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Paragraphs Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE  Pokhara is an amazing place to visit First, it is a place known for its beauty Also, Pokhara offers a range of adventurous activities for the visitors In addition, you can visit exotic places within the city To sum up, these features make Pokhara a truly amazing place well worth a visit Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE  Pokhara is an amazing place to visit First, it is a place known for its beauty Also, Pokhara offers a range of adventurous activities for the visitors In addition, you can visit exotic places within the city These features make Pokhara a truly amazing place well worth a visit Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE Pokhara is an amazing place to visit + First, it is a place known for its beauty A paragraph + Also, Pokhara offers a range of adventurous activities for the visitors + In addition, you can visit exotic places within the city To sum up, these features make Pokhara a truly amazing place well worth a visit Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE Topic Sentence Supporting Sentences Concluding sentence Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE Topic Sent Gold Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications, such as photography and dentistry The most recent use of gold is in astronauts’ suits Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in space In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its utility Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE Support Topic Sent Gold Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications, such as photography and dentistry The most recent use of gold is in astronauts’ suits Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in space In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its utility Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE Support Sent Gold Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial Concluding applications, such as photography and dentistry The most recent use of Sent gold is in astronauts’ suits Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in space In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its utility Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE A B C To state the main idea of the paragraph To name the topic of the paragraph To limit the topic of one specific area that can be discussed completely in the space of a single paragraph Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE A B To develop the topic sentence To explain or prove the topic sentence by giving more information about it Eg Topic Sent: Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics Supporting Sent (group 1) First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago Ms Vu Huong - ED/SIE 10 OPINION PARAGRAPH OUTLINE Things to remember: Fact and Opinion  Supporting Details  Transition signals  Adjective clauses Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE  1.FACT # OPINION Opinion Fact can be verified or proved Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE OPINION FACT is always true what someone thinks or believes to be true may be true or false I FACT AND OPINION READ THE PARAGRAPH «VIDEO GAMES AND VIOLENCE» AND COMPLETE THE OUTLINE Outline Topic Sentence Video Games and Violence In my opinion, violent video games are harmful to young people O 1st reason Supporting Details F Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE A Studies show that playing these games can cause changes in the behavior of young people Acording to researchers, immediately after playing these games, young people have more aggressive thoughts and angryfeelings frequent players get into more fights at school and have more arguments with their teachers 2nd reason Supporting Details 3rd reason Concluding Sentence B In my opinion, they make young people less sensitive to violence in the real world Thirteen-year-old Noah Wilson, for example, was stabbed to death by a friend who often played the violent game Mortal Kombat On talk show that I watched recently, Noah’s mother claimed that the boy who stabbed her son was acting out the part of Cyrex, a character in the game C An extreme example of this kind of thinking resulted in the Columbine High School massacre in 1999 The two young killers were fans of the video games Doom and Wolfenstein 3D I FACT AND OPINION READ THE PARAGRAPH «VIDEO GAMES AND VIOLENCE» AND COMPLETE THE OUTLINE Outline Topic Sentence Video Games and Violence In my opinion, violent video games are harmful to young people O 1st reason Supporting Details F F O 2nd reason Supporting Details 3rd reason Concluding Sentence B In my opinion, they make young people less sensitive to violence in the real world Thirteen-year-old Noah Wilson, for example, was stabbed to death by a friend who often played the violent game Mortal Kombat On talk show that I watched recently, Noah’s mother claimed that the boy who stabbed her son was acting out the part of Cyrex, a character in the game .O .O C An extreme example of this kind of thinking resulted in the Columbine High School massacre in 1999 The two young killers were fans of the video games Doom and Wolfenstein 3D .O F F F F .O Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE A Studies show that playing these games can cause changes in the behavior of young people Acording to researchers, immediately after playing these games, young people have more aggressive thoughts and angryfeelings Frequent players get into more fights at school and have more arguments with their teachers II SUPPORTING DETAILS  How you get your supporting details?? Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Statistics from a survey/ research Quotation from somebody in that field (VIP/famous person) An example from personal experience 10 III TRANSITION SIGNALS  To state your opinion: Examples In my opinion, (with a comma) In my opinion, everyone should be allowed to use private vehicles In my view, (with a comma) In my view, noone should be allowed to use private vehicles I believe (that) (without a comma) I believe that smoking should not be prohibited in public places I think (that) (without a comma) I think smokers have rights, too Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Opinion signals 11 III TRANSITION SIGNAL When writing supporting details, To give in formation from a source (book, newspaper, somebody): Source signal Examples According to X, (with a comma) According to Mr Donald Trump, the government will soon announce the guide on mask wearing nationalwide Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE  12 WRITING PRACTICE: your opinion about this statement? Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Mobile phones should be banned in public places What is 13 LESSON (AIMS) Peer Check on Writing Practice (1 period)  Quizziz on Expanding sentences  How to expand/lengthen sentences  Practice: Writing supporting Sentences  Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE 14 WAYS TO EXPAND SENTENCES: Answer key question words: why, how, where, when Use clauses: noun clause, adverb clause, adjective clause Add single words (adjective/adverb before nouns/ after verbs Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Add phrases (to tell the truth, being honest, to study hard, Being a citizen ) 15 GIVING FEEDBACK ON STUDENTS’WRITING Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE 16 I AN OPINION PARAGRAPH: OUTLINE Outline #1 Topic sentence (opinion) 2nd reason (FOR) (opinion/fact) Supporting detail ( Supporting detail 3rd reason (if yes) (FOR) Supporting detail Supporting detail Concluding Sentence In my opinion, the Internet brings more advantages than disadvangates A The Internet connects all people around the world making new friends communicating with relatives in far space B The Internet is an effective means of online education a lot of online courses Example /Statistics Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE 1st reason (FOR) (opinion/ fact) Supporting detail (opinion explanation / fact) Supporting detail (fact) The Internet C The Internet is a big store of information To conclude, I believe that the Internet won’t cause many problems if you know how to control the time which you spend and avoid the 17 bad things WRITING PRACTICE (TIME ALLOWANCE) Write an outline on the topic: you agree with this? Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Many people think that social distancing is unnecessary.Do 18 WRITING PRACTICE (TIME ALLOWANCE) Use the above outline to write full paragraph: you agree with this? Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE Many people think that social distancing is unnecessary.Do 19 GIVING FEEDBACK ON STUDENTS’ WRITING Ms.Vu Huong - ED/SIE 20