IELTS WRITING 02 04 2016

Bài mẫu band 8+ cho đề thi ngày 2/4/2016 Topic: It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries To what extent you agree or disagree? Sample answer 8.0++ The question whether governments should provide aids internationally or domestically has drawn much attention from the public.Although I understand why helping everyone in the world is unachieveable, I strongly disagree that governmental supportshould solely be concentrated on satisfying local needs On the one hand, I suppose the world’s leaders’ hesitation over the provision of international aids to deprived regions is legitimate Firstly, it is unfeasible for governments’ support to reach all of the underprivileged as their number is enormous in many separated places around the globe and the type of support they need also varies For example, developed nations may encounter numerous obtacles in terms of transportation upon sending food and medicines to unwealthy regions scattereing around Africa where people are facing the threat of famine or contagions Secondly, I believe leaders of a country should prioritize the well-being of their citizensand stablize their economy and politics before carrying out any acts of gobal assistance On the other hand, I still believe governments should help as many people as they can regardless of the fragile odds forworldwide comprehensive support for all people To begin with, in many underdeveloped countries, their leaders are unable to bear the burden of eradicating domestic poverty or crises due to, for example, terrorism, which calls for the involvement from otheraffluent nations Also of great significance is that this national act of charity could have a huge impact upon individuals living inprosperous areas If the government take actions to help people overseas, citizens of that country will idolize the idea of self-devotion toward a better world In conclusion, I truly believe the world leaders should lend their neighbors a hand to offer help to people in need on their doorstep Written by Toan ZIM ZIM ACADEMY Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi http://zim.vn