The main contents of the chapter consist of the following: What is personal essay? definition of the personal essay, subjects for the personal essay, the personal essay as a personal narrative, the personal essay as a personal opinion, how to choose a topic, resources for writing personal essays, steps for thinking about the personal essay.
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- What is Personal Essay?
Definition of the Personal Essay * Subjects for the Personal Essay
- The Personal Essay as a Personal Narrative - The Personal Essay as a Personal Opinion
How to Choose a Topic
— Make the Most of Life Experiences Resources for Writing Personal Essays
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Like Emerson and Thoreau, you, too, have experiences from which you learn important lessons A reflective essay describes a personal experience
and explores its significance
Autobiographies, letters, and memoirs often include reflective writing that gives insight
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A successful reflective essay should:
‘ be written In the first person
‘ describe an important experience in your life or in the life of someone you admire
’ use figurative language, dialogue,
sensory details, or other techniques to re-create the experience for the reader - explain the significance of the event
‘ make an observation about life based
on the experience
‘ encourage readers to think about the significance of the experience in light of their own lives
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Prewriting
To find ideas for your essay
¢ Try listing some memorable experiences You might look’ through family
photograph albums to help jog your
memory
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1 Think about your experience
Why do you remember this experience more clearly than others?
What different emotions did you go through during the experience?
Did your emotions change?
3 Explore the significance
What is the significance of your experience? What is the most obvious meaning to you? What else did your experience teach you?
Keep exploring to uncover as many levels of meaning
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3 Decide on the scope of your essay
Will you dwell on one example in-depth or relate several events to create the impression
you want?
4 Decide on the message you want to convey
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Drafting
A writer’s material is what he cares about
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Drafting
Begin Writing
¢ You might write about your experience as though you were writing a journal entry Or, you may want to begin your draft by trying out a variety of ideas Let your ideas flow even though you sense
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Drafting
Organize Your Essay
¢ Start your paper with an account of your experience and then explain — its Significance
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Drafting
Elaborate on Ideas
¢ Precise, vivid language will help you
convey the lesson about life you want to explain
¢ After you write a rough draft of your whole essay, set It aside for a while before you go back to revise it Taking a fresh look will help you see problems that you may
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Revising
Target Skill
AVOIDING CLICHES
Make sure that none of your images are
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Editing and Proofreading
Target Skill
POSSESSIVES AND PLURALS
As you revise your reflective essay, be sure that you have _ formed plurals and
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- In a reflective essay, you need to express your thoughts and emotions § about certain events or phenomena
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Essay
Step # 1: Think of an event that could
become the topic of your essay
since it Is going to be a reflective
essay, ask yourself:
> How you feel about this event?
> How it affected (did not affect) your life and why?
This will help you formulate a thesis that will be the focal point of your
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Step # 2: Make a mind map
Write down your thesis and draw a circle around it Now identify your main arguments and ideas, that will Support it and help the reader follow the evolution of your thoughts and experiences, group them into paragraphs, and connect them with
“rays” to your central circle
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Essay
Step # 3: Write a strong opening
paragraph Your introduction must be
eye catching, so that the reader
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Essay
Step # 4: State your supporting
arguments, ideas and examples in
the body paragraphs
Emphasize only one point or
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Essay
Step # 5: In the first sentence of the conclusion, briefly summarize your thoughts to date
Think about what you have learned and how your experience might be useful to others
Finish your essay with a symbolic question to your readers about how they might act in a similar situation
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Since composing a reflective essay presupposes that you will write about a personal experience, you can
choose whatever event you like
It is almost like a diary, where you write down your
thoughts about some significant happening in your life
It can be a book, an event, a person — the main thing
is to state your opinion
For example, you can write about:
— atrip to an exotic place;
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-—a book that you have recently read; - conflict in the Middle East;
- a certain personality;
-—the solving of a difficult problem;
-a successfully completed research project;
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- Your introductory paragraph could partially disclose or give a hint about the conclusions In your essay
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- Since a reflective essay Is particularly based on personal experience, It Is
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Usage of one or more quotations in the introduction can make your writing more
authoritative
In most reflective essays, apart from describing what went right, you may also describe what went wrong, or how some experience could
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‘ Do write your ideas in a descriptive
manner
— Your thoughts must be stated very clearly, so that your readers understand exactly what you wanted to Say
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- Do keep in mind, that you should write your essay basing not only on personal
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Don’t be too personal
- Despite the fact that a reflective essay Is based on personal experience, remember that you are writing an academic essay, not a
letter to a friend
Don’t try to cram all your experiences into one essay;
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‘ Don’t try to write everything at once
- Compose a ‘mind map’ and create an outline that gives a clear direction to your writing
- Don’t make your essay a free-flowing analysis of all your unstructured thoughts, insights and ideas
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: The inclusion of too much _ personal information in your essay
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- Ignoring the structure of an essay
— This results in a disorganized incoherent text which the reader will find hard to comprehend
- Being too informal
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Information Pressure:
ignorance isa
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Come to think of it, nowadays some people live under pretty harsh conditions Their physical and mental health is constantly
under threat Bad ecology, overpopulated
megalopolises, economic’ crises, large
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| can remember the days, when there was no TV and
Internet at my place | wasn’t much informed about what was going on in the world, about all the scandals, accidents and
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Most media organizations basically focus on negative facts There IS even an appropriate term for this phenomenon — pathogenic journalism Why would one want to Know about how much money a famous politician has earned? What are the hidden reasons for another celebrity divorce? How many women and children were killed during the last terroristic act in the Middle East? How does reporting the downside of a well-known official’s private life sell more copies? Nevertheless, this and other information flows through people’s minds every day, month by month But do they really need to know so much
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| am sure that there are strong reasons to establish and promote publishing houses, that focus only on good, or at least neutral, news One may find out that news about, for example, cultural and scientific events can be very interesting, if presented properly For instance, remember how NASA supported the informational campaign about the rover "Curiosity” when it was launched towards Mars A computer game was created, the main goal of which was to land the rover on the Red planet’s surface, and the Internet was filled with funny fan-art pictures and stories on the subject Or how a team of scientists assigned specific tones to each radioactive isotope and created a program, that allowed users to literally
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As for me, I’ve quit that news agency job and dedicated all the free time to my friends and hobbies These are the best ways to overcome the stresses of modern life It also turned out that limiting the amounts of
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e Sharing your experience
—- Emerson and Thoreau
¢ Basics In a BOX
¢ Writing Your Reflective Essay - Planning Your Reflective Essay
- Steps for Writing an Reflective Essay - Topic Selection
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