... Another, more concise correction isto delete “that is blue” and simply say, “blue sky.” 22 _599 321 ch15.qxp 4/3/06 11:31 PM Page 20 3199Chapter 15: Going on Location: Placing Descriptions CorrectlyAnswers ... that a normal human body canachieve. Do not try these positions at home, but do look for ten errors caused by vague,misplaced, or dangling descriptions. After you find the clunkers, correct ... outmisplaced words, insert words by using carats, and revise sentences in the margins of thisbook. Note: The errors have several possible corrections, but in the answers section, Ishow only one correction...