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SỞ GIÁO DỤC ĐÀO TẠO ĐỒNG NAI Trường THPT Nguyễn Hữu Cảnh Mã số :………… CLASSIFICATION AND SOME WAYS TO SOLVE PROBLEMS IN WRITING PERIOD IN GRADE 10 Người thực hiện: Nguyễn Thị Xuân Mai Lĩnh vực nghiên cứu: Quản lý giáo dục: Phương pháp dạy học môn:  Phương pháp giáo dục: Lĩnh vực khác: ……………… Có đính kèm: Mô hình Phần mềm Phim ảnh Hiện vật khác Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 CONTENTS A REASONS FOR CHOOSING THE RESEARCH B AIMS OF THE RESEARCH C SCOPE, OBJECT AND RESEARCHING METHOD D MAIN CONTENT I GENERAL INTRODUCTION What makes writing so important? Some difficulties of the teacher and the students II CLASSIFICATION AND SOME WAYS TO SOLVE PROBLEMS IN WRITING IN GRADE 10 Classification of the writing section in grade 10 What students need to in order to write? Writing as a process The meanings of some writing activities Some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Demonstration E RESULT AFTER APPLYING THE RESEARCH IN TEACHING F CONCLUSION G REFERENCE BOOKS Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 A REASONS FOR CHOOSING THE RESEARCH This is the seven year we are carrying out the reformation in teaching new English textbook Most of the teachers are used to this new English textbook and try to find out good teaching methods as much as possible to apply in English periods In Vietnam, secondary school students have to acquire four skills of English as reading, speaking, listening and writing when they study English Among them, writing is considered the most difficult skill Clearly, Vietnamese students are often much anxious about writing and afraid of making errors in writing classrooms Nevertheless, they need to be encouraged to see it as a means of learning, rather than demonstrating learning In order to make writing skill more effective, the teacher himself must find out the way of teaching suitable for his students The Writing section may begin with a model, followed by activities that guide students through the writing process such as model analysis, language work, or guided writing, etc In this part, students are required to produce various text types such as personal and formal letters, narratives, chart, graph and table description, and expository essays The general and specific objectives are set clearly in the books The role of writing skill in grade 10 mainly helps students get familiar with style, some structures and learn how write letters, narrative, description, etc … If the teacher wants the writing period to be more effective, he should not only systemize the content but also prepare his lesson plans more carefully Also, there are a great number of problems in writing period, how can the teacher solve them? I myself want to present the classification of the writing section and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 B AIMS OF THE RESEARCH - To introduce the classification of writing lessons in grade 10 - To show some ways to deal with problems that may arise Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 C SCOPE, OBJECT AND RESEARCHING METHOD - Scope: Researching in the process of teaching English at Nguyen Huu Canh high school - Object: Being concerned with classification of writing section and some ways of solving problems in writing period in grade 10 - Researching method: Reading reference books, discussing with other teachers, applying in teaching, observing and drawing out experiences D CONTENT I GENERAL INTRODUCTION What Makes Writing So Important? • Writing is the primary basis upon which your work, your learning, and your intellect will be judged in college, in the workplace, and in the community • Writing expresses who you are as a person • Writing is portable and permanent It makes your thinking visible • Writing helps you move easily among facts, inferences, and opinions without getting confused—and without confusing your reader • Writing promotes your ability to pose worthwhile questions • Writing fosters your ability to explain a complex position to readers, and to yourself • Writing helps others give you feedback • Writing helps you refine your ideas when you give others feedback • Writing requires that you anticipate your readers’ needs Your ability to so demonstrates your intellectual flexibility and maturity • Writing ideas down preserves them so that you can reflect upon them later • Writing out your ideas permits you to evaluate the adequacy of your argument • Writing stimulates you to extend a line of thought beyond your first impressions or gut responses • Writing helps you understand how truth is established in a given discipline Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 • Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively in democracy • Writing is an essential job skill Some difficulties of the teacher and the students a To the teacher - There are too many students in a class so it is very difficult for the teacher to pay attention to all students in writing period - There are a large number of students with different levels - He is often anxious that he doesn’t have enough time to correct mistakes for all students - The process of writing may last more than 45 minutes b To the students - They often fell bored in writing period - They not have enough vocabulary and structures to express ideas - They have a tendency to use speaking English and translate Vietnamese into English in writing - Their knowledge about society is limited - They sometimes misuse the purpose of different types of writing - They often express many ideas and information in the same sentence or they write too long sentences - They not have enough facts, information and knowledge about different subjects, so they cannot write convincingly II CLASSIFICATION AND SOME WAYS TO SOLVE PROBLEMS IN WRITING PERIOD IN GRADE 10 Classification of the writing section in grade 10 a What is teaching writing? Good writing conveys a meaningful message and uses English well, but the message is more important than correct presentation If you can understand the message or even part of it, your student has succeeded in communicating on paper and should be praised for that For many students, writing skills will not be used Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 much outside your class This doesn’t mean that they shouldn’t be challenged to write, but you should consider their needs and balance your class time appropriately Two writing strategies you may want to use in your lessons are free writing and revised writing Free writing directs students to simply get their ideas onto paper without worrying much about grammar, spelling, or other English mechanics In fact, the teacher can choose not to even look at free writing pieces To practice free writing, give students minutes in class to write about a certain topic, or ask them to write weekly in a journal You can try a dialog journal where students write a journal entry and then give the journal to a partner or the teacher, who writes another entry in response The journals may be exchanged during class, but journal writing usually is done at home The main characteristic of free writing is that few (if any) errors are corrected by the teacher, which relieves students of the pressure to perform and allows them to express themselves more freely Revised writing, also called extended or process writing, is a more formal activity in which students must write a first draft, then revise and edit it to a final polished version, and often the finished product is shared publicly You may need several class sessions to accomplish this Begin with a pre-writing task such as free writing, brainstorming, listing, discussion of a topic, making a timeline, or making an outline Pairs or small groups often work well for pre-writing tasks Then give the students clear instructions and ample time to write the assignment In a class, you can circulate from person to person asking, “Do you have any questions?” Many students will ask a question when approached but otherwise would not have raised a hand to call your attention Make yourself available during the writing activity; don’t sit at a desk working on your next lesson plan Once a rough draft is completed, the students can hand in their papers for written comment, discuss them with you face to face, or share them with a partner, all for the purpose of receiving constructive feedback Make sure ideas and content are addressed first; correcting the English should be secondary Finally, ask students to rewrite the piece They should use the feedback they received to revise and edit it into a piece they feel Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 good about Such finished pieces are often shared with the class or posted publicly, and depending on the assignment, you may even choose to “publish” everyone’s writing into a class booklet Tactful correction of student’s writing is essential Written correction is potentially damaging to confidence because it’s very visible and permanent on the page Always make positive comments and respond to the content, not just the language Focus on helping the student clarify the meaning of the writing Especially at lower levels, choose selectively what to correct and what to ignore Spelling should be a low priority as long as words are recognizable To reduce ink on the page, don’t correct all errors or rewrite sentences for the student Make a mark where the error is and let the student figure out what’s wrong and how to fix it At higher levels you can tell students ahead of time exactly what kinds of errors (verbs, punctuation, spelling, word choice) you will correct and ignore other errors If possible, in addition to any written feedback you provide, try to respond orally to your student’s writing, making comments on the introduction, overall clarity, organization, and any unnecessary information b Classification Below is the classification of writing section in grade 10 When classifying and understanding their types and features clearly we can prepare lesson plans for writing periods better Text types Letters Examples - complain Units Unit Features - Language: formal - filling in a form Unit - Logical ordering of ideas - announcement - confirmation - invitation - acceptance & refusal - giving directions Unit 14 Unit Unit 10 Unit 11 Unit - routines - people’s background - profile - instructions Unit Unit Unit 12 Unit - Language: informal Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 - a film Unit 13 Language: friendly, - a city - advantages Unit 15 & Unit descriptive - Language: formal Expository disadvantages of mass - generalization-to (explaining) media - tables & charts - Specific ordering of ideas or Unit 9, facts 16 What students need to in order to write? When you ask your students to write any topic you should certainly know that they understand clearly the following problems:  know the aim – why they are writing  know the reader – who they are writing to  know the genre – what type of text they are writing  have enough time for:  thinking about the topic  brainstorming ideas  planning ahead carefully  drafting as many times as they can  Students have constant feedback from teacher as well as their partners during the writing process Writing as a process We can summarize the writing process as the chart below: Getting ideas together Being motivated planning to write Planning Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Final version drafting Revising replanning redrafting The meanings of some writing activities There are a large number of activities or tasks in writing period All of these aim to develop writing skill for students Also, we easily recognize the logical relation of these activities or tasks In English textbook 10, each writing lesson often consists of or tasks constructed as spiral type If the lesson has tasks, first two tasks (if the lesson has four tasks, first three tasks) provide students with genre, vocabulary, structures, etc (prepare to write) and at the same time help them use range of language features appropriately After finishing these tasks, the students have “a good source of information” and “coming up with ideas”  writing production (final task) Understanding the aim, meaning of each activity, function and requirement of each task is very important It is not simple to finish those tasks but more importantly how to organize the class: work individually, in pairs, in groups or whole class? What is the process (how many steps)? How long they write?  Feedback: from doing the tasks the students can draw the things preparing for production Now look at some types of tasks in writing lesson class Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 + Copying: this is the task to consolidate students’ knowledge One student copies one sentence of the conversation or paragraph that they have just learnt and then the next student writes down the next sentence It is the chain dialogue By this way the students must understand what they write Teacher should use this one as Warm-up Example: In Unit 1: A day in the life of … to prepare for writing narrative teacher can ask students to write a short conversation: Student 1: What did Nam yesterday afternoon? Student 2: He went to the library Student 3: What book did he read? Student 4: He read an English book Student 5: How long did he read? ……………… Then teacher has students collect the answers to make a short paragraph “Nam went to the library yesterday afternoon, he went there to read an English book, he read …” After finishing this task the students define the kind of writing they are going to write + Constructing dialogue: there are kinds of this in English textbook 10 - Students are given a writing sample After reading it they use the suggestion to finish the similar task We can see this kind of task in Unit 1, Unit 3, Unit 6, Unit 8, Unit 9, Unit 14 - Students are given jumbled sentences They have to rearrange them to make a good conversation We can see this kind of task in Unit 11 (task 2) - Students are given unfinished conversation and some disordered sentences They have to finish the conversation by filling the blanks to make good one from disordered sentences or from the information they think suitable for each blank We can see this kind of task in Unit 2, Unit 4, Unit 10 (task 2), Unit 11 (task 1) 10 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 + Expanding frames: students have to finish the writing based on the given frame This can be a letter, a biography, etc., related to the writing topic We can see this kind of task in Unit 10 (task 3), Unit 12 + Idea frames: Students are given a reading task and they have to answer some questions about that From answering those questions the students themselves draw out important things to remember Basing on the frame of questions and the given reading task they write another similarly required one We can see this kind of task in Unit 5, Unit 13, Unit 14, Unit 15, Unit 16 + Parallel: Students are required to read a paragraph and then they write a similar one but replace by new information We can see this kind of task in Unit 3, Unit 6, Unit 7, Unit Some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 As I mentioned above there are many difficulties in writing period in grade 10, how can we solve them? In my opinion we should as following: a To some objective problems: The teacher divides the class into groups or pairs according to the aim of lesson While the students are working, teacher should walk around to give help if necessary Teacher can guide them to correct mistakes by themselves or help their partners correct mistakes It’s not necessary to carry out all the steps of teaching writing in class if the lesson is too long Some steps the teacher can ask the students to at home For example: Teacher can ask students to prepare vocabulary, structures, outline, writing topic at home Students can draft their writings at home and final production is continued in class Teacher should let students find out knowledge or social knowledge relating to the lesson so that they can have necessary information they need in expressing ideas Teacher shouldn’t give all ideas for students Teacher should share or exchange his wonder or plan with his colleagues in order to find out the effective solutions for difficulties Teacher should use suggestions to encourage students to overcome their shortage of vocabulary, opinion, structures, … 11 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Teacher should explain, encourage that English is not only for tests or examinations but also for the needs in daily life, it’s important for them to have good English in international economic integration period b To some problems from students: The pre-writing stage is a very important step for students to consolidate vocabulary, structures and it helps them create ideas for writing In this stage, teacher should provide essential structures and vocabulary relating to topic for students to express opinions Teacher should explain to students how to start writing carefully, guide them through simple task first, which is suitable for their ability Teacher should use suggestion not only by language but also by pictures, visual aids and writing samples Teacher should help students express their ideas by English to diminish the influence of mother tongue in writing process Teacher should help students get familiar with writing process by using different stages to suggest practical writings to them Teacher should help students find out exact reader and aim for every writing task If the aim for each task in textbook is not clear enough, the teacher should explain more clearly by different ways (the explanation should promote creative thinking of students) so that they can find out right reader and aim for the whole writing Teacher should help students simplify the connection ideas to reduce sentences or paragraph not clear or coherent Teacher should use practical information or knowledge close to daily activities Teacher should organize writing activities such as: games, designing posters, creative writing, poems, … to make the climate of the class more exciting Teacher should not give students compulsory homework because it makes students study passively Teacher should encourage students’ reading at home instead of writing task 12 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Demonstration: To make a teaching period really effective, it is very important for a teacher to define specific duties and find out emphasis on knowledge for students in a period in common and especially in writing period Let’s look at specific duties and objectives to be achieved of some writing lessons in English textbook 10 Writing lesson of Unit 1: Writing a narrative Task 1: Students have to duties at the same time: - find all the verbs used in the past simple: stared, was, arrived, got on, … - find connectors: on that day, at first, then, … Teacher should ask students to scan the passage to finish the task Task 2: In this task teacher should remind students to finish three parts: - Events (these are the activities happening before the climax): got on plane, plane took off, … - Climax (this is the most noticeable part): we thought we had only minutes to live - Conclusion (this part often lies at the end of the story and states the narrator’s impression or feeling): pilot announced that everything was right, we landed safely Task 3: Before doing this task teacher should remind students how to conjugate the verbs to make them suitable for story time Writing lesson of Unit 7: Writing about advantages and disadvantages of the mass media Task 1: Teacher lets students read about the advantages and disadvantages of television and underline some useful structures used in the table such as: + help us to learn, encourage us to buy  help / encourage S.O to sth + make things memorable, make us aware of, make us passive, make people 13 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 violent  make S.O / sth + adjective Teacher asks students to retell the advantages and disadvantages of television, using the above structures Task 2: Students can use Task to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the mass media and write them down in the columns Teacher should remind students every type of the mass media has two sides: good one and bad one Suggested answer Radio Advantages - Make people happy / life easier Disadvantages - Waste time - Relax - Make people passive - Broaden knowledge and understanding Newspapers The Internet - Share opinions / experiences - Make people happy / life easier - Harm people eyes: be short- - Get information on many sighted fields: culture, art, business - Cost time and money - Relax and entertain - Make people happy / life easier - Make people passive - Harm people eyes: be short- - Provide quick and daily access sighted to information and entertainment - Cost time and money - Get information on many - Make people passive fields: culture, art, business - Affect people’s life Task 3: Students write a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantages of one of the mass media discussed in Task Before students write teacher should give them an outline to help them write more easily Students can write in deductive method or inductive one Form  Introduction: General introduction disadvantages 14 about the advantages and Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10  Body: - topic sentence: - Advantages - supporting sentences: + Firstly / First of all, Secondly, …., Finally / Lastly + Another (dis)advantage is that …… + In addition, / Also, / And, / Moreover, / Besides, / - Disadvantages Furthermore, … Introducing contrast: However, / On the other hand, / … But, …  Conclusion: conclusion about the advantages and disadvantages In conclusion, / In short / On balance, I’d like to say that … Useful language: - Tense: simple present tense - Expressions: - help / encourage us to + V - enlarge / broaden knowledge - make S.O / sth + adjective Writing lesson of Unit 13: Describing a film Task 1: After reading the description of the film Titanic students answer the questions about it From answering these questions teacher should help them draw out the structures to understand how to describe a film - The name of the film + The name of the film is … - Kind of the film + It’s a romantic / detective / horror film … - The content of the film + It’s about … + The film is a story of … + The film tells us a story about … - The setting of the film 15 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 + The film is set in … (a small village in 1998) + The story takes place in … - what the film is based on + The film is based on a true story in 1990 + The film is based on a novel of Nam Cao + The film is made based on the event of … - The main characters + The two main characters of the film are Leonardo and Vivien + The main actor / actress of the film is … - Your knowledge about the characters + Leonardo is very famous actor + Nicole Kidman has won some Oscar prizes - The ending of the film + The film has a sad / happy / tragic ending - Your feeling of the film + I think the film is very interesting / boring / frightening / … - The lesson you can learn from the film + The film makes me realize that I must appreciate the life and what we have + The film strengthens my belief in human ability + Thanks to the film, I realize that if we are strongly determined, we can make our wishes come true despite the difficulties in life Task 2: In this task students are required to write about a film they have seen They can use the description of Titanic and the questions in Task as suggestions Before doing this task teacher should help students draw out the outline of describing a film Thanks to this outline it’s easy for students to this task E RESULT AFTER APPLYING THE RESEARCH IN TEACHING From some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 and the ways of teaching, the table below expresses clearly the differences in the students’ attitude 16 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 towards the way to participate in the lessons Before applying the research in teaching not all students in classes take part in the lessons actively After applying it, students join in the lessons more actively The climate of classes is more exciting Class Number of Before applying the research in After applying the research in 10A5 10A9 students 44 teaching teaching about 52% of students take part about 83% of students take part 45 actively in the lessons actively in the lessons about 59% of students take part about 93% of students take part actively in the lessons actively in the lessons F CONCLUSION: To make my writing period in grade 10 more effective I have already tried to solve problems happening in each period Despite my trying a lot, the content of this research is only my personal experience of teaching Therefore, there must be some mistakes that I myself still cannot find out I hope I will get suggestions from the readers as many as possible I hope that the study will make contribution to the better situation of teaching and learning English Thank you very much Bien Hoa city, May 22nd 2012 Composer Nguyen Thi Xuan Mai REFERENCE BOOKS Practical handbook of language teaching (David Cross) 17 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 A course in language teaching - Practical and Theory (Penny Ur) Cambrige university press Giáo trình giáo học pháp (Tổ ngoại ngữ –Khoa ngôn ngữ và văn hóa Anh - Mĩ Úc – Trường đại học quốc gia Hà Nội) Phương pháp dạy tiếng Anh Trung học phổ thông (Nguyễn Hạnh Dung) Marquette University’s website Colorado State University’s website SỞ GD & ĐT ĐỒNG NAI Trường THPT Nguyễn Hữu Cảnh CỘNG HOÀ XÃ HỘI CHỦ NGHĨA VIỆT NAM Độc lập – Tự – Hạnh phúc 18 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Biên Hoà, ngày 22 tháng năm 2013 PHIẾU NHẬN XÉT, ĐÁNH GIÁ SÁNG KIẾN KINH NGHIỆM Năm học: 2011 - 2012 Tên sáng kiến kinh nghiệm: Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Họ tên tác giả: Nguyễn Thị Xuân Mai Đơn vị (tổ): Tổ Ngoại Ngữ Lĩnh vực: Quản lý giáo dục Phương pháp dạy học môn  Phương pháp giáo dục Lĩnh vực khác …………………………  Tính mới: - Có giải pháp hoàn toàn - Có giải pháp cải tiến đổi từ giải pháp có Hiệu quả: - Hoàn toàn triển khai áp dụng toàn ngành có hiệu cao  - Có tính cải tiến đổi từ giải pháp có triển khai áp dụng toàn ngành có hiệu cao  - Hoàn toàn triển khai áp dụng đơn vị có hiệu cao  - Có tính cải tiến đổi triển khai áp dụng đơn vị có hiệu  Khả áp dụng: - Cung cấp luận khoa học cho việc hoạch định đường lối sách: Tốt  Khá  Đạt  - Đưa giải pháp khuyến nghị có khả ứng dụng thực tiễn, dễ thực dễ vào sống: Tốt  Khá  Đạt  - Đã áp dụng vào thực tế đạt hiệu có khả áp dụng đạt hiệu phạm rộng: Tốt  Khá  Đạt  XÁC NHẬN CỦA TỔ CHUYÊN MÔN Tổ trưởng Lý Thị Thanh Tâm HIỆU TRƯỞNG Phan Quang Vinh 19 [...]... APPLYING THE RESEARCH IN TEACHING From some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 and the ways of teaching, the table below expresses clearly the differences in the students’ attitude 16 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 towards the way to participate in the lessons Before applying the research in teaching not all students in classes take part in. . .Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 + Expanding frames: students have to finish the writing based on the given frame This can be a letter, a biography, etc., related to the writing topic We can see this kind of task in Unit 10 (task 3), Unit 12 + Idea frames: Students are given a reading task and they have to answer some questions about that From answering... HOÀ XÃ HỘI CHỦ NGHĨA VIỆT NAM Độc lập – Tự do – Hạnh phúc 18 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Biên Hoà, ngày 22 tháng 5 năm 2013 PHIẾU NHẬN XÉT, ĐÁNH GIÁ SÁNG KIẾN KINH NGHIỆM Năm học: 2011 - 2012 Tên sáng kiến kinh nghiệm: Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Họ và tên tác giả: Nguyễn Thị Xuân Mai Đơn vị (tổ): Tổ Ngoại... problems in writing period in grade 10 As I mentioned above there are many difficulties in writing period in grade 10, how can we solve them? In my opinion we should do as following: a To some objective problems: The teacher divides the class into groups or pairs according to the aim of lesson While the students are working, teacher should walk around to give help if necessary Teacher can guide them to correct... 11 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 Teacher should explain, encourage that English is not only for tests or examinations but also for the needs in daily life, it’s important for them to have good English in international economic integration period b To some problems from students: The pre -writing stage is a very important step for students to consolidate vocabulary,... as: games, designing posters, creative writing, poems, … to make the climate of the class more exciting Teacher should not give students compulsory homework because it makes students study passively Teacher should encourage students’ reading at home instead of writing task 12 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 6 Demonstration: To make a teaching period really... important for a teacher to define specific duties and find out emphasis on knowledge for students in a period in common and especially in writing period Let’s look at specific duties and objectives to be achieved of some writing lessons in English textbook 10 Writing lesson of Unit 1: Writing a narrative Task 1: Students have to do 2 duties at the same time: - find all the verbs used in the past simple:... of television and underline some useful structures used in the table such as: + help us to learn, encourage us to buy  help / encourage S.O to do sth + make things memorable, make us aware of, make us passive, make people 13 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 violent  make S.O / sth + adjective Teacher asks students to retell the advantages and disadvantages... that the study will make contribution to the better situation of teaching and learning English Thank you very much Bien Hoa city, May 22nd 2012 Composer Nguyen Thi Xuan Mai REFERENCE BOOKS 1 Practical handbook of language teaching (David Cross) 17 Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10 2 A course in language teaching - Practical and Theory (Penny Ur) Cambrige university... Introduction: General introduction disadvantages 14 about the advantages and Classification and some ways to solve problems in writing period in grade 10  Body: - topic sentence: - Advantages - supporting sentences: + Firstly / First of all, Secondly, …., Finally / Lastly + Another (dis)advantage is that …… + In addition, / Also, / And, / Moreover, / Besides, / - Disadvantages Furthermore, … Introducing contrast: