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7 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Chào sĩ tử IELTS, Lời đầu tiên, đội ngũ quản lý group IELTS Zone - Cộng đồng chia sẻ kiến thức IELTS hàng đầu xin gửi tới bạn lời cảm ơn ln tin tưởng đồng hành Sự ủng hộ ý kiến chia sẻ bạn động lực giúp trì viết tâm huyết Group Chúng tự tin Group viết cho thành viên cách chất lượng đặn Trên tay bạn tài liệu “7 ngày bứt phá IELTS Writing” Bộ tài liệu biên soạn đội ngũ đầy tâm huyết từ IZONE, bao gồm tổng cộng 14 viết mẫu Writing Task Writing Task band kèm theo thích kỹ từ vựng, mẫu câu ăn điểm, gây ấn tượng với giám khảo Ngoài ra, với Writing Task kèm Sơ Đồ Tư Duy giúp người đọc hiểu rõ cấu trúc đoạn cách xếp ý tưởng - điều mà hầu hết sĩ tử gặp khó khăn chặng đường chinh phục số điểm Writing ưng ý Tất sample biên soạn độc quyền tay viết từ IZONE a.k.a người chinh phục thành công thi IELTS với số điểm 8.0+ Sau viết lại trải qua nhiều bước kiểm duyệt & chỉnh sửa nội dung, tài liệu đưa đến tay bạn đọc Bởi vậy, bạn hoàn toàn tin tưởng vào tài liệu Đội ngũ quản lý Group hi vọng bạn thấy tài liệu hữu ích giảm bớt căng thẳng chuẩn bị cho kì thi IELTS Ngày thi tới gần rồi, sẵn sàng để bứt phá IELTS Writing ! -Chúc bạn học tốt From IZONE team with love Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING MỤC LỤC FORMAT BÀI THI TEST - DAY WRITING TASK WRITING TASK SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ TASK Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 10 TASK 11 Mindmap 11 TEST - DAY 14 WRITING TASK 14 WRITING TASK 16 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 18 TASK 18 Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 19 TASK 20 Mindmap 20 TEST - DAY 23 WRITING TASK 23 WRITING TASK 25 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 27 TASK 27 Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 28 TASK 29 Mindmap 29 TEST - DAY 32 WRITING TASK 32 WRITING TASK 34 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 36 TASK 36 Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 37 TASK 38 Mindmap 38 TEST - DAY 41 WRITING TASK 41 WRITING TASK 43 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 45 TASK 45 Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 46 TASK 47 Mindmap 47 TEST - DAY 50 WRITING TASK 50 WRITING TASK 52 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 54 TASK 54 Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 55 TASK 56 Mindmap 56 TEST - DAY 59 WRITING TASK 59 WRITING TASK 61 SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ 64 TASK 64 Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm 65 TASK 66 Mindmap 66 Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING FORMAT BÀI THI (Thời gian: 60 phút) Viết – hình thức Học thuật Phần thi môn Viết Học thuật bao gồm hai phần Các chủ đề môn viết mối quan tâm chung thích hợp với người vào học đại học cao học Phần Bạn đưa đồ thị, bảng, đồ thị hay biểu đồ yêu cầu miêu tả, tóm tắt hay so sánh thơng tin từ ngữ Bạn u cầu mơ tả bước trình, cách thức hoạt động đối tượng/sự kiện Bạn nên hoàn thành phần khoảng 20 phút Phần Bạn yêu cầu viết luận chủ điểm, lập luận hay vấn đề xã hội Khơng có u cầu cụ thể phong cách viết (informal, neutral, semi-formal, formal) Tuy nhiên luận điểm cao thường mang hướng semi-formal formal/academic Bạn nên hoàn thành phần khoảng 40 phút Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING TEST - DAY WRITING TASK You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006 Write at least 150 words Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING WRITING TASK You should spend 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: The media should include more stories which report good news To what extent you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 7 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ TASK The bar chart given provides an insight into the percentage TỪ VỰNG change in UK citizens who used the Internet The figures are given from 2003 to 2006 and across five different age groups figures (n): số liệu By and large, it is noticeable that 16 to 24 -year-old U.K By and large: nhìn citizens used the Internet the most, while the age group with the chung lowest percentage of Internet use is senior citizens There was a general upward trend for Internet popularity in all age groups noticeable (adj): dễ from 2003 to 2005 thấy The proportion of people from the age group of 16 to 24 years senior citizens (n): old was highest among all age groups and years in 2003 at người cao tuổi 80%, followed by the data of the residents in the age group of 25 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 at 50 % respectively respectively (adv): Meanwhile, no figure was given for people at 65 year olds and above in 2003 From 2003 to 2004, the data of 16 to 24-year-old citizens remained the same, whereas a steady increase was steady (adj): đều, witnessed in the figure for other age groups In 2004, the rate of không thay đổi Internet users from 45 to 54 years old reached its peak at 60%, while the data of inhabitants at 65 years old and above surged surge: tăng mạnh from approximately to 10% đột ngột In the period from 2004 to 2006, the number of people from 25 it is of note that: đáng to 44 and 55 to 65 years old who went online rose gradually and ý reached 80% and 50% respectively in 2006 Similarly, the data Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING for both young adults (ranging from 16 to 24) and the senior demographic (n): citizens initially increased to 90% and 15% respectively in 2005, nhân học but then dropped slightly in 2006 After experiencing a significant drop of 10% from 2004 to 2005, there was a slow the gap narrowed: growth in the percentage of Internet users from 45 to 64 years khoảng cách hai old in 2006 Finally, it is of note that the group with the most số/đại lượng significant number of Internet users in 2006 remained in the 16- thu hẹp lại 24 demographic, but the gap between the figure for 16 to 24 and 25 to 44 age groups had been significantly narrowed Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm Cấu trúc Câu bài: Sử dụng provide an The bar chart given provides an Thường sử dụng câu insight into insight into … and … Introduction, nêu thông tin upward/downw There was a general ard trend upward/downward trend for … Thường sử dụng câu overview, nêu xu hướng chung đồ thị followed by The proportion of people from the age Miêu tả thông tin chi tiết: số group of 16 to 24 years old was liệu cao nhất, followed by số highest , followed by the data of the liệu thứ cao thứ residents in the Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 10 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ TASK The diagram gives an illustration of how banana chips are TỪ VỰNG produced & packaged & distributed produced & packaged & As can be seen from the graph, it takes 10 steps in total from distributed: sản raw banana to packaged banana chips ready for consumption, xuất, đóng gói phân starting with peeling the bananas and ending with distributing phối sachets of chips to stores worldwide raw banana: chuối In the first stage of the process, bananas are peeled by a tươi special machine before being soaked in water to remain in good condition In the following step, the soaked bananas are put into peeling the bananas: a chipping machine where they are cut crosswire evenly into bóc vỏ chuối thin slices After being entered a drying lamp to dry, these banana slices would be fried in hot oil in a large fryer until they sachets of chips: bọc turn crispy socola chip The process continues with using a special sieve to remove the a chipping machine: cooked chips from the fryer and also to drain the oil from the máy băm nhỏ chips This step is followed by a cooling process, and then by flavouring, in which seasoning is added to the chips for extra crispy (adj): giòn taste Finally, the banana chips are packaged and ready to be delivered and distributed to stores throughout the world special sieve: giá drain the oil: làm dầu Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 54 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm Cấu trúc Câu bài: gives an illustration The diagram gives an illustration Sử dụng Thường dùng câu Introduction, mang nghĩa minh họa, đưa nhìn tổng quan biểu đồ starting It takes 10 steps in total from raw Miêu tả bước with….ending banana to packaged banana chips bước cuối with ready for consumption, starting process with peeling the bananas and ending with distributing sachets of chips to stores worldwide In the following In the following step, the soaked Sử dụng để nối miêu tả step, bananas are put into a chipping bước machine where they are cut crosswire evenly into thin slices After being…,it After being entered a drying lamp Dùng để miêu tả hành to dry, these banana slices would động be fried in hot oil in a large fryer process until they turn crispy be followed by This step is followed by a cooling Dùng để miêu tả hành process, and then by flavouring động process Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 55 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING TASK Mindmap Thân Thân Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 56 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING In many parts of the world, economic development has been of TỪ VỰNG great importance in solving famine and raising living famine (n): nạn đói standards While some people believe that the economic progress itself could eventually put an end to poverty and living standards: điều hunger, others are more wary of the associated threats posed kiện sống to the environment This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before a conclusion is drawn put an end to poverty: chấm dứt đói On the one hand, it is true that economic development has a nghèo crucial part to play in eliminating famine and poverty A strong economy, at its simplest, means a high employment rate for wary (adj): thận trọng, the people, which provides them with a good income to feed đề phòng, cảnh giác themselves and their families In the long run, as the economy thrives, living conditions can be improved, and people will no employment rate: tỷ longer suffer from the lack of basic necessities This can be lệ người lao động có seen in the case of Viet Nam, an under-developed country in việc làm Asia in the early 2000s After joining the WTO in 2007, the country’s economy was given a strong boost from trading goods economy thrives: and services with many more developed countries, which lead kinh tế phát triển to the people’s living standards being greatly raised and millions of people escaping poverty and hunger successfully basic necessities: đồ Nevertheless, economic progress is probably not the solely way dùng thiết yếu to fight poverty as there remain other alternatives such as investing in the education system or encouraging poor people to under-developed fight poverty themselves country: đất nước phát triển Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 57 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING On the other hand, the side effects that an economy developing industrial wastes: rác too rapidly has on the environment can be tremendous As more thải công nghiệp industries and factories are needed to produce goods, the discharge of industrial wastes of various kinds would soar the degradation of accordingly This could result in the degradation of natural natural habitats: habitats such as rivers, the seas and air Another major threat suy tàn môi trường is over-exploitation of natural resources for industrial purposes, sống tự nhiên which could lead to irreversible damage to the ecosystem since some species may never recover and develop Therefore, irreversible damage: it is extremely necessary for the authority to impose stricter thương tổn laws regarding industrial activities in order to protect the sửa chữa, bù đắp environment Economic growth is undeniably important, but it should not come at the expense of the environment impose stricter laws: ban hành điều My opinion is that there must be harmony between the luật nghiêm khắc environment and the proliferation of economic activities Despite the obvious benefits that a strong economy could bring about in terms of solving the issue of poverty and raising people’s living conditions, I not believe that it can make up for the environmental consequences mentioned above Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 58 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING TEST - DAY WRITING TASK You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pictures below show the differences in the layout of a conference centre between its present and its future plan Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: 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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 61 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE 62 Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 63 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING SAMPLE BAND 8.0+ TASK The plans compare the present-day layout of a Conference TỪ VỰNG Center with that in the future, following some proposed layout: tổng quan changes functionality (n): công Generally, most of the changes will take place in the centre and dụng the right side of the map of the Center, while the western part will remain mostly the same in functionality as well as layout catering for: phục vụ The new Center will feature several new facilities, including a fitness center, a kitchen and a reference separate block of rooms running The two meeting rooms at the upper left corner catering for the parallely to/alongside main function of the Conference Center will remain the same the road: phòng both in terms of their functionality/purpose and room design To tách biệt chạy dọc theo the east of the meeting rooms , a toilet can be found in a đường separate block of rooms running parallely to/alongside the road This block of rooms remain unchanged in their exterior, exterior: bề mặt but the toilet is the only room of the three that stays the same in its function adjoining: bên cạnh The other two rooms in the chain of blocks, namely the current turned reception and café (adjoining to the toilet ), are planned to be into/remodelled: biến turned into/remodelled into a reference room and fitness thành center respectively The hall in the central area, which takes up/occupies the most space, is expected to be halved in size to oval-shaped garden: make room for an additional cafe and kitchen, which together vườn hình bầu dục Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 64 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING would take up the other half of the current hall area In the righthand area of the Center, the oval-shaped garden in the north reshape (v): thay đổi will be expanded without changing inshape On the other hand, hình dạng the rounded car park below the garden will be reshaped into a rectangular one, and instead of having only one entrance, it is rectangular (adj): hình expected to have two separate enter and exit from the road chữ nhật Một số cấu trúc ăn điểm Cấu trúc Câu bài: Sử dụng compare the The plans compare the present- Sử dụng câu present-day layout day layout Introduction dạng Map, mang nghĩa so sánh tổng quan chung đồ/sơ đồ stays the same in The toilet is the only room of the Miêu tả không thay đổi its function three that stays the same in its chức sử dụng function …., namely It is expected to The other two rooms in the chain of Sử dụng để liệt kê chi tiết số blocks, namely the current đại lượng nêu trước reception and café it is expected to have two Sử dụng miêu tả thay separate enter and exit from the đổi đồ/sơ đồ road tương lai Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 65 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING TASK Mindmap Thân Thân Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 66 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING The vigorous growth of the Internet in the early 21st century has TỪ VỰNG paved the way for the prevalence of online shopping, distant paved the way for: working and online communication, all of which seem to have dọn đường/ tạo điều rendered interpersonal interaction superfluous in many kiện instances Contrary to popular belief, this trend has done more distant working: làm harm than good, as will be proven in this essay việc từ xa On the one hand, the rise of the Internet, together with its broad more harm than range/array of associated activities, has done wonders for good: có hại có mankind Those with an access to the Internet could save a lợi great deal of time that would be otherwise dedicated to commuting back and forth to physical stores or their done wonders for: có workplace, which in turn brings about an unprecedented level tác dụng, ảnh hưởng of comfort and convenience This lower demand for tốt đến với điều transportation subsequently helps with easing traffic congestion (on the road) Better still, being in the comfort of their own home back and forth: tới affords people the time it takes to make an informed purchasing lui decision These shoppers, equipped with a massive pool of information readily available online, could stack up attributes of unprecedented (adj): each alternative (against one another), before arriving at a chưa thấy, chưa sound decision of what to buy This is unlikely the case with in- xuất hiện, chưa store shopping, where shoppers are often pressured into buying có certain products against their will level of comfort and Albeit the good intentions of the Internet, its wide coverage convenience: mức độ comes with a variety of pitfalls in reality, presumably thoải mái tiện nghi overshadowing the said benefits One of such shortcomings is Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 67 NGÀY BỨT PHÁ IELTS WRITING the impairment of crucial social skills, which could be attributed pool of information: to a severe lack of social interactions The time many chronic nhiều thông tin Internet users once spent on daily exchanges is taken away in favour of online activities, which, if sustained, could lead to a pitfall (n): cạm bẫy reluctance to communicate with others Though it could be said that this shortage in communication could be made up for with impairment: việc làm the abundance of online communication tools and platforms, suy yếu, suy giảm this is a questionable statement per se/in itself Research has indicated that eye contact and body gestures, factors inherent in chronic Internet a physical encounter, have a critical part to play in forging a users: người dùng close bond, without which we humans are more prone to feel a Internet khoảng sense of isolation, and by association, depression thời gian dài In conclusion, after a thorough examination of both sides of the online issue, it is safe to say that the benefits the Internet has to offer communication would be outweighed by the potential dangers it poses to the tools: công cụ giao netizens tiếp trực tuyến Website: https://izone.edu.vn/ | Fanpage: https://www.facebook.com/IELTSIZONE Tel: 024 6285 9662 | Email: ielts.izone@gmail.com 68