analyze job creation I think the idea of swimming in the present social life money work things are weighing on themselves River seems to be more difficult The character I’m taking from a friend of mine his life main cause he became tired of life but in his way of thinking he chose to stand up to the river to throw away all the difficulty towel Feedback analysis receives information through targeted target groups Age is the age of 18 to 25 that is the working age trying to make money They all like the way they draw, but they not like simple colors Most people understand the theme and someone who does not understand the content of the song The speed of the song is quite slow but it helps people to understand the problem of life and they feel the river becomes more tired and they feel surprised about the last life is that all people think the character In the brave enough to embrace all the difficulties that the next step is also a step in life Analyze the relationship between the audience and the understanding of a visual story I have not finished the content is the last paragraph to make the reader is not understood that the last paragraph because it is too fast and unclear about the characters may be in trouble living I take the simple image of life money love to impress the people who are working age and just want that they not have to worry about life fatigue does not put too much trouble trying to step Continue in the river and can achieve what you want Analyze issues that have already been implemented and issues not implemented The first thing to is to get content that makes it easy for the reader to understand Things that have not done is simple drawing is not beautiful The final content is not tight enough to help readers feel all the things that have been done Plan to develop more skills and practice Draw a picture that has not been drawn yet or is not good enough to draw watercolors and how to control the color in a picture and try to develop and correct the mistakes in the content will deepen and deepen to be able to Complete the composition of the work