Now write in your own paper notebook or if you will take the computer basedtest on your computer a detailed first body paragraph about the first 2 or 3 keyfeatures you identified as main
Trang 2IELTS WRITING SUCCESS The Essential Step by Step Guide for Task 1Writing 8 Practice Tests for Bar Charts & Line Graphs w/Band 9 ModelAnswer Key & On-line Support
Smoking Habits in the UK
Unit 3 Chart 3 Example Task 1 Question and Guidance | Line Graph -Unit 4 Chart 4 Practice Test and Guidance | Line Graph - Smokers byDifferent Age Groups in the UK
Trang 3Unit 5 Chart 5 Example Task 1 Question and Guidance | Bar Chart -Unit 6 Chart 6 Practice Test and Guidance | Bar Chart - Population Growth inAsia
Unit 7 Chart 7 Example Task 1 Question and Guidance | Line Graph - Cost ofDigital Accessories in the USA
Unit 8 Chart 8 Practice Test and Guidance | Line Graph - Sales of DigitalAccessories in Brazil
Unit 9 The 5 Step Approach | How to write successful answers for IELTSAcademic Task 1 Writing
Unit 10 Essential Information for Writing Task 1 Answers
Unit 11 Band 9 Model Answers
ANSWER KEY
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Trang 6How to use this book.
Trang 8http//:www.ieltswritinghelp.com/ and completing the exercises according to theadvice in the book while following the video lessons
Important Note.
Students should be aware that in the video lessons, the teacher explains in detailabout how to write 8 to 9 band score answers in accordance with the
requirements of the Official IELTS Marking Criteria used by examiners to scorereal IELTS exams The step by step advice provided in this book and in the videolessons is key to writing high band scoring answers.
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Trang 11This book contains 8 tasks for line graphs and bar charts, and in unit 11, there isa band 9 answer key On the partner website, you will also find video lessonsand an essay marking and correction service, For more information, connect towww.ieltswritinghelp.com.
Trang 13UNIT 11 Band 9 Answer Key.
Trang 17Unit 1 Chart 1 Example Task 1 Question and Guidance.
Trang 19You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart gives information about commuter travel in Tokyo from 1960 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features andmake comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Trang 21The following exercises will help you identify chart data faster Obviously,there's little time for working out in a real test, but with practice, you will start toprocess these steps more quickly
1.1 STEP 1 Understanding the Question and Brainstorming DifferentVocabulary.
To analyse the chart, you should read the instructions twice, study the chart datacarefully and try to think of new vocabulary words and phrases Make notes inyour own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer based test) on yourcomputer
Trang 231.2 STEP 2 Planning & Writing the Introduction & the OverviewParagraphs.
Watch the free video to see how I complete this step on the website
To plan for the introduction (paragraph 1), you need to identify what, when,where and the unit of measurement used in the chart So, ask yourself:
Trang 24To identify the general trend (for the overview - paragraph 2), you need toidentify what happened GENERALLY or OVERALL from the beginning ofthe time period to the end of the period I show you how to do this in thefree video on the website.
So, now, you should write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take thecomputer based test) on your computer, a very short summary of what you cansee happened generally or overall in the chart
Trang 26Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computerbased test) on your computer a brief introduction including the informationabout what, when, where, unit of measure that you considered above.
Trang 28Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer your overview paragraph to express the general trend
Trang 301.3 STEP 3 Identifying Key Features for the Body Paragraphs.
Try to identify the 4-6 key features from the chart data that you will need tocompare in the body paragraphs You may find 2 key features is enough for eachbody paragraph but write a few extra if you find it easy to identify them Jotthese down in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer
Trang 321.4 STEP 4 Writing the 2 Short Body Paragraphs.
Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer a detailed first body paragraph about the first 2 or 3 keyfeatures you identified as main features in step 3 You might only need to use 2of these to achieve a good word count, so do not worry about including
everything
Trang 34Now write a detailed second body paragraph in your own paper notebookor (if you will take the computer based test) on your computer using whatyou think are the best main features remaining from the main features youidentified in step 3 Try not to write too much If you think you alreadyhave over 170 words in total, and you have 2 body paragraphs, try to finishyour answer to save time You need as much time as you can save for
completing task 2 writing.
Trang 361.5 STEP 5 Now check your answer.
Because of test nerves and time pressure, when you do a real IELTS writing test,you will probably make little mistakes that you do not normally make This iswhy checking your answer is so important If you have any time left, just readyour answer and check simple things, like spellings, verb tenses, subject-verbagreement Finally, check you are correct with converting any data to fractionsand that you have used good adverbs to ‘approximate’ data descriptions Thiswill add better grammar, vocabulary and accuracy to you answer Clearly, bypractising this step, you will make fewer mistakes to begin with, and your abilityto read and check your work for errors will improve
Trang 37Column Bar Chart - Commuter Travel in Seoul
(South Korea).
Trang 39You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart gives information about commuter travel in Seoul from 1960 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features andmake comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Trang 412.1 STEP 1 Understanding the Question and Brainstorming Vocabulary.
To analyse the chart, you should read the instructions twice, study the chart datacarefully and write down in your own paper notebook or type on your computer(computer based test) any new vocabulary words and phrases you can think of
Trang 43Now, make brief notes in your own paper notebook or type on yourcomputer (computer based test) answers to the following questions toprepare for writing the introduction and overview.
- what type of chart is it? (is it a bar chart, line graph, pie chart etc?)
- what does it show and compare? (you need to identify - What exactly is beingcompared?)
- where is it about? (the place)
- when is the time period? (from when to when? Try to write in bettervocabulary)
- what is the unit of measurement? (dollars? kilos? tonnes? euros? etc)
To identify the general trend (for the overview paragraph), you need to identifywhat happened GENERALLY or OVERALL from the beginning of the timeperiod to the end of the period See the free videos on the website
www.ieltswritinghelp.com
Trang 44Now, write in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computerbased test) a very short summary of what you can see happened generally oroverall in the chart.
Trang 46Now, write a brief introduction in your own paper notebook or type on yourcomputer (computer based test)
Trang 48Now write an overview in your own paper notebook or type on your computer(computer based test) to express the general trend.
Trang 50Write down 4-6 key features from the chart data - do this in your own papernotebook or type on your computer (computer based test) to make comparisonsin the body paragraphs
2.4 STEP 4 Writing the Body Paragraphs:
do this in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computer basedtest)
Trang 52Now write a detailed first body paragraph about 2 or 3 key features from step 3 -do this in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computer basedtest)
Trang 542.5 STEP 5 Now check your answer.
Trang 55Line Graph - Smoking Habits in the UK.
Trang 57The chart gives information about smoking habits in the UK Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant
Write at least 150 words.
Trang 59Video lessons are available on the website There, you can also see how Iwrote the band 9 answers you can see in unit 11.
The following exercises will help you identify chart data faster Obviously,there's little time for working out in a real test, but with practice, you will start toprocess these steps more quickly
3.1 STEP 1 Understanding the Question and Brainstorming DifferentVocabulary.
To analyse the chart, you should read the instructions twice, study the chart datacarefully and try to think of new vocabulary words and phrases Make notes inyour own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer based test) on yourcomputer
Trang 613.2 STEP 2 Planning & Writing the Introduction & the OverviewParagraphs.
Watch the free video to see how I complete this step on the website
To plan for the introduction (paragraph 1), you need to identify what, when,where and the unit of measurement used in the chart So, ask yourself:
Trang 62To identify the general trend (for the overview - paragraph 2), you need toidentify what happened GENERALLY or OVERALL from the beginning ofthe time period to the end of the period I show you how to do this in thefree video on the website.
So, now, you should write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take thecomputer based test) on your computer, a very short summary of what you cansee happened generally or overall in the chart
Trang 64Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computerbased test) on your computer a brief introduction including the informationabout what, when, where, unit of measure that you considered above.
Trang 66Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer your overview paragraph to express the general trend
Trang 683.3 STEP 3 Identifying Key Features for the Body Paragraphs.
Try to identify the 4-6 key features from the chart data that you will need tocompare in the body paragraphs You may find 2 key features is enough for eachbody paragraph but write a few extra if you find it easy to identify them Jotthese down in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer
Trang 703.4 STEP 4 Writing the 2 Short Body Paragraphs.
Now write in your own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer basedtest) on your computer a detailed first body paragraph about the first 2 or 3 keyfeatures you identified as main features in step 3 You might only need to use 2of these to achieve a good word count, so do not worry about including
everything
Trang 72Now write a detailed second body paragraph in your own paper notebook or (ifyou will take the computer based test) on your computer using what you thinkare the best main features remaining from the main features you identified instep 3 Try not to write too much If you think you already have over 170 wordsin total, and you have 2 body paragraphs, try to finish your answer to save time.You need as much time as you can save for completing task 2 writing
Trang 743.5 STEP 5 Now check your answer.
Because of test nerves and time pressure, when you do a real IELTS writing test,you will probably make little mistakes that you do not normally make This iswhy checking your answer is so important If you have any time left, just readyour answer and check simple things, like spellings, verb tenses, subject-verbagreement Finally, check you are correct with converting any data to fractionsand that you have used good adverbs to ‘approximate’ data descriptions Thiswill add better grammar, vocabulary and accuracy to you answer Clearly, bypractising this step, you will make fewer mistakes to begin with, and your abilityto read and check your work for errors will improve
Trang 75Line Graph - Smokers by Different Age Groups in the
UK.
Trang 77You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart gives information about the percentage of smokers in different agegroups in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Trang 794.1 STEP 1 Understanding the Question and Brainstorming Vocabulary.
To analyse the chart, you should read the instructions twice, study the chart datacarefully and write down in your own paper notebook or type on your computer(computer based test) any new vocabulary words and phrases you can think of
Trang 81Now, make brief notes in your own paper notebook or type on yourcomputer (computer based test) answers to the following questions toprepare for writing the introduction and overview.
- what type of chart is it? (is it a bar chart, line graph, pie chart etc?)
- what does it show and compare? (you need to identify - What exactly is beingcompared?)
- where is it about? (the place)
- when is the time period? (from when to when? Try to write in bettervocabulary)
- what is the unit of measurement? (dollars? kilos? tonnes? euros? etc)
To identify the general trend (for the overview paragraph), you need to identifywhat happened GENERALLY or OVERALL from the beginning of the timeperiod to the end of the period See the free videos on the website
www.ieltswritinghelp.com
Trang 82Now, write in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computerbased test) a very short summary of what you can see happened generally oroverall in the chart.
Trang 84Now, write a brief introduction in your own paper notebook or type on yourcomputer (computer based test)
Trang 86Now write an overview in your own paper notebook or type on your computer(computer based test) to express the general trend.
Trang 88Write down 4-6 key features from the chart data - do this in your own papernotebook or type on your computer (computer based test) to make comparisonsin the body paragraphs
4.4 STEP 4 Writing the Body Paragraphs:
do this in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computer basedtest)
Trang 90Now write a detailed first body paragraph about 2 or 3 key features from step 3 -do this in your own paper notebook or type on your computer (computer basedtest)
Trang 924.5 STEP 5 Now check your answer.
Trang 93Bar Chart - Population Growth in South America.
Trang 95The chart gives information about population growth in South America from2000 to 20150
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features andmake comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words
Trang 97The following exercises will help you identify chart data faster Obviously,there's little time for working out in a real test, but with practice, you will start toprocess these steps more quickly
5.1 STEP 1 Understanding the Question and Brainstorming DifferentVocabulary.
To analyse the chart, you should read the instructions twice, study the chart datacarefully and try to think of new vocabulary words and phrases Make notes inyour own paper notebook or (if you will take the computer based test) on yourcomputer