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QUYEN ^ A XUAT BAN DAI HOC OUOC GIA HA NOI Ts NGUYIN TRI LUYEN TAP LAM VAN • • QUYEN Toan tap - Tai ban Ian thLir4 (Da dieu chinh theo quy dinh giam tai cua Bo Giao due va Dao tao) «' _ _ - - > - - * NHA X U A T BAN OAI H Q C Q U O C GIA HA NQI - 2001 Ph^Ekn I TA NGU6I 4i • J I- K1? N A N G - R^n luyfin ky nang quan sdt hinh ddng b§n ngo^i mot ngUbi (nhAn x^t c^c dSc di^m v^ hinh ddng, t^m voc.) va tmh tinh cua mOt ngudi - R6n luyfin ky nSng lap d^n bai m6t b^i van tk ngifdi - R6n luy6n ky nang sii dung tif ngiit d^ vi^t cau, viet doan van va bai van ta ngif6i, ky nang trinh bay mi6ng bai ta ngUbi tnfdc tap th^ 16p hoac t6, nhdm - R6n luy^n ky nang siia chiia de hoan thi^n mot bai van ta II PHUONG PHAP LAM BAI Doc ky d^ bai nhifeu l^n, tra 16i cac cau hoi: - D^ bai y§u c^u ta ai? ( ' "^ f! t - D^ bai y6u cau ta ngu5i hoan canhh nao? Gap gd ngifcJi dinh ta d^ quan sat (N^u chifa biet ngifcfi dd hoac thu thap th§m nhan xdt hoac nh6 lai nhiing dac diem da quan sat dupc- d6i v6i ngif5i da quen bi^t) j ^ i ^^ / Ghi gifiy nhufng nhan x^t da thu lUdm duoc qua quan sat hoac qua sif hbi tudng SAp x^p cac y da cd m6t dan bai gbm ba ph^n: • - Md bai: gi6i thi#u ngudi dinh tA - Than bai: ta hinh dang, tA ho^t' dOng, tA tinh tinh (cung cd th^ xen ke cAc ph&n tr6n) - K^t luAn : n§u cAra nghi d6i vdi ngif6i dinh tA Vi^t bai van tA ngudi dua theo dAn bai da cd Chii y sir dung cac each nhAn each hda, so sAnh v.v Doc lai sijfa chCfa bAi van da vi^t vS y, vfe cAch dung tir, dat cflu va 16i chinh tA •*•••< !P'i- • Dfe t * Em hAy tA hinh dAng vli tinh tinh c6 giAo (thiiy giAo) dfi day em nhufng nflm trir6c mA era yeu qui nhAt HUONG DAN TIM HI^U l)fe HAI ! Doc ky d^ bai nhifeu l^n , j,, , TrA loi cAc cAu hoi: - DS bai yfiu cAu tA ai"^ (TA c6 giao, thAy giao da day em) - D6 y§u cAu ta di^u gi? (TA hinh dAng va tinh tinh) - D6 b^ y6u cSu tA ngudi dd hoAn cAnh n^o? II HUONG DAN QUAN SAT HOAC H6I T U N G D£ TIM Y LAM BAI T6i tham thAy giao (c6 giao) em djnh tA (n^u thAy c6 giAo gAn) hoac tim lai cac vat ky ni^m c6n giCJf dupe cd quan h$ vdi thAy c6 giao djnh tA (n^u thAy giao, c6 giao d xa) ' Quan sAt hoftc h6i tudng lai cac nhAn x^t vS thAy giao (c6 giAo) djnh tA theo cAc trAt tu: •' - Quan sAt chung v6 hinh dAng thAy giAo (c6 giao) dinh tA Chii y d^n tAm vdc (cao, thAp hay tning binh; b^o gAy hay binh thabng ), d^n cAch an mac ndi chung (quAn ao thiibng mac: mAu sAc, ki^u, kich cd quAn Ao ) - Quan sAt ky, hfti tifdng lai nhGng n^t dac bi6t v6 hinh dAng khi^n ta nhAn ngay, kh6ng lAn v6i cAc thAy giAo (c6 giAo) khAc Chu y: + CAc dac di^m vfe khu6n mat hay mAi tdc, cap mAt, hAm rftng + CAc dac di^m vfe thAn hinh: tay, chAn, lung Chii y: Chi ghi nh6 nhCfng diSu dac bi6t, khOng cAn li6t k6 dAy du cAc bO phAn hinh dAng thAy giAo (c6 giao) - Quan sAt ky^ hoac h6i tudng lai nhCtng 16i ndi, vi§c lAm, cii chl th^ hi§n tinh tinh hoac dao dvic cua thay giao (c6 giao) + L5i ndi, vi6c lAm, ciif chi, cAch ddi x\i hifdng din hoc sinh hoc tAp 16p :, v/ i o ?- "i u + Ldi ndi, vi§c lAm, cijf chi, Anh mAt, nu cu5i tro chuy§n, lao d6ng, nghi ngoi cung hoc sinh ' Chu y: N6n ghi nh6 m6t vai sU ki§n ndi bat nhAt d^ ta lai bai III HUONG DAN LAP DAN BAL Md bki: " q - Gi6i thifiu triic ti^p thAy giAo (c6 giAo) dinh tA (em dinh tA thAy c6 giAo nAo? Day em 16p mAy?) - Gi6i thi^u thAy giAo (c6 giAo) dinh tA qua m6t sil ki§n nAo dd (gap gd bat ngd san truang , tr^ri dudng ph6, nhan dupe thu, hay vifa d^n tham ) T h a n bai - H - ' a Ta hinh dang thAy giAo (c6 giao) - TA bao quAt v^ hinh dAng thAy giAo (c6 giAo) em (N^u mot, hai dac did'm ve dau tdc, tu6i tac hay cAch an mac, dAng di§u ) ^ '• A' " - TA ky cu th^ m6t vai dac di^'m ndi bat v^ hinh dAng b^n ngoai ciia thay giao (c6 giao): + Khuon mat: chpn tA cap mAt hay khu6n mat hay gipng ndi + Than hinh: chon tA dac diS'm cua than hinh hay tay chAn b TA tinh tinh thAy giAo (c6 giao) • '•• ''^^^ - TA tinh cAm, tinh n^t cua thAy giAo (c6 giao) giAng bAi 16p: tinh thAn tan tarn giAng day hay thAi d6 r6ng li^png, c6ng bAng v6i cac ban pham 16i hay sU nang dd, bAo ban rifeng v6i cac ban hoc k^m -f^ i ^ TA tinh cAm tinh n^t cua thAy gido (c6 giAo) ngoAi gi5 l6n lop : tinh thuong y§u doi vdi mpi hoc sinh dac bi§t la cac ban gia dinh c6 khd khan hay thai d6 coi md, vui vd tr6 chuy6n cung lam vi^c vdi ca Idp Chu y: Chpn hai ba sif viec in dam net trf nhd em (khdng nSn neu nhung viec chung chung md nhat) K e t l o a n : '• • " ' " '^' "* Tinh cAm cua em vdi thay giao (c6 giao) dang hoc hoac vao luc viet bai van Chu y : c^n ket hop b6c 16 tinh cAm ciia em tirng ph^n tren , - i : v , j V bai vi^t tham khao H6m qua nhAn sAp xep lai sach vd, tdi cam quyen Tap lam van Idp bdn ma boi hoi nhd tdi thay Lpc Thay day toi hoi toi hpc Idp bdn, da giup toi tien bp nhi^u ve mdn lam van ThAy L6c ngUdi thap, gay gay, xuong xUOng, nhung tac phong cua thAy nhanh nhen, thay lam viec gi cung nhanh Thay dp gAn nam mUdi tudi Tran thay cao, cAc ban bAo dau thay bat dAu hdi Chung tdi thich nhin doi mat thAy No sang, ludn nhap nhay nhung tia vui vui Thay cd gipng ndi am ap, d l hap dan Nhat la thay ke chuyen, gipng ndi ay luc thi nhu gipng ndi cua ba ti6n truyen Tam cam, luc lai vui vui ke truyen ThAy bdi xem voi ; : • ThAy Ldc rAt thuong chung tdi ThAy gpi cA Idp la ThAy bao: "Cac phai cham hpc CAc nen nhd de cAc ngdi hpc vui v^ th^ nay, bd me cac phai lam viec vAt vA bao nhi§u d nha may, cOfa hang, cdng sd Cho nen cac khong cham hpc la phu long bo me" Ai kem mdn nao thay deu danh thdi gian hudng dan, giup dd Ban Hoa viet xau moi thay cho mdt bai tap chep va chCfa tiing net chii Het ky mot, chu cua ban dep hAn len Ban Lan hpc kem Toan, thay thudng giii lai d§' giAng lai bAi toan vira hpc Con toi kem mdn Lam van cung dupc thAy tan tinh chi bAo Hoi dAu nam, tdi khdng biet lam bai tA vat, tA cay coi , cau van cua tdi dai lAm ma y chAng gi Moi lan trA bai, thay lai phan tich rieng cho tdi cac 16i ve dat cau Sau dd tdi tiic qua lien viet cau that ngan "Con trau to lAm hai cai siing no cong vut Bon cai chan no nhu cdt nha Minh no den Long no ciing " Thay lai an can chi bao nhijfng 16i each viet Kien tri tap theo sir giup dd ciia thAy, sang hpc ky hai, diem lam van ciia tdi dupc nang len sAu rbi bAy, tAm diĐ'm ., ^ ã ã.i ; Nam chung tdi khdng hpc thay Lpc nhifng moi cam d^n quy^'n Tap lam van, tdi lai nhd den thay Tdi thay yeu quy thAy va mong minh hpc gioi mdn TAp lAm van d^ khdng phu cdng day bAo ciia thAy DI: HAy tA hinh dang va nhufng n^t t6t cua mOt ngUdi b ^ Icrp em duqc nhifeu ngUdi quy mfen L HUONG DAN TIM Hl£U ofe B\\ Dpc ky d^ bai nhieu lAn ' " ' '* Tra Idi cac cau hdi: - D^ bai y6u cAu tA ? (Mdt ngUdi ban Idp) - Dh bai y6u cAu tA cAi gi ? (TA hinh dAng va n^t tdt) DC bai yfeu cAu ta ngUdi ban hoAn canh nao? (NgUdi ban dupc nhi^u ngUdi quy m§'n) II HL'ONG DAN QUAN SAT HOAC u6\ TUC)NG D^ TIM Y D^n tham hoac ni ngudi ban dinh ta di choi vdi em (d^n nha em choi hoac di tham cac ban Idp, di tham cAnh d^p, di choi bdng ) qua dd cd dip quan sat ky hon hinh dang, nft tdt ciia ban quan sAt hay hdi tudng lai nhiifng dac difi'm vd hinh dAng ciia ban: - Trudc tifin quan sat hay hbi tudng lai cAc dac di^m chung ve hinh dang, tAm vdc, cAch an mac ciia ban, sau dd quan sAt mdt sd diem dac biet d hinh dang, tAm vdc ã i.r DĐ lam nd'i bat day la mdt ban nhd cung Ida tudi vdi em cAn chu y: , + NhAn x6t dac di^m cua khudn mat, ddi mAt, cap mdi, hai mA, mAi tdc, tay vA chAn + NhAn x^t loai quAn Ao vA each an mac phu hpp vdi tudi thi^u nifin nhtfng lai cd di^m khac vdi cAc ban xung quanh Quan sAt hay hfti tudng nhiing vi§c lAm, Idi ndi, cd chl, cAch ddi xijf vdi ban b6 d^ lAm ndi bat nhiifng n^t tdt - N^t tdt ciia mdt ban hoc sinh cd th^ lA n^t cAn cu, cham chi hpc hAnh, chiu khd siia cAc loi d cac bai hpc d^ cang hpc khA, hpc gidi Cd th^ lA tinh cAm y§u thUOng, sAn Idng giup dd mpi ngudi, ban b6 Cd th§' lA tinh tinh vui vd, y§u ddi Cd th^ lA Idng hi^fu thAo vdi bd me, cd gAng giup dd bd me mpi cdng vi^ Cd th^ la sU nhi/dng nhin ddi vdi anh chi em gia dinh Chpn cAc gpi y tr§n nhufng didu phu hpp vdi ngudi djnh tA d6 quan sAt, hdi tudng - N^t tdt cua mdt ngudi thudng bi§'u hien qua Idi ndi, eijf chi, viec lAm hoac qua tinh hudng cu th^ Ta lai n^t tdt cua ban chinh la tA lai Idi ndi, cii chi, cAch cU xijf dd Tranh tinh trang thidu cAc chi ti^t, cau chuySn th§' hi§n n^t tdt ciia ban, chi bi^t ndi chung chung: ban Ay cham lAm, ban Ay cd tinh thAn giup dd ban b6 Nhd lai nhiifng tinh cAm ciia bAn thAn ddi vdi ngudi ban dinh tA Nhiifng tinh cAm nAy thUdng gAn vdi cAc ki ni^m, cac cdng viec ciia ban '• ' • ' • ' • ^ III- HUONG DAN LAP DAN BAI • " Md bM: - ? —r ! Gidi thi6u ngudi ban dinh tA (gidi thi§u trUc ti^p hoac gidi thi^u qua mdt tinh hudng cu th^) -.41 Thftn hhx', = , a TA hinh dAng b§n ngoai cua ban - , * > - TA cac dac di^'m chung vS hinh dAng b6n ngoai (tudi, tAm voc.) "^ '^ "' '^-^^ ã * - TA mdt sd dac diĐ'm th6' hi^n d: + Khudn mat, mAt, mi§ng, mAi tdc ' + Than hinh: (than th^ cd dac di^m gi dang chu y, chan tay CO dac diem gi.' ) b- TA n^t tdt ciia ban qua mdt hai vi$e lam hoac qua mdt vai each ddi xii vdi ban be, bo me, thay giao, vdi mpi ngUdi xa hdi - N^u l§n tinh cAm ciia em ddi vdi cAc n^t tdt ciia ban (yfiu men, cAm phuc, mudn noi guong ) ^ K^t luAn: N§u rd tinh ban giiifa em va ban dd thdi gian qua va hi^n