Đề 1: Bar chart Đề 2: Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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Essay Plan: Introduction: refer to the task question My opinion: the advantages outweigh the drawbacks Paragraph 2: disadvantages for the environment (1) food transport causes pollution – emissions e.g soya from Brazil to China (2) export crops = monocultures = habitat destruction Paragraph 3: the economy (1) advantage – boosts local economy (2) disadvantage – a reduction in the range of foods if only local foods are consumed Conclusion: although there are drawbacks, the advantages of eating food grown locally outweigh the disadvantages Essay: It is true that in recent decades the increase in food miles has raised important environmental and economic issues While there are some drawbacks of consuming only food produced locally, I believe that the advantages of eating local food outweigh the disadvantages In terms of the environment, the transport of food across the world causes major problems Firstly, the freight services responsible for shipping food from distant places cause pollution and hinder efforts to fight climate change by cutting down on emissions For example, the transport of soya from Brazil to China involves a journey of thousands of kilometres Secondly, crops for export are usually grown as monocultures, usually resulting in the habitat destruction of animals and plants, including endangered species Deforestation in the Amazon, for instance, to raise + Thơng tin khóa học offline khai giảng tháng 7/2019 thây Bách: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thông tin khóa học online Package tháng 7/2019 thây Bách: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package cattle for beef exports, is causing the loss of thousands of species and putting other species on the brink of extinction From an economic perspective, there are benefits and drawbacks of only eating food which is grown locally On the one hand, if consumers buy food from local farmers, then this stimulates the local economy More money will remain within the local community rather than lining the pockets of distant shareholders On the other hand, thanks to the globalisation of food production, the market provides a vast choice of products for the consumer If people eat only local foods, they will be able to enjoy only a limited range of food items which are in season In conclusion, although consumers will only have the choice of particular foods at certain times of the year, I would argue that it is better for the environment and the economy to eat as many food products which are grown locally as possible 288 words Vocabulary from the environment: food miles Meaning: Distance food has to travel between where it is grown or made and where it is consumed Example: We can all reduce our carbon footprint by flying less, and reduce our food miles by buying local products to fight climate change Meaning: To try to prevent changes in climate patterns, such as rainfall, temperature and winds Example: Unless we consume less of the Earth’s natural resources, it will be impossible to fight climate change and safeguard our future to cut down on emissions Meaning: to reduce the amount of gases sent out into the air Example: People must be made aware of the need to cut down on emissions from their cars if we are to reduce air pollution habitat destruction + Thơng tin khóa học offline khai giảng tháng 7/2019 thây Bách: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thơng tin khóa học online Package tháng 7/2019 thây Bách: https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Meaning: the process that occurs when a natural habitat, like a forest or wetland, is changed so dramatically by humans that plants and animals which live there Example: The elephant population in the world is declining because of habitat destruction caused by human exploitation of the environment endangered species Meaning: plants or animals that only exist in very small numbers, so that in future they may disappear forever Example: One example of an endangered species is the lowland gorilla, which has almost disappeared as a result of the destruction of its forest habitat on the brink of extinction Meaning: an animal or plant which has almost disappeared from the planet Example: Before the captive breeding program in zoos, the giant panda was on the brink of extinction Vocabulary from transportation: freight services Meaning: the system of transporting goods Example: Railways must provide more freight services in order to reduce the number of trucks on the roads Other vocabulary: monoculture [noun]: Meaning: the practice of growing only one type of crop on a certain area of land Example: Crops such as soya, sugar and coffee have usually been grown as monocultures on vast areas of land to line one’s pockets [expression]: Meaning: to get richer by taking unfair advantage of a situation or by being dishonest Example: Drug companies are lining their pockets with the discovery of new drugs to cure various types of cancer + Thơng tin khóa học offline khai giảng tháng 7/2019 thây Bách: https://ieltsngocbach.com/offline + Thơng 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