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Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter MỤC LỤC TOPIC: CULTURE TOPIC: JOB TOPIC: HEALTH 12 TOPIC: HEALTH 15 TOPIC: JOB 18 TOPIC: EDUCATION 21 TOPIC: TRANSPORTATION 24 TOPIC: ENVIRONMENT 27 TOPIC: TRAVEL 30 TOPIC: TECHNOLOGY 33 TOPIC: EDUCATION 36 TOPIC: ANIMAL - ENVIRONMENT 39 TOPIC: EDUCATION 42 TOPIC: CULTURE & HISTORY 45 TOPIC: TRANSPORTATION 48 TOPIC: ENVIRONMENT 51 TOPIC: EDUCATION 54 TOPIC: HEALTH 57 TOPIC: TECHNOLOGY 60 3|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter TOPIC: EDUCATION 63 TOPIC: SOCIETY 66 TOPIC: CRIME & EDUCATION 69 TOPIC: SOCIETY 72 TOPIC: INTERNET 75 TOPIC: GLOBALIZATION 78 TOPIC: EDUCATION 81 TOPIC: SOCIETY 84 TOPIC: HEALTH 87 TOPIC: SOCIETY 91 TOPIC: MEDIA 94 TOPIC: EDUCATION 97 TOPIC: SOCIETY 100 TOPIC: EDUCATION 103 TOPIC: SOCIAL MEDIA … 106 4|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 1: TOPIC: CULTURE – Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? TOPIC ANALYSIS KEY WORDS future, humanity, same language → chủ đề CULTURE positive or negative → Việc người nói chung ngơn ngữ tích cực hay tiêu cực BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng ‘tiêu cực’ Đoạn 1: Nêu lên tích cực việc nói chung ngơn ngữ • Hoạt động thương mại du lịch nói riêng diễn cách trơn tru → Mọi người du lịch đến đâu mà khơng cần phải tìm hiểu ngơn ngữ địa • Triển vọng nghề nghiệp mở rộng → người lao động tìm việc nước ngồi, người tuyển dụng có nhiều ứng viên tiềm để lựa chọn Đoạn 2: Khẳng định việc nói chung ngơn ngữ tiêu cực • Khi tất quốc gia nói chung ngôn ngữ, đất nước phải hi sinh phần sắc • Do ngơn ngữ văn hóa gắn bó chặt chẽ với nhau, nên việc sử dụng ngôn ngữ chung làm lịch sử quốc gia 5|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ It is projected by the scientists that humans may speak a universal language in the future While this prospect offers a variety of positive influences, I am firmly of the belief that it is an overall negative trend First, the rise of universal verbalization would potentially ease the language barriers On a global scale, tourism or trading activities can take place smoothly by dint of the presence of a single language, leaving virtually no room for misunderstanding For example, visits to popular destinations around the world are no longer a pipe dream for travel enthusiasts as the burden to understand the indigenous language will be removed Furthermore, the emergence of a universal speech is likely to expand the career prospects for excellent individuals In other words, employees can seek job opportunities beyond national borders; whereas, hiring managers can enjoy a wider talent pool with potential candidates of all races and ethnicities On the other hand, linguistic solidarity would affect our diversity as a species When all languages merge into a common dialect, not only would a nation sacrifice their identity but collectively they also lose a part of their core cultures Take the current so-called Korean waves sweeping across much of Asia In particular, the growing popularity of Korean entertainment has had a profound influence on young generations in neighbouring countries such as VietNam, China and Japan A great number of adolescents fancy speaking Korean over their native tongue, imitating fashion and makeup trends promoted by their idols As language is tied to culture, the adoption of a universal speech would virtually annihilate a rich history and unique stories associated to a country In conclusion, much as the notion of a universal language might bring certain socioeconomic benefits for communication and employment opportunity, it would pose a major threat to cultural diversity and historical values (300 words) 6|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 2: TOPIC: JOB Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent you agree or disagree? TOPIC ANALYSIS ADVANCED VOCABULARY language barriers: rào cản ngôn ngữ pipe dream: giấc mơ hão huyền travel enthusiast: người đam mê du lịch expand the career prospects: mở rộng triển vọng nghề nghiệp a wider talent pool: nguồn nhân tài lớn neighboring country: quốc gia láng giềng linguistic solidarity: đồng ngôn ngữ have a profound influence on: có ảnh hưởng sâu sắc đến the adoption of a universal speech: việc áp dụng ngôn ngữ chung 10 annihilate a rich history and unique stories: xóa bỏ lịch sử phong phú câu chuyện độc đáo KEY WORDS 7|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter choose job early, satisfying career, more than those who change jobs → trì cơng việc tốt thay đổi việc làm thường xuyên agree or disagree → bạn đồng ý hay khơng đồng ý với quan điểm BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng ‘disagree’, tức thay đổi việc làm giúp bạn thỏa mãn công việc Đoạn 1: Lợi ích việc trì cơng việc • Gắn bó với cơng việc giúp bạn ổn định tài → Tróng đó, khoảng thời gian tìm việc, vấn, chờ đợi kết mệt mỏi • Làm việc lâu nơi thể lòng trung thành gắn bó với cơng ty → Đây yếu tố quan trọng giúp bạn cân nhắc lên vị trí cao tăng lương Đoạn 2: Khẳng định lợi ích ‘nhảy việc’ Những người làm việc lâu nơi không học nhiều kỹ năng, kiến thức đa dạng → Những người nhảy việc trải nghiệm nhiều môi trường khác nhau, giúp họ năm bắt xu hướng thị trường • Chuyển việc thường xun giúp bạn có lương cao → Mỗi cơng việc đem đến mối quan hệ khác nhau, mở rộng quen biết đem lại nhiều thông tin hữu ích tương lai • SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ It is argued that those who make early career choice and stick to it would probably experience greater job satisfaction than job-hoppers I strongly disagree with this statements for the following reasons First, the pursuit of a career path for an extended period of time would ensure financial stability, resulting in greater satisfaction The interval between the last interview and a job offer or rejection can be intensely frustrating for every candidate Job search fatigue can wear anyone down with the endless 8|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter rounds of leads and interviews that never seem to go anywhere In addition to a steady paycheck, holding down a job for years is a manifestation of loyalty and commitment From an employer’s perspective, these are significant indicators of promotion among current staff To a certain extent, the length of employment is closely linked to the opportunity to successfully move up/ climb the corporate ladder However, advocates of jop jumpers would argue that those who stay with a job for a long time have less diverse skill sets and a relatively narrow range of knowledge In contrast, one of the greatest advantages of regular job switch is that it allows one individual to gain valuable skills and knowledge in different environments and cultures In today’s economy, this is equivalent to remain current and constantly updated in a highly competitive market Furthermore, changing jobs can certainly be a path to higher salary If one hops once in a while, their number of contacts expand following a bigger potential professional network and more career choice in the future Thus, job hoppers could actually be in a much better negotiating positions when it comes to dealing a new job offer on account of their diverse experience and contacts across different industries In conclusion, frequent job changers might have higher level of job satisfaction and brighter career prospectswhereas staying with a single job does not guarantee the same sense of fulfillment later in life (324 words) ADVANCED VOCABULARY job-hopper: người nhảy việc experience greater job satisfaction: trải nghiệm hài lịng cơng việc cao the pursuit of a career path: việc theo đuổi đường nghiệp 9|34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8.0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter financial stability: ổn định tài job search fatigue: mệt mỏi tìm việc a manifestation of loyalty and commitment: thể lòng trung thành gắn kết regular job switch: thay đổi công việc thường xuyên brighter career prospects: triển vọng công việc sáng lạn sense of fulfillment: cảm giác hài lòng 10 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 30: 25/11/2017– TOPIC: MEDIA The news media have become too much influence in people lives today and this is a negative development? To what extent you agree or disagree? TOPIC ANALYSIS Đoạn 1: Chỉ ưu điểm truyền thơng • • Tăng khả truy cập thông tin tất người Việc mạng Internet phủ sóng khắp nơi giúp kết nối người tài với người chuyên tìm kiếm họ • Các phương tiện truyền thông cầu nối người dân phủ Trong nhiều trường hợp, nhờ can thiệp truyền thông, mà vụ việc tham nhũng, vụ vụ phạm tội phơi bày trước cộng đồng • Đoạn 2: Những bất lợi truyền thơng • Trẻ em thường bắt chước người tiếng cách mù quáng, kể hành động sai trái • Người lớn bị ảnh hưởng cách vô thức bao vây truyền thơng • Quảng cáo đồ ăn vặt q nhiều khiến người ta có xu hướng ăn uống khơng lành mạnh SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ In the last five decades or so, the media and its influence on societies has grown exponentially with the advance of technology While I believe that the news media is mainly beneficial to the individual, its risks cannot be overlooked I partly agree that extensive news coverage has had a detrimental/ damaging effect on our lives 91 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter It is obvious that mass media enjoys a very prominent role in the present, modernday hectic world First, owing to the technological developments, media is not limited to big cities It has reached the world’s remotest parts, thus increasing the accessibility of information In addition, media often acts as a link between skilled people and those in search for them These days, there has been a multitude of reality shows that give budding artists a platform to showcase their talent Finally, media also serves as a communication medium between the common man and the government, giving voice to the poor and the neglected There are several instances of news media exposing to the public, cases of corruption, crime, scandals and acts of abuse On the other hand, negative impacts of the news media are not conducive to a healthy society It is often seen that young boys and girls try to blindly imitate their role models in the show business, including their wrongdoings Relentless media bombardment of fight sequences, stunt work, sex and rape scenes portrayed in books and movies has a part to play in leaving a scar on these vulnerable and impressionable minds Worse still, unpleasant content can take a toll on anyone, even adults at the subconscious level Similarly, media is held responsible for the change in eating habits and the unhealthy lifestyle people are adopting The influx of junk food advertisements outnumbered programs that promote the benefits of following a balanced diet and doing regular exercises In conclusion, if used wisely, media proves to be a boon However, excessive exposure can lead to blind imitation and influence viewers to wrong things The best solution to this issue lies in limiting media exposure and choosing what to watch carefully (349 words) ADVANCED VOCABULARY increase the accessibility of information: gia tăng tiếp cận thông tin 92 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter act as a link: hoạt động mắt xích kết nối a platform to showcase their talent: tảng để thể tài serve as a communication medium: hoạt động phương thức giao tiếp give voice to the poor: đem lại tiếng nói cho người nghèo blindly imitate their role models: bắt chước hình mẫu cách mù quáng the influx of junk food advertisements: tràn lan quảng cáo đồ ăn vặt promote the benefit of: khuyến khích lợi ích excessive exposure: tiếp cận nhiều 93 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 31: 02/12/2017 – TOPIC: EDUCATION Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home To what extent agree or disagree? TOPIC ANALYSIS KEY WORDS schools, not necessary, children, get information, through Internet → topic thuộc chủ đề EDUCATION agree or disagree → trường học khơng cịn cần thiết tre em học nhiều qua Internet Bạn đồng ý hay không với quan điểm BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng khơng đồng ý Đoạn 1: • Mạng Internet giúp học sinh tìm kiếm nhiều thơng tin hữu ích phục vụ cho việc nghiên cứu • Tuy nhiên, hướng dẫn giáo việc giám sát cha mẹ cần thiết để giúp trẻ em tận dụng mạng Internet cách hiệu • Thiếu hướng dẫn người lớn, trẻ em tiếp cận với nguồn thông tin không đáng tin cậy • Trong đó, trường học, sách giáo khoa thường biên soạn tác giả tiếng, thơng tin trình bày theo hệ thống hợp lý Đoạn 2: • Ngồi ra, phát triển mạng xã hội khiến việc học mạng trẻ em dễ bị xao lãng, phương hướng • Việc học nhà góp phần dẫn đến việc suy giảm tương tác trực tiếp người với người 94 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ With the advent of the Internet, students these days can easily access a large volume of information on any given subjects This current trend has given rise to a controversial issue that educational institutions have become obsolete and that children can learn from home From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement for the following reasons To start with, the overwhelming variety of learning resources would potentially be counterproductive without the instruction of a mentor Home computers and Internet access are undeniably integral for students to look up information for research Equally important, though, is the provision of guidance from teachers and parental supervision in making effective use of the world wide web Lack of proper guidance could lead students to misleading and unreliable materials Whereas, in a structured learning environment, course books are thoroughly designed by prominent and qualified authors, providing learners with suitable knowledge in a systematic way On the other hand, upon the growing dominance of social networks such as Facebook, it seems that the Internet now offers even more distraction and unpleasantness than it has ever been Thus, learners will likely succumb to the lure of chatting online instead of staying focused on their work Besides, homeschooling will further entrench a worrying phenomenon that people these days would rather interact with electronic gadgets than engage in real human conversation Therefore, the physical presence of a child in school or any other institution is of great importance, encouraging face to face communication and the development of interpersonal skills In conclusion, the Internet, despite being the most significant breakthrough in history, is indeed a mixed blessing Learners can only harness its power to the full under the orientation and instruction of highly qualified school teachers 95 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter Only in that way can the Internet serves as a valuable aid/ a complement to the national curriculum (307 words) ADVANCED VOCABULARY access a large volume of information: truy cập lượng thông tin lớn become obsolete: trở nên thừa thãi the overwhelming variety of learning resources: đa dạng nguồn tài liệu học tập the provision of guidance: việc cung cấp định hướng make effective use of: sử dụng hiệu misleading and unreliable materials: tài liệu sai lệch thorougly designed by prominent authors: thiết kế kỹ tác giả uy tín the growing dominance of social networks: phát triển vượt trội mạng xã hội the development of interpersonal skills: phát triển kỹ tương tác, kỹ mềm KEY WORDS 96 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 32: 09/12/2017 – TOPIC: SOCIETY People think that children nowadays have more freedom To what extent you agree or disagree? TOPIC ANALYSIS children, nowadays, have more freedom → trẻ em ngày tự hệ khác agree, or disagree → bạn đồng ý hay không? BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng khơng đồng ý Đoạn 1: • Thời đại cơng nghệ giúp trẻ em tự truy cập lượng lớn thông tin chủ đề khác • Tuy nhiên, việc nghiện Internet lại khiến trẻ em xa rời việc tương tác với người xung quanh Đoạn 2: • Trong xã hội đại, người trẻ tuổi thường phải chịu áp lực thành công sớm Hậu cha mẹ thường ép theo học ngành hot, trả lương cao sau tốt nghiệp, mà không quan tâm đến đam mê thật chúng • Sự kiểm sốt thái q cha mẹ cịn thể nhiều mặt khác sống trẻ • Gần bà mẹ bị bắt để đứa gái tuổi chơi cơng viên • Những người để tầm mắt thường bị buộc tội vô trách nhiệm Tuy nhiên, lối suy nghĩ lại khiến trẻ em tự khám phá giới theo cách SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ 97 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter Freedom is an abstract concept that cannot be adequately measured on any physical scales However, many people incline to the view that children these days enjoy a more liberal life than previous generations My opinion is utterly opposed on this issue for the following reasons One of the arguments put forth in support of the former statement is that the digital age presents an unparalleled opportunity for kids to gain access to a tremendous amount of information without geographical barriers Ironically, the advent of the Internet is more of a mixed blessing Indeed, the obvious merits of the world wide web cannot overshadow a worrying tendency of that growing addiction to electrical gadgets such as laptops, tablets or smartphones Therefore, early exposure to the virtual world ended up erecting invisible boundaries, inducing kids’ estrangement from actual human interactions On the other hand, amidst a modern-day hectic world, there is an inordinate amount of pressure on young people to become successful artists, entrepreneurs or startup CEOs before the age of 30 Consequently, parents would compel their offspring to enroll in highest-paying college majors, oblivious to their utmost passion In addition, adult supervision seems to be extending into every aspect of children’s lives Take the recent arrest and jailing in US of a mother for abandoning her nine-year-old daughter to play alone in the park while she worked In the current climate of obsession with children’s safety, parents who let their youngsters out of sight court the accusation of irresponsibility, if not gross negligence However, this school of thought may accidentally cause the erosion of children’s freedom to engage with the world at will In conclusion, while the proliferation of the electronic devices could hamper children’s direct contact with the real world, parents may unintentionally impede a child from acquiring their innate dreams and fundamental life skills for being overprotective Thus, I believe millennials feel confined rather than free during a hightech era (322 words) 98 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter ADVANCED VOCABULARY an abstract concept: khái niệm trừu tượng enjoy a liberal life: tận hưởng sống tự present an unparalleled opportunity: mang lại hội chưa có a worrying tendency: xu hướng đáng lo ngại erect invisible boundaries: dựng lên rào cản vơ hình estrangement from actual human interaction: xa rời việc giao tiếp với người xung quanh an inordinate amount of pressure: lượng lớn áp lực oblivious to their utmost passion: phớt lờ đam mê thật court the accusation of irresponsibility: bị kết tội vô trách nhiệm KEY WORDS children, start school early, or go to school until older → chủ đề EDUCATION discuss, opinion → Trẻ em nên đến trường sớm hay muộn Thảo luận đưa ý kiến thân BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng trẻ em không nên học sớm 99 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 33: 14/12/2017 – TOPIC: EDUCATION Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that should not go to school until they are older Discuss both these views and give your opinion TOPIC ANALYSIS Đoạn 1: Ưu điểm việc học sớm • Não trẻ em phát triển nhanh năm đầu đời, vậy, cần cho trẻ em học sớm để tận dụng khả tiếp thu chúng giai đoạn • Đi học sớm giúp trẻ sớm phát triển kỹ mềm thông qua tương tác với đứa trẻ lứa tuổi • Những đứa trẻ cha mẹ nng chiều q nhiều thường ích kỉ Vì vậy, học sớm, giảm tính ích kỷ trẻ Đoạn 2: Khẳng định trẻ em nên học muộn • Đi học sớm làm hội vui chơi trẻ, khiến trẻ dễ bị stress lo lắng từ độ tuổi cịn nhỏ • • Hoạt động vui chơi giúp trẻ phát triển trí sáng tạo, tư giải vấn đề Áp lực phải học sớm khiến trẻ em bị stress sợ hãi việc học SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ The best age for children attending schools remains open to debate While some people think that children should start primary school as soon as possible, I am firmly of the belief that older is better To begin with, advocates of lowering school entrance age base their arguments largely on the fact that a child’s brain develops at an extraordinarily fast rate during the first five years in his life Hence, early education would offer substantial benefits to these young children as they are 100 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter intrinsically quicker learners than adults In other words, it is essential that these young minds are exposed to a various range of knowledge given their incredible learning capabilities at this stage Besides, an early to formal learning is expected to help kids hone their social skills through positive interactions with same-aged peers There is mounting evidence that overindulgent parenting could eventually create self-centered, narcissistic children Thus, the sooner a child is sent to school, the less selfishness becomes entrenched However, I am more convinced that the optimal school starting age is after a child’s seventh birthday Contrary to popular belief, early formal schooling may rob infants the ability to play and trigger a wave of stress and anxiety among children If parents and governments push children towards literacy and numeracy too early, they would miss out on the play-based learning that encourage creativity, problem-solving and empathy For example, a child can devise, tell and act out stories with Lego even before acquiring writing skills Moreover, the pressure to perform in class at a young age could promote stress and fear around learning In hindsight, early years education can damage children’s health and well-being, putting them off school permanently In conclusion, though early childhood is recognized worldwide as a crucial stage in its own right, lowering the age for school entry may prove counter-productive Therefore, children should start school later to achieve better educational results as well as higher levels of well-being (324 words) ADVANCED VOCABULARY school entrance age: độ tuổi nhập học at an extraordinarily fast rate: tốc độ nhanh đáng kinh ngạc offer substantial benefits: mang lại lợi ích đáng kể 101 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter incredible learning capabilities: khả học tập tuyệt vời optimal school starting age: độ tuổi đến trường tối ưu trigger a wave of stress and anxiety: tạo sóng lo lắng căng thẳng achieve better educational results: đạt kết học tập tốt TOPIC ANALYSIS KEY WORDS social media, replace face-to-face contact → topic thuộc chủ đề SOCIAL MEDIA advantages outweigh disadvantages → mạng xã hội dần thay việc giao tiếp trực tiếp Điều đem lại nhiều thuận lợi hơn, hay bất lợi hơn? BRAINSTORMING Mình viết theo hướng bất lợi nhiều thuận lợi 102 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter SAMPLE 34: 16/12/2017 – TOPIC: SOCIAL MEDIA The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face -to-face contact in this century Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages? Đoạn 1: Chỉ ưu điểm ‘social media’ • • • • Trao đổi thơng tin online giúp đa dạng hóa khoảng thời gian địa điểm gặp gỡ người Trong sống hàng ngày, người ta liên lạc với người thân thông qua tin nhắn online gọi hình ảnh bất chấp rào cản địa lý Trong cơng việc, thay phải di chuyển q nhiều, người ta gặp khoảng thời gian mà thích hợp cho tất người Mạng xã hội cịn giúp kết nối người có tư tưởng giống nhau, giúp người mở rộng mối quan hệ mặt công việc Đoạn 2: Khẳng định xu hướng bất lợi • • • Mạng xã hội khiến người trực tiếp tương tác với Hạn chế phát triển kỹ mềm Nhiều người có xu hướng gửi tin nhắn online thay phải đối mặt trực tiếp hội thoại nhạy cảm chia tay, hay sa thải SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ In the era of information technology, the advent of social media websites such as Facebook and Twitter has gradually become a substitute for face-toface communication From my perspective, this growing trend offers more drawbacks than benefits in long term First, advocates of online communication would argue that it expands the available time and place in which a meeting can occur For example, one can stay in constant touch with their loved ones via online messenger or video calls regardless of geographical barriers In business context, rather than having to travel to specific location, people can plan to meet at times that work 103 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter for all of their schedules In addition, for professionals and academics, social networking sites allow users to create networks of like-minded people, expanding the horizons of what sort of contacts they can make in their professional lives While it is impossible to deny the importance of these platforms, and the way that they have revolutionized communication, it is essential to realize their detrimental effects on our life One issue with these digital forms of communication is that counter-intuitively, they have led to fewer interactions rather than encouraging frequent contacts of one person to another Another negative impact of social networking technology is on interpersonal skills It is a common sense to handle tough conversations such as breakup or getting fired in person That being said, many opt for delivering the message online, avoiding the nerve-wracking feeling of telling someone bad news In fact, the quality of decreasing conversations are suffering as well due to the prevalence of social networking In conclusion, I believe that the negative influences of social media to people’s relationships overshadow the advantages it might bring Therefore, moderate use of this modern communication tool is advisable (291 words) ADVANCED VOCABULARY stay in constant touch with: trì liên lạc liên tục với regardless of geographical barriers: bất chấp rào cản địa lý in business context: môi trường kinh doanh like-minded people: người có tư tưởng giống revolutionize communication: cách mạng hóa vấn đề giao tiếp 104 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www.ielts-fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com/ielts.fighter detrimental effect: hậu có hại digital forms of communication: hình thức giao tiếp điện tử counter-intuitively: tráis với suy nghĩ thông thường opt for delivering messages online: chọn cách gửi tin nhắn online 10 the prevalence of social networking: thịnh hành mạng xã hội 105 | B i M ẫ u I E L T S W r i t i n g t a s k b a n d + ... sử quốc gia 5 |34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8. 0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www .ielts- fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com /ielts. fighter SAMPLE ESSAY BAND 8+ It is projected... LKG Hà Nội: goo.gl/8BiPCP LKG Hồ Chí Minh: goo.gl/KzqTrj LKG Đà Nẵng: goo.gl/L6zTgc 2 |34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8. 0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www .ielts- fighter.com Fanpage:... values (300 words) 6 |34 Bài Mẫu IELTS Writing task band 8. 0 + IELTS Fighter – As easy as pie! Website: www .ielts- fighter.com Fanpage: www.facebook.com /ielts. fighter SAMPLE 2: TOPIC: JOB Some people