest level Example: Mid-summer in the UK is normally the height of the tourist season, so remember to book a hotel in advance  to swarm with tourists Meaning: when people swarm somewhere, they move there in a large group or in large numbers Example: During the summer, the little seaside town is swarming with holidaymakers Vocabulary from the environment:  the green movement Meaning: all the organisations concerned with the protection of the environment Example: Individuals should join one of the organisations which form part of the green movement, in order to campaign for changes in official policy on the environment  to fight climate change Meaning: To try to prevent changes in climate patterns, such as rainfall, temperature and winds Example: Unless we consume less of the Earth’s natural resources, it will be impossible to fight climate change and safeguard our future  habitat destruction + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 11 Meaning: the process that occurs when a natural habitat, like a forest or wetland, is changed so dramatically by humans that plants and animals which live there Example: The elephant population in the world is declining because of habitat destruction caused by human exploitation of the environment  environmental degradation Meaning: the process or fact of the environment becoming worse Example: Africa is a continent in which environmental degradation is evident in the spread of deserts and the extinction of animal species Other vocabulary:  brochure [noun]: Meaning: a small magazine or book containing pictures and information about something or advertising something Example: The college produces a colour brochure to advertise its courses  far-off [adjective]: Meaning: a long distance away Example: She travelled to a far-off country in search of adventure  privilege [noun]: Meaning: a special right or advantage that a person or a group of people has Example: If you join the gym, you can enjoy all the privileges of membership, such as the use of the swimming pool at any time  moneymaking [noun]: Meaning: producing or making a large profit Example: Hollywood produces a lot of moneymaking movies each year + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 12 Đề thi 27/07/2019 Task The table shows the usage charge for water and the average bill per household in five cities Report Plan:  Paraphrase paragraph: shows>compares; usage charge for water>how much is charged for water; per>for each  Overview/summary paragraph: (1) E has the highest costs for water usage (2) B has the lowest bills  Paragraph 3: report and compare costs for water usage (1) up to 125 kil (2) over 125 kil  Paragraph 4: report and compare average household bills Report: The table compares five different cities in terms of how much is charged for water and the average bill for each household + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 13 Overall, it is clear that City E has the highest costs for water usage, whereas City B has the lowest household bills In all the cities, the usage charge for water is calculated at two rates – up to 125 kilolitres and over 125 kilolitres Cities A and D have the lowest costs for water usage up to 125 kilolitres, each with a charge of $0.48 City C has a charge of $0.55, while Cities B and E charge the most, at $0.75 and $0.95 respectively Over 125 kilolitres, the cost in City A falls to $0.42 By contrast, the charges rise slightly in City E The costs remain the same in the other cities City B has the lowest water bills, with an average of $234 per household Bills in the other cities are significantly higher, particularly in City E, where the average bill is almost $400 for each household 172 words TASK 2: + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 14 Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends To what extent you agree or disagree? Essay Plan:  Introduction: refer to the task question My opinion: completely disagree  Paragraph 2: first reason – only a few students will reach the top in academic subjects They will get the few good jobs, while the others will fail, and this will affect their whole future  Paragraph 3: second reason – not all children have a supportive family to teach these essential life skills – examples: single-parent families, working mothers If they not learn to cook, DIY or sew – as adults they will spend more on food and new clothes  Conclusion: totally disagree – schools must teach these life skills Essay: It is true that many people believe that schools should only teach academic subjects and prepare students for formal exams I disagree completely with this view, and I would argue that teaching practical life skills is essential Firstly, it is a mistake to tailor teaching strategies to the narrow focus of academic subjects and exam success It is impossible for every student to pursue a successful career with fantastic job prospects in fields such as finance, medicine, law or education All of these demand academic skills, but the job market for these professions is relatively small Those who fail their exams will consider themselves as failures Such negative feelings will inevitably shape a child’s personality and values during their formative years Only a few students who are high-flyers will succeed and enjoy the material rewards of their academic success Secondly, while children need to acquire practical skills, there may be no family or friends to help them Consider, for example, single-parent households, with no father to teach DIY skills, or households in which working mothers have no time to teach children to cook or sew There are, too, many dysfunctional families in which, for whatever reasons, parental involvement in bringing up their offspring is almost completely absent Yet children need to learn these domestic skills, and the only place for many of them to this is in school Otherwise, when they enter adult life, they will rely on expensive ready meals or on buying new clothes and furniture when all that is needed is a simple repair + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 15 In conclusion, I totally disagree with an educational policy which focuses only on academic subjects and exam success Schools must place equal value on life skills to ensure the full development of children 291 words Vocabulary from education:  a formal examination Meaning: a test conducted under strict, regulated conditions Example: Entrance to university usually involves achieving required grades in a formal examination, such as IELTS  to tailor teaching styles/ strategies Meaning: to make or prepare teaching styles following particular instructions Example: When faced with classes of students with different levels of ability, teachers should tailor their teaching strategies to deal with this challenge  a high-flyer Meaning: someone who has the desire and ability to be very successful in their studies Example: The problem with our teacher is that she explains things too quickly for most of the students and she pays most attention only to the academic high-flyers in the class Vocabulary from work:  to pursue a successful career Meaning: to have a series of jobs in a particular area of work, with more responsibility as time passes Example: While many people wish to pursue a successful career, for others it is more important to find work which is interesting and enjoyable  job prospects Meaning: the chances of being successful and having more opportunities at work Example: People with qualifications and experience usually have the best job prospects  to acquire experience/knowledge/skill: Meaning: to gain experience/knowledge/skill by your own efforts or behavior + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 16 Example: Some school leavers prefer to acquire experience working in a chosen profession rather than entering university  working mothers Meaning: Mothers who have to go out to work as well as to look after children Example: Workplace practices such as job-sharing and flexible working hours have made life easier for working mothers Vocabulary from family and children:  to shape a child’s personality/ values Meaning: to decide or influence the form of a child’s personality Example: Parents are very influential in shaping their children’s personality through the example that they set  formative years Meaning: A period of a person’s life, usually childhood, that has a big influence on the person they become later in life Example: UNICEF states that the early childhood years from birth through age are formative years in terms of intelligence, personality and social behavior  a single parent household Meaning: a family in which one person takes care of their child or children without a husband, wife or partner Example: As a result of changes in society, single parent households are no longer considered unusual  a dysfunctional family Meaning: a family in which the relationships are bad or unhealthy Example: Children who come from a dysfunctional family often exhibit behavioral problems at school  parental involvement Meaning: the act or process of parents when taking part in their children’s activities Example: Parental involvement allows parents to monitor school and classroom activities, and to coordinate their efforts with teachers to encourage acceptable classroom behavior and ensure that the child completes schoolwork  to bring up their offspring + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 17 Meaning: to bring up means to raise; this is what you as a parent with your children; you educate them, nurture them, etc.; offspring refers to your children Example: They are bringing up their offspring in a very strict household  to enter adult life Meaning:the stage when adolescents are almost old enough to be legally independent of their parents Example: Parents who have devoted time and thought to raising and educating their children have given them a good prepartion to enter adult life Other vocabulary:  the job market [noun]: Meaning: the market in which employers search for employees, and employees search for employers Example: About 25,000 people entered the job market in the UK last month  DIY [noun]: Meaning: = ‘do it yourself’: the activity of making, repairing or decorating things in the home yourself, rather than paying someone to it Example: My sister likes DIY in the home: she is always repairing things which are broken or no longer work  otherwise [adverb]: Meaning: used to state what the result would be if something did not happen or the situation was different Example: My parents lent me some money Otherwise, I could never have afforded the trip + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 18 ... offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Đề thi 24/ 07/ 2019 TASK + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019:... year + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 12 Đề thi 27/ 07/ 2019 Task The table shows... household 172 words TASK 2: + Thông tin lớp offline tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin lớp online Package tháng 8/2019: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package 14 Schools should