IELTS Task 1 Lesson Lesson 1: IELTS Task 1 Describing a Graph Over Time This lesson explains how to describe a line graph or bar chart for IELTS task 1 that is over time.. Now look at
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Lesson 1: IELTS Task 1
Describing a Graph Over Time
This lesson explains how to describe a line graph or bar chart for IELTS task 1
that is over time This uses an example of a bar chart, but it will be the same
for a line graph
When you get a chart or graph to describe, it is always important to check whether there is a time frame or not If there is, you will need to use
the language of change
However, it is not enough just to describe the changes of each element (ActiveX, Java and Net in this case) on their own and ignore how they relate to each other
Look at the question – you are asked to compare the data as well So you must
also compare the elements where relevant in your IELTS task 1
You must also group datatogether to make sure you have a well organized and
coherent answer
To do this, you need to look for similarities and differences when you first analyze the graph for IELTS task 1, and decide what can be logically put
together or not
Now look at the bar chart below and read the IELTS task 1 model answer
The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the download rate per week of ActiveX, Java and Net computer packages over a period of five weeks It can clearly be seen that ActiveX was the most popular computer package to download, whilst Net was the least popular of the three
To begin, ActiveX and Java showed a similar pattern, with both gradually increasing from week 1 to week 5 However, the purchases of Active X remained significantly higher than for the other product over this time frame In week 1, purchases of ActiveX stood at around 75,000, while those for Java were about 30,000 lower With the exception of a slight fall in week 4, downloading of ActiveX kept increasing until it reached a peak in the final week of just over 120,000 Java also increased at a steady rate, finishing the period at 80,000 The product that was downloaded the least was Net This began at slightly under 40,000, and, in contrast to the other two products, fell over the next two weeks
to reach a low of approximately 25,000 It then increased sharply over the following two weeks to finish at about 50,000, which was well below that of ActiveX
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As you can see, there are several examples of this in the graph, so it is
important to learn how to use these correctly in order to successfully write an IELTS task 1 chart over time Here are some examples:
finishing the period at
You will need to practice this type of language, and also make sure you know a variety of structures to get a better score – if you keep repeating the same kind
of phrases this will show you have a more limited range of lexis and grammar
Here are some examples of where comparisons are made between the products
in the IELTS task 1 graph, and the language of comparison is highlighted in black:
It can clearly be seen that ActiveX was the most popularcomputer package to download, whilst Net was the least popular of the three
ActiveX and Java showed a similar trend, with bothgradually increasing from
week 1 to week 5
However, the purchases of Active X remained significantlyhigher than for the
other product over this time frame
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Java also increased at a steady rate, finishing the period at 80,000
The product that was downloaded the least was Net This began at slightly under 40,000, and, in contrast to the other two products, fell over the next
two weeks
It then increased sharply over the following two weeks to finish at about 50,000,
which was well below that of ActiveX
Grouping the Data
It is a good idea to divide your answer into paragraphs so it is well organized To
do this, you should group similar things together into paragraphs or sections
If you look at the chart, you will see that ActiveX and Java have a similar pattern, both steadily increasing over the period (apart from the slight fall of ActiveX in week 4), so these could be put together:
To begin, ActiveX and Java showed a similar trend, with both gradually
increasing from week 1 to week 5 However, the purchases of Active X remained significantly higher than for the other product over this time frame In week 1, purchases of ActiveX stood at around 75,000, while those for Java were about 30,000 lower With the exception of a slight fall in week 4, downloading of ActiveX kept rising until it reached a peak in the final week of just over 120,000 Java also increased at a steady rate, finishing the period at 80,000
On the other hand, Net is the lowest and it has a different pattern – falling and then rising again So this could be described in another paragraph:
The product that was downloaded the least was Net This began at slightly
under 40,000, and, in contrast to the other two products, fell over the next two weeks to a low of approximately 25,000 It then increased sharply over the following two weeks to finish at about 50,000, which was well below that of ActiveX
There is usually more than one way to group the data for an IELTS task 1, so this needs to be your decision As long as it is logical and makes your answer easy to follow and read, this should be ok
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This lesson will provide you with tips and advice on how to write an IELTS pie
chart for task 1
To begin, take a look at the pie chart below, and then answer the quiz questions
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and
from the UK in 2007
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
IELTS Pie Chart Quiz
1 What is the best way to organize your answer?
Write one paragraph about immigration and one about emigration
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2 What tense should you use to write about the IELTS pie chart?
The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK
in 2007 At first glance it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment
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of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth
Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this
The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively Although a significant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration
These will be the largest ones As you can see in the model answer,definite
job, looking for work, and formal study were all written about first, in order
of importance, as these are the main reasons that were chosen for moving
Items such as ‘other’ are usually less important and account for small amounts,
so can be left till the end
Make it easy to read
When you write a task 1, you should always group information in a logical
way to make it easy to follow and read
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categories together across the charts, focusing on similarities and differences,
rather than writing about each chart separately
If you write about each one separately, the person reading it will have to keep looking between the paragraphs in order to see how each category differs
Vary your language
As with any task 1, this is important You should not keep repeating the same structures The key language when you write about pie charts
is proportions and percentages
Common phrases to see are "the proportion of…" or "the percentage of…" However, you can also use other words and fractions These are some
examples from the model answer:
A large number of people
over a quarter of people
a small minority
A significant number of people
less than a fifth
This table presents some examples of how you can change percentages to fractions or ratios:
Percentage Fraction 80% four-fifths 75% three-quarters 70% seven in ten 65% two-thirds 60% three-fifths 55% more than half 50% half
45% more than two
fifths 40% two-fifths
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20% a fifth 15% less than a fifth 10% one in ten
5% one in twenty
Practice these phrases in a quiz
If the percentages are not exact as above, then you can usequalifiers to make
sure your description remains accurate Here are some examples:
Percentage Qualifier 77% just over three quarters 77% approximately three
quarters 49% just under a half 49% nearly a half 32% almost a third
This table presents some examples of how you can change percentages to other phrases:
Percentage proportion / number / amount
/ majority / minority 75% - 85% a very large majority
65% - 75% a significant proportion
10% - 15% a minority
5% a very small number
Practice these phrases in a quiz
The words above are interchageable, though number is forcountable
nouns and amount is for uncountable nouns
Follow this link to the writing pages to see another IELTS pie chart:
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It is less common in the writing test, but sometimes you will get anIELTS
process diagram to describe
This should follow the same format as any task 1:
1 Introduce the diagram
2 Give an overview of the main point/s
3 Give the detail
Follow this link about how to write a task 1
However, there are different types of task 1 (line graphs, pie charts, maps etc) and each requires knowledge of a certain type of language
This lesson will look at how to write an IELTS process diagram for task 1
What is an IELTS Process Diagram?
To begin, look at this question:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The diagram illustrates the process that is used to
manufacture bricks for the building industry
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the
main features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
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A process will have a number of stages that are in time order So you
should start at the beginning, and describe each stage through to the last one
In the example above, this is fairly clear It begins with the digging of the clay, and ends with delivery
Processes are not always this clear, and you may have to look more carefully to spot the beginning, and there may also be two things happening at the same time
So it is important that you look at other sample processes to get a good
understanding of how they can vary
Introduce the Diagram
As with any task 1, you can begin by paraphrasing the rubric:
The diagram explains the way in which bricks are made for the building industry
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Highlight the main points
An IELTS process diagram is different to a line, bar, pie chart or table in that there are not usually key changes or trends to identify However, you should
still give an overview of what is taking place
The ‘public band descriptors’ state that to achieve a band 6 or more for
‘task response’ the student must provide an overview in a task 1
As there are no trends to comment on, you can make a comment on, for
example, the number of stages in the process and how itbegins and ends:
Overall, there are eight stages in the process, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery
Giving the detail
Now you need to explain the IELTS process diagram, and there are two key aspects of language associated with this:
To begin, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a large
digger This clay is then placed onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the
clay into smaller pieces A roller assists in this process
Following this, sand and water are added to the clay, and this mixture is
turned into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter Next,
these bricks are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours
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They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then a high temperature (ranging from 200c to 1300c),followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 – 3 days.Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to their destinations
These connectors are the same you would use to write a graph over time when you explain a series of changes
These are some common IELTS process diagram connectors:
To begin Following this Next
Then After After that Before**
Subsequently Finally
** If you use before, this means that you will be mentioning a later stage
before an earlier stage, so you need to use it carefully If you can use it properly though, it will get noticed
Here is an example using stages four and five:
Before being dried in the oven, the mixture is turned into bricks by either placing
it into a mould or using a wire cutter
The Passive
When we describe an IELTS process, the focus is on the activities, NOT the
person doing them
When this is the case, we use the passive voice, not the active
This is a brief explanation of how to use the passive voice, but if you are new or unsure about using it, you should do some further study and practice
Most sentences use this structure:
Subject + Verb + Object
(S) A large digger (V) digs up (O) the clay in the ground
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When we use the passive voice, we make the object (the clay) the subject, and make the subject (the digger) the object We also add in the verb ‘to be’ and the past participle (or Verb 3)
(S) The clay in the ground (V) is dug up (O) by the digger
So throughout most of your description for your IELTS process diagram, you should be using the passive voice
This is difficult as some verbs cannot take the passive For example, 'to go' cannot be passive, so it is kept in the active voice:
the bricks go through a heating and cooling process
This is why you need to make sure you practice the passive so you know exactly how to use it
Also, as you will see from the description, it is more usual to to comment on who
or what is doing the action so the 'by " phrase is excluded
Here is the same example description with uses of the passive highlighted:
To begin, the clay (which is) used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by a large digger This clay is thenplaced onto a metal grid, which is
used to break up the clay into smaller pieces A roller assists in this process
Following this, sand and water are added to the clay, and this mixture is
turned into bricks by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter Next,
these bricks are placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours
In the subsequent stage, the bricks go through a heating and cooling process
They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then a high temperature (ranging
from 200c to 1300c), followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 – 3 days
Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to their destinations
Varying your Language
Sometimes it may be appropriate just to use the same language that you are given in the IELTS process diagram to describe it, but you should try to vary it
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the noun packaging in stage seven becomes:
Finally, the bricks are packed…
Follow this link from the model task 1 pages to see a full IELTS process diagram model answer for this process
Lesson 4:
IELTS Bar and Line Graph
This is an example of an IELTS bar and line graph together It is not
uncommon to get two graphs to describe at the same time in the IELTS test
It can look a bit scary at first However, when you look more closely, you'll see
it is probably no more difficult than having one graph
Take a look at the question and the graph:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to
1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries
visited by UK residents in 1999
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
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When you state what the graph shows, mention both of them Here is a
sample first sentence of the introduction:
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in millions from the UK who
went abroad and those that came to the UK between 1979 and 1999, while the
bar chart shows which countries were the most popular for UK residents to
visit in 1999
Remember to write this in your own words and not to copy from the question
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this, mention the most interesting things from each:
Overall, it can be seen that visits to and from the UK increased, and
that France was the most popular countryto go to
Body Paragraphs
If there are two graphs and a lot of information, you will have to be careful not
to describe everything as you may then have too much information
Also, the examiner is looking to see that you can select the important
things and not describe every single detail
So the key skill when you have two graphs is being able to pick out the
important information or summarize things in a concise way, otherwise you will end up writing too much and probably run out of time
Here is an example description for the bar and line graph:
To begin, the number of visits abroad by UK residents was higher than for those that came to the UK, and this remained so throughout the period The figures started at a similar amount, around 10 million, but visits abroad increased significantly to over 50 million, whereas the number of overseas residents rose steadily to reach just under 30 million
By far the most popular countries to visit in 1999 were France at approximately
11 million visitors, followed by Spain at 9 million The USA, Greece, and Turkey were far less popular at around 4, 3 and 2 million visitors respectively
As you can see, the first paragraph discusses the line graph, and the second the bar chart
You will not usually need to mix up the descriptions This will only make things complicated and difficult to follow Writing about the first one and then the second one is ok
As with any task 1, you will need to make sure you use the right language, make comparisons, and group data appropriately
Follow this link to view the full graph with its model answer
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Describing Graph Trends
This exercise introduces some common vocabulary and grammar needed for describing graph trends
The language that can be used for describing graphs in IELTS is extensive This lesson introduces some of the most common language used
It also shows you how it can be used grammatically in sentences
Vocabulary for Describing Graph Trends
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has dropped, dropped
clause that includes some
analysis; e.g 'Spending
rose in all three years', an
'_ing' form can be used to
describe numbers and
dates
Spending rose in all three
years, increasing from 17.6%
Have a look at the table below
Then, to help you with describing graph trends, decide which word should go in the gap in the example answer
Expenditure on Education in Hong Kong 1995 to 1998
Breakdown of spending 1995-6 1996-7 1997-8
Total expenditure
($ million) 33,611 39,165 45,315
As % of government budget 17.6% 18% 18.2%
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Public expenditure on education in Hong Kong (1) _ continuously from 1995 to 1998 In academic year 1995-6 it (2) _ HK$33,611 million, (3) to $39,165 million in 1996-7 and
$45,315 million in 1997-8 As a percentage of the government’s budget
spending on education also increased (4) year, from 17.6% to 18% and then to 18.2%
However, the percentage of expenditure spent on primary, secondary and tertiary education did not show the same consistent (5) _ In 1995-6 expenditure on primary education was 22.2% of the education budget, 33.7% (6) _ on secondary, and 35.9% on tertiary
In 1996, (7) of 0.8% in spending on tertiary education was finanaced by a (8) _ in spending of 0.7% in primary and 0.5% in secondary schooling
In 1997-8 tertiary spending as a percent of the education budget
(9) _to its 1995-6 level The percentage spent on primary education (10) to 21.6% and that on secondary to 33.5%, both figures being less than 1995-6 levels
This lesson will hopefully have helped you with the basics of describing graph trends and some of the different structures you can use
Remember though this example has only used a few of the words possible for describing change
It's important to vary your language so look around the IELTS buddy site, for example on the model graphs, to see what other language you can use
Lesson 6: Bar Chart Exercise
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comparison, contrast and percentages
Look at the graph and then read the model answer
Choose the right word to go in the gap
Bar Chart Exercise - Gap Fill
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The chart shows the percentage of drugs taken by girls and
boys in a school in New Zealand
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
Place the right word into the space Make sure you write (or copy and paste) the
word exactly as it appears in the box, otherwise it will get marked as wrong
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The 1 information on the quantity of
drugs 2 in New Zealand take, divided
immediately apparent that hashish or marijuana is used 5.
any of the other drugs, whereas LSD is used 6.
At first glance we can see that boys take more drugs than
girls for 6 out of 7 of the drugs listed, however an 7. number
of boys and girls take cocaine
To begin with, boys use more hashish or marijuana than girls
at 8 and 29% respectively Following this, boys take
heroin, opium or morphine 9 but
girls 10
On the other hand, the 11 amphetamines and
solvents 12 for both boys and girls at 2% and 3% for girls
and 13 both drugs for boys Next, the pattern for LSD and
medical drugs 14 the same for both genders at 1% for girls and 3% for boys Finally, boys and girls take
Scroll down to see the full bar chart exercise answer:
Bar Chart Exercise - Answer
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children in New Zealand take, divided by 3 gender and measured 4 in percentages Overall, it is immediately apparent that hashish or marijuana is
used 5 more than any of the other drugs, whereas LSD is used 6 the least
At first glance we can see that boys take more drugs than girls for 6 out of 7 of
the drugs listed, however an 7 equal number of boys and girls take cocaine
To begin with, boys use more hashish or marijuana than girls at 8.around
33% and 29% respectively Following this, boys take heroin, opium or
morphine 9 at approximately 8%, but girls 10 at only 5%
On the other hand, the 11 numbers for amphetamines and solvents12 are
similar for both boys and girls at 2% and 3% for girls and13 4% for both
drugs for boys Next, the pattern for LSD and medical drugs 14 is exactly the
same for both genders at 1% for girls and 3% for boys Finally, boys and girls
take cocaine 15 at the same level, 4%
Lesson 7: Line Graph Worksheet - Gap Fill
This line graph worksheet helps you with the language of change that is very
commonly needed to write about graphs, bar charts and tables in IELTS task 1
Firstly, take a look at the graph and check you understand it
What does it show?
What are the main trends?
What are some important details?
Then look at the line graph answer and carefully work out which word from the drop down menu fits in the gap
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Line Graph Worksheet - Gap Fill
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The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed
from 1981 to 2007, in grams
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
Gap Fill - Choose the correct word
The graph shows the quantity of margarine, low fat spreads and butter
consumed between 1981 and 2007 The quantities are measured in grams Over the period 1981 to 2007 as a whole, there
was 1 in the consumption of butter and
margarine and a 2 in the consumption of low fat-fat spreads
Butter was the most popular fat at the beginning of the period, and
consumption 3 of about 160 grams per person
per week in about 1986 After this, there was 4. The consumption of margarine began lower than that for butter at 90 grams
Following this, in 1991, it 5 that of butter for the