Ielts Writing Task 2 Corrections Most Common Mistakes Students Make and How to Avoid Them (Box set 15 in 1) — By JOHNNY CHUONG — Telegram Channel: @writingandgrammar https://t.me/writingandgrammar Text Copyright © [Johnny Chuong] All rights reserved No part of this guide may be reproduced in any form without permission in writing from the publisher except in the case of brief quotations embodied in critical articles or reviews Legal & Disclaimer The information contained in this book and its contents is not designed to replace or take the place of any form of medical or professional advice; and is not meant to replace the need for independent medical, financial, legal or other professional advice or services, as may be required The content and information in this book have been provided for educational and entertainment purposes only The content and information contained in this book have been compiled from sources deemed reliable, and it is accurate to the best of the Author’s 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mistakes to help students have a better understanding, avoid unexpected mistakes and achieve a high score in the IELTS Writing task 2 As the author of this book, I believe that this IETLS writing corrections book will be an indispensable reference and trusted guide for all students who want to maximize their score in IELTS academic writing task 2 I guarantee that all sample essays corrections in this book are practical and not available in any other IELTS textbook or on any website as well When you read and learn from this book, you will certainly know that it has been written by an experienced teacher, who has spent thousands of hours in a classroom, who understands IELTS students’ needs and who is totally able to help them and definitely you are not an exception stay away from the most common mistakes in IELTS writing task 2 and achieve your IELTS writing goal Thank you again for purchasing this book, and I hope you enjoy it Let’s get started! https://t.me/writingandgrammar Ielts Writing Task 2 Corrections Most Common Mistakes Students Make And How To Avoid Them (Book 1) — JOHNNY CHUONG – https://t.me/writingandgrammar Text Copyright © [Johnny Chuong] All rights reserved No part of this guide may be reproduced in any form without permission in writing from the publisher except in the case of brief quotations embodied in critical articles or reviews Legal & Disclaimer The information contained in this book and its contents is not designed to replace or take the place of any form of medical or professional advice; and is not meant to replace the need for independent medical, financial, legal or other professional advice or services, as may be required The content and information in this book have been provided for educational and entertainment purposes only The content and information contained in this book have been compiled from sources deemed reliable, and it is accurate to the best of the Author’s knowledge, information and belief However, the Author cannot guarantee its accuracy and validity and cannot be held liable for any errors and/or omissions Further, changes are periodically made to this book as and when needed Where appropriate and/or necessary, you must consult a professional (including but not limited to your doctor, attorney, financial advisor or such other professional advisor) before using any of the suggested remedies, techniques, or information in this book Upon using the contents and information contained in this book, you agree to hold harmless the Author from and against any damages, costs, and expenses, including any legal fees potentially resulting from the application of any of the information provided by this book This disclaimer applies to any loss, damages or injury caused by the use and application, whether directly or indirectly, of any advice or information presented, whether for breach of contract, tort, negligence, personal injury, criminal intent, or under any other cause of action You agree to accept all risks of using the information presented inside this book You agree that by continuing to read this book, where appropriate and/or necessary, you shall consult a professional (including but not limited to your doctor, attorney, or financial advisor or such other advisor as needed) before using any of the suggested remedies, techniques, or information in this book https://t.me/writingandgrammar Table of Contents Sample 1 Sample 2 Sample 3 Sample 4 Sample 5 Sample 6 Sample 7 Sample 8 Sample 9 Sample 10 Sample 11 Sample 12 Sample 13 Sample 14 Sample 15 https://t.me/writingandgrammar Introduction Thank you and congratulate you for downloading the book “Ielts Writing Task 2 Corrections: Most Common Mistakes Students Make And How To Avoid Them (Book 1).” This book reveals numerous common mistakes students make in each type of essay of IELTS writing task 2 Then, it will suggest corrections for these all mistakes to help students have a better understanding, avoid unexpected mistakes and achieve a high score in the IELTS Writing task 2 As the author of this book, I believe that this IETLS writing corrections book will be an indispensable reference and trusted guide for all students who want to maximize their score in IELTS academic writing task 2 I guarantee that all sample essays corrections in this book are practical and not available in any other IELTS textbook or on any website as well When you read and learn from this book, you will certainly know that it has been written by an experienced teacher, who has spent thousands of hours in a classroom, who understands IELTS students’ needs and who is totally able to help them and definitely you are not an exception stay away from the most common mistakes in IELTS writing task 2 and achieve your IELTS writing goal Thank you again for purchasing this book, and I hope you enjoy it Let’s get started! https://t.me/writingandgrammar Sample 1 Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree? https://t.me/writingandgrammar Edited essay: Nowadays, the awareness about taking care of children of many parents is improved, which means that they begin to concern about children care systems While many argue that children care center is always the best choice, others consider that family members can do this mission in a better way From my perspectives, I strongly think that there are also both negative and positive effects for each choice (very good introduction) It is an undeniable fact that children care centers support provide/ bring about a lot of advantages for the development of children Firstly, a new environment for the far-reaching development of children is a reason explaining for the birth of these centers Besides hoping their children growup naturally, parents undoubtedly want their child taken in helpful situations for their future education parents undoubtedly want their child to be raised in favorable conditions for their future education Additionally, the significantly increasing number of the kidnapping of children lead to the uneasiness of spouse about finding a security secure/safe place for their children However, children still face some barriers in readjusting their behaviors when living along with many new friends even they some must undergo a feeling of being abandoned On the other hand, the love affairs of family’s members are enough for the love of family members for the kids encourage them to hand out what is best for their children Many people like grandparents will teach their children about a society by their extensively own experiences For example, despite instead of enabling children to watch TV to amplify their knowledge, grandparents can take them to the countryside and show them about a beautiful life Notwithstanding, too much fondness given for children by family’s members may cause disadvantages such as headstrong, lazy personalities or even be effected being affected by bad things in society In conclusion, the decision to choose a suitable way to take care of children is important In spite of thinking about finding high-quality centers, parents should consider about the necessity of family’s members in teaching children https://t.me/writingandgrammar Sample 15 Space travel has been possible for some time and some people think the space tourism could be developed in the future To what extent do you think it’s a positive or negative development? https://t.me/writingandgrammar Original essay: It is true that the past 50 years have seen a significant change in tourism around the globe In the modern time with technological breakthroughs, a new destination like space which undoubtedly attracts a considerable number of people to visit seems to be one of interested and excited places Within the scope of this writing, I would argue that this form of travel is the negative development for the follow justifications To begin with, a number of factors are responsible for why fostering travel in space exerts undesirable impacts on almost sphere of every human activity First and foremost, it seems to waste a huge amount of budget as the apparatuses required for this means of travel is extremely expensive As a matter of fact that, there is no doubt that money needs to product the aircraft is far more than the amount of other vehicles Another point worth mentioning is that space tourism is causing threats to environment To be more specific, when operating, such a long distance flight has a propensity to release hugely amount of exhaust fumes into surrounding, and the ozone layer will be seriously affected while rockets are launched Last but not least, no one can deny the fact that travelers themselves will face obstacle about the risk of problems related health Indeed, visiting a strange star is potential dangers because there are circumstances that citizens cannot control or give first aid whenever necessary However, to some extent, other voices could be heard against this matter is that space travel can broaden their own knowledge since they have the golden opportunities to discover other planets Perhaps, it is true; but it cannot be denied the fact that these planets where no life exists have nothing visit, except for stones and rough surfaces Therefore, the ultimate purpose of travel is just relaxation and discovery which can expenditure a source of money, whereas in order to gain a wide range of knowledge, inhabitants are able to either read science books or watch science moves to be safer and less costly By way of conclusion, there are diametrically opposed stances that are given to debate From my point of view, I am in a favor of opinion that ought to restraint tourism in the space because it itself brings a great deal of drawbacks https://t.me/writingandgrammar Edited essay: It is true that the past 50 years have has seen a significant change in tourism around the globe In the modern time with technological breakthroughs, a new destination like space which undoubtedly attracts a considerable number of people to visit seems to be one of interested and excited places places of interest an excitement Within the scope of this writing, I would argue that this form of travel is the a negative development for the follow justifications To begin with, a number of factors are responsible for why fostering travel in space exerts undesirable impacts on almost sphere of every human activity First and foremost, it seems to we waste a huge amount of budget as the apparatuses required for this means of travel is extremely expensive As a matter of fact that, there is no doubt that money needs needed to product produce the aircraft is far more than the amount of for other vehicles Another point worth mentioning is that space tourism is causing threats to the environment To be more specific, when operating, such a long distance flight has a propensity to release a hugely amount of exhaust fumes into to the surrounding, and the ozone layer will be seriously affected while rockets are launched Last but not least, no one can deny the fact that travelers themselves will face obstacle about the risk of problems related health health related problems Indeed, visiting a strange star is potential dangers because there are circumstances that in which citizens cannot control or give first aid whenever necessary However, to some extent, other voices could be heard against this matter is that space travel can broaden their own knowledge since they have the golden opportunities to discover other planets Perhaps, it is true; but it cannot be denied the fact that these planets where no life exists have nothing to visit, except for stones and rough surfaces Therefore, the ultimate purpose of travel is just relaxation and discovery which can expenditure a source of money, whereas in order to gain a wide range of knowledge, inhabitants are able to either read science books or watch science movies to be safer and less costly?? By way of conclusion, there are diametrically opposed stances that are given to debate From my point of view, I am in a favor of the opinion that we ought to restraint tourism in the space because it itself brings a lot of drawbacks https://t.me/writingandgrammar Conclusion Thank you again for downloading this book on “Ielts Writing Task 2 Corrections: Most Common Mistakes Students Make And How To Avoid Them (Box set 15 in 1)” and reading all the way to the end I’m extremely grateful If you know of anyone else who may benefit from the informative tips presented in this book, please help me inform them of this book I would greatly appreciate it Finally, if you enjoyed this book and feel that it has added value to your study in any way, please take a couple of minutes to share your thoughts and post a REVIEW on Amazon Your feedback will help me to continue to write the kind of Kindle books that helps you get results Furthermore, if you write a simple REVIEW with positive words for this book on Amazon, you can help hundreds or perhaps thousands of other readers who may want to enhance their study results have a chance getting what they need Like you, they worked hard for every penny they spend on books With the information and recommendation you provide, they would be more likely to take action right away We really look forward to reading your review Thanks again for your support and good luck! 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