GIẢI ĐỀ IELTS WRITING 25/04/2020 BY NGOCBACH Task The graph below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to the cinema once a month in Great Britain Report Plan: Paraphrase paragraph: shows>compares; percentage>proportion; different>various Overview/summary paragraph: (1) the highest % attendance at cinemas was the age group 15-24 (2) there was a steady increase in the % among most age groups of those who went to the cinema Paragraph 3: select, report on and compare the figures for all ages for 1984 to 1994 Paragraph 4: select, report on and compare the figures for all ages for 1999 and 2000 Report: The graph compares the proportion of people in Britain going to the cinema each month, according to various age groups from 1984 to 2000 + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) Overall, it is clear that a higher percentage of 15-24 year-olds went to the cinema than people of other ages Cinema attendance increased steadily over the period for most age groups In 1984, about 18% of people aged 15 to 24 went to the cinema compared with 10% of youngsters aged 7-14 Monthly cinema attendance was lower among those aged 25-35 and 35 and over, at 3% and 1% respectively Over the next ten years, the proportion of people of all ages who went to the cinema increased, with the highest figure in 1994 of 40% for the 15-24 age group The figure for cinema attendance for youngsters aged 7-14 reached a peak of 38% in 1999, before falling to 32% in 2000 In contrast, the percentage of those from the other age groups who went to the cinema each month continued to rise until 2000 The proportion of those aged 15-24 was almost 60% in 2000, while the figure for the 25-35 group reached 32%, double the percentage for the over 35s 197 words + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) Task Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals, as individuals can little To what extent you agree or disagree? Essay Plan: Introduction: the need for environmental protection – politicians pass and enforce environmental laws, but individuals are able to act in important ways Disagree Paragraph 2: individuals act to make the public aware of environmental issues – example: Greta Thunberg and global warming Their protests force politicians to take action – example, the Amazon fires Paragraph 3: individuals also act to protect their local environment – actions by schools and community groups – examples: encourage recycling, stop pollution locally, oppose developments which damage the environment Conclusion: individuals can force politicians to act, and they can also act themselves to improve their local environment Essay: It is true that unless the environment is protected from damage by human activity, the planet will soon become unfit for human habitation I disagree that individuals are powerless to act While politicians must take responsibility for passing and enforcing laws to protect the environment, individuals can take action in numerous ways Firstly, individuals have acted to raise awareness of environmental issues among the public For example, the schoolgirl Greta Thunberg captured the attention of the world with her message on the need to take action on global warming Not only adults, but teenagers and children have become involved in actions to exert pressure on governments to implement policies to reduce dependence on fossil fuels and cut down on emissions Greta’s message is that nobody is too small to fight climate change Thousands of individuals joined her protests against the burning of the Amazon rainforest Their simple message that ‘our house is on fire’ prompted international bodies to try to force the government of Brazil to adhere to the treaties to protect the Amazon Secondly, while the voices of individuals can join together in the green movement, each person can also work to improve their local environment In schools all over the world, for instance, children, teachers and parents are working together to promote recycling in their area Community groups have sprung up on issues such as closing a factory which is discharging chemical waste into a local river Other community groups throw their weight + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) behind campaigns to force national and local authorities to abandon construction developments in their locality which will damage the environment In conclusion, individuals have formed pressure groups to hold politicians accountable for protecting the environment and have acted alone or together with others to create more environmentally-friendly neighbourhoods 292 words Vocabulary from the environment: to take action on global warming Meaning: to what has to be done on problems related to global warming Example: There have been numerous international conferences to warn of the dangers, but many governments have refused to take action on global warming to reduce the dependence/reliance on fossil fuels Meaning: to decrease people’s consumption of fossil fuels, like oil, coal or gas Example: Governments must invest heavily in solar and wind energy projects in order to reduce our dependence/reliance on fossil fuels to cut down on emissions Meaning: to reduce the amount of gases sent out into the air Example: People must be made aware of the need to cut down on emissions from their cars if we are to reduce air pollution to fight climate change Meaning: to try to prevent changes in climate patterns, such as rainfall, temperature and winds Example: Unless we consume fewer of the Earth’s natural resources, it will be impossible to fight climate change and safeguard our future the green movement Meaning: all the organisations concerned with the protection of the environment Example: Individuals should join one of the organisations which form part of the green movement, in order to campaign for changes in official policy on the environment to discharge chemical waste Meaning: to dispose of waste products from chemical processes + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) Example: Nowadays, more and more companies and industrial zones have been discharging chemical waste into rivers, causing death to many fish and other aquatic animals to throw one’s weight behind sth Meaning: to use one's influence to help support Example: The council is to throw its weight behind a campaign to save one of the town’s best-loved beauty spots to hold sbdy accountable for + noun/gerund Meaning: to consider someone responsible for something; to blame something on someone Example: Companies which discharge chemical waste from their factories into the sea or into rivers must be held accountable for their actions and be fined heavily environmentally friendly Meaning: behavior or products that not harm the environment Example: We can help to protect the environment by using detergents and cosmetics that are environmentally friendly Vocabulary from government: to exert pressure on Meaning: to use power to influence somebody or something Example: Environmental organisations should exert pressure on governments to invest in renewable energy projects international bodies Meaning: organisations which operate in many countries Example: National governments ought to give funds to international bodies, like the Red Cross and the United Nations, to deal with emergency situations to adhere to Meaning: to behave according to a particular law, rule, set of instructions, Example: Governments which fail to adhere to their election promises generally become unpopular very quickly national and local authorities Meaning: government organisations acting at a national level or within a smaller, local area Example: Tackling crime is a responsibility of both national and local authorities + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) to form a pressure group Meaning: to organise a group of people who try to influence the government to achieve the action that they want Example: Activists in my country have formed a pressure group to persuade the government to close nuclear power stations Other vocabulary: unfit for human habitation [expression]: Meaning: (an environment) that is not healthy or safe for people to live in Example: The old house was in a dangerous condition and full of rats It was completely unfit for human habitation to enforce [verb]: Meaning: to make sure that people obey a particular law or rule Example: The restrictions on the activity of people during the corona virus pandemic were difficult to enforce to spring up [phrasal verb]: Meaning: to appear or to develop rapidly and suddenly Example: New houses are springing up all over the city every week + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www.ngocbach.com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) ... tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www .ngocbach. com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) Task Environmental protection is the... tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www .ngocbach. com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) behind campaigns to force national and... tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học, sách thầy Bách, bạn truy cập: www .ngocbach. com + Hotline tư vấn đăng ký học: 0974657403 (email tư vấn: ieltsbach1707@gmail.com) Example: Nowadays, more and more companies