College-Essays-White-Paper-by-Jaclyn-Corley

Master the College Application Essay Using the Art of Writing and the Science of Success A white paper by Jaclyn Corley, Founder of TheCollegeEssayCaptain.com Table of Contents Executive                       Summary                                                                                                                                                                          2 Introduction                                                                                                                                                                                                3 Impact of Recent Admission Trends on College  Application Essays How are new trends in college admissions impacting the college essay?                                                   How have these changes impacted students?                                                                                                   Where are students getting guidance?                                                                                                               What are the current requirements?                                                                                                                   New Findings: The Art of Writing to Admissions  Picking the right topic                                                                                                                                            9 Methods                                                                                                                                                                   10 Effective strategies                                                                                                                                                11 New Findings: The Science Behind a Successful Essay Mindset and performance                                                                                                                                    14 Effectively coping with stress                                                                                                                              15 Conclusion                                                                                                                                                   16 Works Cited 17 Executive Summary  With frequent changes to college essay prompts, a rising number of application submissions, a studentto-counselor ratio at public schools nearly double the recommended ratio, and increasing selectivity at elite universities, it can be challenging for college applicants to navigate the complex world of writing to a college admissions audience.  College applicants, teachers, guidance counselors, and advisors can benefit from understanding and implementing the strategies and principles of writing effective college application essays The findings for this paper indicate that the best approach for mastering a college application essay is one that combines the art of writing and the science of success This conclusion is based off of the recommendations of admissions officers, writing experts, and on scientific research on the adolescent mind Introduction According to recent data from the National Association for College Admission Counseling (NACAC), the importance of the college application essay for admission consideration has increased in the past two decades A well-received college application essay can make the difference between a rejection and an acceptance letter at selective universities The college application essay refers to the essays or series of essays requested by a university as a component of a student’s application for admission consideration Although some universities may request creative pieces, this paper will focus on application essays written as personal narratives   This paper will review the recent trends in college application essay expectations and will detail common advice from admissions officers and writing experts It will focus on the art of writing for a college admission audience, and it will demonstrate how recent findings on adolescent mindsets may be used to support applicants during the writing process.  How are new trends in college admissions impacting the college essay?  The number of college applications received by universities has risen exponentially, and this trend, along with increased enrollment, is projected to continue Several factors contribute to this rise including more students who plan to attend 4-year institutions, the widespread acceptance of The Common Application, and  increased selectivity from top universities with acceptance rates as low as 5% Other factors may include increased availability of online information about universities and software platforms like Naviance that assist students with college and career readiness The prevalence of online application submission has made it easier for students to apply to multiple universities, and they have “According to the National Association for College Admission Counseling (NACAC), in 1990 just percent of students applied to seven or more colleges In the class of 2014, according to Naviance, 16.5 percent of seniors using the system said they intended to apply to 11 to 20 colleges (Naviance did not have figures on how many applications were actually filed.)” 12 This increase in applications has changed the way applications are processed by admissions officers While grades and standardized test scores are still considered the most important contributing factors for admission, there are now more students who meet the grades and scores for acceptance The increase in highly-qualified applicants has prompted admissions officers to place more weight on other parts of the application to make decisions These include application essays and letters of recommendation from teachers and counselors According to data from NACAC’s Admissions Trend Survey, 61% of universities responded that application essays were of considerable (22.1%) or moderate importance (39.0%)  By  comparison, in 1994, only 14% of universities stated that essays were of considerable importance.  Admissions officers use the college application essay to learn about a candidate’s personality, which can help determine whether a student will fit in with a school’s culture and how he or she compares with other potential applicants.  *Graph data based off surveys by the National Association for College Admission Counseling*  How have these changes impacted students? The NACAC’s State of Admissions 2015 Report indicates that although the average acceptance rate across all ranked schools was 64.7% in 2014, admission rates have become more competitive Pressure to be accepted into selective colleges has contributed to higher levels of chronic stress in teens according to a multi-method study of teen stress at private school serving affluent students   In one of this study’s surveys, getting into college was the third leading source of teen stress behind grades (#1) and homework (#2) Reported sources of chronic stress in teens at private schools: Grades Getting into college Homework The lead author noted that although her team chose to study private school students, there is “no doubt 15 students in selective public high schools also experience high rates of chronic stress.” Where are students getting essay guidance? A study by the NACAC found that the average secondary school student-to-counselor ratio was 436:1 The national recommendation is 250:1 In the NACAC’s most recent survey, there were clear distinctions between private and public school’s college counseling The following figure shows that private schools were almost 2.5x more likely to have a counselor specific for college guidance and spent twice the amount of time on post-secondary counseling While private school counselors spent 55% of their time on college counseling, public school counselors spent just 22% Percentage of time guidance counselors spent on college guidance: These figures correspond with a boom in the independent educational consultant industry In 2012, 17 families spent $400 million on college consultants.  What are the current requirements? Once an essay without guidelines, bounds, or word limits, the application essay has seen a shift in requirements and expectations over the past few decades Most schools now request responses to 15 specific prompts and include a word limit   The Common Application is a platform that is currently used by over 700 universities It has prompts, which were revised in 2017 to reflect feedback from several thousand students, admissions officers, and guidance counselors The Universal College Application asks candidates to “write an essay that demonstrates your ability to develop and communicate your thoughts Some ideas include: a person you admire; a life-changing experience; or your viewpoint on a particular current event.” Both The Common Application and The Universal College Application impose a 650-word limit Other schools may require a response to an original prompt in lieu of or in addition to the “Common” or “Universal” application prompt, which may request a more creative or persuasive style Certain universities also request supplemental essays, which are generally 100-300 word responses to specific questions.  What makes a winning college application essay? The art of writing to admissions Critiques of a college essay are subjective; however, upon review of essays favored by admissions officers, there are recognizable patterns and strategies that may be considered and modeled by college applicants.  Picking the right topic Candidates should research the schools to which they are applying and the type of essay(s) they will need There is widely accepted advice from writing experts and admissions officers regarding topic choice.  14 Although the same essay may be used to apply to   multiple schools, research suggests that submitting the same essay may not be an effective strategy when applying to highly selective schools According to a recent study, Harvard preferred essays about challenges, whereas Stanford preferred stories that were creative or passionate Methods The most common college application essay response is a personal narrative, which is a form of prose that details a personal experience and is told in first person It includes both storytelling elements and personal reflection According to research by neuroeconomist Paul J Zak, there is scientific explanation for why telling a story is a more effective method for writing a college application essay than stating facts or listing accomplishments His research found that compelling stories activate more parts of our brains than facts 19 and cause us to release oxytocin, the hormone responsible for empathy and connection Psychology professor and researcher Dan P McAdams discovered that people remember information longer and more completely when told as part of story Additionally, people are persuaded more quickly 11 and effectively when information is communicated through story This research indicates that a well-told story provides an opportunity for the applicant to make the admissions officers feel connected to him or her, which can be a persuasive tool during the decisionprocess 10 Effective Strategies Hook Paul J Zak’s research references a specific element an effective story: capturing the audience’s attention The literary term for this is “hook.” Andrew Stanton, the award-winning writer and director for Pixar, is responsible for creating some of the most well-received animated stories He argues that storytellers should construct anticipation so the 18 audience wants to find out what happens next.  Upon review, nearly all the authors of Johns Hopkins University’s “Essays That Worked” samples employ the use of a hook in the opening line of their essays 6   In interviews with Barron’s, an educational test preparation company, admissions officers from competitive universities frequently listed lengthy, nonengaging introductions as a style that negatively impacted their perception of essays 16 Show Don't Tell a Paul J Zak’s research suggests it’s equally important to maintain the audience’s attention throughout 19 story for the story to be effective In order to execute this idea, Pixar film writers employ a storytelling device referred to as the “unifying theory of two plus two.” This refers to the concept that the storyteller should provide enough detail to allow the audience to come to a conclusion instead of providing the conclusion for them Room for interpretation keeps the audience engaged in the story.18 11 In writing, this technique is referred to as “show don’t tell.” Writers using this technique use action, dialogue, strong verbs, and imagery over adjectives, exposition, and/or summary For example, instead of writer stating "I am compassionate, motivated, and thoughtful," she would develop a scene in which she displays those qualities in order to keep the reader's attention.  Reflection In addition to telling a personal story, the college application essay prompts are designed for personal reflection In an interview, Liz Cheron, Associate Director for Admissions at Northeastern University, stated: “Most applicants can tell a story with their essay, but many will miss the part of the question that asks them to relate that topic back to themselves The story gives us context, but the second part is the most vital It is an opportunity for the student to demonstrate an awareness of their ability to learn from and be shaped by personal experiences.” 14 Self-reflection is a crucial aspect of a well-crafted application essay It provides admissions officers insight into how an applicant interprets events Of the 16 sample “Essays That Worked” for Connecticut College, all included self-reflection in addition to story   12 Structure Aside from initially hooking the reader, there is no agreed upon structure for the application essay In reviews of submitted essays, college application essay advisors and admissions officers argue for 13 essays that are thematic and clearly organized The writer should be intentional with pacing and flow Research from AdmitSee, an educational technology company, indicates that students who took risks with their essay’s structure tended to be more successful provided it was well-executed and purposeful Style  In comments on submitted essays, admission officers at Ivy Leagues and other competitive universities alluded to flaws in writing style as a common problem Essay reviewers frequently pointed to diction and tone as main culprits In a study to assess essays submitted to top schools, five admissions officers were asked to grade a series of essays and explain their reasoning The admissions officers indicated that top essays used an authentic voice and conversational tone Students who added in large or complex words in an attempt to 13 impress admissions officers often ended up having the opposite effect The use of positive and negative words also affect tone AdmitSee’s research discovered that highly selective universities often differ in their preference with Harvard preferring essays that relied more heavily on negative words and Stanford preferring essays that used more positive words 13 What's the science behind a successful essay? As a parallel to learning the art of writing for a college admissions team, applicants can benefit from learning to appropriately navigate the stress related to completing their college application essays.  Mindset and performance Applicants’ beliefs about their intelligence may affect their ability to craft compelling college application essays Stanford University psychology professor Carol Dweck and her team researched the non-cognitive factors of academic tenacity, or a student’s ability to “look beyond short-term concerns to longer-term or higher-order goals, and withstand challenges and setbacks to persevere toward these goals.” Their research discovered that students with “growth mindsets,” or those who believed that intelligence is malleable and can be improved had more academic tenacity than students with “fixed mindsets,” or those who believed that intelligence was something you either possessed or didn’t possess Fixed mindset Growth mindset Thoughts "I'm stupid" "I should try a different approach" Feelings Humiliated Excited for a challenge Actions Give up Persist 14 The study found that students with growth mindsets used constructive responses to handle challenges or setbacks such as as trying a different approach Students with fixed mindsets had destructive responses, which included giving up Students praised for effort outperformed those praised for ability and had more post-failure task enjoyment In another study, college students who learned about growth mindset strategies had higher GPAs than a control group Additionally, growth mindsets can be developed by focusing praise on effort rather than ability College applicants with a fixed belief about their writing ability may benefit from a shift to a growth mindset.  Effectively coping with stress With “getting into college” as one of the top three stressors for competitive high school students, researchers say it is important for students to find balance and to develop healthy coping strategies for stress Although some stress is good, too much may have a negative effect on one's mental health.  Psychologists say students can benefit from mature coping strategies These include “goal directed behaviors, such as careful planning and organization, as well as seeking out support from parents and friends, and to a lesser extent, teachers, advisors, and counselors.” 14 Applicants may consider scheduling time to write their essays and plan to meet with teachers or advisors for guidance to combat stress.  15 Conclusion Although writing college application essays may be a source of stress for college applicants, these essays provide an opportunity for applicants to share personal stories with admissions officers that may contribute to their application being accepted.  The past few decades have seen a number of changes to the admission process, so it's important for applicants and those in the field of guiding applicants to understand the impact of these changes and the solutions for addressing them Writing for a college admission audience is both an art and a science Applicants and advisors can benefit from creating a blue print for action, which involves implementing the most effective writing strategies and maintaining mindfulness throughout the writing process 16 1. Clinedinst, M., Hurley, S., & Hawkins, D (2015) 2011 State of College Admission (pp 1-36, Rep.) 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