1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 115 corral them, and to (B) all one has to do with cattle is to leave them alone to feed themselves, to corral them, and (C) all one has to do with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves and then corral them and (D) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is leave them alone while they feed themselves, corral them, and (E) the only thing that has to be done with cattle is to leave them alone while they feed themselves, to corral them, and 441.It is as difficult to prevent crimes against property as those that are against a person. (A) those that are against a (B) those against a (C) it is against a (D) preventing those against a (E) it is to prevent those against a 442.It is characteristic of the Metropolitan Museum of Art, as of virtually every great American museum, the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of their collections as has the judgments of the art historian. (A) of virtually every great American museum, the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of their collections as has (B) of virtually every great American museum, that the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of their collections as has (C) it is of virtually every great American museum, that the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as have (D) it is of virtually every great American museum, that the taste of local collectors have played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as have (E) it is of virtually every great American museum, the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as has 443.It is not likely that the competitive imbalance that now exists between Japan with all major industrial nations will be redressed during the foreseeable future. (A) with all major industrial nations will be redressed during (B) with all other major industrial nations will be redressed within (C) with all other major industrial nations will be redressed during (D) and all major industrial nations will be redressed during (E) and all other major industrial nations will be redressed within 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 116 444.It is possible that Native Americans originally have migrated to the Western Hemisphere over a bridge of land that once existed between Siberia and Alaska. (A) have migrated to the Western Hemisphere over a bridge of land that once existed (B) were migrating to the Western Hemisphere over a bridge of land that existed once (C) migrated over a bridge of land to the Western Hemisphere that once existed (D) migrated to the Western Hemisphere over a bridge of land that once existed (E) were migrating to the Western Hemisphere over a bridge of land existing once 445.It is well known in the supermarket industry that how items are placed on shelves and the frequency of inventory turnovers can be crucial to profits. (A) the frequency of inventory turnovers can be (B) the frequency of inventory turnovers is often (C) the frequency with which the inventory turns over is often (D) how frequently is the inventory turned over are often (E) how frequently the inventory turns over can be 446.It may be another fifteen years before spacecraft from Earth again venture to Mars, a planet now known to be cold, dry, and probably lifeless. (A) again venture to Mars, a planet now known to be (B) venture to Mars again, a planet now known for being (C) will venture to Mars again, a planet now known as being (D) venture again to Mars, a planet that is known now to be (E) will again venture to Mars, a planet known now as being 447.It may be that by focusing primarily on a patient’s mental condition and on vague and often very speculative psychodynamic factors, predictions about the patient’s future behavior decrease in accuracy. (A) predictions about the patient’s future behavior decrease in accuracy (B) mental health professionals lessen the accuracy of their predictions about the patient’s future behavior (C) the accuracy of predictions about the patient’s future behavior lessens (D) a decrease in accuracy is seen in predictions about the patient’s future behavior can be predicted less accurately (E) the patient’s future behavior can be predicted less accurately 448.It may someday be worthwhile to try to recover uranium from seawater , but at present this process is prohibitively expensive. (A) It may someday be worthwhile to try to recover uranium from seawater (B) Someday, it may be worthwhile to try and recover uranium from seawater 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 117 (C) Trying to recover uranium out of seawater may someday be worthwhile (D) To try for the recovery of uranium out of seawater may someday be worthwhile (E) Recovering uranium from seawater may be worthwhile to try to do someday 449.It seems likely that a number of astronomical phenomena, such as the formation of planetary nebulas, may be caused by the interaction where two stars orbit each other at close range. (A) may be caused by the interaction where two stars orbit each other (B) may be caused by the interaction between two stars that each orbit the other (C) are because of the interaction between two stars that orbit each other (D) are caused by the interaction of two stars where each is orbiting the other (E) are caused by the interaction of two stars orbiting each other 450.It takes a deft balance between savings discipline, investment knowledge, risk taking, luck, and time to raise a million dollars through investments. (A) It takes a deft balance between (B) Deft balancing is needed between (C) Deftly balanced, it takes (D) It takes a deft balance of (E) A deft balance is what one needs among 451.It was an increase in reported cases of malaria along the Gulf Coast that in 1921 led the health authorities’ granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of Unimedco. (A) authorities’ granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of (B) authorities’ granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later to be called by the name of (C) authorities’ granting a permit for experimentation using human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of (D) authorities to grant a permit for human experimentation to the group later called (E) authorities to grant a permit for human experimentation to the group that later would be called by the name of 452.It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator. (A) It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 118 (B) After winning the Italian and U.S. Opens in 1979 at the age of 16, injuries plagued tennis celebrity Tracy Austin and forced her to sit out from (C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from (D) Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from (E) Tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, was plagued by injuries when she sat out between 453.It was the loss of revenue from declines in tourism that in 1935 led the Saudi authorities’ granting a concession for oil exploration to the company that would later be known by the name of Aramco. (A) authorities’ granting a concession for oil exploration to the company that would later be known by the name of (B) authorities’ granting a concession for oil exploration to the company later to be known as named (C) authorities granting a concession for oil exploration to the company that would later be known by the name of (D) authorities to grant a concession for oil exploration to the company that later will be known as being (E) authorities to grant a concession for oil exploration to the company later to be known as 454.Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using it to help build a modern industrial system. (A) Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, using it to help build (B) Japan received huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War and used it to help in building (C) Japan used the huge sums of capital it received from the United States after the Second World War to help build (D) Japan’s huge sums of capital received from the United States after the Second World War were used to help it in building (E) Receiving huge sums of capital from the United States after the Second World War, Japan used it to help build 455.Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer are examples of the kind of composer who receives popular acclaim while living, often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again. (A) often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again (B) whose reputation declines after death and never regains its status again (C) but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 119 (D) who declines in reputation after death and who never regained popularity again (E) then has declined in reputation after death and never regained popularity 456.Joan of Arc, a young Frenchwoman who claimed to be divinely inspired, turned the tide of English victories in her country by liberating the city of Orleans and she persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne . (A) she persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne (B) persuaded Charles VII of France in claiming his throne (C) persuading that the throne be claimed by Charles VII of France (D) persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne (E) persuading that Charles VII of France should claim the throne 457.John Smith provides information on the conditions that lead women to a gynecologist, and he notes that these conditions can, and sometimes are, used in the promotion of surgery which is not needed. (A) and he notes that these conditions can, and sometimes are, used in the promotion of surgery which is not needed (B) noting that these conditions can be, and sometimes are, used to promote needless surgery (C) and notes that they could and sometimes are used unnecessarily in promoting surgery (D) sometimes promoting needless surgery (E) which they use sometimes to promote unnecessary surgery 458.Joplin’s faith in his opera “Tremonisha” was unshakable; in 1911 he published the score at his own expense and decided on staging it himself . (A) on staging it himself (B) that he himself would do the staging (C) to do the staging of the work by himself (D) that he himself would stage it (E) to stage the work himself 459.Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel. (A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to (B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to (C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in (D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 120 rather than confinement in (E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than be confined to 460.It could be argued that the most significant virtue of a popular democracy is not the right to 10 participate in the selection of leaders, but rather that it affirms our importance in the scheme of things. (A) but rather that it affirms (B) but rather its affirmation of (C) but rather it’s affirmation in terms of (D) but instead of that, its affirming that (E) affirming rather 461.Judge Forer recognizes that the American judicial system provides more safeguards for accused persons than does the legal system of any other country , but she believes there is a great disparity between the systems of justice accorded rich and poor. (A) for accused persons than does the legal system of any other country (B) to accused persons as the legal system of any country (C) for accused persons as the legal system of any country (D) to accused persons as the legal system of any other country (E) for accused persons than the legal system of any country 462.Judge Lois Forer’s study asks why do some litigants have a preferred status over others in the use of a public resource, the courts, which in theory are available to all but in fact are unequally distributed among rich and poor. (A) do some litigants have a preferred status over others in the use of a public resource, the courts, which in theory are available to all but in fact are unequally distributed among (B) some litigants have a preferred status over others in the use of a public resource, the courts, which in theory are available to all but in fact are unequally distributed between (C) do some litigants have a preferred status over another in the use of a public resource, the courts, in theory available to all but in fact are unequally distributed among (D) some litigants have a preferred status to another in the use of a public resource, the courts, in theory available to all but in fact not equally distributed between (E) does one litigant have a preferred status over the other in the use of a public resource, the courts, in theory available to all but in fact they are not equally distributed among 463.Judicial rules in many states require that the identities of all prosecution witnesses . industrial nations will be redressed within 1000 Real GMAT Sentence Correction Questions Collected by: www.dethi.com & www.xeom.net 116 44 4.It is possible that Native Americans originally. to be done with cattle is to leave them alone while they feed themselves, to corral them, and 44 1.It is as difficult to prevent crimes against property as those that are against a person. (A). against a (C) it is against a (D) preventing those against a (E) it is to prevent those against a 44 2.It is characteristic of the Metropolitan Museum of Art, as of virtually every great American