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1 Brainstorming: Có hai cách Brainstorming dựa cách chia Body Cách 1: Chia the UK the World Introduction: - Paraphrase Overview: - Những lĩnh vực the UK cao the world ? - Lĩnh vực chiếm cao nơi ? Details: a Body 1: The World - Business cao nhất, theo sau Chemicals Wholesale - Manufacture: gần Other - Còn lại b - Body 2: the UK Chemicals cao nhất, Manufacture thứ hai Electrical lớn the World Còn lại xấp xỉ từ 0.5 đến 2.5 Cách 2: Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch Introduction: - Paraphrase Overview: - Những lĩnh vực the UK cao the world ? - Lĩnh vực chiếm cao nơi ? Details: a Body 1: Chênh lệch nhiều - Business - Wholesale - Chemicals - Other b - Body 2: Chênh lệch Các ngành lại Bài mẫu: CÁCH : Chia the UK the World The provided graph illustrates the information about the exportation of different fields in Scotland to other areas in Britain and the globe in the year of 2014 Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering In addition, the amount of money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services of the remainers of the globe made up the highest over the period shown Concerning the exportation to the rest of the world, being 13.8 billion, the first position was represented to Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services This followed by 9.5 of Chemicals & Mineral Products and 8.2 of Wholesale & Retail At the same time, Scotland witnessed comparable figures for Food & Drink and Other Manufacturing, at around 5.9 billion By comparison, Scotland recorded a trough about the statistics of Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining, Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment, Electrical & Instrument Engineering and Other Services, at under billion Regarding Scotland's exports to the other sections in the UK, despite the predominance of Chemicals & Mineral Products with billion, this field was just about a half of that of the world The number of billions received from Manufacturing of Food and Drink, furthermore, was dwarfed by the previous ( 4.4 ) The figure for Electrical & Instrument Engineering was similar and became the only area which outnumbered the world By contrast, there was a significant gap between Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment, Electrical & Instrument Engineering and the mentioned sectors, at 2.1 billion In the interim, the others were seen the similar data, which occupied less than billion of Scotland CÁCH : Chia theo mức độ chênh lệch ( Body : Chênh lệch - Body : Chênh lệch nhiều ) The supplied diagram compares data on the imports of British and global remainers from Scotland in the year of 2014 Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering The amount of money earned from Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services of ROW, in addition, made up the highest over the period shown Scotland experienced similar levels in the Metals, Mechanical & Transport Equipment’s export to the rest of the UK and the world, at around 2.4 billion In terms of Manufacturing of Food and Drink, about 5.8 billion was received from the global exportation, compared to 4.4 billion of Britain At the same time, there was a slight difference of 1.7 billion in the statistics of money obtained from international and British import Electrical & Instrument Engineering as the only area that the former was subordinate to the latter Likewise, the comparable disparity was seen in the figures for Agriculture, Forestry, Fishing & Mining ( 0.6 and 2.4 billion ), which stood at the bottom in both mentioned locations in 2014 In stark contrast to this, ranked the first in ROW with 13.8 billion, the value of Scotland’s export of the field called Business Services & Finance, Hotels & Restaurant Services was more than times as high as that of Britain By comparison, the volume of the global Wholesale & Retail import was approximately 8.2 billion The figure of the UK was considerably lower, at only 1.1 billion Regarding Other Manufacturing and Services, the gap between the expenditure for import in the world and the UK was narrowed, with 4,5 and 2,1 billion in turn Kết thúc! 10 Thank u for watching ! 11 ... Britain and the globe in the year of 2014 Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the data of the UK, aparting from Electrical & Instrument Engineering In addition, the. .. ) The supplied diagram compares data on the imports of British and global remainers from Scotland in the year of 2014 Taken as a whole, most of the categories of the world were superior to the. .. 8.2 billion The figure of the UK was considerably lower, at only 1.1 billion Regarding Other Manufacturing and Services, the gap between the expenditure for import in the world and the UK was narrowed,