GIẢI ĐỀ IELTS WRITING 10/08/2019 BY NGOCBACH The diagrams show how olive oil is produced + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Report Plan: Paraphrase paragraph: show>illustrate; how olive oil is produced>the process of olive oil production Overview/summary paragraph: (1) state the number of stages (2) mention the first and last stages Paragraph 3: report on the first diagram (from picking the olives to final mashing in vats) Paragraph 4: report on the second diagram (from pressing the olives to extract oil to final shipment) + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Report: The diagrams illustrate the various stages in the process of olive oil production Overall, seven stages can be identified, beginning with picking the olives and ending with the shipment of the bottles of olive oil Initially, workers using poles knock the olives from the trees The olives selected for plumpness and ripeness are then washed in cold water Next, the olives are milled, which involves mashing and removing the stones After mashing, they enter large vats in which they are milled further to make a homogenized paste The next stage involves the loading of the paste into a hydraulic press There, the paste is placed between 25-30 hemp pressing bags and, with each push of the piston of the hydraulic press, oil is extracted Then, the oil is pumped to a centrifuge, to separate the oil and water, and the extracted oil is stored in underground vats Finally, the oil is bottled just before it is shipped to customers 159 words + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Task 2: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion Essay Plan: Introduction: refer to the key words in the task question State your own opinion – zoos must avoid cruelty, but they can provide useful protection Paragraph 2: cruel conditions still exist in some zoos The health of wild animals suffers Paragraph 3: arguments in favour of zoos (1) many zoos provide good conditions for animals e.g London Zoo (2) problems faced by wild animals in their natural habitats and the role of zoos in conservation and captive breeding e.g pandas Conclusion: zoos must provide good conditions, but they also serve an important conservation/protection role Essay: It is true that some people believe that confining wild animals in zoos is cruel and that zoos should therefore be closed down While I believe that cruelty to animals should be avoided at all costs, I agree with those who see a vital role for zoos in protecting wildlife On the one hand, there is an outcry in many countries over the cruel conditions in which animals are kept in some zoos As a result, many people argue that the public must exert pressure on governments to shut down all zoos For example, in some zoos the animals are still kept in cages, with little room in which to move around Critics argue correctly that the health of wild animals kept in such conditions must suffer, because they cannot exercise or follow their natural behaviour Physically and mentally, therefore, it is cruel to maintain wild animals in such confined spaces On the other hand, others argue that not all zoos subject wild animals to cramped conditions and, in addition, zoos perform a useful role in animal protection Firstly, the welfare of animals in a priority for many zoos London Zoo, for instance, houses wild animals in large, open spaces, often with trees or ponds to mimic their natural habitats Secondly, our small planet is facing an ecological crisis Today, there are many endangered species, because of exploitation and habitat destruction, which have left many creatures on the brink of extinction Captive breeding + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package programmes in zoos have saved some species, including the well-known success story of the giant panda In conclusion, I agree that all zoos must provide spacious, natural environments for their animals However, zoos have an important role to play in wildlife protection and survival 287 words Vocabulary from society: an outcry (at/over/against something) Meaning: a reaction of anger or strong protest shown by people in public Example: The new tax provoked a public outcry Vocabulary from government: to exert pressure on Meaning: to use power to influence somebody or something Example: Environmental organisations should exert pressure on governments to invest in renewable energy projects Vocabulary from the environment: an ecological crisis Meaning: a serious situation that occurs when the environment of a species or a population changes in a way that destabilizes its continued survival Example: Environmental degradation caused by human activity is provoking an ecological crisis which threatens our existence endangered species Meaning: plants or animals that only exist in very small numbers, so that in future they may disappear forever Example: One example of an endangered species is the lowland gorilla, which has almost disappeared as a result of the destruction of its forest habitat + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package habitat destruction Meaning: the process that occurs when a natural habitat, like a forest or wetland, is changed so dramatically by humans that plants and animals which live there Example: The elephant population in the world is declining because of habitat destruction caused by human exploitation of the environment on the brink of extinction Meaning: an animal or plant which has almost disappeared from the planet Example: Before the captive breeding program in zoos, the giant panda was on the brink of extinction captive breeding Meaning: the reproduction of animals in confinement, not in their natural habitats Example: A successful captive breeding program in zoos has resulted in an increase in the world’s panda population Vocabulary from reading: a success story Meaning: a person or thing that is very successful Example: Although some people have great talent in their field, behind success story there is always a lot of hard work and effort every Other vocabulary: to confine [verb]: Meaning: to keep a person or an animal in a small, closed space Example: During the train journey, the horses were confined in a small carriage at all costs [expression]: Meaning: whatever is needed to achieve something Example: Competitors in sports these days try to win at all costs, even by cheating + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package to subject [verb]: Meaning: to make a person or animal experience something unpleasant Example: In prison, he was subjected to many beatings cramped [adjective]: Meaning: not having enough room to move freely Example: The classroom was small, and so the students were forced to work in cramped conditions to mimic [verb]: Meaning: to look or behave like something else Example: Conditions in the astronaut training centre were designed to mimic conditions of zero gravity in space + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package ... sports these days try to win at all costs, even by cheating + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package to subject [verb]: Meaning:... is shipped to customers 159 words + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package Task 2: Some people think that zoos are all cruel... brink of extinction Captive breeding + Để tìm hiểu thơng tin khóa học IELTS Package tháng 8/2019 thầy Bách bạn xem https://ieltsngocbach.com/package programmes in zoos have saved some species, including