The purpose of Short Stories for Students (SSfS) is to provide readers with a guide to understanding, enjoying, and studying short stories by giving them easy access to information about the work. Part of Gale’s ‘‘For Students’’ Literature line,SSfS is specifically designed to meet the curricular needs of high school and undergraduate college students and their teachers, as well as the interests of general readers and researchers considering specificshort fiction. While each volume contains entries on ‘‘classic’’stories frequently studied in classrooms, there are also entries containing hard-to-find information on contemporary stories, including works by multicultural, international, and women writers.
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Trang 3Susan Allison: Head Librarian, Lewiston High
School, Lewiston, Maine Standards
Com-mittee Chairperson for Maine School Library
(MASL) Programs Board member, Julia
Adams Morse Memorial Library, Greene,
Maine Advisor to Lewiston Public Library
Planning Process
Jennifer Hood: Young Adult/Reference
Librar-ian, Cumberland Public Library,
Cumber-land, Rhode Island Certified teacher, Rhode
Island Member of the New England Library
Association, Rhode Island Library
Associa-tion, and the Rhode Island Educational
Media Association
Ann Kearney: Head Librarian and Media
Specia-list, Christopher Columbus High School,
Miami, Florida, 1982–2002 Thirty-two years
as Librarian in various educational
institu-tions ranging from grade schools through
graduate programs Library positions at
Miami-Dade Community College, the
Uni-versity of Miami’s Medical School Library,
and Carrollton School in Coconut Grove,
Florida B.A from University of Detroit,
1967 (magna cum laude); M.L.S., University
of Missouri–Columbia, l974 Volunteer ject Leader for a school in rural Jamaica;volunteer with Adult Literacy programs.Laurie St Laurent: Head of Adult and Children’sServices, East Lansing Public Library, EastLansing, Michigan, 1994– M.L.S fromWestern Michigan University Chair ofMichigan Library Association’s 1998 Michi-gan Summer Reading Program; Chair of theChildren’s Services Division in 2000–2001;and Vice-President of the Association in2002–2003 Board member of several regio-nal early childhood literacy organizationsand member of the Library of MichiganYouth Services Advisory Committee.Heidi Stohs: Instructor in Language Arts,grades 10–12, Solomon High School, Solo-mon, Kansas Received B.S from KansasState University; M.A from Fort HaysState University
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ADVISORS ii
WHY STUDY LITERATURE AT ALL? ix
(by Thomas E Barden) INTRODUCTION xi
LITERARY CHRONOLOGY xv
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS xvi
CONTRIBUTORS xviii
BROWNIES (by ZZ Packer) 1
Author Biography 1
Plot Summary 2
Characters 4
Themes 6
Style 7
Historical Context 7
Critical Overview 9
Criticism 10
Sources 15
Further Reading 16
CAROLINE’S WEDDING (by Edwidge Danticat) 17
Author Biography 17
Plot Summary 18
Characters 20
Themes 22
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Historical Context 26
Critical Overview 27
Criticism 29
Sources 41
Further Reading 41
THE DIAMOND AS BIG AS THE RITZ (by F Scott Fitzgerald) 42
Author Biography 43
Plot Summary 44
Characters 45
Themes 47
Style 48
Historical Context 50
Critical Overview 50
Criticism 51
Sources 76
Further Reading 76
A GIRL LIKE PHYL (by Patricia Highsmith) 77
Author Biography 77
Plot Summary 78
Characters 80
Themes 81
Style 81
Historical Context 82
Critical Overview 83
Criticism 84
Sources 108
Further Reading 108
THE GIRLS (by Joy Williams) 109
Author Biography 109
Plot Summary 110
Characters 111
Themes 113
Style 114
Historical Context 114
Critical Overview 115
Criticism 116
Sources 124
Further Reading 124
HERE’S YOUR HAT WHAT’S YOUR HURRY (by Elizabeth McCracken ) 125
Author Biography 125
Plot Summary 126
Characters 127
Themes 129
Style 130
Historical Context 130
Critical Overview 131
Criticism 132
Sources 142
Further Reading 142
LAST NIGHT (by James Salter) 143
Author Biography 143
Plot Summary 144
Characters 146
Themes 147
Style 148
Historical Context 149
Critical Overview 151
Criticism 152
Sources 164
Further Reading 165
A NURSE’S STORY (by Peter Baida) 166
Author Biography 166
Plot Summary 167
Characters 170
Themes 173
Style 174
Historical Context 174
Critical Overview 175
Criticism 176
Sources 183
Further Reading 183
PERFECTION (by Mark Helprin) 185
Author Biography 185
Plot Summary 187
Characters 189
Themes 192
Style 193
Historical Context 194
Critical Overview 196
Criticism 198
Sources 207
Further Reading 207
THE PRICE OF EGGS IN CHINA (by Don Lee) 208
Author Biography 209
Plot Summary 209
Characters 211
Themes 212
Style 213
Historical Context 214
Critical Overview 214
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Sources 225
Further Reading 225
THE REMEMBERER (by Aimee Bender) 226
Author Biography 227
Plot Summary 227
Characters 228
Themes 229
Style 230
Historical Context 230
Critical Overview 231
Criticism 232
Sources 240
Further Reading 240
THE SHELL COLLECTOR (by Anthony Doerr) 241
Author Biography 241
Plot Summary 242
Characters 244
Themes 246
Style 247
Historical Context 248
Critical Overview 249
Criticism 249
Sources 260
Further Reading 260
TRICK OR TREAT (by Padgett Powell) 261
Author Biography 261
Plot Summary 262
Characters 264
Themes 265
Style 266
Historical Context 266
Critical Overview 268
Criticism 270
Sources 286
Further Reading 286
WHAT I SAW FROM WHERE I STOOD (by Marisa Silver) 288
Author Biography 288
Plot Summary 289
Characters 290
Themes 291
Style 292
Historical Context 292
Critical Overview 293
Criticism 294
Sources 303
Further Reading 303
Glossary of Literary Terms 305
Cumulative Author/Title Index 317
Cumulative Nationality/ Ethnicity Index 325
Subject/Theme Index 331
Trang 9Why Study Literature At All?
Short Stories for Studentsis designed to provide
readers with information and discussion about a
wide range of important contemporary and
his-torical works of short fiction, and it does that job
very well However, I want to use this guest
fore-word to address a question that it does not take
up It is a fundamental question that is often
ignored in high school and college English
classes as well as research texts, and one that
causes frustration among students at all levels,
namely why study literature at all? Isn’t it
enough to read a story, enjoy it, and go about
one’s business? My answer (to be expected from
a literary professional, I suppose) is no It is
not enough It is a start; but it is not enough
Here’s why
First, literature is the only part of the
educa-tional curriculum that deals directly with the
actual world of lived experience The
philoso-pher Edmund Husserl used the apt German
term die Lebenswelt, ‘‘the living world,’’ to
denote this realm All the other content areas
of the modern American educational system
avoid the subjective, present reality of everyday
life Science (both the natural and the social
varieties) objectifies, the fine arts create and/or
perform, history reconstructs Only literary
study persists in posing those questions we all
asked before our schooling taught us to give up
on them Only literature gives credibility to
per-sonal perceptions, feelings, dreams, and the
‘‘stream of consciousness’’ that is our inner
voice Literature wonders about infinity, ders why God permits evil, wonders what willhappen to us after we die Literature admits that
won-we get our hearts broken, that people sometimescheat and get away with it, that the world is astrange and probably incomprehensible place.Literature, in other words, takes on all the bigand small issues of what it means to be human
So my first answer is that of the humanist weshould read literature and study it and take itseriously because it enriches us as human beings
We develop our moral imagination, our capacity
to sympathize with other people, and our ability
to understand our existence through the ence of fiction
experi-My second answer is more practical Bystudying literature we can learn how to exploreand analyze texts Fiction may be about dieLebenswelt, but it is a construct of words puttogether in a certain order by an artist using themedium of language By examining and studyingthose constructions, we can learn about lan-guage as a medium We can become moresophisticated about word associations and con-notations, about the manipulation of symbols,and about style and atmosphere We can grasphow ambiguous language is and how importantcontext and texture is to meaning In our firstencounter with a work of literature, of course,
we are not supposed to catch all of these things
We are spellbound, just as the writer wanted us
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that we begin to see how the tricks are done
Seeing the tricks, which is another way of
saying ‘‘developing analytical and close reading
skills,’’ is important above and beyond its
intrin-sic literary educational value These skills transfer
to other fields and enhance critical thinking of
any kind Understanding how language is used
to construct texts is powerful knowledge It
makes engineers better problem solvers, lawyers
better advocates and courtroom practitioners,
politicians better rhetoricians, marketing and
advertising agents better sellers, and citizens
more aware consumers as well as better
partici-pants in democracy This last point is especially
important, because rhetorical skill works both
ways when we learn how language is manipulated
in the making of texts the result is that we become
less susceptible when language is used to
manip-ulate us
My third reason is related to the second
When we begin to see literature as created
arti-facts of language, we become more sensitive to
good writing in general We get a stronger sense
of the importance of individual words, even the
sounds of words and word combinations We
begin to understand Mark Twain’s delicious
proverb ‘‘The difference between the right word
and the almost right word is the difference
between lightning and a lightning bug.’’ Getting
beyond the ‘‘enjoyment only’’ stage of literature
gets us closer to becoming makers of word art
ourselves I am not saying that studying fiction
will turn every student into a Faulkner or a
Shakespeare But it will make us more adaptable
and effective writers, even if our art form ends up
being the office memo or the corporate annual
report
Studying short stories, then, can help
stu-dents become better readers, better writers, and
even better human beings But I want to closewith a warning If your study and exploration ofthe craft, history, context, symbolism, or any-thing else about a story starts to rob it of themagic you felt when you first read it, it is time tostop Take a break, study another subject, shootsome hoops, or go for a run Love of reading istoo important to be ruined by school The earlytwentieth century writer Willa Cather, in hernovel My Antonia, has her narrator JackBurden tell a story that he and Antonia heardfrom two old Russian immigrants when theywere teenagers These immigrants, Pavel andPeter, told about an incident from their youthback in Russia that the narrator could recall invivid detail thirty years later It was a harrowingstory of a wedding party starting home in sledsand being chased by starving wolves Hundreds
of wolves attacked the group’s sleds one by one
as they sped across the snow trying to reach theirvillage In a horrible revelation, the old Russiansrevealed that the groom eventually threw hisown bride to the wolves to save himself Therewas even a hint that one of the old immigrantsmight have been the groom mentioned in thestory Cather has her narrator conclude withhis feelings about the story ‘‘We did not tellPavel’s secret to anyone, but guarded it jealously
as if the wolves of the Ukraine had gathered thatnight long ago, and the wedding party had beensacrificed, just to give us a painful and peculiarpleasure.’’ That feeling, that painful and peculiarpleasure, is the most important thing about lit-erature Study and research should enhance thatfeeling and never be allowed to overwhelm it.Thomas E Barden
Professor of English and Director ofGraduate English Studies, TheUniversity of Toledo
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The purpose of Short Stories for Students
(SSfS) is to provide readers with a guide to
understanding, enjoying, and studying short
stories by giving them easy access to
informa-tion about the work Part of Gale’s ‘‘For
Students’’ Literature line, SSfS is specifically
designed to meet the curricular needs of high
school and undergraduate college students and
their teachers, as well as the interests of general
readers and researchers considering specific
short fiction While each volume contains
entries on ‘‘classic’’stories frequently studied in
classrooms, there are also entries containing
hard-to-find information on contemporary
stories, including works by multicultural,
inter-national, and women writers
The information covered in each entry
includes an introduction to the story and the
story’s author; a plot summary, to help readers
unravel and understand the events in the work;
descriptions of important characters, including
explanation of a given character’s role in the
nar-rative as well as discussion about that character’s
relationship to other characters in the story;
ana-lysis of important themes in the story; and an
explanation of important literary techniques and
movements as they are demonstrated in the work
In addition to this material, which helps the
readers analyze the story itself, students are also
provided with important information on the
lit-erary and historical background informing eachwork This includes a historical context essay, abox comparing the time or place the story waswritten to modern Western culture, a criticaloverview essay, and excerpts from critical essays
on the story or author A unique feature of SSfS
is a specially commissioned critical essay on eachstory, targeted toward the student reader
To further aid the student in studying andenjoying each story, information on media adapta-tions is provided (if available), as well as readingsuggestions for works of fiction and nonfiction onsimilar themes and topics Classroom aids includeideas for research papers and lists of critical sourcesthat provide additional material on the work
Selection CriteriaThe titles for each volume of SSfS were selected
by surveying numerous sources on teaching erature and analyzing course curricula for var-ious school districts Some of the sourcessurveyed include: literature anthologies, ReadingLists for College-Bound Students: The BooksMost Recommended by America’s Top Colleges;Teaching the Short Story: A Guide to UsingStories from around the World, by the NationalCouncil of Teachers of English (NCTE); and ‘‘AStudy of High School Literature Anthologies,’’conducted by Arthur Applebee at the Center forthe Learning and Teaching of Literature andsponsored by the National Endowment for the
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Improvement
Input was also solicited from our advisory
board, as well as educators from various areas
From these discussions, it was determined that
each volume should have a mix of ‘‘classic’’
stor-ies (those works commonly taught in literature
classes) and contemporary stories for which
information is often hard to find Because of the
interest in expanding the canon of literature, an
emphasis was also placed on including works by
international, multicultural, and women authors
Our advisory board members—educational
pro-fessionals—helped pare down the list for each
volume Works not selected for the present
volume were noted as possibilities for future
volumes As always, the editor welcomes
sugges-tions for titles to be included in future volumes
How Each Entry Is Organized
Each entry, or chapter, in SSfS focuses on one
story Each entry heading lists the title of the
story, the author’s name, and the date of the
story’s publication The following elements are
contained in each entry:
Introduction: a brief overview of the story which
provides information about its first
appear-ance, its literary standing, any controversies
surrounding the work, and major conflicts
or themes within the work
Author Biography: this section includes basic
facts about the author’s life, and focuses on
events and times in the author’s life that may
have inspired the story in question
Plot Summary: a description of the events in the
story Lengthy summaries are broken down
with subheads
Characters: an alphabetical listing of the
acters who appear in the story Each
char-acter name is followed by a brief to an
extensive description of the character’s role
in the story, as well as discussion of the
character’s actions, relationships, and
possi-ble motivation
Characters are listed alphabetically by last
name If a character is unnamed—for instance,
the narrator in ‘‘The Eatonville Anthology’’—the
character is listed as ‘‘The Narrator’’ and
alpha-betized as ‘‘Narrator.’’ If a character’s first name
is the only one given, the name will appear
alpha-betically by that name
Themes: a thorough overview of how the topics,themes, and issues are addressed within thestory Each theme discussed appears in aseparate subhead, and is easily accessedthrough the boldface entries in the Subject/Theme Index
Style: this section addresses important style ments of the story, such as setting, point ofview, and narration; important literarydevices used, such as imagery, foreshadowing,symbolism; and, if applicable, genres to whichthe work might have belonged, such as Gothi-cism or Romanticism Literary terms areexplained within the entry, but can also befound in the Glossary
ele-Historical Context: this section outlines thesocial, political, and cultural climate inwhich the author lived and the work was cre-ated.This section may include descriptions
of related historical events, pertinent aspects
of daily life in the culture, and the artisticand literary sensibilities of the time in whichthe work was written If the story is histor-ical in nature, information regarding thetime in which the story is set is also included.Long sections are broken down with helpfulsubheads
Critical Overview: this section provides ground on the critical reputation of theauthor and the story, including bannings orany other public controversies surroundingthe work For older works, this section mayinclude a history of how the story was firstreceived and how perceptions of it may havechanged over the years; for more recentworks, direct quotes from early reviewsmay also be included
back-Criticism: an essay commissioned by SSfS whichspecifically deals with the story and is writ-ten specifically for the student audience, aswell as excerpts from previously publishedcriticism on the work (if available)
Sources: an alphabetical list of critical materialused in compiling the entry, with bibliogra-phical information
Further Reading: an alphabetical list of othercritical sources which may prove useful forthe student Includes full bibliographicalinformation and a brief annotation
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highlighted sections, set apart from the main
text as sidebars:
Media Adaptations: if availablee, a list of film
and television adaptations of the story,
including source information The list also
includes stage adaptations, audio
record-ings, musical adaptations, etc
Topics for Further Study: a list of potential study
questions or research topics dealing with
the story This section includes questions
related to other disciplines the student may
be studying, such as American history,
world history, science, math, government,
business, geography, economics,
psychol-ogy, etc
Compare and Contrast: an ‘‘at-a-glance’’
compar-ison of the cultural and historical differences
between the author’s time and culture and late
twentieth century or early twenty-first century
Western culture This box includes pertinent
parallels between the major scientific, political,
and cultural movements of the time or place
the story was written, the time or place the
story was set (if a historical work), and modern
Western culture Works written after 1990
may not have this box
What Do I Read Next?: a list of works that might
complement the featured story or serve as a
contrast to it This includes works by the same
author and others, works of fiction and
non-fiction, and works from various genres,
cul-tures, and eras
Other Features
SSfSincludes ‘‘Why Study Literature At All?,’’ a
foreword by Thomas E Barden, Professor of
English and Director of Graduate English
Stu-dies at the University of Toledo This essay
pro-vides a number of very fundamental reasons for
studying literature and, therefore, reasons why a
book such as SSfS, designed to facilitate the
study of literture, is useful
A Cumulative Author/Title Index lists the
authors and titles covered in each volume of the
SSfSseries
A Cumulative Nationality/Ethnicity Index
breaks down the authors and titles covered in
each volume of the SSfS series by nationality
and ethnicity
A Subject/Theme Index, specific to each
volume, provides easy reference for users who
may be studying a particular subject or themerather than a single work Significant subjectsfrom events to broad themes are included, andthe entries pointing to the specific theme discus-sions in each entry are indicated in boldface
Each entry may include illustrations, ing photo of the author, stills from film adapta-tions (if available), maps, and/or photos of keyhistorical events
includ-Citing Short Stories for StudentsWhen writing papers, students who quotedirectly from any volume of SSfS may use thefollowing general forms to document theirsource These examples are based on MLAstyle; teachers may request that students adhere
to a different style, thus, the following examplesmay be adapted as needed
When citing text from SSfS that is notattributed to a particular author (for example,the Themes, Style, Historical Context sections,etc.), the following format may be used:
‘‘The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calavaras County.’’ Short Stories for Students Ed.
Kathleen Wilson Vol 1 Detroit: Gale, 1997.
19–20.
When quoting the specially commissionedessay from SSfS (usually the first essay underthe Criticism subhead), the following formatmay be used:
Korb, Rena Critical Essay on ‘‘Children of the Sea.’’ Short Stories for Students Ed Kathleen Wilson Vol 1 Detroit: Gale, 1997 39–42.
When quoting a journal or newspaper essaythat is reprinted in a volume of Short Stories forStudents, the following form may be used:
Schmidt, Paul ‘‘The Deadpan on Simon Wheeler.’’ Southwest Review Vol XLI, No 3 (Summer, 1956), 270–77; excerpted and reprinted in Short Stories for Students, Vol 1,
ed Kathleen Wilson (Detroit: Gale, 1997), pp.
29–31.
When quoting material from a book that isreprinted in a volume of SSfS, the followingform may be used:
Bell-Villada, Gene H ‘‘The Master of Short Forms,’’ in Garcı´a Ma´rquez: The Man and His Work University of North Carolina Press,
1990, pp 119–36; excerpted and reprinted in Short Stories for Students, Vol 1, ed Kathleen Wilson (Detroit: Gale, 1997), pp 89–90.
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The editorial staff of Short Stories for Students
welcomes your comments and ideas Readers
who wish to suggest short stories to appear in
future volumes, or who have other suggestions,
are cordially invited to contact the editor You
may contact the editor via E-mail at: ForStudentsEditors@thomson.com Or write to the editor at:Editor, Short Stories for Students
Thomson Gale
27500 Drake RoadFarmington Hills, MI 48331-3535
Trang 15Literary Chronology
1896: Francis Scott Key Fitzgerald is born on
September 24 in St Paul, Minnesota
1921: Patricia Highsmith is born Mary Patricia
Plangman on January 19 in Fort Worth, Texas
1922: F Scott Fitzgerald’s ‘‘The Diamond as Big
as the Ritz’’ is published
1925: James Salter is born James Horowitz on
June 10 in Passaic, New Jersey
1940: F Scott Fitzgerald dies of a heart attack
1959: Don Lee is born in Tokyo, Japan, to parents
who are second-generation Korean Americans
1960: Marisa Silver is born on April 23 in Shaker
Heights, New Jersey
1966: Elizabeth McCracken is born
1969: Edwidge Danticat is born on January 19 in
Port-au-Prince, Haiti
1969: Aimee Bender is born on June 28 in Los
Angeles, California
1973: ZZ Packer is born in Chicago
1973: Anthony Doerr, also known as Tony Doerr,
is born on October 27 in Cleveland, Ohio.1980: Patricia Highsmith’s ‘‘A Girl like Phyl’’ ispublished
1993: Elizabeth McCracken’s ‘‘Here’s Your HatWhat’s Your Hurry’’ is published
1993: Padgett Powell’s ‘‘Trick or Treat’’ ispublished
1995: Patricia Highsmith dies of leukemia onFebruary 4
1995: Edwidge Danticat’s ‘‘Caroline’s Wedding’’
2000: Don Lee’s ‘‘The Price of Eggs in China’’ ispublished
2001: Marisa Silver’s ‘‘What I Saw from Where IStood’’ is published
2002: James Salter’s ‘‘Last Night’’ is published.2002: Anthony Doerr’s ‘‘The Shell Collector’’ ispublished
2003: ZZ Packer’s ‘‘Brownies’’ is published.2004: Mark Helprin’s ‘‘Perfection’’ is published.2004: Joy Williams’s ‘‘The Girls’’ is published
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of the excerpted criticism included in this volume
and the permissions managers of many book and
magazine publishing companies for assisting
us in securing reproduction rights We are also
grateful to the staffs of the Detroit Public
Library, the Library of Congress, the University
of Detroit Mercy Library, Wayne State
Univer-sity Purdy/Kresge Library Complex, and the
University of Michigan Libraries for making
their resources available to us Following is a
list of the copyright holders who have granted
us permission to reproduce material in this
volume of SSFS Every effort has been made to
trace copyright, but if omissions have been
made, please let us know
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All rights reserved Reproduced by permission.—
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Trang 18Bryan Aubrey: Aubrey holds a Ph.D in English
and has published many articles on
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Trang 19‘‘Brownies’’ is a story by ZZ Packer, a young
African American writer It appears in Packer’s
short story collection, Drinking Coffee Elsewhere,
which was published in 2003 to great acclaim The
story is about a Brownie troop of fourth-grade
African American girls from suburban Atlanta,
Georgia, who go to summer camp At the camp,
they encounter a troop of white girls and believe
that one of the white girls addressed them with a
racial insult The African American girls resolve
to beat up the white girls
‘‘Brownies’’ is a story about racism as it is
experienced by young girls, but it has a twist The
African American girls discover that the
situa-tion is not as clear-cut as they had believed, and
as they return home on the bus, Laurel, the
African American girl who narrates the story,
tells them of an incident in her family involving a
white Mennonite family As she tells the story,
she comes to an unsettling realization about
rac-ism and the nature of human life
AUTHOR BIOGRAPHY
ZZ Packer was born in Chicago in 1973 Her first
name is Zuwena, which is a Swahili word
mean-ing ‘‘good.’’ But she has been known by the
nickname ZZ for as long as she can remember,
she told Richard Dorment in a March 2003
interview for Interview magazine When she
ZZ PACKER 2003
Trang 20was five, she and her family moved to Atlanta,
where she remained until she was eleven Then
her parents got divorced, and ZZ went to live in
Louisville, Kentucky, with her mother During
her early schooling, Packer was interested in
math and science, but in high school a teacher
had the class write short stories, and that planted
a seed in Packer’s mind that she might one day
become a writer
After graduating from high school, Packer
attended Yale University For a while she was
unsure of whether to focus on the humanities or
the sciences, but she then decided she would
become an engineer At the time she did not
think writing was an activity that people could
actually do in order to make a living But after
graduating from Yale, she attended the Writing
Seminar at Johns Hopkins University in
Balti-more At Johns Hopkins, one of her tutors was
Francine Prose, whose perspective on writing
encouraged Packer to look at her own work in
a new way
After Johns Hopkins, Packer taught in apublic high school for two years, determined towrite during her spare time But she found thatteaching was a demanding profession, and it wasdifficult to find the time to write as well as teach.She took many odd jobs during the summers andthen decided to apply to the prestigious Writers’Workshop at the University of Iowa She wasadmitted to the program and graduated in 1997
It was not long before she began to havesuccess Her story, ‘‘Drinking Coffee Elsewhere’’was included in the Debut Fiction issue of theNew Yorkerin 2000, and her work also appeared
in Seventeen, Harper’s, The Best American ShortStories(2000), and Ploughshares Eight of Pack-er’s stories, including ‘‘Brownies,’’ were collected
in Drinking Coffee Elsewhere, which was lished by Riverhead Books in 2003 to universalpraise from reviewers John Updike chose thebook as the June 2003, Today Book Club selec-tion on the NBC network’s Today Show, and thebook was also nominated for the PEN/FaulknerAward for Fiction in 2004
pub-Among the writers Packer most admires areToni Morrison, especially Morrison’s novel,Beloved She has also been influenced by LeoTolstoy’s War and Peace, Mark Twain’s Huckle-berry Finn, Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man, Mar-ilynne Robinson’s Housekeeping, and JamesBaldwin’s Go Tell It on the Mountain
As of 2006, Packer lived in San Francisco,California, and taught at Stanford University.She was working on a novel about the BuffaloSoldiers, African Americans who served in theU.S Army following the Civil War
PLOT SUMMARY
‘‘Brownies’’ takes place at Camp Crescendo, asummer camp for fourth graders near the sub-urbs of Atlanta, Georgia The story is told in thefirst person by an African American girl namedLaurel, known to the other girls by her nick-name, Snot Laurel announces that by the sec-ond day at the camp, all the girls in her Brownietroop had decided they were going to ‘‘kick theasses’’ of every girl in Brownie Troop 909, whowere all white girls The black girls took a dislike
to the white girls when they first saw them.Arnetta, the girls’ ringleader, said they smelled
‘‘like Chihuahuas Wet Chihuahuas.’’ When sheadds that they were like ‘‘Caucasian Chihuahuas,’’
ZZ PackerÓ Robert Birnbaum
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regard the word Caucasian as a hilarious term of
abuse that can be used in almost any situation
The black girls have seen whites before but
have never had much to do with them But the
ten white girls they encounter at the camp are
closer to them and, therefore, more real and
capable of exciting envy and hatred
At the end of the first day at camp, Arnetta
reports she heard one of the white girls refer to
Daphne, a black girl, as ‘‘a nigger.’’ On
prompt-ing by Arnetta, Daphne, a quiet girl, nods her
head to confirm that the derogatory term was
used Arnetta tells the other girls that they
can-not let the white girls get away with using that
word about them She says they must teach the
white girls a lesson Janice suggests that they put
daddy-long-legs in the white girls’ sleeping bags,
and when the girls awake, beat them up Arnetta
tells Janice, who is not a popular girl, to shut up
Arnetta then announces that they are to hold a
secret meeting She turns to Laurel, whom she
appears not to like, and asks her whether Laurel
plans to tell Mrs Margolin, their troop leader,
about the situation
On the second day of camp, the black girls
eat their sandwich lunch by a stream that
bor-ders the field hockey lawn Arnetta eyes the
white girls from Troop 909 and would like to
attack them right then and there, but the white
girls are with their troop leader, which makes the
mission impossible When the white girls leave,
Arnetta says they must find a way of getting
them when they are alone Laurel says that the
girls will never be alone, and the only time they
will be unsupervised is in the bathroom Octavia
tells Laurel to shut up, but Arnetta seems to
think this is a useful piece of information
The black girls walk to the restrooms, which
are messy, with leaves and wads of chewing gum
on the floor Arnetta says that when they meet
the white girls there, they will be nice to them at
first and then tell them what happens when they
call any one of the black girls a ‘‘nigger.’’ Janice
says that she will tell the white girls, ‘‘We’re
gonna teach you a lesson!’’ Laurel, who is
nor-mally very quiet, asks what will happen if the
white girls say they did not use the offending
word Arnetta dismisses this possibility and
says that all they have to do is fight An
excep-tion is made for Daphne, however, since they are
doing this to avenge her The girls leave the
rest-rooms, although Daphne stays behind, picking
up the trash When Arnetta is asked about thesecret meeting, she replies that they have justhad it
That evening, just before their bedtime,Mrs Hedy, the parent helper, comes to theircabin The girls, knowing she is depressedabout her impending divorce, sing her favoriteBrownie song for her The girls are then reluc-tantly persuaded by Mrs Margolin to sing ‘‘TheDoughnut Song,’’ a religious song which they allhate Mrs Margolin is tired and leaves to go tothe lodge Arnetta says it is time to go to therestroom, hoping that Mrs Hedy will not gowith them Arnetta knows that the troop ofwhite girls will be in the restrooms soon andwill not be expecting an ambush Mrs Hedyindicates that the girls can go to the bathroomunaccompanied She makes Octavia promise to
be good
Daphne tells Laurel that she is not goingwith them, and Laurel says she is not goingeither But Arnetta overhears her and insiststhat she comes
They make their way to the restrooms in thedarkness, using a flashlight to guide them They
do not talk about fighting; they are all frightenedenough to be walking through the woods atnight
When they arrive, the white girls are alreadythere Arnetta and Octavia go in first, instructingthe others to follow when they hear Arnetta say,
‘‘We’re gonna teach you a lesson.’’
After about a minute, Laurel hears one ofthe white girls deny that they had used the offen-sive word The other black girls decide to goinside, even though Arnetta has not given thesignal Inside, they see five white girls huddled
up against a bigger girl Octavia whispers to Elisethat she thinks the white girls are retarded Thebig girl denies it, but it is obvious to the othersthat she and all the other white girls are indeedmentally handicapped Arnetta says they are justpretending, but Octavia, deflated, says that theyshould just leave Octavia tells the big girl theyare leaving and not to tell anyone they werethere The big girl asks why not, saying sheknows the black girls will get into trouble Shethreatens to tell on them
Shortly after this, the white girls’ troopleader enters the bathroom and assures thegirls that everything will be all right All thegirls start crying Then the ranger comes, then
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the leader of Troop 909 that the girls will
apolo-gize and their parents will punish them The
white girls’ leader denies that her girls are
men-tally handicapped but admits they are ‘‘delayed
learners.’’
The black girls are speechless, while the
Troop 909 leader is full of words and energy
She tells Mrs Margolin that some of her girls
are ‘‘echolalic,’’ which means they will repeat
whatever they hear (Echolalia, the repeating of
the speech of others, is a severe communication
disorder associated with childhood
schizophre-nia and mental retardation.) So they might have
used the racial slur, but it would not have been
intentional Arnetta points to a small girl and
says it was she who used the word The troop
leader says that is impossible, since the girl never
speaks Arnetta then picks out another girl as the
culprit, but Laurel thinks it very unlikely that
this happy-looking girl would call anyone a
‘‘nigger.’’
On the fourth morning, they board a bus to
go home The journey is quiet to begin with, but
then the girls all try to silently imitate the
expres-sions and mannerisms of the white girls, trying
not to laugh too hard and attract the attention of
Mrs Margolin and Mrs Hedy Octavia wonders
why they had to be stuck at camp with retarded
girls When Laurel starts to tell a story, Octavia
tries to shut her up, but Daphne encourages
Laurel to continue Laurel tells her about an
incident in a mall when she was there with her
father They saw a Mennonite family, dressed in
their distinctive garb Laurel’s father had told
her that if someone asked the Mennonites to do
something for the person, they would be
com-pelled to do it, because it was part of their
reli-gion Laurel’s father asked them to paint his
porch, and the entire Mennonite family came
and did so Laurel’s father explained to her that
he had asked them to do this because it would be
the only time he would be able to see a white man
on his knees doing something for a black man for
free
Laurel now understands why her father said
that, although she does not agree with the
senti-ment When Daphne asks if Laurel’s father had
thanked the Mennonites, Laurel replies no, and
she suddenly realizes that there is ‘‘something
mean’’ in the world that she cannot stop
CHARACTERS
Arnetta
Arnetta is the strong-minded leader of the blackgirls in the Brownie troop She is a dominantpersonality, and after she speaks the other girlsare usually quiet: ‘‘Her tone had an upholsteredconfidence that was somehow both regal andvulgar at once It demanded a few moments ofsilence in its wake, like the ringing of a churchbell or the playing of taps.’’ It is Arnetta whosays that she heard one of the white girls callDaphne a ‘‘nigger,’’ and she is determined thatthe white girls must not be allowed to get awaywith it She is eager to start a fight and makessure that the reluctant Snot goes along, too.Arnetta plans out how the confrontation in therestroom is to be handled and gives instructions
to the other girls With Octavia, Arnetta is thefirst one to enter the bathroom Arnetta is also acunning girl She makes a point of listening toMrs Margolin in class and giving all the rightanswers Mrs Margolin, therefore, has a goodopinion of Arnetta and does not realize quitehow subversive she can be Arnetta knows how
to deceive both Mrs Margolin and Mrs Hedy
Daphne
Daphne is the black girl who was allegedlyinsulted by one of the white girls, although shedoes not seem to be upset by it Daphne is a veryquiet girl When she speaks, her voice is ‘‘petiteand tinkly, the voice one might expect from ashiny new earring.’’ She appears to be intelligentand wrote a poem for Langston Hughes Day thatwon a prize at school (Langston Hughes was aprominent African American poet.) Daphne’sparents are poor, and she wears old but cleanclothes She has no desire to fight the white girlsand is excused from doing so by Arnetta Whenthe girls first visit the restrooms to assess the placewhere they seek out the fight, Daphne busiesherself by cleaning up the trash
Elise
Elise is a black girl who plays a minor role in thestory She is a follower of Arnetta and Octavia,although on one occasion she takes the unusualstep of asking Snot, who is usually ignored bythe others, for her opinion
Mrs Hedy
Mrs Hedy is the parent helper for the troop ofblack girls She is Octavia’s mother Mrs Hedy is
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about it in public, to Octavia’s embarrassment
She tries in a perfunctory manner to get the girls
to behave themselves, but she has little authority
over them Instead, she persuades them to sing
Brownie songs to cheer her up She is lenient and
allows the girls to go to the restrooms on their
own
Octavia Hedy
Along with Arnetta, Octavia Hedy is one of the
leaders in the troop of black girls She is an
aggressive girl with very long hair which ‘‘hung
past her butt like a Hawaiian hula dancer’s.’’
Octavia is as determined as Arnetta that the
white girls should not get away with insulting
Daphne She is scornful of Janice and keeps
tell-ing her to shut up, and she has the same attitude
toward Laurel She is also disdainful of the
expe-rience of being in camp She says, ‘‘I mean, I really
don’t know why it’s even called camping—all we
ever do with Nature is find some twigs and say
something like, ‘Wow, this fell from a tree.’’’ It is
Octavia who decides that the girls should leave
the restroom when they discover the white girls
are retarded
Janice
Janice is the girl who comes up with a plan to put
daddy-long-legs in the white girls’ sleeping bags
She is a simple, country girl, ‘‘her looks homely,
her jumpy acrobatics embarrassing to behold.’’
Janice is a big fan of Michael Jackson Arnetta
and Octavia treat her with contempt, but Janice
does not seem to mind or even notice At one
point, Snot and Daphne are worried that
Octavia may push Janice into the stream
Janice is enthusiastic about the prospective
fight and carefully rehearses the line she has
thought up: ‘‘We’re gonna teach you a lesson!’’
But when the time comes and she says this to the
big white girl, it has no effect, and Octavia tells
her to shut up
Laurel
Laurel, the narrator of the story, is one of the
black girls in the Brownie troop She has been
called Snot ever since first grade Laurel is a
quiet, studious, observant girl who tends to
stand apart from the others She is not very
popular with them No one ever asks for her
opinion; Octavia tells her to shut up, and
Arnetta demands to know whether she is going
to tell on them to Mrs Margolin Laurel seems
more thoughtful than the others She is the onlygirl who considers the possibility that the whitegirl did not use the forbidden term, that perhapsArnetta misheard what was said Laurel alsowonders, unlike the others, what will happen ifthe white girls deny using the bad word, and why
TOPICS FOR FURTHER STUDY
Research the history of affirmative actionand the role it plays in social policy today
Is affirmative action justified as a way ofhelping those who have been disadvantaged,
or does it amount to ‘‘reverse tion?’’ Should it be continued or abolished?Partner with one other student and make aclass presentation in which one personargues for affirmative action and the otherargues against it
discrimina- How can racism in schools be addressed?Write an essay about your own school andhow such issues are tackled Have you expe-rienced or observed any racist behavior atyour school? Are relations between students
of different races at your school a problem?
Do white students and students of colortend to sit apart from one another in thecafeteria? Is this is so, why does it happen?What can be done to improve the situation?
Read another story in Packer’s collectionDrinking Coffee Elsewhere and compare it
to ‘‘Brownies.’’ What role does race play inthe story you have selected? Are there anyparallels between the two stories? Write anessay comparing the two
With another student, select and interviewone or more persons in your town or neigh-borhood who is of a different race Ask howthey feel about the topic of race and theirexperience with it Try and draw them outand listen to their story Then in a class pre-sentation talk about your findings and drawsome conclusions about issues of race gener-ally in your school, neighborhood, city, orstate
Trang 24none of her troop considers the possibility that
the white girls will not be so easy to beat up and
may well fight back But it is Laurel who
observes that the only time the white girls will
be unsupervised will be when they are in the
bathroom, so she is in a way partly responsible
for the confrontation that ensues However,
Laurel does not want to fight and tries to stay
behind with Daphne, but Arnetta refuses to let
her Finally, it is Laurel who tells the story about
the Mennonite family that paints the porch of
their house, and it is she who understands more
deeply than the other girls the origins of racism
Mrs Margolin
Mrs Margolin is in charge of the troop of black
girls and watches over them like a mother duck
looks after her ducklings According to Snot,
Mrs Margolin even looks like a mother duck:
‘‘she had hair cropped close to a small ball of a
head, almost no neck, and huge, miraculous
breasts.’’ Mrs Margolin is a religious woman
who likes to give religious instruction to the
girls in the Brownie troop
Snot
SeeLaurel
Troop 909 Leader
The Troop 909 leader is a white woman who
enters the restroom shortly after the
confronta-tion between the two groups of girls She explains
to Mrs Margolin that the white girls may have
special needs, but they are not retarded
THEMES
Racial Segregation
The racial prejudice and hostility shown in the
story appears to be the product of historical
circumstances combined with the current reality
of racial segregation The first noticeable fact in
the story is that the Brownie troops at the
summer camp appear to be either all-white or
all-black No mixed-race troop is presented It
also transpires that in the Woodrow Wilson
Elementary School in the south suburbs of
Atlanta, there is only one white child, a boy
named Dennis For all intents and purposes,
the black girls in the story have been raised in a
racially segregated environment This is
con-firmed by the remark of Laurel: ‘‘When you
lived in the south suburbs of Atlanta, it waseasy to forget about whites Whites were likethose baby pigeons: real and existing, but rarelyseen or thought about.’’
Because they have had so little contact withwhites, the black girls are extremely conscious ofthe differences between themselves and the whitegirls Many of these differences are purely imag-inary: ‘‘Man, did you smell them?’’ asks Arnetta
of the other girls in her troop after they first seethe white girls of Troop 909 For the black girls,the term Caucasian is an all-purpose, humorousterm of abuse that can be applied in almost anysituation: ‘‘If you ate too fast you ate like aCaucasian, if you ate too slow you ate like aCaucasian.’’ It is because the black girls are soused to living in a racially segregated environ-ment, in which they may catch only momentarysight of white people in places like clothingstores or the downtown library, that Arnettaregards the white girls as ‘‘invaders.’’
Indeed, until the confrontation in the rooms, Laurel, Arnetta, and their friends do noteven see the white girls at the camp at closequarters The one thing they are able to see isthat the white girls’ long straight hair looks likethe shampoo commercials they have seen ontelevision, and this difference alone is cause for
rest-‘‘envy and hatred.’’ But they cannot see ‘‘whethertheir faces were the way all white girls appeared
on TV—ponytailed and full of energy, bubblingover with love and money.’’ In other words, theblack girls’ knowledge of whites comes not fromdirect experience but through the distorting,homogenizing lens of mass culture
Racial Prejudice
Given the extent of racial segregation, it is notsurprising that the encounter between the blackgirls and the white girls should be full of misun-derstandings It is never established beyonddoubt that any of the white girls actually usedthe racial insult, but even if they had, they wouldnot have used it with the intention of offendingthe black girls But this is not the whole story
If a white girl used the word, she must haveheard it somewhere, possibly spoken in private
by her parents or other white people It is thusmade clear that racial prejudice continues toexist in present-day Atlanta This is confirmed
by Arnetta in the bus returning from the camp,when she reports on her experience at the mall inBuckhead (Buckhead is an extremely affluent
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shopping mecca for the entire South.) While
Arnetta was there with her family, she says,
‘‘this white lady just kept looking at us I mean,
like we were foreign or something Like we were
from China.’’ It appears that there are still places
in Atlanta where black people are perceived as
not belonging
The story Laurel tells on the bus illustrates
the depths of resentment that black people feel
over such slights Her father feels his resentments
keenly, and that is why he asks the Mennonite
family to paint his porch for free, so he can for
once feel himself to be in a position of superiority
over whites Laurel now understands why her
father did this: ‘‘When you’ve been made to feel
bad for so long, you jump at the chance to do it
to others.’’ This is a great moment of realization
for Laurel She is mature enough to realize that
she does not agree with her father’s motivation,
but she also learns that ‘‘there is something mean
in the world’’ that she cannot stop, something
that makes people dislike those who are different
from themselves and also makes those who
suf-fer discrimination harbor grudges and try to
settle old scores whenever opportunity presents
itself The sad thing that Laurel realizes is that
the kind act of the Mennonite family did nothing
to heal the situation or remove past pain, since
her father refused to thank the family for the
work they had done It is to Laurel’s credit that
she does not indulge in racist thoughts of her
own to explain such sad incidents She appears
to attribute the painful reality to human nature
rather than to one specific racial group
STYLE
Figurative Language
Figurative language is the art of describing
some-thing in terms of somesome-thing else There are many
types of figurative language Prominent in
‘‘Brownies’’ are similes, in which something is
compared to something else that on the surface
may be dissimilar but at some other level is
sim-ilar Similes can be recognized by the presence of
connecting words such as ‘‘like’’ or ‘‘as if.’’ Similes
seem to come naturally to Laurel, the lively,
observant first-person narrator of the story
Mrs Hedy wags her finger ‘‘like a windshield
wiper,’’ for example The similarity between the
finger and the windshield wiper is based on the
regular, repetitive, rhythmic motion of both Theleader of Troop 909 holds a banana in front of her
‘‘like a microphone,’’ the similarity betweenbanana and microphone based on the shape ofthe object and the way it is held The shape andcolor of the dissimilar objects being compared are
at the basis of the simile that occurs to Laurel inthe bathroom: ‘‘Shaggy white balls of paper tow-els sat on the sinktops in a line like corsages ondisplay.’’ Other similes include the tree branchesthat ‘‘looked like arms sprouting menacinghands’’; the girl who flaps her hand ‘‘like a birdwith a broken wing’’; and Mrs Margolin with herBrownie troop following behind her ‘‘like a brood
of obedient ducklings.’’
Unlike a simile, a metaphor is a figure ofspeech in which one object is identified withanother, rather than compared with it Thereare several metaphors in the story At sunset,the leafy tops of the trees ‘‘formed a canopy ofblack lace,’’ the shared qualities between leavesand black lace being the color the leaves appear
to take on in the setting sun and the delicate finepatterns or designs they appear to form as thenarrator looks up at them Another metaphoroccurs when the sound made by a covey of insectsleads Laurel to think of them as ‘‘a throng of tinyelectric machines, all going at once.’’ Inside therestrooms, another metaphor occurs to Laurel.Noticing how the wooden rafters of the restroomcome together in large V’s, she observes that ‘‘Wewere, it seems, inside a whale, viewing the ribs ofthe roof of its mouth.’’ Thus metaphorically, theinterior of the restroom becomes the inside of awhale’s mouth Laurel also shows a talent forhumorous metaphorical thinking After Arnettasuggests that they sing a Brownie song about oldfriends being gold, while new friends are onlysilver (both lines employ metaphor), Laureldryly observes, ‘‘If most of the girls in the troopcould be any type of metal, they’d be bunched-upwads of tinfoil, maybe, or rusty iron nails youhad to get tetanus shots for.’’
HISTORICAL CONTEXT
Racial Segregation in the United States
In ‘‘Brownies’’ the fictional Woodrow WilsonElementary School in south suburban Atlantahas only one white student This is a tellingdetail, since Atlanta, especially in the inner city,has one of the highest levels of separation
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United States, a segregation that is also reflected
in the public schools
Since 1988, there has been a widespread
trend in public schools in the United States
towards more segregation This is a reversal of
a trend toward racial integration that began
fol-lowing the 1954 Supreme Court decision in
Brown vs Board of Education, which ruled that
racially segregated educational facilities were
unconstitutional because they were inherently
unequal Researchers at the Harvard Graduate
School of Education found that the years
between 1991 and 1994 were marked by the
larg-est movement back toward segregation since the
landmark 1954 Supreme Court ruling It was
estimated that two-thirds of African American
children in the United States attend schools in
which most of the students are members of
minority groups
A study conducted by Catherine Freeman
and others at the Fiscal Research Center,
Andrew Young School of Policy Studies, found
that in Georgia from 1994 to 2001 there was a
slight trend towards increased black-white
seg-regation in public elementary schools In 1994,
17.7 percent of students attended predominantly
black elementary schools (defined as over 70
percent black) This increased to 19.1 percent in
2001 The highest level of black-white
segrega-tion was in the Atlanta metropolitan area, which
is caused largely by segregation between school
districts Segregation within the same district is
related to residential segregation Residential
segregation is apparent in the story, since
Laurel states that in the south suburbs of
Atlanta, it was rare to see a white person
Another factor in the reemergence of racial
seg-regation is that in the 1990s and early 2000s there
has been less pressure from the courts to
inte-grate public schools than there was from the
mid-1950s to the 1980s
The same study found that in Georgia,
schools with higher percentages of blacks had
higher teacher turnover rates Such schools also
have fewer teachers with advanced degrees and
more inexperienced teachers Teacher quality
has a large impact on how well students perform
Schools with high percentages of African
American students also received fewer school
resources
These statistics from Georgia reflect a trend
toward increased segregation amongst whites
and blacks in the general population elsewhere
in the United States University of Chicagoresearchers, as reported by James Waller inFace to Face: The Changing State of RacismAcross America(1998), found that middle-classblacks are less likely than Hispanics or AsianAmericans to live among whites
Persistence of Racism in the United States
Although blatant, violent racism decreased inthe United States between 1965 and 2005, racismstill existed in more subtle forms During the1940s, 1950s, and 1960s, especially in theAmerican South, black people were subject tobeatings, racially motivated murders, cross-burnings by the white supremacist group the
Ku Klux Klan, as well as everyday insults andhumiliations, such as having to sit at the back onbuses and use separate public facilities such aswater fountains The civil rights movement ofthe 1950s and 1960s and changing public atti-tudes toward race and racism have ensured thatold-style racism of this kind has been vastlyreduced in the United States However, it hasbeen replaced by a less overt form of racism inwhich prejudice is not stated openly but is none-theless discernible in different behaviors adopted
by white people when dealing with blacks ratherthan people of their own race Waller, in Face toFace, reports the comments made by a late 1990sgraduate of Georgia Tech University about hisexperiences with racism:
[W]hite clerks ‘tailing’ him in a local music store; restaurant managers checking repeatedly
on the satisfaction of other patrons while ignoring him and his dining partner; people expressing surprise at how ‘articulate’ and
‘well-spoken’ he was; and white women who, when passing by him on a downtown Atlanta sidewalk, would shift their purses to the oppo- site side of their bodies.
This student’s comments are in line with studiesthat have documented the regular occurrence ofthis kind of subtle but unmistakable everydaydiscrimination suffered by middle-class AfricanAmericans Eduardo Bonilla-Silva, in ‘‘‘NewRacism,’ Color-Blind Racism, and the Future
of Whiteness in America,’’ calls this changingface of racism the ‘‘new racism.’’ He argues thatalthough it appears less harmful than the older,violent form of racism, ‘‘it is as effective as slav-ery and Jim Crow in maintaining the racial sta-tus quo.’’
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Packer’s short story collection, Drinking Coffee
Elsewhere,was published to a chorus of praise
from reviewers The reviewer for Publishers
Weeklycomments that ‘‘the clear-voiced
human-ity of Packer’s characters, mostly black teenage
girls, resonates unforgettably through the eight
stories of this accomplished debut collection.’’
The reviewer concludes, in a comment that
might be applied also to ‘‘Brownies’’: ‘‘These
stories never end neatly or easily Packer knows
how to keep the tone provocative and tense at
the close of each tale, doing justice to the
com-plexity and dignity of the characters and their
difficult choices.’’
Jean Thompson in the New York Times
Book Reviewpraises Packer’s skill in
character-ization; she also brings attention to the
youthful-ness of the characters and the fact that in some
cases they lack self-knowledge ‘‘The very young
characters in ‘‘Brownies’’ [have not] developed
much insight into matters of race, adulthood or a
religion that reduces its teachings to acronyms—Satan, for example, is ‘Serpent Always Temptingand Noisome.’’’
Thompson’s conclusion, however, is entirelypositive regarding the collection as a whole:
Young writers, naturally enough, write about young characters Drinking Coffee Elsewhere is not really limited by this Instead, there is a sense of a talented writer testing and pushing
at those limits, ringing as many changes as possible within her fictional world It is a world already populated by clamoring, sorrow- ing, eminently knowable people, and with the promise of more to come.
David Wiegand, in San Francisco Chronicle, alsohas fulsome praise for Packer’s stories: ‘‘Packerdoesn’t merely tell stories brilliantly, but she alsopacks each one with a right-between-the-eyesmoral about issues of race and black identity.’’However, Wiegand argues that in some storiesPacker’s didacticism, her desire to teach a morallesson, ‘‘seems slightly forced.’’ He cites as anexample the incident in ‘‘Brownies,’’ in whichthe learning disabled white girls innocentlyrepeat the racial insult only because they have
Brownie troops are generally non-discriminatory groups but that doesn’t stop their members from being victims or perpetrators of discriminationPhotograph by Ellis Neel AP Images
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way of reminding us, unnecessarily, that
preju-dice is learned,’’ writes Wiegand
CRITICISM
Bryan Aubrey
Aubrey holds a Ph.D in English and has published
many articles on literature In this essay, he
discusses ‘‘Brownies’’ in the context of modernracism in the United States
‘‘Brownies’’ is a story with a great deal ofhumor but a serious theme and purpose No onewho lives in the United States can be unawarethat in the history of the nation, relations betweenblack people and white people have been fraughtwith injustice and oppression Although the civilrights movement of the 1950s and 1960s, and laterfederal government policies, including equalopportunity laws and affirmative action, removedmost of the egregious racist practices, racismcontinues to exist in the United States Thisfact is plain from the story, not only in thewords and actions of the little girls, but in asmall but significant comment made by Laurel,the narrator, which gives a glimpse into the day-to-day world of the black girls’ parents in sub-urban Atlanta Laurel states, ‘‘We had all beentaught that adulthood was full of sorrow andpain, taxes and bills, dreaded work and dealingswith whites, sickness and death.’’ There is an oldsaying that the two inevitable things in life aredeath and taxes, but these young girls have alsolearned that ‘‘dealings with whites’’ must beadded to those unpleasant realities
Modern racism, according to James Waller
in Face to Face, is more insidious, subtle, andcovert than the old racism It manifests in neg-ative, stereotypical, mistrustful attitudes thatmany whites have towards African Americansand other people of color It is compounded bythe fact that many whites believe that racism nolonger exists in the United States, which makesthem resistant to the demands by minorities forequal and fair treatment Modern racism hasmeasurable effects on quality of life indicatorssuch as economic status and educational
WHAT
DO I READ NEXT?
Toni Morrison’s The Bluest Eye (1970) is a
novel about a lonely black girl, Pecola
Breedlove, living in Ohio in the 1940s
Bombarded by white, middle-class
percep-tions of beauty and value, Pecola becomes
obsessed with having the bluest eyes The
novel shows what it is like to be a young
black girl in a culture defined by white,
middle-class values
How to Breathe Underwater(2003), by Julie
Orringer, is a highly praised collection of
stories about adolescent girls—the
difficul-ties they face as they grow up and their
ability to survive the challenges and
success-fully emerge into young adulthood
The Sea Birds Are Still Alive(1982), by Toni
Cade Bambara, contains ten stories about
the lives of black people by one of the
lead-ing late twentieth-century African American
writers
Children of the Night: The Best Short Stories
by Black Writers, 1967 to the Present(1997),
edited by Gloria Naylor, contains
thirty-seven stories that together depict the
diver-sity of black life The anthology includes
such well-established writers as Alice
Walker, Maya Angelou, Charles Johnson,
Ralph Ellison, Jamaica Kincaid, and
Ntozake Shange, as well as newer writers
IN ADDITION TO THE THEME OF RACIAL PREJUDICE, ‘BROWNIES’ MAKES ANOTHER SERIOUS POINT IT SHOWS THE POWER OF GROUP THINKING AND THE PRESSURE TO GO ALONG WITH THE ACTIONS OF THE GROUP TO WHICH ONE BELONGS, EVEN AGAINST ONE’S WISHES AND BETTER JUDGMENT.’’
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well being According to Waller, the effects of
such racism are ‘‘cumulative, draining, energy
consuming, and, ultimately, life consuming.’’
Racism is not confined to adults; it can also
be found in young children Research in the late
1990s and early 2000s has shown that children
develop an awareness of racial categories and
society’s established racial hierarchies at a very
early age Previously it had been believed that
young children were color blind in this respect,
with no awareness of racial differences or the
meanings applied to them by adults But Debra
van Ausdale and Joe R Feagin in The First R:
How Children Learn Race and Racism, using
experimental data on fifty-eight preschool
chil-dren from age three to six in an ethnically diverse
urban day-care center, demonstrate how
chil-dren of this age use awareness and knowledge
of race in their social relationships These
chil-dren had already learned at an early age ‘‘the
desirability of whiteness, of white identity and
esteem’’; they knew that ‘‘whiteness is privileged
and darkness is not’’; they had the ability to
understand and use the power of racial insults
to hurt other children and to reinforce the
per-ceived superiority of whiteness over blackness
In some cases, white children had learned to
exclude others from games based on racial
iden-tity, as with the four-year-old white girl who had
been pulling a wagon across the floor and told an
Asian girl that ‘‘Only white Americans can pull
this wagon.’’ In another incident, a
three-year-old white girl refused to let a three-year-three-year-old
black boy get on a swing, telling him that
‘‘Black people are not allowed on the swing
right now, especially Black boys.’’ The authors
comment: ‘‘Children hold knowledge of the
power and authority granted to whites and are
not confused about the meanings of these harsh
racial words and actions.’’ The children know
where status and privilege lie The authors
fur-ther point out that ‘‘Black children, like Black
adults, must constantly struggle to develop and
maintain a healthy sense of themselves against
the larger society that tells them in a legion of
ways that they are inferior.’’
If this is indeed so, the black girls in
‘‘Brownies’’ seem to have done extremely well
This is not a story about the struggles of these
girls to establish self-esteem On the contrary,
whatever their parents may have told them, or
what they may have overheard about the
difficulties of ‘‘dealings with whites,’’ they arenot suffering from any sense of inferiority.When they hear, or Arnetta thinks she hears,the offensive racial word used by a white girl,their reaction is not to go off into a corner andcry, but to fight back, to teach the white girls apainful lesson These are tough, confident girls,especially Arnetta and Octavia
The African American girls in ‘‘Brownies’’also know how to use language to counter anynegative names or labels that whites might try toimpose on them They simply do the same inreverse Although none of them has directlyencountered many white people—whites arelargely objects of curiosity to them—they haveadopted the term ‘‘Caucasian’’ as an all-roundterm of abuse and ridicule When someone doessomething, or wears something, they do notapprove of, or acts in a clumsy or incompetentmanner, the response is, ‘‘What are you?Caucasian?’’ as Arnetta said to a black boy inschool who was wearing jeans considered to beunfashionable
The behavior of the African American girls
in the story is a reverse image of the way in whichsome white people still use language that deni-grates others because of their racial or ethnicidentity In ‘‘White Fright: Reproducing WhiteSupremacy Through Casual Discourse,’’ KristenMyers reports on her own experiment in track-ing what she calls ‘‘casual racetalk’’ (talk thatdenigrates someone due to race or ethnicity orcelebrates white supremacy) in the everydayencounters of a variety of mostly white people,including college students, family members,employers, coworkers, parishioners, and profes-sors, as well as strangers Myers used a covertapproach because explicit racist expressions,since they are no longer considered sociallyacceptable, are not commonly used in public.Instead, Myers used informants to report on
‘‘casual racetalk’’ that occurs in contexts whenpeople are with friends and others whom theybelieve think like they do She found that theracetalk revealed whites’ belief that they form a
‘‘unified, superior group whose interests werethreatened by the very presence of people ofcolor.’’ Whites constructed language consisting
of caricatures and slurs (including the word thatincites the black girls to plan violence in
‘‘Brownies’’) that delineated an us-against-themmentality Certain negative qualities were attrib-uted to black people and then applied also to
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nega-tive stereotype, as in this example:
We sat around on Saturday night, and
some-times we called each other niggers because
something stupid would happen I guess we
sometimes refer stupidity to black people For
example, we were playing a card game I did
something wrong, and my friend asked me,
‘‘Why are you such a black person?’’
In addition to the theme of racial prejudice,
‘‘Brownies’’ makes another serious point It
shows the power of group thinking and the
pres-sure to go along with the actions of the group to
which one belongs, even against one’s wishes
and better judgment People tend to do things
when caught up in the pressures exerted by a
group of peers, or even in a crowd of strangers,
that they would not do if left to themselves The
example in the story is the narrator, Laurel
Laurel is more reflective than the other girls;
she is the only one who questions whether the
white girl actually made the insult, and she has
no desire to fight She wants to stay back with
Daphne until Arnetta forces her to join in the
planned assault But then an interesting thing
happens; as the girls approach the restrooms,
Laurel finds that her thinking has changed:
‘‘Even though I didn’t want to fight, was afraid
of fighting, I felt I was part of the rest of the
troop; like I was defending something.’’ It should
be noted that Laurel does not define what she is
defending; it seems to be only a vague feeling,
induced by her membership of a group that has
collectively decided on a certain course of action
Had the fight broken out, no doubt the normally
quiet, nonviolent Laurel would have done what
was expected of her
This small example serves as a kind of inverse
parable of race relations between blacks and
whites up to the later twentieth century: many
African Americans, especially in the South, have
had good reason to fear the violence of an
unthinking white mob, ready to beat and even
lynch a man whose skin happened to be a different
color than theirs because of some perceived racial
insult ‘‘Brownies’’ offers no comforting
conclu-sion that this deep-seated racism, that has existed
for centuries, may by overcome Laurel’s remark,
that ‘‘there was something mean in the world that
[she] could not stop’’ is a sobering reminder from a
young girl of the enduring weight of racial
preju-dice and the pain it continues to cause
Source: Bryan Aubrey, Critical Essay on ‘‘Brownies,’’ in
Short Stories for Students, Thomson Gale, 2007.
up ‘‘a debut collection that cuts to the bone ofhuman experience and packs a lasting wallop,’’wrote a Kirkus Reviews critic Updike chose thebook as the June, 2003, Today Book Club selec-tion on the NBC network’s Today show Packerhas converted skeptical reviewers, such as EvettePorter, who observed on the Africana Web site,
‘‘ZZ Packer’s Drinking Coffee Elsewhere lives up
to its billing More impressively, Packer handlesthe burden of being the next big thing by exceed-ing expectations.’’
And it is that level of quality that Packerconsistently strives to maintain, or exceed
‘‘Packer writes nearly every day and sets herselfpage number goals instead of time require-ments,’’ wrote Kim Curtis in a profile of Packer
on the Monterey Herald Web site ‘‘You have tonurture your talent or it’s going to lie fallow,’’Packer said in the profile On those infrequentdays when Packer doesn’t practice her craft, ‘‘theguilt of not doing so gets her to write the nextday,’’ Curtis remarked
She was born Zuwena Packer; ‘‘ZZ’’ is afamily nickname that evolved into Packer’s pro-fessional name ‘‘I didn’t come up with that[nickname],’’ she said in an interview on theSeattle Post-Intelligencer Web site ‘‘My firstname is Zuwena and my family nickname hasbeen ZZ for ages People say it’s such a cleverpen name since it’s so memorable, but I’ve been
ZZ since middle school.’’
FOR THOMPSON, ‘PACKER’S COLLECTION REMINDS US THAT NO STYLISTIC TOUR DE FORCE—OR AUTHORIAL GAMESMANSHIP, OR FLIGHTS OF LANGUAGE—CAN GROUND A STORY LIKE A WELL- REALIZED CHARACTER .’’’
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Appalachia, Atlanta, and Baltimore She
grad-uated from Yale and the prestigious Iowa
Writers Workshop and always considered herself
‘‘bookishly uncool,’’ she said in a profile in Book
She is a Jones lecturer at Stanford University in
Stanford, CA, and despite her success and critical
acclaim, still considers herself an apprentice in the
literary world, still in awe of writers she admires ‘‘I
have not achieved what I want, but maybe I will
someday,’’ she said in the Seattle Post-Intelligencer
profile In an interview on the Barnes & Noble
Web site, she named Toni Morrison’s Beloved as
the book that most influenced her life ‘‘Beloved is
a reflection of how our most horrid actions are
wedded to our most noble desires,’’ Packer
remarked ‘‘Few living authors are able to write
in such a way as to give me the shivers,’’ she
commented ‘‘I loved The Bluest Eye, but it was
only while reading Beloved that I knew without a
doubt that I was in the presence of greatness.’’
Among other books she named as influences are
Leo Tolstoy’s War and Peace, Mark Twain’s
Huckleberry Finn, Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man,
Marilynne Robinson’s Housekeeping, and James
Baldwin’s Go Tell It on the Mountain
In the title story of Packer’s collection, Dina,
a young black woman from Baltimore, is newly
arrived at Yale University and is undergoing
mandatory orientation games, trust-building
exercises, and other trite and bland activities
required of freshmen When one such game
requires Dina to decide which inanimate object
she’d like to be, she chooses a revolver, a choice
that guarantees her psychological counseling and
status as a loner and outcast A relationship
begins to bloom between Dina and Heather, a
fellow freshman who is Caucasian and unsure of
herself When Heather declares herself a lesbian,
Dina flees from the relationship and the
charac-terization it would impose on her Dina’s
care-fully maintained walls may be her way of coping
with her mother’s recent death, or they may be
her way of dealing with the world when she can’t
escape by pretending she’s drinking coffee
else-where Jean Thompson, writing in New York
Times Book Review, called ‘‘Drinking Coffee
Elsewhere’’ a ‘‘superb story, its wry and mournful
tones bound together by a complex psychological
portrait.’’ Laurie Meunier Graves, writing on the
Wolf Moon Press Web site, remarked that the
story ‘‘is as close to perfect as a short story can
be, and perfection is a rare thing.’’
Linnea Davis, the main character of ‘‘OurLady of Peace,’’ is a teacher struggling to reachher students in a rough Baltimore public school.She sees her job as teacher as little more than away to make a living, ‘‘but finds herself drown-ing amid a chaotic classroom filled with angry,disruptive, and violent inner-city students,’’Porter wrote Her rescuer arrives in the unlikelyform of a burly student transferred from anotherdistrict The characters in ‘‘Geese,’’ a group ofyoung American students abroad in Japan, areunable to find work or sustenance, and slowlyand bitterly lose ‘‘the all-knowing arrogance ofyouth’’ as they spiral into frustration and des-peration In ‘‘Speaking in Tongues,’’ teenage Tiaresists all attempts by her sternly religious aunt
to ‘‘get saved.’’ One day she is locked in a churchcloset for the dubious sin of laughing in Sundayschool Packing her clarinet, Tia heads toAtlanta to search for her mother, a drug addictwho abandoned her years before Tia fails to findher mother, but becomes involved with Marieand Dezi, a streetwise hustler ‘‘Packer knowshow to turn up the volume and invest a narrativewith shocking turns of events,’’ Thompsonremarked ‘‘Ironically, it is a sexual experiencewith Dezi that brings Tia a moment of ecstatic,visionary feeling that she’s been unable to achieve
in church,’’ Thompson wrote Tia emerges fromthe experience the type of person who won’t belocked in a closet by anyone again In ‘‘Brow-nies,’’ a troop of black brownie scouts plotsrevenge against a perceived racial insult commit-ted by a fellow group of white brownie scouts.Bookish Laurel watches the self-appointed lead-ers of the troop, Arnetta and Octavia, plan retal-iation, but it turns out that neither the allegedinsult, nor the hated rival troop, may actually bewhat they seem
‘‘The Ant of the Self,’’ featuring the tion’s only male protagonist, puts Spurgeon intoconflict with his ne’er-do-well father, who brow-beats Spurgeon into driving him to the MillionMan March in Washington Tensions erupt in afistfight between Spurgeon and his father Theboy is left abandoned in an unfamiliar city,where a sermon from the Million Man Marchurges him to cast off the ant of the self, ‘‘thatsmall, blind, crumb-seeking part of ourselves,’’and rise up to greater things
collec-Packer ‘‘has distilled her writing so that in its100-proof potency, it goes right to the back ofthe throat,’’ wrote David Abrams on the January
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Library Journal, called the collection ‘‘bright,
sharp, promising, and recommended,’’ while
Allison Lynn, writing in People, declared it ‘‘a
bottomless cup of longing, loneliness, and real,
vital literature.’’ Drinking Coffee Elsewhere is
‘‘truly a stunning debut,’’ wrote Toni Fitzgerald
on the Book Reporter Web site ‘‘Here’s hoping
that Packer’s next work, be it more stories or a
novel, comes quickly.’’
‘‘Remarkably, in the eight stories that make
up Drinking Coffee Elsewhere, Packer manages to
capture the complexity of what it is to be black in a
world where race, gender, sexuality, and class are
all mutable,’’ Porter observed For Thompson,
‘‘Packer’s collection reminds us that no stylistic
tour de force—or authorial gamesmanship, or
flights of language—can ground a story like a
well-realized character This is the old-time
reli-gion of storytelling, although Packer’s prose
sup-plies plenty of the edge and energy we expect from
contemporary fiction The people in the eight
sto-ries here form a constellation of young, black
experience.’’
Source: Thomson Gale, ‘‘Z.Z Packer,’’ in Contemporary
Authors Online, Thomson Gale, 2004.
David Wiegand
In the following review, Wiegand notes that
Packer’s writing is resolute on moralizing ‘‘issues
of race and black identity.’’ He commends her on
this, calling her ‘‘courageous,’’ and praises her
stories as ‘‘beautifully crafted.’’
Do writers create for readers of their own
race? Do readers of races or ethnicities different
from the writer’s have similar experiences with
their work as do readers of the same race or
ethnicity?
Some might think those are dangerous
ques-tions even to ask, but they will become
unavoid-able to anyone reading ZZ Packer’s extraordinary
first collection, Drinking Coffee Elsewhere All
eight stories here are about African Americans,
but what provokes the questions of audience is
that Packer doesn’t merely tell stories brilliantly,
but she also packs each one with a
right-between-the-eyes moral about issues of race and black
identity And that makes it inevitable that
African American readers will have a different
experience reading Packer’s work than white
read-ers, in particular
What is also true is that the experiences will
be provocative and rewarding for any category
of reader, because Packer, a Jones Lecturer atStanford whose title story here was included inthe New Yorker’s debut fiction issue in 2000, has
a commanding sense of character and setting, acaptivating eye for detail and, most of all, a boldand often thrilling use of language and style.Consider a few random quotes from some ofthe stories: ‘‘We’d seen them, but from afar,never within their orbit enough to see whethertheir faces were the way all white girls appeared
on TV—ponytailed and full of energy, bubblingover with love and money.’’ ‘‘(S)he imagined heruterus, that Texas-shaped organ, the RioGrande of her monthly womanly troubles, flush-ing out to the Gulf.’’ ‘‘The sunset has ignited thebellies of clouds; the mirrored windows of down-town buildings distort the flame-colored cityinto a funhouse.’’
But a story needs more than style to make itsuccessful, and most of Packer’s stories have allthe right stuff ‘‘The Ant of the Self,’’ possiblythe best story in the book, finds a somewhatestranged father and son driving to the MillionMan March in Washington, D.C., because theold man, Roy Bivens Jr., just out of jail onanother DUI charge, has an idea that they canclean up by selling exotic birds at the march Hisson, Spurgeon, knows that the idea is lame, butit’s just another part of the burden he has to bear
as the son of Roy Bivens Jr., a terminal loser whoclaims to have been part of the Black Panthermovement
There’s not much to like about Roy, but isSpurgeon the real loser here? Feeling oppressed
as the only black kid in his class is about as far as
PACKER’S STORIES ARE, IN A SENSE, POLITICAL,
IN THAT, COLLECTIVELY AND INDIVIDUALLY, THEY ARE ALL MEANT TO MAKE A POINT SOME MIGHT CRITICIZE THE WRITER FOR PREACHING AND FOR NOT MERELY TELLING STORIES BUT THE OBVIOUSLY CONSCIOUS DECISION TO WRITE FROM A SOAPBOX IS JUST AS BOLD
AS PACKER’S STYLE AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, PERHAPS EVEN COURAGEOUS.’’
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he and his father get to Washington, they load
up the birdcages and head toward the march
‘‘Quite a few whites stop to look as if to see
what this thing is all about, and their hard,
nerv-ous hard smiles fit into two categories: the ‘don’t
mug me!’ smile, or the ‘Gee, aren’t black folks
something!’ smile It occurs to me that I can stay
here on the sidelines for the entire march.’’
That final line is telling In his effort to
dis-tance himself from his no-account father,
Spurgeon has distanced himself from his own
identity and is doomed to a life on the sidelines
of being black
Like ‘‘Ant of the Self,’’ many of the stories
are set in the past, such as ‘‘Doris Is Coming,’’ in
which a young girl stages a one-person sit-in at a
soda fountain in the South That’s the simple
plot summary What enriches the story is that
Doris is the only black girl in her class Her
mother cleans house for a well-to-do Jewish
fam-ily whose daughter, Livia, pushes her friendship
on Doris Doris isn’t really interested in being
friends, but gives in, perhaps out of loneliness
She is always reminded that she is different from
the other girls, however: At one point, one of
Livia’s friends tells them about her new
‘‘flesh-colored’’ prom dress
‘‘‘You mean, the color of your flesh?’
Doris said
‘‘‘Well, how should I say it? What
should I say when describing it?
Say, ‘‘Oh, I bought a dress the
color of everybody else’s skin
except Doris’s?’’’’’
Although the story, like others here, is about
events and racial attitudes of the past, it is part of
Packer’s gift that she’s able to make even
‘‘ancient history’’ credibly relevant to
contempo-rary readers
But what about those morals? What about
the lessons Packer is clearly intent on teaching
through her fiction? There are moments when
the didacticism seems slightly forced In ‘‘Doris
Is Coming,’’ for example, the young girl hears a
news report about a racial demonstration that
ends with the white commentator expressing
hope that there will soon be an end to the
‘‘tumult.’’ ‘‘She could not forget the radio show
she’d heard earlier, how the announcer seemed
to loathe the colored people of Albany when all
they’d wanted was to march for decent sewage
disposal without being stoned for it.’’
In ‘‘Brownies,’’ in which a troop of AfricanAmerican Brownies encounters its white counter-part at Camp Crescendo, a dispute arises overwhether one of the white girls used the ‘‘n’’ word.But their troop leader explains that her charges,who have what we’d call learning disabilities today,
‘‘are echolalic That means they will say ever they hear, like an echo—that’s where thewords comes from (N)ot all of them have themost progressive of parents, so if they heard a badword, they might have repeated it But I guarantee
what-it would not have been intentional.’’
It’s Packer’s way of reminding us, rily, that prejudice is learned On the other hand,consider the substrata of meaning in the fact thatthese girls are all ‘‘Brownies’’ and you can easilyoverlook a bit of obviousness here and there.Packer’s stories are, in a sense, political, inthat, collectively and individually, they are allmeant to make a point Some might criticizethe writer for preaching and for not merely tell-ing stories But the obviously conscious decision
unnecessa-to write from a soapbox is just as bold asPacker’s style and character development, per-haps even courageous
And that’s why the issue of audiencebecomes interesting Of course, the experience
of reading is always individual and subjective,but when a writer makes such a point of preach-ing in her work, you have to ponder who heraudience is Nonblack readers might seem at first
to be the target for Packer’s sermons, but, in fact,African Americans will learn something fromher work as well
But don’t let all this talk of preaching putyou off The fact is, Packer’s stories also justhappen to be beautifully crafted
Source: David Wiegand, ‘‘Packer Blends Race, Lessons and Craft,’’ in San Francisco Chronicle, March 9, 2003, p M1.
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an Imaginary Handgun,’’ in New York Times Book
Review, Vol 108, No 11, March 16, 2003, p 7.
Van Ausdale, Debra, and Joe R Feagin, The First R:
How Children Learn Race and Racism, Rowman &
Littlefield Publishers, 2001, pp 35, 56, 57, 104, 105, 107.
Waller, James, Face to Face: The Changing State of Racism
Across America, Plenum Press, 1998, pp 95, 100, 137, 166.
Wiegand, David, ‘‘Packer Blends Race, Lessons, and
Craft,’’ in San Francisco Chronicle, March 9, 2003, p M1.
FURTHER READING
D’Souza, Dinesh, The End of Racism, Free Press, 1996.
This is a controversial study by a conservative
writer of the history, nature, and effects of
rac-ism, as well as contemporary approaches to it.
Most approaches, in the author’s view, are
misguided He claims that racism is no longer
an important factor in American life and cannot
be blamed for black underachievement.
Reddy, Maureen T., ed., Acts Against Racism: Raising Children in a Multiracial World, Seal Press, 1996 This anthology of essays by mothers and teach- ers is a resource for parents Drawing on their own experience, the authors describe strategies
by which racial prejudice can be countered in schools, colleges, and elsewhere.
Stern-LaRosa, Caryl, and Ellen Hofheimer Bettmann, The Anti-Defamation League’s Hate Hurts: How Children Learn and Unlearn Prejudice, Scholastic Paperbacks, 2000.
This practical book offers a guide to how dren learn prejudice and how it can be unlearned The authors offer strategies, role plays, and sample dialogues for parents and teachers Some of the sections record and dis- cuss true stories about children of all ages who have initiated or suffered from hateful words and actions.
chil-Wright, Marguerite, I’m Chocolate, You’re Vanilla: Raising Healthy Black and Biracial Children in a Race- Conscious World, Jossey-Bass, 2000.
Wright argues that young children do not understand adult racial prejudice and that such color blindness must be taken advantage
of in order to guide the development of a child’s self-esteem Wright discusses issues such as the age at which children understand the concept
of race; how adults can avoid instilling in dren their own prejudices, and how schools can lessen the impact of racism.
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‘‘Caroline’s Wedding,’’ by Edwidge Danticat, is
the last story in the collection Krik? Krak!,
which was published in 1995 The story features
the narrator and protagonist, Gracina (Grace)
Azile, who, with her mother and sister Caroline,
has immigrated to the United States from Haiti
It describes the cross-generational and
cross-cul-tural conflicts triggered by Caroline’s wedding to
a non-Haitian man Danticat introduces her
readers to traditional stories, games, beliefs,
and rituals from a culture that is little known
or understood outside Haiti In particular, the
story explores the role of storytelling and
tradi-tion, and the relationship between mother and
daughter, in creating social and family cohesion
Against the background of Haiti’s violent
his-tory, the individual stories of the pain and
suffer-ing experienced by the different characters
unfold and interlink Although the focus is on
Haiti’s culture and history, many of the
collec-tion’s themes, including memory, loss,
disposses-sion, and the resilience of the human life and
spirit in the face of extreme circumstances, have
a broader relevance
AUTHOR BIOGRAPHY
Edwidge Danticat was born on January 19, 1969,
in Port-au-Prince, Haiti, to Andre´ Miracin (a cab
driver) and Rose Souvenance (a textile worker)
Danticat When Edwidge was two years old, her
father emigrated from Haiti to New York, to be
EDWIDGE DANTICAT 1995
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Remain-ing in Haiti, the young Danticat was raised by her
aunt and uncle During these years she was
exposed to the Haitian tradition of storytelling
Danticat’s aunts and grandmothers would call
out, ‘‘Krik?’’ and she would reply, ‘‘Krak!’’ as a
signal to the storyteller to begin Her formal
education in Haiti was in French, but at home
Danticat spoke Haitian Creole
Danticat joined her family in Brooklyn,
New York, in 1981, at which time English became
her third language She attended junior high
classes in Brooklyn but had difficulty fitting in
with her peers In her isolation, she turned to
writing about the people of her native country
Danticat’s parents wanted her to pursue a
career in medicine, and with the aim of becoming
a nurse, she attended a specialized school in New
York City However, she soon abandoned this
course and earned a degree in French
litera-ture from Barnard College, where she won the
1995 Woman of Achievement Award She was
awarded a Master of Fine Arts degree from
Brown University in Providence, Rhode Island,
in 1993 Her thesis at Brown was her highly
acclaimed first novel, Breath, Eyes, Memory
(1994) In 1998, the television celebrity Oprah
Winfrey picked the novel for her book club andintroduced its author to a mass readership.Subsequently, Danticat published a collection
of short stories, Krik? Krak! (1995), and the els, The Farming of Bones (1998), Behind theMountains(2002), and The Dew Breaker (2004).Danticat also edited a collection of writings byHaitian authors entitled The Butterfly’s Way:Voices from the Haitian Dyaspora in the UnitedStates(Soho Press, 2001)
nov-Danticat gained critical acclaim for her trayals of the Haitian experience both in Haitiand the United States and for her lyrical use oflanguage After completing her master’s degree,she taught creative writing at New York Universityand the University of Miami She also workedwith filmmakers Patricia Benoit and JonathanDemme on projects on Haitian art and docu-mentaries about Haiti As of 2006, Danticatlived in the Little Haiti neighborhood of Miamiand regularly returned to Haiti to visit friendsand family
por-Danticat’s work has attracted many awardsand award nominations In 1994, her novel Breath,Eyes, Memorywon fiction awards from the follow-ing magazines: Essence, Caribbean Writer, andSeventeen In 1995, her short story collectionKrik? Krak!was nominated for a National BookAward In 1996, Granta magazine named Danticatone of its Best Young American Novelists In thesame year, a short story, ‘‘Between the Pool and theGardenias,’’ published three years earlier inCaribbean Writer, won a Pushcart Prize for shortfiction In 1999, Danticat’s novel The Farming ofBonesgained an American Book Award from theBefore Columbus Foundation The Dew Breakerwas nominated for a 2004 National Book CriticsCircle Award and a PEN/Faulkner Award in 2005
PLOT SUMMARY
When ‘‘Caroline’s Wedding’’ opens, Grace Azile
is leaving a Brooklyn courtroom, having justreceived her certificate of U.S citizenship Whenshe calls her mother (Ma) to tell her the news,
Ma advises her to hurry and get her passport, asthat is what is truly American Grace has totemporarily trade in the certificate at the postoffice to get a passport She feels anxious with-out it, since when her mother was pregnant withher sister Caroline, she was arrested in a sweatshopraid and spent three days in an immigration jail
Edwidge DanticatPhotograph by Laurent Rebours AP Images
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pre-paring a pot of bone soup Ma holds the
tradi-tional Haitian belief that bone soup has the
magical power to separate lovers, so she has
served it every night since Caroline announced
her engagement Ma disapproves of Eric because
he is Bahamian and not Haitian
Caroline was born without a left forearm
Ma thinks the cause was a drug that was injected
into her by a prison doctor after the sweatshop
immigration raid and that Caroline was lucky to
have been born at all Unlike Grace, Caroline
was born in the United States
Ma calls Grace into her bedroom She is
upset that Eric’s courtship of Caroline is
differ-ent from how she was courted by her daughters’
father, which took place in Haiti and was formal
Grace and Caroline’s father (Papa) is now dead
One night, Caroline and Grace play a
tradi-tional Haitian free association game around the
word, ‘‘lost.’’ The game was taught to them by
Ma, who learned it as a girl Ma appears and asks
them to go with her to a mass for a dead Haitian
refugee woman Grace goes, but Caroline does
not The Catholic Church they attend holds
serv-ices tailored to the Haitian community The
priest reads out the names of refugees drowned
at sea that week Many are known to members of
the congregation He says a prayer for the dead
woman, who gave birth to a baby on board the
boat The child died, and the mother threw the
baby overboard and then jumped into the sea
after it, drowning herself Grace thinks of the
Haitian belief that there are spots in the sea
where Africans who jumped off the slave ships
rest, where those who die at sea can choose to
join their long-lost relations The priest asks the
congregation to remember those they have loved
and lost As screams erupt in the congregation,
Ma suddenly gets up and leaves
Caroline and Eric plan a civil ceremony Ma
wants Eric to bring his family to their house to
court her favor and to have his father ask her
blessing, according to the old Haitian custom
Caroline tells Grace that she dreamt of Papa the
previous night It is ten years since he died After
Papa’s death, Ma told her daughters to wear red
panties, in the belief that this would ward off his
spirit so that he would not mistake the daughters
for his wife and try to lie with them at night For
some time after he died, Caroline and Grace had
the same dream: they try in vain to catch up with
him as he walks through a deserted field They
disobeyed Ma and did not wear the red panties,
as they wanted Papa’s spirit to visit them
Grace tells Caroline that the son of theirCuban neighbor, Mrs Ruiz, was recently shot
by the pilot of an airplane after trying to hijackthe plane to go from Havana to Miami
Grace recalls that when she and Carolinewere younger, they used to wish that one daythe rest of Caroline’s arm would burst out ofMa’s stomach and float back to her Carolinelikes to have her stub stroked, but no one does,out of fear of giving offense Caroline says that ifshe were to cut the vein that throbs below thesurface of her stub, she could bleed to death.Grace dreams that she sees her father at amasked ball but cannot get close to him By hisside is Caroline Grace screams in protest thatthey are leaving her out When alive, he remem-bered everything about their life in Haiti and itstraditions and beliefs
Preparations are under way for Caroline’swedding, which is a month away Though Madoes not want to attend, she pretends that this isthe ‘‘real wedding’’ she wants for her daughter,
so that Caroline does not resent her However,she is not going to cook a wedding-night dinner,
as is the custom Grace decides to throw a ding shower for Caroline Ma disapprovesbecause to her a shower seems like begging
wed-Ma, Caroline, and Grace go to Eric’s housefor dinner Ma is as unenthusiastic about Eric’scooking as she is about him, and Grace thinks heshould have hired a Haitian cook To save Ma’sfeelings, Caroline goes home with her and Graceeven though she would rather stay the night withEric Ma warns Caroline that people are known
by their stories and that she should value herselfand guard against being the subject of gossip.After Ma falls asleep, Caroline calls a cab andreturns to Eric’s place Grace dreams of Papa: thistime, she is on a cliff and he is leaning out of ahelicopter trying to grab her hand to rescue her.Grace was born when her parents were poorand living in a shantytown in Port-au-Prince,Haiti They called her their ‘‘misery baby,’’ and
Ma thought she might die Desperate to find away to leave Haiti, Papa got a visa by taking vows
in a false marriage with a widow who was leavingHaiti for the United States A few years later,Papa divorced the woman and sent for Ma andGrace While he was alive, this was a secret thatGrace and Caroline were not supposed to know.Caroline’s wedding shower takes place.After the guests leave, Ma gives Caroline herpresent, a silk teddy Privately, Grace tells Mathat she did not think such things were to her
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United States for twenty-five years and not be
affected by it Ma fears that Caroline is marrying
Eric because she thinks he is the only man who
would marry her, but Grace suggests that he may
love Caroline Ma remarks that people’s hearts
are made of stone Grace suspects that this is a
result of her hurt feelings when Papa married the
widow Ma brings out a bag of Papa’s letters that
he wrote to her from the United States while she
was still in Haiti The letters address practical
matters but never mention love
The night before her wedding, Caroline tries
to make Ma understand why she and Eric are
getting married in a small civil ceremony: they do
not wish to spend all their money on a big
wed-ding Eric has a friend who is a judge, and he will
perform the ceremony in his office Ma says that
such a ‘‘mechanical’’ affair is typically American
Caroline puts on her wedding dress for Ma
and Grace to see She is also wearing a new false
arm She has been having phantom pain in her
arm such as amputees experience, and her doctor
told her that the false arm may make it go away
When Ma points out that Caroline is not an
amputee, she says she feels like one because of
the pressure of the wedding Ma says, ‘‘In that
case, we all have phantom pain.’’
Caroline wakes on her wedding day looking
ill, with a pain in her arm which makes her not
want to get married Ma says she was the same on
the morning of her own wedding Ma boils a
tradi-tional concoction with leaves, gives Caroline a
bath, and rubs the leaves over Caroline’s body
Ma tells Caroline that she is looking forward to
visiting her in her new house
Caroline, her family, and Eric arrive at
Judge Perez’s office for the ceremony Grace
cannot help but feel that Caroline is divorcing
her family for a new allegiance After the
cere-mony, Caroline feels better At lunch, Grace
toasts Caroline, saying that she will never be
gone from the family and reflecting that this is
something Ma might have said Caroline and
Grace bid each other a tearful farewell
That night, Ma receives a bunch of red roses
from Caroline She keeps sniffing them and calls
her daughter ‘‘Sweet, sweet Caroline.’’ Grace
dreams that she is sitting with her father beside
a stream of rose-colored blood As they look at
the stars, Papa tells Grace that wherever she is,
she can see them He tries to play a
question-and-answer game with Grace, asking her what
landscapes they would paint if they were paintersand what she would name a daughter Gracedoes not know how to answer He tells her thatshe has forgotten how to play the game Shewakes, for the first time frightened of the fatherwho appears in her dreams She asks her motherwhat she thought of the wedding Ma tells Gracethat when Papa left her in Haiti to move with thewidow to the United States, she made a charm tokeep his love but knew his feelings for her hadchanged Then she shows Grace Papa’s roman-tic, respectful proposal letter She adds thatCaroline’s wedding was nice
Grace’s passport arrives For the first time,she feels secure in the United States She reflectsthat her whole family has paid dearly for thispiece of paper She visits Papa’s grave to showhim the passport
While making bone soup, Ma reports toGrace that she has told Caroline that she willkeep her bed for whenever she wants to use it, aturnaround from her previous stance that shewould get rid of the bed the day Caroline gotmarried Grace drops a bone into the soup, andthe splash leaves a red mark on her hand Graceasks Ma the questions Papa asked her in her dream
Ma says that as the older woman, the first tion belongs to her She asks Grace one of thequestions from traditional Haitian question-and-answer games, one that Papa often askedGrace: why, when you lose something, is it inthe last place you look? Grace knows the answer:because once you remember, you stop looking
ques-CHARACTERS
Eric Abrahams
Eric is Caroline’s fiance´, whom she meets whileworking as a teacher in a school where he is ajanitor He is originally from the Bahamas, and
Ma disapproves of him because he is notHaitian Eric has a learning disability and isslow of speech Though Ma calls him a ‘‘retard,’’Grace knows that he has a good heart and sin-cerely cares for Caroline
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assimi-lated the ways of her adopted country Caroline
was born with a missing forearm, due to a drug
that was injected into her pregnant mother after
a sweatshop raid Caroline’s wedding to Eric
is the incident that incites the cross-cultural and
cross-generational conflict between her and Ma
Caroline avoids direct confrontation with Ma,
reacting to Ma’s hostility to her marriage with a
mixture of long-suffering tolerance, irritation,
and small deceptions, such as pretending to sleep
at home before her wedding when she is really
sleeping with Eric Caroline and her mother
achieve reconciliation when Caroline feels ill before
her wedding Ma gives her a bath and rubs
her body with a traditional Haitian herbal
con-coction, which revives her The episode involves
Caroline surrendering to her mother’s love and
wisdom, something that she has resisted
previ-ously Caroline acknowledges the connection made
by sending her mother a bunch of red roses,
which carries the symbolism of the color red
(used in the story variously to suggest Haiti, the
violence and suffering of Haiti’s past, and life
itself) and the symbolism of Sor Rose, the
mythological founder of Haiti
Grace Azile
Grace, whose full name is Gracina, is the
pro-tagonist and narrator She is the eldest daughter
of Hermine and Carl Azile (known in the story as
Ma and Papa) and the sister of Caroline While
Grace was born in Haiti, at the story’s opening,
she has just obtained U.S citizenship In the
cross-cultural and cross-generational conflict
between Ma and Caroline, Grace acts as a
medi-ator, since she remains connected to her native
culture (Haiti) and her adopted culture (the
United States) She has a strong sense of the
importance of Haitian tradition and becomes
disturbed when she can no longer answer the
ritualistic questions asked by her father in her
dream She seeks, and finds, the answers by
ask-ing Ma, an episode that affirms the central role
of the mother-daughter relationship in
sustain-ing cultural identity and community
Hermine Azile
SeeMa
Ma
Hermine Azile, called Ma, is Grace and
Caroline’s mother and the widow of Carl Azile
(known as Papa) She is strongly attached to
Haiti and its traditions and expects her daughters
to feel the same way Initially, she seems never tohave left her native land, as she makes no con-cessions to her adopted country, the UnitedStates Her own harrowing story emerges overthe course of the short story: she was separatedfrom her husband when he immigrated to theUnited States by entering into a false marriagewith a widow While she waited until she couldjoin her husband, she witnessed his falling out oflove with her and never recovers from this grief
In addition, after she finally arrived in the UnitedStates and was pregnant with Caroline, sheworked in an illegal New York sweatshop,which was raided She was then injected by aprison doctor with a drug that she believes causedCaroline to be born without a forearm
Ma rules her family with a tyrannical attitudeand is intolerant of Caroline’s adoption ofAmerican ways She uses old Haitian voodoo rit-ual, the making of bone soup, against her daugh-ter, in the belief that it has the power to separateCaroline from her fiance´ She criticizes Eric’s infor-mal courtship of Caroline and their plans for a civilwedding, which she dismisses as ‘‘mechanical’’ aswell as typically American She is rude about Ericbecause he is not Haitian During the course of thestory, however, she begins to make small conces-sions to Caroline’s status as a young AmericanHaitian, buying her a very un-Haitian silk teddyfor her wedding present and, most significantly,telling Caroline that she looks forward to being aguest in her and Eric’s house The turning pointcomes when Caroline feels ill before her weddingand Ma is able to use her knowledge of a tradi-tional herbal cure to revive her Caroline’s accept-ance of the old Haitian ways softens Ma’s attitude,reawakens the love between mother and daughter,and heals their relationship
Papa
Carl Azile, called Papa, is father to Grace andCaroline and the husband of Ma He has beendead for twelve years when the story begins butremains a vivid character in the story, appearing indreams to Grace and Caroline In the dreams thatare recounted earlier in the story, he is an elusivefigure, and Grace is always attempting in vain toconnect with him Because he has a perfect mem-ory for the traditional stories, games, and rituals
of Haiti, in the cross-cultural conflict of the story,
he represents the old ways of Haiti Gracefinally connects with him in a dream that she has
on the night of Caroline’s wedding, but he is appointed, and she is disturbed, when she fails to
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asks For the first time, she feels afraid of him,
which symbolically suggests that she fears losing
connection with her roots in Haiti
Papa suffered, just as his wife and countless
other Haitian refugees did He left his wife and
family in Haiti in order to immigrate to the
United States through a false marriage Later,
he divorced the woman and arranged for his
family to join him By this time, he seems to
have ceased to love his real wife (Ma) He died
of untreated prostate cancer, which suggests that
he could not afford health care
an intermediary between Ma and Caroline
Diaspora and Discontinuity
Haiti has been afflicted with political unrest andviolence that have led to waves of refugees flee-ing to the United States, among other countries
‘‘Caroline’s Wedding,’’ in common with many ofthe Krik? Krak! stories, examines this phenom-enon Grace accompanies Ma to a service for aHaitian woman and her baby who died on theirway by boat to the United States Grace’s ownfamily, too, escaped poverty by immigrating tothe United States The price paid for greatersecurity and freedom is, however, often severe,and the story shows the terrible effects of dia-spora (dispersion of people from a single regioninto far-ranging locations) Grace’s father had totake vows in a false marriage to gain entry to theUnited States Her mother, left behind in Haitiuntil he divorced the woman and sent for her,had to watch from afar as he fell out of love withher When she first arrived in the United States,she was imprisoned after a sweatshop raid and
TOPICS FOR
FURTHER STUDY
Research the flow of refugees from Haiti in
the 1970s and 1980s Write a report on the
reasons for their flight, where they settled,
and how they fared in their adopted
coun-tries You may confine your research to one
region if you wish
Interview one or more refugees from Haiti
or another troubled country Compile a
pre-sentation in writing, on film, on CD, or on
audiotape, on their experiences before,
dur-ing, and after their flight
Research the history of Haiti and write an
essay or give a class presentation on some of
the problems faced by that country in the past
and the present Include in your report some
possible solutions suggested by informed
sources, whether implemented or theoretical
Research the phenomenon of Haitian
refu-gees seeking to come to the United States in
(1) the 1950s and (2) the 1970s–1980s What
are the similarities and differences between
the two flights? Consider such factors as
socioeconomic group(s) affected; reasons
for leaving; mode of travel and fate while
traveling; and fate in adopted countries
Study the folklore and voodoo religion of
Haiti Create a factual report or a play, a
short story, a film, CD, dance, poem, or
painting based on your findings