Hướng dẫn học IELTS WRITING

Contents CHƯƠNG I: WRITING TASK A Thông tin IELTS Writing Task Cấu trúc thi Thời gian cho thi 19 Tiêu chí chấm điểm 20 B Hướng dẫn viết IELTS Writing Task 24 Cách viết dạng biểu đồ Dynamic and Static Charts 25 Cách viết dạng biểu đồ Mixed-Charts 113 Cách viết dạng biểu đồ Maps 125 Cách viết dạng biểu đồ Process 148 CHƯƠNG II: 177 WRITING TASK 177 A Thông tin IELTS Writing Task 178 Yêu cầu 178 Cấu trúc viết 178 Thời gian cho thi 178 Tiêu chí chấm điểm 179 B Hướng dẫn viết IELTS Writing Task 186 Các kỹ 186 Các dạng câu hỏi 205 Cấu trúc viết 216 Các bước viết 245 Cách trả lời dạng câu hỏi 259 Lỗi thường gặp, khó khăn cách giải học IELTS Writing Task 318 KEY (TASK 1) 330 KEY (TASK 2) 356 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ LỜI MỞ ĐẦU Việc viết IELTS Writing task điều không dễ dàng người xứ Cái khó thi khơng nằm việc sử dụng từ vựng hợp lý, nắm vững ngữ pháp tiếng Anh mà viết yêu cầu thí sinh khả đọc phân tích biểu đồ, kỹ tóm tắt, so sánh, đối chiếu số liệu (đối với Task 1) kỹ phân tích phát triển ý tưởng (đối với Task 2) Học viết IELTS Writing nghiêm túc phương pháp từ bước không giúp rút ngắn thời gian học, cải thiện điểm mà đem lại lợi ích mặt học thuật sau IELTS Writing cung cấp cho bạn kỹ cần thiết việc viết nghiên cứu, thuyết trình, Đó lý đội ngũ IELTS Thanh Loan nỗ lực tạo sách “Hướng dẫn học IELTS Writing cho người bắt đầu” cung cấp thông tin cho bạn cách đầy đủ, hệ thống ngắn gọn nhất, súc tích thi IELTS Writing Cuốn sách gồm có chương, tương đương với hai phần Task Task 2, hướng đến độc giả tất có ý định tham gia kỳ thi IELTS, cung cấp cho người đọc nhìn tồn diện thi IELTS Writing Cuốn sách cung cấp lý thuyết, ví dụ thực hành mẫu tham khảo; thế, phù hợp với muốn tự học IELTS nhà Với sách này, nỗ lực, kiên trì rèn luyện thường xuyên để thực hóa ước mơ chinh phục IELTS Để sử dụng sách cách hiệu nhất, trước hết đảm bảo bạn có vốn ngữ pháp vừa đủ để tự tin việc bắt tay vào viết Việc đọc sách chưa đủ Đọc phải có thực hành để biến kiến thức đọc thành “tài sản cá nhân” Các đề mẫu tham khảo bạn sử dụng để luyện tập, sau dùng mẫu để so sánh với “tác phẩm‟ rút điểm khắc phục trau dồi thêm + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thông tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ IELTS Thanh Loan hy vọng sách hữu ích người bạn đồng hành thân thiết với bạn đường chinh phục IELTS nói chung IELTS Writing nói riêng! 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Là dạng biểu đồ chứa đường, đường biểu diễn cho thay đổi đối tượng cụ thể khoảng thời gian cho trước Trong Writing Task 1, biểu đồ thường có 2-4 đường, đặc biệt lên 6-7 đường The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Ví dụ: Dạng biểu đồ Đường (Line Graph) + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thông tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Dạng câu hỏi 2: Biểu đồ Cột (Bar Chart) - Là biểu đồ sử dụng đứng ngang để biểu thị số liệu so sánh đối tượng cụ thể Biểu đồ cột có thông tin thời gian (1 năm/ nhiều năm) khơng xuất thời gian The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Ví dụ: Dạng biểu đồ Cột (Bar Chart) + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thông tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 8: Body (Structure 2) Topic sentence A feasible measure to tackle the problem of water pollution is (main idea) to introduce modern technologies Details To be specific, one of the main culprits of water pollution is the (explanation discharge of sewage into rivers and oceans without treatment and/or examples) Such untreated waste substances heavily contaminate water sources and pose a grave threat to marine life Germany is a good case in point as this country introduced an impeccable sewage treatment system that not only treats sewage water for disposal purposes but also reclaims water from that water waste so that it can be reused for domestic purposes Conclusion In short, by applying modern sewage disposal systems, factories can make sure that the wastewater discharged is clean, thereby alleviating negative effects on the water environment A feasible measure to tackle the problem of water pollution is to introduce modern technologies To be specific, one of the main culprits of water pollution is the discharge of sewage into rivers and oceans without treatment Such untreated waste substances heavily contaminate water sources and pose a grave threat to marine life Germany is a good case in point as this country has introduced an impeccable sewage treatment system that not only treats sewage water for disposal purposes but also reclaims water from that water waste so that it can be reused for domestic purposes In short, by applying modern sewage disposal systems, factories can make sure that the wastewater discharged is clean, thereby alleviating negative effects on the water environment 363 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thông tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 9: Topic Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries Explain the main causes and effects of this problem Introduction In many different parts of the world, there is an alarming increase in the number of obese children This essay will discuss the main reasons for this problem and then describe its possible effects Conclusion In conclusion, the increasing rate of childhood obesity can be attributed to children’s unhealthy lifestyle and dietary habits and obesity could have a deleterious effect on their physical and mental health 364 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thông tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 10: Topic Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Introduction In many countries, foreign films have gained more popularity, as compared to domestically produced films There could be several reasons for this case, and I hold fast to the belief that governments should grant a higher level of subsidy to local film industries to promote local film-making Conclusion In conclusion, that many people prefer foreign films to domestically made films is due to some aforementioned causes and I believe that larger amounts of subsidy could help to enhance the quality of local films, thereby allowing them to compete with foreign productions 365 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 11: It is believed that face-to-face communication is being supplanted by the use of social networking sites and applications, such as Facebook or Instagram I personally think that this trend could have both positive and negative influences in equal measure, as now will be discussed On the one hand, the replacement of face-to-face communication by social media can be seen as beneficial for several reasons Firstly, social networking sites and applications are effective tools that help people at a distance keep in touch with each other For instance, students studying overseas can confide in their parents and friends on a daily basis by using Messenger, Skype and many other applications Secondly, the use of social media in advertising has been proven superior to traditional advertising, which is word of mouth A telling example is Facebook, which is a prevalent platform for advertising these days A huge number of stores have been posting their newlyreleased products on Facebook to keep their clients updated on them and make a considerable profit from this social networking site Despite the favourable impacts mentioned above, I believe that this trend can also be considered detrimental to some extent The main drawback is that it reduces the quality of relationships Many people, especially youngsters, are getting TOO addicted to social media; even in a family meal, they are glued firmly to their smartphones’ screens and not communicate with anyone Another downside of this trend is that it can lead to the degradation of well-being It has been scientifically proven that overexposure to smartphones, computers and other modern gadgets, which are used to access social media, could have a deleterious effect on our eyes and sleep cycle and result in many other health problems In conclusion, in spite of some positive effects, I hold the opinion that social media can also trigger adverse effects on relationships and health 366 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 12: Raising the required driving and riding age is believed to be the optimal method of increasing road safety While I consent to this approach, I not concur that it is the best solution On the one hand, I agree that the increase in the minimum legal driving age is a good way to enhance road safety as it reduces youngster’s reckless driving It is a fact that many young people are not aware of the repercussions of their actions and willing to violate the traffic laws by disregarding traffic lights or exceeding the speed limits, thereby causing many road traffic crashes It is reported that most traffic accidents are rendered by junior drivers For this reason, raising the required driving age is a sound idea as it gives youngsters more time to cultivate a mature and sensitive attitude before being entitled to drive On the other hand, I not believe that increasing the minimum lawful driving age is the most effective one to ensure road safety because this approach brings with it a limitation It’s a double-edged sword as it gives young people fewer opportunities to practice their driving skills As a result, the lack of practical experience may put youngsters at risk in unexpected situations such as driving in the rain or encountering potholes Therefore, the government had better focus on driver training and education programs that give trainees proper lessons In conclusion, while I concur that raising the minimum required driving age is a reasonable idea, I am more convinced that it is far from the most effective solution 367 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 13: Many people argue that the government should make it mandatory for everybody to finish high school education While I consent to this idea, I am not convinced that it is applicable to all people On the one hand, there are reasonable grounds to believe that students should not leave schools early The main benefit of the educational environment is that it equips adolescents with vital knowledge before they graduate and enter the real world or go on to higher education Schooling saves youngsters from social temptations and committing illegal acts such as pickpocketing or drug dealing Moreover, high school education is an essential prerequisite for students who want to continue their educational careers at college For these reasons, the necessity of staying at school until 18 is undisputed to a certain extent On the other hand, I am of the opinion that high school education should not be made compulsory Firstly, not everyone feels the need to study at a high school For instance, those whose dream is to become professional footballers should enrol in a football academy rather than a high school to pursue their passion Secondly, not every family can afford the tuition fees of a high school Therefore, forcing students to continue their studies at high school may place an intolerable burden on the budget of many economically deprived families For this reason, their children should enter the workforce early to contribute to their family's income instead of going to high school In conclusion, while I concur that students should go to school until they turn 18, I not think the idea should be imposed as a law 368 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 14: There is a common belief that celebrities who are in movies, music and sports are overpaid In my opinion, it is true that such entertainers can amass a fortune easily, but they deserve every penny they earn On the one hand, I agree that celebrities can make a large amount of money in a short period of time Apart from regular incomes such as fees for a starring role, money from selling music recordings or weekly wages paid by sports clubs, celebrities can earn additional money from other sources Endorsement deals are a telling example: the international Messi possesses a giant fortune of over $100 million and one-third of this sum comes from endorsement contracts Moreover, many household names are employed to other high paid jobs For instance, the Vietnamese comedy actor Trấn Thành earns a fortune by doing the job of a television host thanks to his personal charisma On the other hand, I not believe that their huge incomes are unreasonable because their success comes at a high price For instance, professional footballers are usually at serious risk of getting injured and there are many of them whose careers as professional footballers were ruined by injuries such as Marco Van Basten or Andre Schurrle Meanwhile, most musicians or actors also have to go through years of being underdogs before getting famous and it is not a coincidence that they have gained achievements For these reasons, celebrities in the entertainment industry are worthy of high incomes In conclusion, while I concur that famous people in the entertainment industry can earn large incomes, I am convinced that they are worthy of these sums of money due to all the efforts they have made and all the risks they have taken 369 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 15: Raising the required driving and riding age is believed to be the optimal method of increasing road safety I strongly disagree with this view The option to raise the minimum lawful driving age is not necessarily an efficient measure Firstly, this approach gives young people fewer opportunities to practice their driving skills As a result, the lack of practical experience may put youngsters at risk in unexpected situations such as driving in the rain or encountering potholes Secondly, increasing the minimum required driving age renders inconveniences to young commuters as it increases their dependence on public transport Many are willing to violate the traffic laws in order to get their freedom, which leads to an increasing number of unlicensed drivers, hence a higher potential for traffic crashes Some people believe that the increase in the minimum legal driving age gives youngsters more time to cultivate a mature and sensitive attitude before being entitled to drive In my opinion, it is an invalid argument because a person’s age is irrelevant to his or her maturity Even though it has been scientifically proven that the human brain can take around 30 years to mature, it does not necessarily mean that humans have to wait until 30 to be able to behave sensitively It is a fact that many 16-year-olds are mature for their age while there are those who never become emotionally mature adults and usually behave in a childish way For this reason, the government had better focus on driver training and education programs that give trainees proper lessons In conclusion, while many people opine that raising the minimum required driving age is a sound idea, I strongly disagree with them 370 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 16: Many people argue that the government should make it mandatory for everybody to finish high school education Personally, I strongly disagree with this view I am of the opinion that high school education should not be made compulsory Firstly, not everyone feels the need to study at a high school For instance, those whose dream is to become professional footballers should enrol in a football academy rather than a high school to pursue their passion Secondly, not every family can afford the tuition fees of a high school Therefore, forcing students to continue their studies at high school may place an intolerable burden on the budget of many economically deprived families For this reason, their children should enter the workforce early to contribute to their family's income instead of going to high school Some people believe that students need to go to high school because they can be equipped with essential knowledge and skills that help them land good jobs, make money and have a comfortable life In my opinion, it is a reasonable argument but it does not necessarily mean that schools are the only place where students can learn knowledge and skills It is a fact that youngsters can gain these things by enrolling in vocational training courses and joining the workforce right after finishing such courses without going to high school In conclusion, while many people opine that going to high school and staying there until 18 is a must for every youngster, I strongly disagree with them 371 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 17: Some people believe that the increasing use of surveillance cameras in public spaces is an effective approach to bring down crime rates while some others think these cameras invade individuals’ privacy In my opinion, the negative impacts of using security video cameras are overshadowed by its beneficial influences On the one hand, the use of security cameras can be seen as detrimental for several reasons Firstly, people’s freedom in public spaces may be violated because their activities are constantly observed by those devices For instance, every romantic gesture of love of a couple on the street may be recorded and sent to security organisations, which is considered a violation of privacy Secondly, CCTV cameras can make people feel insecure, for such cameras are expected to supplant police officers patrolling the streets No matter how advanced they are, these cameras are merely inanimate objects, which cannot ensure street safety on their own On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of CCTV cameras eclipse their disadvantages The main benefit is that it contributes to deterring criminals and preventing crime For example, when surveillance cameras are installed in all the areas of a city, petty criminals like shoplifters and pickpockets can hardly operate The reason is that if they commit crimes, their actions may be watched by the cameras and the police can use video evidence to catch and prosecute them In case such cameras are not installed, the privacy of individuals in public places might be ensured; however, at the same time, their safety, which is far more significant, is not guaranteed In conclusion, in spite of some negative effects on people’s privacy, I hold the opinion that the increase in the use of CCTV cameras can trigger more favourable effects on street security 372 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 18: People have different views about methods of decreasing traffic crashes While some people hold the opinion that imposing severe punishments for criminal traffic offenses is an effective solution, I personally believe that many other methods are superior to it On the one hand, there is a reasonable ground to believe that the government should inflict strict punishments for traffic violations and crimes The main purpose of this strategy is that such punishments play a role as a deterrent to road users who violate the traffic laws For example, if a traffic violator is aware that he will face a sentence of several years in jail in case he causes a traffic crash again, he is less likely to relapse into his old poor driving behaviour As a result, the number of road traffic collisions can be reduced and road safety can be ensured On the other hand, I opine that many more effective measures should be introduced Firstly, the government should create more driving training and education programs and design more difficult license tests By implementing this solution, the government could develop people’s driving competence and raise their awareness of road safety Also, the authorities should grant a higher level of subsidy to public transport If public transport is properly developed, more people will choose to commute by bus and train, thereby reducing the number of private vehicles and traffic accidents as it is reported that most traffic crashes are related to private vehicles In conclusion, although there are good arguments in favour of strict punishments for traffic violations, I am convinced that the government should put greater emphasis on other efficient measures 373 + Các sản phẩm Ebook khác: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/danh-muc/sach-ielts-thanh-loan-viet + Thơng tin khóa học Offline: https://ielts-thanhloan.com/khoa-hoc-ielts-overall + Khóa học IELTS Online: https://online.ielts-thanhloan.com/ Thực hành 19: These days, there is a propensity for students not to opt for science as their main major at school This trend happens due to some reasons and it may trigger some adverse influences on society Several reasons can explain why fewer students study science at school Firstly, science subjects such as biological technology or computer science are generally demanding Such subjects include a huge amount of specialized knowledge and a huge number of experiments that can be challenging to carry out; therefore, not many students can stand the pressure these subjects put on them Secondly, the career prospects of students studying science are not as promising as those of graduates in other majors like tourism or economics For this reason, in order to secure a safer career, students tend to choose other majors at school rather than science The deficiency in students in science fields may result in many detrimental impacts on society The main drawback is imbalances in the workforce That too many students choose to study economics, tourism and other majors instead of science may lead to a situation in which many graduates in these majors are made redundant after graduating from college whereas there are excessive job vacancies in the science field In other words, the trend may lead to a serious issue of unemployment while science fields still suffer due to a lack of labour Consequently, there will be fewer inventions owing to a lack of inventors In conclusion, that students not want to study science and choose other majors instead is attributed to several factors 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