ZINE EVALUATION I ABOUT MY ZINE PROJECT In my zine project, I tried the old way and done many new things, And there are some art styles that I love that are hand drawn But it gave me a lot of time to choose and the concept When I received this project, I decided to choose "The problem of learning pressure" is my theme Today, there are many students, deaths due to pressure on the score to alarm So I created my Zine in hopes that it would change people's minds and perceptions "Score is not everything" The outsider looking at the boring numbers may think it's flashy, but inside is a tragic story that does not look like it I'm sorry to say so but it's true So I Plan to write a simple story with easy-to-reach visuals All my illustrations are hand-drawn I think drawing will create a sense of friendliness, and reflect the reverse side hoodie with a hair shot and short bang I use many colors to make the main charactor and comic looks lovely When a simple style, cute and colorful Besides, the character I choose is a person with no clear face, with white makeup and other black-patterned characters, to distinguish and fit all ages I not expect people to read my story and smile on their faces And what I want them to have is that "Score is not all" II ABOUT ZINE’S FEEDBACK When I finished my Zine and started introducing my friends, I received a response from my friend In the survey of zine, they asked and advised me many things: "You should put more colors on," "The paint is rough" I know the part I received was only 40% positive I'm pretty worried that the audience will not like it because it's too monotonous and lacking vitality But instead of negativity, I tell myself that I have many things to fix and need to learn more III ABOUT THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN AUDIENCE CONTEXT AND UNDERSTANDING OF A VISUAL NARRATIVE My target audience focuses on teenagers and married people, because I think at that age teens are pressured and but parents should not put pressure on their children The main target audience is the youth there Age from 14 to 16 I chose a monotonous pallet because of them, portrayed when scores are too important to scare off children who have lost their childhood will not have any color in life Their response is real, they just say what they think And it helped me to understand my mistake People tend to hate reading so much I put on mostly pictures And they did Give me a lot of interesting experiment IV STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESS The strength of my zine is the image Most people say they like this Some of them think my story is rather confusing But the best success I've achieved is my achievement of the basic goal All of my surveyors said they would change their mind about the score However, one of them said that this zine project has some problems The story is quite short; fast pace; some pictures are quite difficult to understand; Art style does not really suit most people The most important thing is the style of my zine does not fit everyone, because not everyone is experiencing it V PLANS FOR FUTHER DEVELOPMENT OF SKILLS AND PRATICE When doing this project, I discovered my strengths and weaknesses I plan to draw more and more in the future Also, I think I should improve my observation skills, which I know my audience wants Therefore, my product can achieve all future goals ...II ABOUT ZINE S FEEDBACK When I finished my Zine and started introducing my friends, I received a response from my friend In the survey of zine, they asked and advised me... they did Give me a lot of interesting experiment IV STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESS The strength of my zine is the image Most people say they like this Some of them think my story is rather confusing... surveyors said they would change their mind about the score However, one of them said that this zine project has some problems The story is quite short; fast pace; some pictures are quite difficult