IELTS WRITING 2016 BY NGOC BACH

(18/4/2015) Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the sentences which develop from plan to paragraph The number in the plan is shown in the paragraph This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph Planning the ideas Based on our identification of the key words, our plan will be something like this: Introduce idea: improvements there are different views My opinion – reward students who show Paragraph 2: [View I disagree with] [1] rewards = competition among students Result: children try harder to get good scores at school [2] rewards = the best students are identified They can be given special attention to develop their abilities Personal example: my own school Paragraph 3: [View I agree with] [1] equal chance for all students to receive rewards Result: all children are motivated to try hard [2] promotes learning for enjoyment and understanding, not to gain high scores Reduces exam pressure and cheating to score high marks Conclusion: repeat using some different words Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page ANSWER: It is true that the question of whether to reward students with excellent academic results or those showing great improvements remains a source of controversy in the education field While a number of people believe that only students achieving the highest grades deserve rewards, I would argue that praising students who achieve improvements is much more reasonable On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why awards should be given to students having excellent academic performances [1] Firstly, this could create a highly competitive studying environment at school, seeing that students often desire to win prizes As a consequence, school children could be encouraged to put their effort into studying for the highest scores [2] Secondly, by adopting this approach, gifted students who are outstanding could be given opportunities to nurture their abilities My secondary school, for instance, selects students with the best results for extra classes to develop their capabilities in order to take them to national competitions On the other hand, I believe that giving encouragement to those who make strides in their studies results in more favourable outcomes [1]The first benefit is that this could give equal chances for every student to receive awards, rather than only focus on the highest achievers Instead of feeling disappointed when competing with their top classmates, students who are recognized for their effort during semesters will feel motivated if they are rewarded for making significant progress [2] Another benefit is that this form of recogniton follows the holistic principle of learning, which is to access the world of knowledge, not just to gain high scores Consequently, several common phenomena which occur when examinations approach, including pressure, anxiety and cheating, would be reduced In conclusion, although rewarding students with the highest scores is advantageous to some extent, it seems to me that it is better to give encouragement to those who have improved their level of academic performance 318 words COMMENTS Correctly, you discussed both views at approximately equal length You maintained a consistent and clear position throughout the response [in the introduction, the conclusion and at the beginning of paragraph 3] You certainly sequenced information and ideas logically I like the fact that you used paragraph to discuss the view which YOU personally agree with This method then provides the perfect link to what you wrote in your conclusion Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page Your excellent topic sentences provided a clear indication of the central idea in each main paragraph, and I always like the use of On the one hand/On the other hand when we have to „discuss both views‟ Of course, we both agree that Firstly/Secondly is useful to identify arguments in one of the main paragraphs Dịch đại ý (18/4/2015) Nhiều người cho trường học nên khen thưởng học sinh đạt kết học tập tốt người khác nghĩ việc khen thưởng học sinh có kết tiến quan trọng Hãy thảo luận hai quan điểm nêu ý kiến cá nhân bạn Đưa lý cho câu trả lời bạn bao gồm ví dụ thích hợp từ kinh nghiệm kiến thức than ĐÁP ÁN: Ở lĩnh vực giáo dục, câu hỏi đặt liệu có nên khen thưởng học sinh đạt thành tích học tập xuất sắc hay bạn có tiến rõ rệt vấn đề tranh cãi Trong số người tin học sinh sinh viên đạt điểm số cao xứng đáng khen thưởng, cho hợp lý biểu dương học sinh đạt tiến học tập Một mặt, có nhiều lý khác để khen thưởng học sinh có thành tích học tập xuất sắc Trước hết, điều tạo nên môi trường học tập có tính cạnh tranh gắt gao trường học em học sinh thường mong muốn giành lấy phần thưởng Do đó, em khuyến khích nỗ lực vào việc học để đạt điểm số cao Thứ hai, áp dụng phương pháp này, học sinh có tố chất bật có nhiều hội để bồi dưỡng khiếu Ví dụ trường cấp hai tôi, bạn học sinh có kết cao chọn lựa để học lớp bồi dưỡng giúp phát triển khả để tham gia vào kỳ thi cấp quốc gia Mặt khác, cho việc khen thưởng động viên cho em học sinh có bước tiến học tập dẫn đến nhiều kết đáng mong đợi Lợi ích trước tiên em học sinh có hội bình đẳng để nhận khen thưởng, không trọng vào em có thành tích tốt Thay cảm thấy thất vọng phải ganh đua với bạn học sinh giỏi lớp, em học sinh ghi nhận có nỗ lực học kỳ cảm thấy có động lực em khen thưởng nhờ tiến vượt bậc Một ưu điểm hình thức ghi nhận dựa vào nguyên tắc toàn diện việc học tập, tiếp cận giới tri thức không Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page đạt điểm số cao Do đó, vài tượng xảy kỳ thi đến gần áp lực, căng thẳng gian lận giảm thiểu Tóm lại, việc khen thưởng em học sinh có điểm số cao có lợi mức độ đó, cá nhân cho tốt khen thưởng động viên em học sinh có tiến việc học tập VOCABULARY  a source of controversy = a subject of public discussion, about which people strongly disagree Example: The decision of the President to declare war is still a source of controversy today  highly competitive = a situation in which people or organisations have to compete against each other Example: Graduates have to fight for jobs in a highly competitive market  nurture their abilities = to develop their capacity to learn or things while they are growing Example: Her music teacher recognised and nurtured her abilities, and as a result she became a famous pianist  make strides in = to make great improvements in the way that something is developing Example: Scientists are making strides in the discovery of cures for different types of cancer  the highest achievers = the students who have the most success and the highest marks Example: The highest achievers in my secondary school all went to university when they left  the holistic principle of learning = considering education as a whole thing, rather than as separate facts or subjects Example: The holistic principle of learning is a belief that the education of young people involves more than simply preparing them for a career Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page (09/05/2015) Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems Discuss both views and give your opinion Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the sentences which develop from plan to paragraph The number in the plan is shown in the paragraph This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph Planning the ideas Based on our identification of the key words, our plan will be something like this: Introduce idea: advances in technology have harmed the environment Some people think we must lead simpler lives, but I agree with those who think technological solutions can be found for environmental problems Conclusion: repeat using some different words Paragraph 2: [View I disagree with] [1] People consume too much energy by overusing technological devices – examples of such devices Consequences for the environment [2] Farming – modern technology harms the water and soil Organic farming relies on simpler traditional methods of food production Paragraph 3: [View I agree with] [1] Technology is already enabling us to exploit more renewable energy sources – example of Japan Good results for the environment [2] Cleaner technologies in waste treatment and recycling – example of recycled products Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page ANSWER: It is true that certain advances in technology have had negative impacts on the environment While there are strong arguments that some environmental problems should be tackled by adopting simpler lifestyles, I believe that the solutions lie in technologies that have been and are being developed On the one hand, enjoying life with less sophisticated technology means that people inflict less damage on the ecosystems on which all living things depend [1] Firstly, people consume energy through overuse of devices such as air-conditioning, water heaters and the private car If they decrease their energy consumption, this will reduce the emission of greenhouse gases, but this will certainly involve leading simpler lives [2] Secondly, organic farmers not pollute the water or the soil which results from the application of chemical fertilisers and weedkillers They encourage a diversity of plants and wildlife on their farms On the other hand, I agree with those who argue that technological achievements play a pivotal role in environmental protection [1] One reason is that the use of renewable energy sources is already starting to grow This raises the prospect of decreasing dependence on fossil fuels, cleaner air and the reversal of the trend of global warming Countries such as Japan are leading the way, for example, in developing more eco-friendly cars, buses and lorries [2] Another reason is that cleaner technologies, such as waste treatment, are being introduced into many industries, and technology is enabling plastics and other products to be recycled In conclusion, although living simpler lives can certainly help in tackling environmental problems, it seems to me that advances in technology are already providing many solutions and this trend will gather pace in the future 278 words COMMENT Correctly, you provided several examples to support your arguments Limiting your ideas to two in each main paragraph was the key to this good response, and you focused on energy and pollution in both paragraphs, so your essay had a logical development Finally, you gave your own opinion clearly and consistently throughout the essay.Your topic sentences both indicated the main idea in each paragraph You identified your arguments clearly for the examiner You continue to achieve an exemplary standard of grammatical accuracy and to use a satisfactory range of structures, such as correct conditional sentences, adverb clauses and relative clauses Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page VOCABULARY  sophisticated technology: technology that is clever and complicated in the way that it functions Example: Medical techniques rely increasingly on sophisticated computer technology  inflict damage on: make something, such as the environment, suffer something harmful Example: The earthquake inflicted damage on many homes and farmland  ecosystems: all the plants and animals living in various areas, considered in relation to their environment Example: The ecosystems of rainforests are very diverse, because millions of different plants and animals live there  the emission of greenhouse gases: the release into the air of gases which cause the temperature of the earth to rise Example: The governments of the world have agreed to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases  chemical fertilisers: chemical substances added to the soil to make plants grow Example: Modern farming relies on chemical fertilisers, which are harmful if they are used near rivers  weedkillers: chemical substances that are used to destroy wild plants, especially among farm crops Example: Many farmers use weedkillers, so that farm workers are not required in order to destroy the wild plants which grow among the crops  play a pivotal role: a role which is very important, because other things depend on it Example: Agriculture plays a pivotal role in the economy of many Asian countries  renewable energy sources: sources of energy which are replaced naturally, such as power from the sun or the wind Example: Modern technology is responsible for the development of renewable energy sources such as wind, solar and wave power  dependence on fossil fuels: fuels such as coal or oil, that were formed over million of years from the remains of animals or plants, on which some countries rely for much of their energy production Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page Example: Dependence on fossil fuels has the environmental disadvantage that greenhouse gases are released when these fuels are burned  global warming: the increase in the temperature of the earth, caused by the increase of greenhouse gases Example: Greater use of renewable energy resources is necessary in order to combat global warming  eco-friendly: not harmful to the environment Example: As a result of modern technology, we can now find more eco-friendly products in the shops  waste treatment: the treatment of materials that are no longer needed and are thrown away Example: In modern processes of waste treatment, environmentally harmful substances can be removed (12/07/2014) Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable Discuss both views and give your own opinion I have indicated the key words in the task question in red colour Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the sentences which develop from plan to paragraph The number in the plan is shown in the paragraph This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph Planning the ideas Based on our identification of the key words, our plan will be something like this: Introduce idea: more young people occupy important government positions Some people think there are serious drawbacks, but I agree that there are more benefits Paragraph 2: [View I disagree with] Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page [1] Argument 1: many older people think young people lack the necessary qualifications to have such responsible positions [the economy/foreign policy] – example: Eastern countries [2] Argument 2: younger people don‟t have enough experience – they may make important mistakes Paragraph 3: [View I agree with] [1] Young people often have creative and modern ways of looking at problems: result – new styles of management and new policy ideas [2] The young have many years of possible service to give in the future, provided they have the same abilities/qualifications as older people Conclusion: repeat using some different words ANSWER: It is true that the number of young people who hold highly responsible posts in the government is growing While some people are opposed to this idea, I support the view that this trend is beneficial at present On the one hand, this trend has some notable drawbacks [1] The main issue is that it is really hard for the young to make older people accept their leadership, especially in some Eastern nations Young leaders are always thought to have insufficient capabilities to manage such aspects of policy as the economy or international affairs [2] In addition, all of them are short of real experience If they have not faced many challenges in their career, they are more likely to make mistakes, which can affect the lives of many people On the other hand, it seems to me that young people are becoming an increasingly important part of the government and bring a lot of benefits [1] One reason is that their youth is a huge advantage which allows them to be creative and up-to-date This is likely to result in many innovative breakthrough policies and styles of management [2] Furthermore, the young have a very long period of time to contribute to their nations For example, with the same abilities and qualifications, a younger candidate is more likely to be elected than an older counterpart in some countries because of his longer anticipated time of devotion to public service in the future Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page In conclusion, although there are strong arguments for both views, it seems to me that on the whole it is beneficial that more young people are being selected to play some key roles in the government 276 words COMMENT Your opinion is clear in the introduction and the conclusion.The essay discusses you opinions well and you make relevant points for both sides of the argument, which are well supported by specific examples and explained well As with other essays, the conclusion is weak and should briefly summarise the main points in the essay There is a clear overall progression in the writing and ideas are arranged coherently Paragraphs and sentences are well constructed Good topic sentences.You use a range of linkers throughout the essay Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 10 VOCABULARY  notable drawbacks = disadvantages which are important to note Example: Although the latest Iphone is very attractive, it has notable drawbacks, including the price  faced many challenges = had to deal with many difficult problems and overcome them Example: The U.S and Soviet scientists and engineers responsible for the space programme faced many challenges when they built the Space Station  creative and up-to-date = using skill and imagination to produce something new and modern Example: Creative and up-to-date techniques are used to produce modern online video games  innovative breakthrough policies = policies which are new and revolutionary different from previous policies Example: The company specialises in developing innovative breakthrough policies that will lead to new business  counterpart = a person [or thing] which has the same position or function as someone [or something] else in a different place or situation Example: The President of the USA is having discussions with his Chinese counterpart  devotion to public service = to give a lot of time and effort to serving the community when working for an official or government organisation Example: The President thanked his staff for their devotion to public service in dealing with the recent flood disaster Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 11 (12/12/2015) People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country To what extent you agree or disagree? VERSION I have indicated the key words in the task question in red colour Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the sentences which develop from plan to paragraph The number in the plan is shown in the paragraph This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph Planning the ideas Based on our identification of the key words, our plan will be something like this: Introduce idea: many people hold this opinion I completely agree with it Paragraph 2: [Problems if local customs are not followed] [1] Difficulties for new residents who not follow customs and traditions of host country – example: if they start a business, they have to know local business customs in order to be successful [2] Some actions will be illegal in the host country and will make local people angry, too – example: Singapore Paragraph 3: [Benefits of following local customs and traditions] [1] Local people will accept newcomers who this – more integration, easier to make friends [2] New immigrants will enjoy the traditions and be able to take part in community life – example: enjoy festivals Conclusion: repeat, using some different words Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 12 ANSWER: Many people argue that foreigners should adapt to the local customs and traditions when they come to reside in a new country I completely agree with this view Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country Firstly, it will become almost impossible for them to blend into their new environment For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country There are bound to be many pitfalls, not only legal ones but also simply in terms of winning and keeping customers Secondly, recent immigrants might fall foul of the law if they not respect the behaviour and customs of locals In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider newcomers dirty and illmannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places There are also many benefits for foreigners when they adopt the customs and traditions of their new country of residence One advantage is that local people will be more welcoming when they feel that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life The establishment of closer links with the host community might lead to greater integration and mutual understanding Another benefit is the richness of the experience which newcomers will gain from enjoying aspects of local customs and traditions, enabling them to participate in community life and avoid social isolation During festivals and national holidays, especially, they will feel like they „belong‟ in their new country In conclusion, I would argue that it is essential for new residents to follow the traditions and habits of locals in the host community in order to integrate fully into society 293 words COMMENT The idea is this: Opinion – completely agree Paragraph – pitfalls for foreigners if they NOT follow local customs and traditions Paragraph – benefits if foreigners DO follow local customs and traditions Dịch đại ý (12/12/2015) Mọi người nên tuân theo phong tục tập quán họ bắt đầu sống đất nước khác Anh/chị đồng ý hay không với quan điểm này? ĐÁP ÁN: CÁCH Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 13 Nhiều người cho người nước nên thích nghi với phong tục tập quán địa phương họ tới cư trú quốc gia khác Tôi hoàn toàn đồng tình với quan điểm Những người đến buộc phải đối mặt với khó khăn họ không tuân theo quy tắc hành xử xã hội nước sở Trước hết, họ hoà nhập với môi trường Ví dụ, doanh nhân đến sống nước khởi nghiệp kinh doanh buộc phải tâm đến thông lệ kinh doanh nước Có nhiều rủi ro, không luật pháp mà đơn giản việc lôi kéo giữ chân khách hàng Thứ hai, người đến phạm pháp họ không tôn trọng lối sống phong tục người dân địa Ví dụ Singapore, người ta bị coi bẩn thỉu thô lỗ xả rác đường nhổ kẹo cao su nơi công cộng Có nhiều lợi ích người nước họ chấp nhận quen với phong tục tập quán đất nước họ cư trú Một điểm lợi dân địa phương trở nên hiếu khách họ cảm thấy người đến tỏ tôn trọng với lối sống địa phương Việc hình thành mối liên kết chặt chẽ với cộng đồng địa phương dẫn dến hội nhập sâu hiểu biết lẫn Một điểm tốt kinh nghiệm dồi mà người đến có từ việc nếm trải khía cạnh khác phong tục tập quán địa phương khiến cho họ gia nhập vào đời sống cộng đồng tránh việc bị cô lập với xã hội Trong dịp lễ hội ngày lễ quốc gia, họ đặc biệt cảm thấy “thuộc về” đất nước Tóm lại, cho việc người nước cư trú tuân theo phong tục tập quán địa phương nước sở điều thiết yếu để hội nhập hoàn toàn với xã hội VOCABULARY  the norms of social behaviour: standards of behaviour that are typical of and accepted within society Example: The norms of social behaviour in Muslim countries include not drinking alcohol in public places  host country: a country which receives visitors or new residents Example: Refugees who escape from war zones often face difficulties in a new host country  blend into: to look very similar to the surrounding people or things, so that it is difficult to distinguish what is new Example: Wearing the same clothes as local people, they blended into the crowd of people waiting to enter the cinema  an entrepreneur: a person who makes money by starting or running a business Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 14 Example: A few famous entrepreneurs have started by running a small business, selling things in the street  bound to (be): certain, or likely, to be Example: When you start a new business, there are bound to be risks  pifalls: a hidden danger or difficulty, which it is not easy or possible to see at first Example: When you buy a car, go with a mechanic to avoid any pitfalls which will cause problems later  fall foul of the law: to get into trouble with the police because you are doing something illegal Example: In most countries, if you drink and drive, you will fall foul of the law  newcomers: a person who has only recently arrived in a place Example: Australia is a friendly country, where newcomers and older residents mix well  integration: the process of mixing people who have previously been separated Example: The aim of the European Community is the integration of the people of many different countries to cooperate economically and politically  mutual understanding: the feelings which two or more people share equally Example: If newcomers live in separate communities, they will never achieve mutual understanding with residents of the host country  social isolation: the state of being alone in society Example: Some elderly people experience social isolation, unless they have good friends or a loving family  ‘belong’: to feel comfortable and happy in a particular situation or with a particular group of people Example: A newcomer who learns the language of the host country is more likely to feel that he/she belongs in the new community Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua full (hiện có 20 ~90 trang) update năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach-IELTS-Writing-by-Ngoc-Bach.html Page 15 [...]... cinema  an entrepreneur: a person who makes money by starting or running a business Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua bản full (hiện tại có hơn 20 bài ~90 trang) và được update trong 1 năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach -IELTS- Writing- by- Ngoc- Bach. html Page 14 Example: A few famous entrepreneurs have started by running a small business, selling things in the... part in community life – example: enjoy festivals Conclusion: repeat, using some different words Written by Ngoc Bach Để đăng ký mua bản full (hiện tại có hơn 20 bài ~90 trang) và được update trong 1 năm -> truy cập link sau: http://ngocbach.com/chuyen_muc/view/70001965/Sach -IELTS- Writing- by- Ngoc- Bach. html Page 12 ANSWER: Many people argue that foreigners should adapt to the local customs and traditions... sống ở một đất nước khác Anh/chị đồng ý hay không và như thế nào với quan điểm này? 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VERSION 1 I have indicated the key words in the task question in red colour Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the sentences which develop from plan to paragraph The number in the plan is shown in the paragraph This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph Planning the ideas Based on our identification