IELTS writing task 2 de thi 17 01 2019

BÀI MẪU CHO ĐỀ THI IELTS WRITING 17/01/2019 Đề thi IELTS Writing 17/01/2019 Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent you agree or disagree? Một số người nghĩ cách tốt để tăng an toàn đường tăng độ tuổi lái xe tối thiểu Bạn đồng ý hay không? MỞ BÀI câu – paraphrase lại đề thi cách dùng từ/cụm từ đồng nghĩa Vậy có mở hồn chỉnh: It is believed that raising the minimum driving age is the most effective method to improve road safety While I accept that this approach has some effects in the short term, I believe that a longer-term and better solution is to impose stricter punishments for driving offences THÂN BÀI OUTLINE THÂN BÀI CHUẨN BỊ TỪ VỰNG THÂN BÀI HOÀN CHỈNH I think that increasing the minimum legal driving age can help reduce traffic accidents, thus improving the safety of roads This is because a large number of traffic incidents are caused by young people’s careless driving Many of them are not mature enough to fully understand the serious consequences of their actions or to be responsible for what they caused Raising the driving age, therefore, can make sure that the youngest drivers are mature enough to take driving seriously and to protect their own lives and other people’s lives when driving In my opinion, however, this approach is only effective to a limited extent, due to the fact that nowadays many youngsters still drive without a driving licence So, a more effective way to ensure road traffic safety is to impose more severe punishments on those who commit driving offences For example, a longer prison sentence could be given for very serious offences and a heavier fine could be imposed for running a red light or driving without a helmet These punishments could help deter potential offenders and prevent people from re-offending KẾT BÀI Huyền thường làm kết cách paraphrase mở bài: Vậy có kết sau: In conclusion, I believe that introducing stricter regulations for driving offences is a much better measure to increase road safety in comparison with increasing the minimum driving age SAMPLE ANSWER Bài mẫu review giám khảo xứ nên bạn yên tâm tải làm tài liệu tham khảo It is believed that raising the minimum driving age is the most effective method to improve road safety While I accept that this approach has some effects in the short term, I believe that a longer-term and better solution is to impose stricter punishments for driving offences I think that increasing the minimum legal driving age can help reduce traffic accidents, thus improving the safety of roads This is because a large number of traffic incidents are caused by young people’s careless driving Many of them are not mature enough to fully understand the serious consequences of their actions or to be responsible for what they caused Raising the driving age, therefore, can make sure that the youngest drivers are mature enough to take driving seriously and to protect their own lives and other people’s lives when driving In my opinion, however, this approach is only effective to a limited extent, due to the fact that nowadays many youngsters still drive without a driving licence So, a more effective way to ensure road traffic safety is to impose more severe punishments on those who commit Người ta tin tăng tuổi lái xe tối thiểu phương pháp hiệu để cải thiện an tồn đường Mặc dù tơi chấp nhận phương pháp có số hiệu thời gian ngắn, tin giải pháp lâu dài tốt áp dụng hình phạt nghiêm khắc cho việc vi phạm luật giao thông Tôi nghĩ việc tăng tuổi lái xe hợp pháp tối thiểu giúp giảm tai nạn giao thơng, cải thiện an tồn đường Điều số lượng lớn cố giao thông người trẻ tuổi lái xe bất cẩn Nhiều người số họ khơng đủ chín chắn để hiểu đầy đủ hậu nghiêm trọng hành động họ chịu trách nhiệm họ gây Do đó, việc tăng tuổi lái xe đảm bảo người lái xe trẻ tuổi đủ trưởng thành để lái xe nghiêm túc bảo vệ sống họ người khác lái xe Tuy nhiên, theo tơi, phương pháp có hiệu chừng mực đó, thực tế ngày nhiều bạn trẻ lái xe mà khơng có lái Vì vậy, cách hiệu để đảm bảo an tồn giao thơng đường áp dụng driving offences For example, a longer prison sentence could be given for very serious offences and a heavier fine could be imposed for running a red light or driving without a helmet These punishments could help deter potential offenders and prevent people from re-offending In conclusion, I believe that introducing stricter regulations for driving offences is a much better measure to increase road safety in comparison with increasing the minimum driving age (band 8, written by Nguyen Huyen) hình phạt nghiêm khắc người vi phạm luật giao thơng Ví dụ, án tù dài đưa cho tội nghiêm trọng phạt tiền nặng việc vượt đèn đỏ lái xe không đội mũ bảo hiểm Những hình phạt giúp ngăn chặn kẻ phạm tội tiềm ngăn chặn người tái phạm Tóm lại, tơi tin việc đưa quy định chặt chẽ hành vi vi phạm luật giao thông biện pháp tốt nhiều để tăng an toàn đường so với việc tăng tuổi lái xe tối thiểu  ... 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